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GRE 写作argument全部官方范文分析汇总
写在前面的话:
1、官方范文的重要性不言而喻,大家对官方范文的态度也有褒有贬,有人说这些6分的官方文章都是大牛写出来的,我们学不来,于是有的同学的重心就转向了北美范文。但有一点是不可否认的——官方范文是真的6分,可是ets从来没承认过任何一个北美范文是六分的,尽管也确实都是很好的文章。;
2、关于argument的重要性
很多人认为argument相对于issue来说容易些,也更好操作些,更容易拿高分。我个人认为这是个误区。我们最后拿到的成绩是个平均分,没有人知道具体每篇是多少。尽管有的同学会猜测自己得分是多少多少,但是猜测毕竟是猜测。因为游戏是ets定的,他的标准和我们心中接受的标准肯定是不一样的,打个比方,看看后面第三篇满分范文,让一般人看,估计没有几个人会毫不犹豫地给满分,甚至高分,但在ets眼中它就是满分;另外,实际上新东方的模版写出来的argu文章和官方范文给出的满分文章是有很大差别的,主要体现在是一个是零散凑成的(所谓的让步式攻击有时只是形式上的)而另一个是有核心思想的,我会在后面的分析中具体说明。既然这样,那完全有可能最终4分是来源于3分的argue加5分的issue,而不是反之。所以说,我们有可能高估了我们写argument的能力。
Argument范文
The following appeared in a memo from the manager of UpperCuts hair salon:
“According to a nationwide demographic study, more and more people today are moving from suburbs to downtown areas. In order to boost sagging profits at UpperCuts, we should take advantage of this trend by relocating the salon from its current location in Apton’s suburban mall to downtown Apton, while retaining the salon’s decidedly upscale ambiance. Besides, Hair-Dooz, our chief competitor at the mall, has just relocated downtown and is thriving at its new location and the most prosperous hair salon in nearby Brainard is located in that city’s downtown area. By emulating the locations of these who successful salons, UpperCuts is certain to attract more customers.”
ARGUMENT官方范文
核心论证方法:
4. 找出隐含假设(并质疑); 寻找它因和寻找反例 think of as many and ; 加条件后讨论 think of what might weaken or lend support to the claims; 提出改进方案 ask yreasoning more sound
^同学们以上四点是核心论证方法!!!所有的满分范文中都用到了这四种方法。
^其中,在论证时需要:think of what additional ev这里重要的是加上一个常识性条件后,能意识到,有些情况,是支持原命题的。这一点至关重要,我们是讨论,要求同存异,而不是一味的批驳。
满分作文的模式:essays at the 6 score level that begin by briefly summarizing the argument and then explicitly stating and developing the main points of the critique。先复述题目,然后清晰的表明观点,然后发展。
argument全部官方范文分析
写在前面的话:
1、官方范文的重要性不言而喻,论坛里对官方范文的态度也有褒有贬,有人说这些6分的官方文章都是大牛写出来的,我们学不来,于是有的同学的重心就转向了北美范文。但有一点是不可否认的——官方范文是真的6分,可是ets从来没承认过任何一个北美范文是六分的,尽管也确实都是很好的文章。
2、关于argument的重要性:很多人认为argument相对于issue来说容易些,也更好操作些,更容易拿高分。我个人认为这是个误区。我们最后拿到的成绩是个平均分,没有人知道具体每篇是多少。尽管有的同学会猜测自己得分是多少多少,但是猜测毕竟是猜测。因为游戏是ets定的,他的标准和我们心中接受的标准肯定是不一样的,打个比方,看看后面第三篇满分范文,让一般人看,估计没有几个人会毫不犹豫地给满分,甚至高分,但在ets眼中它就是满分;另外,实际上新东方的模版写出来的argu文章和官方范文给出的满分文章是有很大差别的,主要体现在是一个是零散凑成的(所谓的让步式攻击有时只是形式上的)而另一个是有核心思想的,我会在后面的分析中具体说明。既然这样,那完全有可能最终4分是来源于3分的argue加5分的issue,而不是反之。所以说,我们有可能高估了我们写argument的能力。
In this argument, the arguer concludes that . The arguer claims despite this This argument is unconvincing
because the arguer ignores several possible reasons other than for these
discrepancies.
First of all, the survey It is possible For example,
A survey that covers only is hardly convincing that. 原因
SecondlyIgnoring 时间
Furthermore, it is possible that . Failing to address this possibility
further weakens the argument. 地点
In summarystrengthen the argument, the arguer needs to directly before jumping to the
Supporters of medical treatment argue that medicine should be trusted since it is effective and scientifically proven. They say that there is no need for spiritual methods such as Reiki, Yoga, or Tai Chi. These waste our time, something which is quite precious in our material world. There is medicine that can kill our pain, x-rays that show us our fractured bones or MRI that scans our brain for tumors. We must admit that these methods are very effective in the examples that they provide. However, there are some “every day complaints” such as back pains, headaches, insomnia, which are treated currently with medicine. When we have a headache, we take an Aspirin, or Vermidon; when we cannot sleep, we take Xanax without thinking of the side effects. When we use these pills for a long period, we become addicted to them; we cannot sleep without them.
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