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转：如何灵活运用作文素材
文章要讲究文采，讲究美。没有文采的文章，就难以传播。因此，同学们作文应从审美的角度运用生动形象的语言去表达，去创造。特别是对素材引用表达中，为了更好地支持论点，我们必须对所用材料不仅要有所选择，更要从语言上精心加工，使看似平淡的素材，熠熠生辉。请对比以下文段。
例1：(1)李白所走的路更让我佩服。这样说虽有失公平，但我仍然觉得，李白人生路上的磨难虽然是坎坷的，但他坚信他的理想一定能实现，正如他所说的“天生我材必有用”。
(2)李白洒脱，不寄托于高堂的庄严，不艳羡那官场的利禄，站在大唐的江山上，站在诗人的位置上，任清风涤荡心胸，随月辉起舞弄影，“天生我材必有用，千金散尽还复来”，他吟出了好大的斗志；“俱怀逸兴壮思飞，欲上青天揽明月”，他吟出了好大的气魄，于是，大唐的江山史册上又多了几分厚重、灵动的神气！难道能说无仕途作为的李白没有体现自己的价值吗?不能。
例2：(1)司马迁刚直与坚韧。面对残酷的刑罚，面对众人的嘲笑，他没有屈服，凭着自己的奇崛神笔，以刚毅之心正直之气写完了被鲁迅先生称之为“史家之绝唱，无韵之《离骚》”的《史记》，为中国人民，世界人民流下了一笔珍贵的文化遗产。
(2)当你一个人孤独地坐在那阴湿的牢狱里，等着最后的决断。你，一个小小史官，没有多少家产，面对这样的牢狱之灾，你只能做出屈辱的选择…有谁知道那一刻你的内心所滚动的痛苦和无奈，有谁能体会到你内心所翻腾的屈辱和泪水?假如时光能倒流，我想握住你的手，我想告诉你一句话：在亿万中国人的心中，你，司马迁，就是一个大大的英雄！你以你瘦弱的躯体，铸就了中国人心中永远的魂魄--屈辱非但没有消灭一个人的人格，反而成就了他的非凡的伟大！
例3、(1)晋代田园诗人陶渊明也曾热衷于官场，想在仕途上一展自己的抱负。但当他做了彭泽县令，了解到官场的黑暗以后，便毅然辞官归隐，他还是喜欢“采菊东篱下，悠然见南山”的生活，从此躬耕农田，不问世事。他找到了自己的位置，实现了他的人生价值。
(2)一簇簇幽幽香菊在院子里静放，娇美的蝴蝶在花丛中翩翩起舞，山涧清泉一直流过家院门口。早上，雾色渐渐散去。透过微薄的阳光，一位老人拿着锄头，提着竹篮，向院中走去。“山气日夕佳，飞鸟相与还…”他吟唱诗句，步履悠闲地跨进了院子…他便是陶渊明。远离尘世，隐归田园，看花开花落。陶渊明生活很清逸，很自由，像蓝天中的白云，像大海中的鱼鳞，因为有菊，那颗渴望自由的心被官场的牢笼束缚太久了，难道没有什么寄托?选菊吧！清新淡雅，与世无争，不正像他不羁的性格吗?是陶诗将心寄托于菊，寻回了一方心灵的净土，也是陶诗让菊带上了品质高洁，与世无争的高姿态帽子流传至今。
第一，笔端常带感情
例4：《泥水里的笑容》…
爸爸说，他们是农民，是冲破阻力从家里走出来离开土地的农民！农民，是的，我看得出来--从他们脸上的沟壑里，分明流淌着浑浊的泥水，笑起来的时候，那泥水里像长出了稻子，那当然不是稻子，是尘土?亦或是沧桑?我说不清楚。
我所好奇是，是这些窘迫的农民，为什么总能让自己的喜悦，透过层层茧和疲惫，从筋骨里流露出来。我猜想，他们的喜悦，是从破了\'守土地\'、\'守老家\'、\'守祖坟\'的观念那一天萌生出来的！他们终于离开了\'种地生娃\'的传统规则统治下的那片黑湿的土地，离开了没有富裕希望的生活。他们终于可以在日落之后依旧劳动--有偿劳动而不是回家睡觉了！所以，在他们饱尝辛酸苦楚、五味杂陈的城市生活之后，漾在脸上的表情仍是朴实的笑容。
对他们而言，冲破束缚了他们一千多年前的所谓精神规则，仅这一点，就足以使他们满面春风了。
雅思口语素材 如何做到灵活运用?
阿甘正传》里提出了一个经典句子：Life is like a box of chocolate, you never know what you'll gonna get. 这句话很好记，也不难说，同时包含了有的人生经历或意义，事实上能够适用到更多的话题卡中：
雅思口语素材如何灵活运用1. Describe a foreign film that influences you a lot. 此话题能更好的插进以上的这个万能句：我喜欢的电影是《阿甘正传》因为演员，剧情等等，此外有如此的一句话使大家明白了很多道理。
雅思口语的素材如何灵活运用2. Describe a famous person. 是Tom Hanks, 其有名的其中一个电影是《阿甘正传》，他里面的这句话也让我印象深刻。
雅思口语素材如何灵活运用3. Describe an old person that helped you a lot. 我的亲戚、邻居、老师等等都能够说，此外能够表示他们原来表达的这么一句话让我学到很多道理，影响了我,特别是当大家在人生道路上碰到很多困难时。
雅思口语素材如何灵活运用4. Describe an important letter or email that was sent to you. 大部分考生会讲大学录取通知书，可是说自己一开始不想出国的，但若在获得offer的那一瞬间，那么必须要出国经历下，原因在于想到了以上的这句话且鼓励了我。
1月变题季雅思口语P2预测话题范文:tall building
Topic：Describe a tall building in your hometown you like or dislike
You should say ：
Where it is
What it is used for
What it looks like
And explain why you like or dislike it
part3
How do people in China feel about old buildings?
Do old people and young people in China have the same attitudes towards old buildings?
Is it important to preserve old buildings? (Why?) What aspect of culture do old buildings reflect?
高分原创分文：
I’m going to describe a high-rise building in my neighborhood. It’s called Paradise Green City, located in Canada.
? Unlike other modern blocks, which are usually huge glass towers, the building is painted yellow, although it’s named Green City. The structure of Green City is not dissimilar to that of most buildings in Canada nowadays, with the bottom half used as a shopping center and the top half occupied by apartments.
? One feature that makes the building unique is that its trade center offers Canadian products only, with a view to promoting domestic products to Hanoi people and also to supporting national manufacturers. At the entrance of the building, if you look to the right, you can easily find a store named Masterchef bread, which serves traditional bread to people who just do not have enough time to go inside, so they line up waiting to pay.
? In spite of its prime location, however, Paradise Green City offers a reasonable price for its apartments, which are affordable for many middle-income families. From the building, we can enjoy the breathtaking scenery. So, if you are planning to find a place with a beautiful and peaceful view, or simply want to buy something traditional, Paradise Green City may be a good choice.
? (Dislike) What I don’t like about Paradise Green City, however, is that its design is neither eye-catching nor original. In fact, I personally find that it resembles Times City, a modern building nearby. Moreover, the paint color doesn’t match its modern structures, which makes the building somehow old-fashioned. And, the quality, as well as diversity of products on sale do not meet the expectations of most customers. So, I guess it’s the reason why the building doesn’t attract as much attention from the public as expected.
雅思口语奇葩考官的精准画像
一.Poker face，不管，冷酷脸，我最帅!
例：许多老一辈无产阶级革命家为解放新中国抛头颅洒热血，且立下了不朽功勋，他们中有的日后成了战功卓著的元帅，有的披上了将军的大袍。而更多的依然是无职无衔。这些驰骋沙场的士兵谁曾夸下“我将来一定是元帅”的海口？
与此相反，袁世凯梦寐以求想当元帅。结果也真得偿所愿还做了大总统，甚至炮制了称帝的闹剧，一时间真可谓登峰造极。是他_求荣，更兼与外国侵略者狼狈为奸，还一手签订了丧权辱国的《二十一条》，将国家陷于万劫不复和水深火热之中。
但是历史的尘埃无法永久蒙蔽人民的眼睛，最终这位洪宪皇帝成了众矢之的，不久就在万众唾骂声中一命呜呼，像他这种民族败类是军中之耻，更不可能永垂不朽。_的头号罪犯希特勒抱负很大，最初是一名下士，不久即脱颖而出，摇身成了恐怖烟云中十恶不赦的二战魔头。这个不可一世的战争狂人大搞独裁，他疯狂迫害、残杀犹太人，且公然藐视和平，在他惨无人道的血腥屠杀下，多少无辜流离失所，这个双手沾满血腥的刽子手犯下的滔天罪行，令人发指。(高考优秀作文《普通小兵也能放光芒》片段)
解析：本段先是正面使用老一辈无产阶级革命家的素材，继而从反面选用袁世凯、希特勒两个反面的素材连点成线，深刻地表现“衡量一个人的价值高低不在于他的理想是否远大，而在于他为之奋斗的人生有没有最淋漓尽致地扮演好自己的角色”的观点。
提分秘籍：
文章主题是个比较级，要有东西垫底才清晰。素材运用比较化，就是把性质相似或者相反的两种事物加以对照、比较，推导出它们之间的相同点或差异点，使结论喷薄欲出。“我爱散文，也爱小说，但我的最爱，还是诗歌。”进行这样类似的、递进的联想，就是素材同类映衬运用的思维关键。“喜欢豪放派，讨厌婉约词；喜欢乐观看未来，讨厌悲观想问题。”进行黑白突出、褒贬鲜明的联想，就是正反对比素材运用的思维关键。
雅思口语素材 如何做到灵活运用?
《阿甘正传》里提出了一个经典句子：Life is like a box of chocolate, you never know what you'll gonna get. 这句话很好记，也不难说，同时包含了有的人生经历或意义，事实上能够适用到更多的话题卡中：
雅思口语素材如何灵活运用1. Describe a foreign film that influences you a lot. 此话题能更好的插进以上的这个万能句：我喜欢的电影是《阿甘正传》因为演员，剧情等等，此外有如此的一句话使大家明白了很多道理。
雅思口语的素材如何灵活运用2. Describe a famous person. 是Tom Hanks, 其有名的其中一个电影是《阿甘正传》，他里面的这句话也让我印象深刻。
雅思口语素材如何灵活运用3. Describe an old person that helped you a lot. 我的亲戚、邻居、老师等等都能够说，此外能够表示他们原来表达的这么一句话让我学到很多道理，影响了我,特别是当大家在人生道路上碰到很多困难时。
雅思口语素材如何灵活运用4. Describe an important letter or email that was sent to you. 大部分考生会讲大学录取通知书，可是说自己一开始不想出国的，但若在获得offer的那一瞬间，那么必须要出国经历下，原因在于想到了以上的这句话且鼓励了我。
雅思考试口语范文之阅读
Do you often read newspapers? What’s is your reading everyday?( how frequent do you read? what do you like to read the best?
I read newspapers everyday, such as Workers Daily, Henan Daily. I enjoy reading.
It is so interesting to see how other people live and it is really an amazing way to learn about different cultures. In addition, reading can do good to us very much. It can elicit the imagination of us . I also like to read the China Today and China Daily. Both of these magazines are in English , and it is a good way for me to improve my English.
1) Do you like to discuss with others when you read books?
Yes, I do . Because it is easy to understand the difficulty of books.
2) How long do you read?
Usually, I read books or newspapers for 1 hour before I go to bed.
3) where do you like to read?
In the library, because there are all kinds of books which I can read.
雅思考试口语话题素材之建筑
What is the interesting building in your country?
What is it located?
What is it used for?
Explain why you think it is the most interesting?
I think the interesting building is the Great Wall. It runs across north China like a huge dragon. It was used to enemies. Soldiers used to keep watch on the Great Wall. When the enemy came , fires were lit to warn other soldiers. I think the Great Wall is the most interesting building. Because it is one of the wonders of the world and it was one of the few man-made objects on earth that could be seen by the astronauts who landed on the moon. Also, the Great Wall has become a symbol of both China's proud history and its present strength.
1) Are there some old buildings in your hometown? Where and Describe it?
Wenfeng Tower, built in 1420, is located in the southern of Anyang City. During the Ming and Qing dynasties, people came to the tower to worship the God of Heaven and pray for a good harvest. Nowadays, it serves as a museum of history . Murals of Wenfeng Tower give visitors a feel for the great artistic achievements of ancient Chinese civilization. In a word, I think the Wenfeng Tower is the most interesting building, and it is the oldest building in my hometown.
2) Compare the differences between the constructions in your city with them in
20 years ago? Describe the building styles in detail?
The traditional buildings are made of the red brick and always have curved eaves. Thousands of buildings look the same. But now, various buildings with different colors and styles have been going up in my hometown. In addition, room is equipped with kitchen and bathroom. This is very convenient.
3) What are people's attitudes to old building today and that of our later generation? Should we protect them? Why?
People, including our later generation, advocate that government should protect old buildings .Because old buildings represent the great artistic achievements of ancient Chinese civilization.
4) What role do you think the old and modern buildings play in the society?
Oh, modern buildings are for us to live and work, while old buildings are for us to visit and research.
5) Compare the differences between house and apartment?
In China, there is a big yard beside house, where we can plant some flowers and trees etc. But house is more expensive. Apartment is convenient and cheap but small.
雅思考试口语话题素材之家乡
1、Where do you come from?
2、What tourist attractions are there in your hometown? Would a foreign visitor enjoy them?
3、Did you learn much about the history of your hometown in school?
4、What do you think needs to change in your hometown?
5、What place(s) in your hometown do you go to in your spare time?
6、Why did you choose to live here/there?
7、What do you like about your hometown?
8、What do you think needs to be done to make your hometown a better place to live in?
9、For you, what benefits are there to living in a big city?
10、What facilities does your hometown have?
11、What sorts of buildings are there in your hometown?
12、What's the most attractive part of your hometown?
13、What forms of transport do visitors use to come to your hometown?
14、How could your hometown attract more visitors?
15、Has the weather in your hometown changed much in recent years?
Important:
At the moment in China, there are about 30 different topics being used in Part 1.
These topics and questions are in the examiner's question book(topic pool), the examiner is not allowed to make his or her own questions in Part 1 test.
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