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In order to encourage the people in all aspect to take outdoor. Our city will organized a mountain climbing on may . Thounsands of us took part in it.
It was a exciting day, at 9 am all the people get tegother at the foot of the mountain. We are seting out for the high mountain. During the way to the top of the mountain, we all enjoy ourself . We singing , laughing, and see the beautiful scenery. When somebody fell behind, the others will come and offer help.
After 3 hours, we all get to the top of the mountain, and we bathed in the sunshing , looked forward . We all cheered with joy.
The activity is good to us. Not only did it give us relaxion from heavy work , but also get us close to nature. It also promoted the realationship . What a wonderful day!
People often say: "Father loves mountains, maternal love like the sea." The children wrapped in this sweet love, is always the most happy.
We are a family of four, my mother for us to do housework, my father work outside, my brother and I study at school. At six o'clock, it was time for the whole family to come and go. Is our leisure, entertainment, open family meeting time. The masters of our party are "pistachio".
"Pistachio" is the most popular program is rope skipping. "Pistachio" skipping, like jumping, he jumped for a while, while his feet jump, one will be jumping, while jumping. This lovely action, plus his clown hat, directly gives a sense of laughter. Every time the "pistachio" skipping, we are laughing, learning and work on the trouble has long forgotten the clouds out of the clouds. Forget to introduce to you, my family's pistachio is - father.
This summer, my father said to help me buy a bike. We in the bike store left to choose right, and finally, I fancy a red car, but I aim at the price, not only surprised. 500 yuan, too expensive. I can not wait to see my father, my father seems to understand what I mean. He bite the bullet to help me buy this 500 yuan car.
My dear daddy! You make our life colorful. Although sometimes you will thunder, rain. But we are not angry.
My dad, you love me and love our whole family.
My father is a kind man. He is not very tall but he is a man of perseverance. He works very hard and his services are highly appreciated.
My father is a man of devotion. Every morning he gets up the earliest to make breakfast for us. In the evening, he is always the late to come back home. At weekends, he always takes us to go outing in his car. He is a man of few words, but he often says to me "A little learning is a dangerous thing". I will always remember these words. I love my father very much.
昨天，我一回家，就自觉地做作业。
Yesterday, as soon as I went home, I consciously did my homework.
作业做好了，爸爸和妈妈起床了。我说：“妈妈，我作业做好了，我可以去饭店里玩吗？”妈妈说：“我去问问你爸爸。”爸爸说：“可以。”我自己去问爸爸，爸爸说：“你去干嘛？”
My homework is done. My father and mother get up. I said, "Mom, I've done my homework. Can I go to the hotel?" Mom said, "I'll ask your father." Dad said, "yes." I went to ask my father. He said, "what are you doing?"
我说：“我去玩呀。”“噢，原来是这样。”我们坐在爸爸的车上出发了，玩够了，我们就回家了。接着爸爸打开电视让我看，我觉得爸爸对我很好。
I said, "I'll play." "Oh, so it is." We set out in dad's car, had enough fun, and we went home. Then Dad turned on the TV for me to watch, I think Dad is very good to me.
The New Year’s Day is on January 1st, in this year, people will have one day’s off, and it is different from before. On that day, I am going to travel to Nanning, I haven’t been to Nanning for two years, I miss the days there, I will visit my friends. I will have a good time.
元旦在一月一号，在今年，人们放一天假，这和往年不同。在元旦那天，我准备去南宁玩，我应经有两年没去南宁了，我想念在南宁的日子，我将要拜访我的朋友。我将要度过美好的时光。
Myfather is a common worker. He works in a very far place. I only stay with himabout two months a year. He often has a winter holiday for two or three months,because the place he works is very cold. People can not work in such coldweather. Therefore, winter is the season I like most. I like father staying athome. At weekends, he often takes me out, go to the zoo or fairground. We havemany things to do. He works very hard to support my family. He said that hewould work at my city soon. It makes very exciting. Finally, we have much moretime together.
Hi, my name is Cindy. I have a good father. I like him very much.
My father is a policeman. He is tall and strong. He looks very cool in the black police uniform. He works in the police station and he is very busy every day. He likes helping people. So he often goes everywhere by his motor cycle. When he sees the people in the trouble, he will try his best to help the people. He is a good policeman. And many people like him very much, too. They often say: “MR Li, you are a good policeman. We like you very much.” But my father always has a point: Helping people is his duty.
My father likes reading books very much. Because he thinks: A good book is a good friend. So he reads books after work every day. Sometimes he plays games with me. We are very happy. I like him very much, because my father is not only my father, but also my good friend.
The new year is in the new year, I have three dreams to achieve.
Firstly, I want to pass the English order to achieve it,I will spend half an hour to practice the want to practice flute and have learned them for many years, but I still havent grabbed them want to earn three hundred yuan a month by doing the part time job all my hopes will achieve in this new wishes to me.
Father's Day is a festival of thanking our fathers. About started in the early 20th century, originated in the United States, it has been widely circulated around the world, but its date is different because of the differences of the regions. The date of the most popular is on the third Sunday of June each year, and there are 52 countries and regions in the world celebrating the father's day on this day. They have various ways of celebration, most of which is related to gifts and family dinner or other activities.
This year is 40 years old, medium size, big eyes, smart and smart.
My father is a soldier. Now he works in the development team and serves as vice captain. My father seldom comes back. Only my mother and I are left at home. Every time we do the opposite, there will be plenty of food left.
Every time to the end of the week, my little friend and dad came back from my yard, and my dad didn't come back. It was I quickly called my dad to the police station, but the soldier said, "your father is out." this is what I think: dad must be busy and can't call him.
I remember, my birthday, my father promised me, he wanted to come back, mother prepared a rich dinner, mother let me first eat, but I do not want, I hope that Dad can share with me, I wait for the stars and other stars are water, and I do not sleep on the table. After a while, I found someone holding me. I opened my eyes and looked at my father, and my tears flowed down. My father said to me, "I am a soldier. I want to defend my motherland, my children can live a happy life like you!"
Flowers are a wonderful gift of nature. Everyone likes them. Flowers portray love， happiness， joy and all the other positive emotions. Since time immemorial flowers have been an integral part of every celebration and festival.
But there has been a misconception. Flowers are mainly associated with feminine gender. It is forgotten that men to have a soft side to them. Gift your father a bouquet of flowers on Father＇s Day and he surely will be overjoyed. Flowers， especially architectural and bold like tropical flowers， which are masculine， long lasting， tall and sturdy like the fathers usually are， can be
given. White and Red Rose are known to be the official flowers of Father＇s Day. People wear a white rose to honor a father who has deceased and a red rose for a father who is living.
June 20th is a special day,its not only the first day of the high school entrance exam,but also Fathers this time, I want to show my thanks to my father.
You are very kind,you always take good care of me and help me when Im in are not only my father ,but also my best always cheer me up. Im very moved.
I will try my best to get good grade to reward you.
I want to be an inventor in the future. I want to invent new things such as AI robots, new energy cars and electronics ,etc. For example, I will make a new energy car, because there is too much pollution. It can make use of wastes as energy and when there is a traffic jam ,it can fly in sky and drive into water ,it can be faster, more comfortable and convenient . I want to make the world better, I'll follow my dream.
My father is a tall, who was the father of eyelash is very heavy.
When I was ill, is he with me; Whenever I exam is bad, is he comfort me; When I was sick, he gave me medicine; When I make him angry, but he and I talk, don't say me, but and I discuss who is wrong; Whenever I am naughty, don't want to come back, but he don't say me, but call me patiently, waiting for me, when I was sad, but he told me: "your character like boys, so the boy tears don't flick"; When I quarrel with my classmates, but he patiently taught me: "children should not quarrel with my classmates at school, no matter who is wrong, we should think about yourself, whether he is wrong, if not wrong, we should also do some magnanimous, as the saying goes," prime minister belly punting, we should not and students care ", when I was wrong to say, he always say it's his fault, never say it's my fault. Whenever I get mom beat, he always treats me hug, let face fell upon him. He is my father.
I think he is the best father in the world, daddy, I love you!
My father always stands in the center of my life, from past till now and possibly in the future.
My family was rather poor when I was in my childhood. We didn't have our own house and had to live in a shabby, small room rented from my father's factory. The room was so small that there was little space for people to walk. I didn't have my own bed and had to sleep with my parents. This is terrible both for my parents and me.
But father made this all different! Since the room was on the third floor, namely, the top floor in that old style building, the roof was quite high above the floor. So father got an idea. He bought two thick ropes and a flat wood that later was planed smooth, painted and drilled two holes on both ends.
Then he hung the ends of ropes up to the roof. During the daytime, these two ropes would be tied up so that people down could walk freely! When night came, father would loose the ropes and tied them to the two holes of that flat wood. The length of these ropes was just long enough for me to sit or sleep on the board without other's help.
My father is a common worker. He works in a very far place. I only stay with him about two months a year. He often has a winter holiday for two or three months, because the place he works is very cold. People can not work in such cold weather. Therefore, winter is the season I like most. I like father staying at home. At weekends, he often takes me out, go to the zoo or fairground. We have many things to do. He works very hard to support my family. He said that he would work at my city soon. It makes very exciting. Finally, we have much more time together.
我的爸爸是一名普通工人，他在很远的地方工作。一年里，我只有两个月的时间能和他待在一起。他一般会有两个或三个月的冬假，因为他工作的地方十分寒冷，在那样寒冷的天气里人们是干不了活的。因此，冬天是我最喜欢的季节。我喜欢和爸爸待在一起。周末的时候，他常常会带我外出，去动物园或游乐场，我们总有很多的事情去做。他很努力地工作来维持我们的家。他说过他很快就会回我们的城市工作了，这让我很兴奋。我终于能有更多的时间和爸爸在一起了。
Ten years later, I write to you for the first time, my mood is unable to use my poor language to express, is very complex, some excitement, are looking forward to, and some fear.
I have a lot of question want to ask you, there are many many words can express... .
After ten years of I, how are you now? Happiness? Do you still insist on ten years ago that become a cartoonist, a novelist's dream? This dream realized after ten years?
Or have forgotten it? Just have a simple job, live a flatly light day?
Where more will not be dropped off in the exam, not on the university and was wondering how is good looking for work, lived a poor dog's life?
My parents are ok? You have to let them live a good life, healthy? They also like ten years ago young and tall? Or is the white-haired?
——Father英语作文3篇
My father has a tall and strong figure. I looked up, and his body as a mountain made me feel steadfast. Dad is a violent temper. A pair of small eyes are black and bright like black pearls. A bright, wide enough to make people tremble.
Whenever I made any mistakes, he would glare at me and teach me later. Let me get a cool back.
My father is a good father though he is a bit short tempered.
I remember the winter of that year. It was very cold and strong. It was very cold. He came to school on a bicycle to pick me up. I didn't have gloves. He brought down his gloves for me. He forgot that he had a very strong chilblain on his hands, and when he got home, he was too cold to hold the key. I felt a pain in my heart. I hurried to help him open the door, and poured hot water for Dad to warm his hands.
There are many things like this, my father, he is like a glove in the winter, giving me warmth; he is like an umbrella in the rain, and let me not get wet; he is a warrior who will protect me in danger.
My father, a good temper, but a great father who loves me very much.
俗话说“千里之行始于足下”。英语书面表达能力的形成不是一日之功，必须从*时的课堂学习一点一滴抓起，持之以恒。
一篇优秀的英语作文在内容和语言两方面应是一个**体，任何一方面的欠缺都会直接影响到作文的质量。然而，很多考生在写作中或者由于粗心大意，或者由于基本功不扎实而经常出现名词不变复数、第三人称单数不加s，前后不一致，以及时态语态、句子完整性等方面的错误。
1.审题不清
如20xx年中考作文要求写一项最喜欢的课外活动，有些考生将作文的主题定位为“我最喜欢的活动”，偏离了“一项、课外活动”这一主题。依据作文的评分原则，若文章内容不切题，则不管语言如何规范、用词如何准确，都会被判为零分。
2.拼写错误
拼写是考生应该具备的最起码的基本功，但在考生的作文中却经常能发现很多拼写错误。有拼写错误的作文肯定会被酌情扣分，而且有大量拼写错误存在的作文不仅体现出语言基本功差，同时也直接影响内容的表达，通常会降低作文的档次。
3.名词单复数问题
误：my father and my mother is all teacher。
正：my father and my mother are both teachers。
4.缺少动词
在汉语中没有动词的句子是允许的，但英语中每个完整的句子都必须有动词来构成，如：“我累了。”这个句子没有动词作谓语，而用形容词，但英语形容词不能作谓语，一定要写成：i'm tired。
误：i happy i can come to beijing zoo。
正：i am happy i can come to beijing zoo。
误：the apples cheap. i'll take some。
正：the apples are 'll take some。
5.缺少介词、冠词等
还有一些考生因为没有熟练掌握介词或者冠词的用法，不了解中英文语言习惯的不同，也会出现明显的错误，造成丢分现象。
误：because heavy rain we can't hold the sports meeting。
正：because of the heavy rain we can't hold the sports meeting。
6.代词的误用
英语中代词的形式很多，包括主格、宾格、物主代词、反身代词等。而汉语中没有主格和宾格、形容词性物主代词和名次性物主代词之分；此外汉语中很多时候不用物主代词，而英语中物主代词是不可省略的，代词的误用是考生最容易发生的错误。
误：i mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for i father。
正：my mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for my father。
7.句子不完整
有的考生因为对句子结构认识模糊，所以出现只写半句的现象，这也是造成失分的原因之一。
误：many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into example,my friend in high school。
(这段文章的第二句话没有动词，他不能**构成一个句子。这是一个非常常见的错误，修改的方法是将两个句子连接起来。)
正：many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college,for example,my friend in highs chool。
8.前后不一致
所谓不一致，包括数的不一致、时态不一致及代词不一致、主谓不一致等。
例 one have knowledge,he can do what he want to do。
(人一旦有了知识，他就能想干什么就干什么。)
剖析：one是单数第三人称，因而本句的have应改为has;同理，want应改为wants。本句是典型的主谓不一致。
改为when one has knowledge,he can do what he wants(todo)。
9.时态、人称和数的搭配错误
汉语动词无时态、人称和数的变化，而对英语来说，这些都至关重要。例：
误：when i get to the station the train leave。
正：when i got to the station the train had left。
10.综合性错误
综合性错误是指单词的大小写和标点符号的错误等，以及形容词和副词的.混淆、连词的误用等等。这些都是靠考生*时知识的积累，所以考生应该从*时练习出发，每天坚持写英语日记，多读适合自己英语水*的原版著作，提高自己的英语素养。
My father is very busy. He is a cook. He can cook many kinds of food. Every day he goes to work by bus at 8︰ the afternoon,he eats lunch at the restaurant. After lunch,he reads newspapers. Then he goes home at 9︰ eats dinner at home. Then he watches TV in the bedroom. He goes to bed at 12︰00pm.
That is a day of my father’s.
Playing badminton
I Like City
Next year,I will do many going to get good grades .Because in this year,I Was not get good going to play soccer ball. because I think that can make me healthly.
Im going to eat more vegetables and Im going to learn a new also going to visit my grandparents and will go to a summer its going to help my parents to clean the will buy some gifts for my think that can make them next year ,Im going to make my parents cook for them.
Last March, my mother told my father and me that my grandfather would come in April. We were very happy because my grandfather was an interesting old man and he had not visited us since he went to Hong Kong. On April 1 my father and I bought a lot of food from the supermarket and bought a big bunch of flowers home.
Then we did some cleaning at home. At night when we were waiting for my grandfather, the bell rang andmy mother came in. She smiled to us and said "April fools"!
——英语分析作文10篇
My dad is thirty-eight years old, tall tall, dark skin, thick long eyebrows with a pair of severe eyes, round face like a "hamburger", lips and cheek long and dense The beard, something okay always likes to tie me.
Dad has a bad habit, that is, like smoking. After smoking one by one, his mouth sucking, nose spray, two nostrils like two chimney. However, as long as my mother saw, he quickly lost cigarette butts, do not smoke.
Dad has a good habit! He has time to be busy in the kitchen. Saw his right hand with a shovel, left hand with a spoon, hands with just right, while feeding, while the spoon, the pot in the dishes under his manipulation up and down the fly. Soon, for us to do a delicious meal on the table, I like to eat.
My dad is really a good father!
Hi, my name is Cindy. I have a good father. I like him very much.
My father is a policeman. He is tall and strong. He looks very cool in the black police uniform. He works in the police station and he is very busy every day. He likes helping people. So he often goes everywhere by his motor cycle. When he sees the people in the trouble, he will try his best to help the people. He is a good policeman. And many people like him very much, too. They often say: "Mr Li, you are a good policeman. We like you very much." But my father always has a point: Helping people is his duty.
My father likes reading books very much. Because he thinks: A good book is a good friend. So he reads books after work every day. Sometimes he plays games with me. We are very happy. I like him very much, because my father is not only my father, but also my good friend.
This is my father. He is a good father. I like my father very much! My dear friends, do you have a good father, too?
For the first time in everyones experience!For example:the first time to ride a bicycle,write a book,play a com*r for the first time,keep a dog for the first time,etc!And my first time is climbing!
On a sunny holiday,our family unanimously decided to take exercise - climbing Maanshan!Maanshan ecological park is located in the south of Yangwu village,Daling mountain. The main peak is meters above sea level. It is divided into two small peaks at the front and back. It is named Maanshan because of its shape similar to Maanshan. It used to be a quarry. All the stones mined were transported to all parts of the city as building materials,bringing considerable economic benefits to the local area and seriously damaging the ecological environment. In order to build a civilized,harmonious and ecological home,the village commi* decided to close the quarry and invest 5 million yuan to build it into an ecological park. Now there are Jinling,Qixingling,Jiti stone,Qilin mountain and other scenic spots. When I came to the foot of Maanshan,I stared at the top of Maanshan stupidly. In my mind,I thought of the complacent expression of climbing to the mountain. After that,I cant wait to follow the route to the top of the mountain!
At first,I was a living tiger,just like a hungry tiger,flying to the top of the mountain!The road is getting steeper and steeper,and the fork road runs across. Its half the way to the top of the mountain. After a long time,the physical strength is naturally consumed and the knowledge is not much. Im sweating!!Seeing thousands of houses,cars and pedestrians under my feet,I secretly encouraged myself:there is still a little way to go,stick to it,and soon climb to the top of the mountain,dont be discouraged,learn to stick to it on this road!Only persistence can make people succeed!Time flows silently on me. I climb to the top of the mountain. I am ecstatic and rush forward in one breath. Finally climbed to the top of the mountain!Ah!The scenery at the top of the mountain is so intoxicating and impressive!
As if everything under my feet is my world!The whole village can be seen clearly. I learned a truthfromit,that is:in life,whether it is laid-off,or encountered difficulties,or be fired and so on. Dont be discouraged. As a human being,we should learn not to be discouraged in the face of difficulties. In all kinds of tests of life,just like climbing a mountain,we cant give up halfway,as long as we stick to it,we will succeed!
Its New Year! This is the happiest thing for every child. I have a happy day in my hometown Qiandao Lake.
The new year, each place has different customs, where we have a very unique customs, for example: kill the swine is one of them.
There are plenty of drinks, so they are fat and heavy.
As night falls, with the sound of festive firecrackers, a beautiful flaming flower rises in the air, and people welcome a new year in the laughter and laughter.
My father is thirty-five years old. He is an attractive middle-age. He is an engineer, working in a big factory of my city.
His working time is regular, going to office at eight o’clock and coming home at six o’clock. He works hard and becomes an important person in his factory. At weekends, he does not go to work, so that he usually stays at home or take my mother and I go out.
In my opinion, my father is a great person. He brings happiness to my family.
Between my father and I have a lot of secrets, sometimes I accidentally made a mistake, my father will help me.
Once again, when I was in temperature broke the thermometer. I went to the father said: "right, I broke the thermometer, you are quick to help me think way! Grandpa know will scold me!?" "Don't worry, I'll go and buy a, until I come back you don't let them find thermometer is broken." Dad said to me naughty wink. "Then, you go to quick return!" I said.
Finally, dad come home before grandpa didn't find, I am holding a thermometer, thought to myself: father was too good to me! I love my dad!
1.描述图画
图画作文对图画的描述应在第一段进行，且最好在首句即开始。此类作文大部分是一幅图，也会有两幅图出现的情况。如果出现两幅图，则很有可能是突显对比的情况。
图画上可能没有任何文字，也可能在上面出现了一句话，也可以单个人物说话或两个人物对话，也可能在图画外写了总结性的一句话。大家注意，这一句话或两句话一般是非常重要的，应予译出。
一般说来，对图画的描写不必过长，应以简练、准确为标准。
2.图画类作文结构分析
我们想象中的最典型最理想的图画题提纲应该是下面这样：
1. 描述图画
2. 推导绘画者的意图
3. 做出评论
对于这一提纲我们来做具体分析，其中第三点更要细致研究。首先由图画引出一种社会现象或社会问题，可以是好的，也可以是不好的。在推导绘画者的意图时多是展开说此现象或问题的表现，以证明其引人注目。还有一种可能性是说此现象或问题产生的原因，提纲可直接列出，或还用上述提纲。这时可把简单意图推导直接放到第一段描述图画之后，而在第二段中说原因。
第三段做出评论，有可能只是简单评论、深化主题就结束，但这种可能性越来越小了。这一部分很可能说的是办法，不好的事情就是如何解决的办法，好的事情就是如何进一步发展的方法。
通过上述列表，我们可以看出，多年以来，真实的提纲是怎样一步步地向我们想象中的理想模式靠近的。对于提纲里面出现的变化和规律，我们来分析一下。
我们仔细分析，会发现历年考研真题基本上都呈现"现象或问题--原因解释--解决办法"这样的模式，但变化非常多。因为我们谈论的既可以是一件值得弘扬的好事，也可能是一个令人忧心忡忡的社会问题;针对后者我们极有可能需要提出做法;而对于前者，可能解释一下就结束了，也可能要写出相应的做法。
综上所述，可以看出，比起图表作文来，图画作文要更灵活，更富于变化。我们一定要多练习，以达到一看到图画(含图中和图边文字)和提纲(有时有文章标题)就能有效地审题解题，构造出合理的具体段落的目的。
这里面还有个问题，就是举例子，**来已明确出现了两次，这一点大家一定要多练习。
My dear father,Today is Father Day,I want to say to you:“I love you !”Because you gave me life and love have to in order to our home to work hard every also want to say to you:“I'm sorry!”because I often make you feel angry.
I know I shouldn't do promise I won't in the you remember you teach me play basketball?I want to play basketball with is winner?I think you can and I compare.
Finally,I hope you have a happy Father love you forever.
一、指代方面的错误
在使用代词it，he，this，that，which，one等时，前文中应出现明确的先行词。
如：Since we cannot know what particular bit of knowledge a child will need in the future，it is senseless to force him to learn it.，这句话中，him和it这两个代词都有明确的先行词，分别是a child和knowledge，因此句子的含义非常清楚。
可是，不少学生在使用这些代词时，虽然自己很清楚它们指代的是什么，但在作文中却没有交代清楚，结果这些代词非但没有使行文简洁，反而造成了意思上的模糊，让阅卷老师不知所云。
误：Sometimes teachers will inform students of the heavy burden they have to bear.
正：Sometimes the teacher will inform students of the heavy burden he has to bear.
【说明】句1中的they既可指教师，也可指学生，属指代不清的。可以把它们中的任意一个改成单数名词。因为单数名词也可以泛指一类。
二、修饰方面的错误
修饰语应紧靠被修饰的成分，并和它形成正确的逻辑关系。如果修饰语的位置不妥当，就会造出模棱两可的病句。
误：To keep the air clean, we must move the factories which give off poisonous gases to the countryside.
正：To keep the air clean, we must move the factories to the countryside if they give off poisonous gases.
【说明】句1要表达的是把有害气体排放到农村，还是把工厂迁到农村去?显然修饰语to the countryside的'位置放错了。如句2改变一下结构，就能清楚地表达要表达的意思了。
三、一致方面的错误
在一个句子内部或紧邻的两三个句子之间，要保持时态、人称、数等的一致。
误：Whether one enjoys or resents advertisements, we are actually bombarded with it every hour of the day.
正：Whether we enjoy or resent advertisements, we are actually bombarded with them every hour of the day.
【说明】代词应与所指代的先行词保持人称和数上的一致。句1也可改成Whether one enjoys or resents the advertisement, he is actually bombarded with it every hour of the day.
四、*行结构方面的错误
这里专指语态、比较级、非谓语形式、冠词用法、可数名词和不可数名词、不定代词单复数以及时态等错误。
1、误：Narrow streets easily cause to happen many traffic accidents.
正：narrow streets easily cause many traffic accidents. (to happen)
误：A great change has been taken place since then.
正：A great change has taken place since then.
误：But it may occur some new problems.
正：But some new problems may occur/arise.
误：Opportunities are only belonged to those who work hard.
正：Opportunities only belong to those who work hard.
【说明】happen，take place，occur，arise等动词和动词词组一般既不能用作被动结构，也不能作为及物动词带宾语的。但学生作文中类似的错误较多：Our country has taken place a great change in many fields.
2、误：The pace of our modern life is getting more faster and faster.
正：The pace of our modern life is getting faster and faster.
误：Electricity is the most important power in our daily life than other kinds of power.
正：Electricity is the most important power in our daily life.
误：Thus our city will be greatly beautiful than it is now.
正：Thus our city will be far more beautiful than it is now.
【说明】这些都是在使用比较形式时出现的错误。尤其是第1例较普遍。如more easier，more stronger等。
五、断句方面的错误
一句句子没有结束，又开始新的一句，结果造成句子结构不全，这就成为断句。
误：TV becomes an important part in our daily life. Because we cannot live without it.
正：TV becomes an important part in our daily life，because we cannot live without it.
【说明】以because，since，if等引导的从句是不能**成句的，只能依属于主句，所以不能写成另一句。
六、连词方面的错误
作文中缺少必要的连词，或错用连词的现象也比较普遍。
误：One should improve his English，one should overcome difficulties in studies.
正：If one wants to improve his English，he should overcome difficulties in studies.
【说明】学生在写作中往往意识不到连词的重要，不善于使用连词和连接副词来明确标示出因果关系、转折关系、递进关系等。
七、搭配方面的错误
学生作文中用词搭配方面的错误也占有较大比例。曾经在一次六级作文阅卷中，近千篇作文在表达上海交通越来越拥挤这个意思时，几乎没有一篇用 heavier，大多数人用的是The traffic in Shanghai is getting more and more crowded，而traffic是不能与crowded搭配的。
1、误：However the speed of a car is much faster than that of a bicycle.
正：However the speed of a car is much higher than that of a bicycle.
【说明】speed只能和high，low，good，top，normal，fantastic，moderate，surprising等搭配，不能与fast，quick，slow搭配。但可以这样说A car is much faster in speed than a bicycle.
2、误：In the past the price of milk was so expensive that most families could not afford it.
正：In the past the price of milk was so high that most families couldnt afford it.
【说明】price只和high，low，inflated，moderate，minimum，original，popular，prevailing，published，reduced，reasonable等搭配，不能与expensive，cheap搭配，但可以说In the past，milk was so expensive that most families couldnt afford it.
由此可见，要提高对词语搭配的驾驭能力，除了要在*时的阅读过程中多积累，还需要克服中文中诸如速度快、价格贵、学习知识、人减少等搭配的影响，避免写出look book或see book这样的笑话来。
八、误用方面
This winter holiday I stayed at home. I am happy because my father and my mother could spend more time with me during the Spring Festival. Besides, on the eve of the Spring Festival, we had a great family reunion dinner and then we watched Spring Festival Party on CCTV1. Sometimes, I reviewed my lessons. I had a very wonderful holiday.
整个寒假我都呆在家里，我很高兴因为新年期间我的爸爸和妈妈能够花更多时间和我在一起。而且，在新年前夕，我们一家吃了团圆饭，然后我们看**电视一台的新年联欢晚会。有时，我复习功课。我度过了一个非常愉快的假期。
My father is a drinker. If he hears others to ask him to drink, he will take someone else to a hotel. Ask people to pay, drink and drink until midnight. One day, he went to play mahjong and we thought he didn't drink. Dad played mahjong and went to a hotel to drink, until the red face went home, but dad lost half the way and he lost his way. I had to go to a hotel and say to my boss, "I'm lost. Can't you wait until my family finds me?" In the evening, we found him. When we were about to pick him up, mom saw daddy's face turned red and said angrily, "who beat you?" Father quickly explained: "this is not someone else hit me, this is my drunk and drunk will produce red." My mother said, "don't drink any more, or we will ignore you. Let's hurry home and go to bed."
You see, this is my father. My father is very good at drinking bars.
It will be the Fathers＇ Day soon. I just want to make a card to show my heart. I can＇t tell how much I love you actually but I never told you or hint it. I think you know there must be a good connection between us because I＇m your daughter/son！ Although I don＇t usually say ＂I love you＂ instead of arguing or even saying nothing， you have to know that I always put you in my heart！ It is said that our parents is our first teachers. Everybody knows that. I＇m not only thank you for being my father， but also thank you for being my first teacher！
Happy Fathers＇ Day！
I am a girl of ten, and I live in a small mountain village far from Taiyuan. The only person that lives with me is my mother, because my father is away for eight years, working in a city.
During the Spring Festival, my father came back home. He looked thin and tired. He gave my mother two thousand yuan, and told her that he would work even harder, earn more money, and then he could take us to the city. He stayed at home for only ten are living a poor life now. But what I want most is not money, but my father. I miss him very much!
Everyone has their own dreamsSo do old saying:Great dreams make great is very important to dreamSo hold on to your dreams;One day they may just come must believe:Where there is a willthere is a way.
My dream is to be an expert in may ask:Why can like this?I will tell you:In factI have a lot of reasons.
FirstBecause English is an international language is widely used in the the study of English makes life so is taught throughout the we must learn English.
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