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As is vividly depicted from the above picture，it seems to be astonishing and thought-provoking on second thoughts. The most eye-catching feature in the picture that impresses me profoundly is that incredibly even the pet dog wears a mask to prevent the terrible smog and haze. As a matter of fact, recent years has witnessed a severe air-pollutionphenomenon triggered by automobile gas emission and industrial exhaust, which will definitely bedisastrous to individual survival and personal development.
It goes without saying that the problem of hazy weather should be attached great importance to by the government and the consequences should be taken into profound consideration. To account for the above-mentioned air-pollution phenomenon, a couple of severe reasons should be pointed out. On the one hand , the severely polluted air industrial wastes have been pumped into the air, the lakes and rivers and an increasing number of automobiles crowd into the streets and produce the gas emission. On the other hand, the widespread use of plastic bags and coal burning as well as the nationwide construction dust have been pumped into the air from time to time.
As a matter of fact, the smog and haze not only does harm to the lungs and noses but alsogives rise to horrible traffic accidents. In addition, no issue is as harmful as theenvironmental deterioration, which will be a potential threat to the survival of human beings that we are unwilling to see. Just according to a recent survey made by one Morning News, more than 40 percent of Chinese cities are suffering from the hazy weather per year.
As a result, it is essential that a couple of effective measures should be taken to prevent the environmental pollution. To start with, the local government should take more steps, such as closing the factories which produced too much industrial exhaust, planting more trees and develop more high-tech products so that air quality can be better and the weather can be more agreeable. In addition, the government should severely punish those who destroy the environment intentionally.
Last but not least, it is urgent to limit the number of private cars in the urban cities and we should adopt the most cutting-edge technologies with a view to creating more energy substitutes instead of the petroleum. Only by the above-mentioned pragmatic measures can we enjoy better health and live a more comfortable life.
【考研英语满分范文3】
这些年来，“要敢讲真话”，叫得很响。从实际情况看，辨别真话还是有标准的。目前，我看至少有两个。一个是心里怎么想，口头怎么说，就叫真话。一个是，说的符合实际，不夸大，不缩小，没有片面性，就叫讲真话。两种标准，实际上是从两种不同的意义上，或者说两种不同层次上来谈论“真话”的。但由此也便产生了倡言“讲真话”时的歧义。
看来，我们不能只停留在提倡“口心一致”的“真话”上，还要进一步提倡实事求是的“真话”。当然，提倡追求真理的“真话”，并不否认讲心里话。同志之间，朋友之间，包括对待上下级，都应该敞开思想，有话就说，不必顾忌。但是写文章，做演说，搞创作，情况有所不同，都是用自己的话，去宣传人，影响社会，这就要顾及讲话的效果。(309字)
The picture presents a touching sight to us. Two handicapped men are walking quite quickly by binding their disabled legs together and holding fast to each other’s shoulders, with their crutches left behind. What respectable persons they are! They have surpassed their own physical deficiency and explored a smoother and easier way of advancing by drawing strength and support from each other. Obviously, what is highlighted in the picture is cooperation.
In modern times, cooperation has become an efficient and effective way to solve many problems. To begin with, through cooperation, we can heighten our strength so as to accomplish the things that are impossible to be done only by one person. We all have our own limitations and with the fast development of science and technology, we are facing a world that is more and more sophisticated. Therefore, we often need to combine others’ abilities and resources to gain success. What’s more, cooperation is not the simple addition but fusion of all partners’ strength. Making use of different members’ strong points, offsetting the weaknesses, supporting mutually and sharing resources with each other, we can then attain to a capacity that is much stronger than the sum of all partners.
The bar chart clearly indicates the turnover of online shopping and its growth rate in China from 20_ to 20_. During that period, there was a dramatic increase from billion to 125 billion in its turnover. Meanwhile, the growth rate decreased from 200% to at the same time.
Why dose this phenomenon take placeThere are generally three factors accounting for it. First and foremost, due to the fast economic and social development, people enjoy a sharp improvement in their living standards. Accordingly, they can afford to buy computers and mobile phones: the common tools for shopping online. Besides, e-shopping is extremely convenient and efficient. It is available 7/24 and this means people can buy what they want anytime without going out. Last but not least, the price of the goods online is much lower than those in the stores, which greatly caters to the consumer’s needs.
From what has been discussed above, we can predict that the turnover of online shopping will continue to increase at an alarming rate and it will give a huge boost to our national economy. However, we should also be aware of its drawbacks, such as fake commodities, personal financial security, illegal ads and so on. Thereby, we should take a reasonable and scientific attitude towards it.
These two drawings, apparently, can be associated with two distinct habits. In the left one, there is a girl beside a desk, being absorbed in learning, with an idea in her mind —it is advisable to complete as early as possible. By contrast, in the right picture, a young guy sits leisurely in a sofa, telling himself, “I need not act until the deadline.” Finally, two Chinese characters can be noticed, which say “habit”.
Successful figures are usually characterized by their diverse merits, including diligence, perseverance and striving every day. However, in reality, a host of youngsters are accustomed to taking no action until the last day. This terrible habit is particularly worth concerning and as a matter of fact, their laziness has constituted an obstacle that hinders their personal growth and progress.
To my understanding, we are supposed to accomplish our assignments on time each day. This good habit can be likened to a journey, leading to success and a promising future. A case in point is myself. During the past year, as a senior who has been preparing for the national entrance examination for postgraduates, I have never postponed one day’s task until the next day. This excellent habit ensures my motivation for learning, brings me power and helps me accumulate knowledge every day.
To conclude, never put off till tomorrow what you can do today. Meanwhile, every one should bear in mind that a positive habit means a lifelong treasure.
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显然，这两幅图能联系到两种截然不同的习惯。左图中，书桌旁有一个女孩儿，专注学习的同时，大脑中还在想：尽早完成才放心。相反，右图中，一个男孩儿悠哉悠哉地坐在沙发上，告诉自己：不到最后不动手。最后，两个汉字能被注意到，其内容是：习惯。
成功人士的特征通常是他们的众多优点，包括勤奋、持之以恒和每天的`奋斗。然而，在现实生活中，很多年轻人习惯于直到最后一天才会有行动。这种糟糕的习惯很值得关注，而且事实上，他们的懒惰已经构成了一种障碍，阻碍着他们个人的成长和进步。
在我看来，我们应该每天按时完成当天的任务。这种好习惯能被比喻成一条路，通向成功和美好未来。一个典型例子就是我。在过去的这一年，作为一名一直在为考研做准备的大四学生，我从未将当天的任务拖延至第二天。这种好习惯确保了我学习的动力，带给我力量，帮助我每天积累知识。
总之，今日事今日毕。同时，每个人都应该牢记：一个好习惯是一生的财富。
很多同学都知道，大作文对于我们来说，似乎有一个非常神奇的数字“三”。我们知道“道生一，一生二，三生万物”，这个“三”恰恰是考研英语大纲对写作的要求。
第一步：描写现象
其实很多同学都了解，我们的考研英语写作为什么提到三方面，去浏览大纲的话，你发现它在确定我们考研英语写作的时候，明确指出：要求同学们在自己的作文当中，也就是200来字的大作文当中要非常真切地、确切地写出我们对整个考研英语写作技巧的要求。考研英语写作的“逻辑三段论”当中，你可以在第一个自然段，把你所看到真真切切的现象写出来，我们都知道什么叫“现象”，现象是我们看到的，在我们身边发生的事情，在我们试卷当中一个图画里所表达的东西，同学们也看到了一个新的东西，当你写出现象的时候，实际说的直白一点，你就已经会了英文写作的描写手法了。我们今天要考研，可能你第一个自然段一定是描写出来的，而且这种描写一定要客观。
第二步：透过现象看本质
如果我们只把现象说出来，那不是考研的要求，因为考研的第二步要求的是什么？通过现象看你内在的本质，内在的本质又是什么东西？其实就是画外音。有的同学问我，丁老师，明年的考题会不会有画外音。如果你仔细想一想，远了不说，就从20xx年到现在已经八年了，这八年的大作文考试当中，只有07年的大作文当中看到没有画外音，其他七年的考试都是有画外音的。比如我们考了，“爱心是一盏灯，越黑暗的地方越明亮”；我们也考了文化，国内文化和国际文化之间的关系；甚至我们都知道“养老足球赛”，这是跟和谐社会相背道的现象；同时我们也看到了，对贝克汉姆的盲目崇拜是不可为的，所以这些东西对同学们来讲，都是一种现象，随后给了你一个画外音。这时候同学看到，拿08年大作文来说，“你一条腿、我一条腿，你我一起走南闯北”，我们都知道，“你我一起”就在向我们传递着一种理念。当你第一自然段描写完看到的图画之后，第二自然段最重要的就是让同学们把这个现象下面的本质告诉我们。
第三步：议论
最后该来说说议论了。毕竟我们写的是议论文，什么是议论呢？我发现很多同学，他们不能非常清晰地分清什么是说明，什么是议论，这造成了一种尴尬，很多同学都在该说明的时候把议论混进去了。但是你要知道，在真正你们的目标读者，就是判卷老师分析的过程中，他一定会重点要看你是不是把说明和议论分清楚了。所以同学要知道，到了今天，我们重要的备考阶段究竟是什么，你应该头脑非常清晰地能够把以上的内容弄清楚，那也就是我们要了解，我们在真正该说明的时候就去说明。
那么议论应该怎么去说呢？我们采取了一些措施和手段。比如一些丑恶现象我们要去解决它；当我们看到了“人”字结构相互支撑的时候，我们应该弘扬它、学习它，因为这样的话我们会如何如何，这是同学在这个时候要思考的。说到这儿同学可能已经感觉到了，这个所谓的“三”这个神奇的数字已经告诉了我们，我们在一篇大作文当中，理论上讲是三个段落的。这三个段落应该确切地说，按照它的写作手法来分，第一段应该是描写，第二段应该是说明，第三段确切地讲是我们的议论。
经常有同学问我要不要背文章，要背，但是不能盲目空洞的去背。因为，如果只有华丽的句子而文章美誉内容，分数肯定高不了。当然背句子对于提升写作水平很有帮助，但是希望大家一定要记住，当你的内容欠缺的时候，你所出的招数，就是这些美丽的词藻似乎失去了魅力，现在这个时候更应该努力地思考，思考什么？思考你身边的一些现象，思考你看到的每一道作文题，而并不是说只背那么几道小题，就一定能把这个时候的写作扣上，这种可能性是微乎其微的。所以说，其实写作是应该早复习的。
This picture is simple but significant. As is vividly shown in the picture, wearing traditional Chinese costume, a foreigner is saying “Happy New Year” to a Chinese girl in Chinese, even though his pronunciation is not accurate enough. There is no doubt that the picture implies that a growing number of foreigners are starting to be interested in Chinese culture in this day and age.
Why should this phenomenon take placeThere are generally three factors accounting for it. First of all, due to the fast economic and social development, the world is becoming smaller and smaller. Accordingly, international cultural exchange is becoming increasingly frequent. Besides, learning traditional Chinese culture, which is priceless spiritual treasure, can give those foreign friends a new perspective of the outside world. Last but not least, this kind of cultural exchange is beneficial for both our Chinese and foreign friends to broaden our horizons, widen our knowledge, and eich our experience.
From what has been discussed above, we may come to a conclusion that our traditional culture is popular among the whole world and should be preserved and cherished. Therefore, the mass media, such as television, radio and Internet should try best to propaganda and advocate it. As for ourselves, we should cultivate the awareness of learning national culture. Only in this way can we have opportunities to expect a more vigorous and prosperous world to come.
核心：老师认为，提高英语写作只有三种方法：多读、多记、多写。背诵要求是：脱口而出，越多越好。
优点：深入解读新考研英语大纲，透视1998-20_年考研写作问题，从框架、思维、语言三个层次突破。
将实用作文、图片作文、图表作文完美结合，对真题进行分类分析，推荐经典题目和范文，总结出完美的写作框架。
缺点：耗时，每个科目都要根据分数来分配学习时间，英语只有100分，作文只有30分，背诵几十篇文章是一种非常耗时的方法，成本不值。
《朱伟写作宝典》
核心：朱伟老师给出了传统的三段写作方法，第一段点题，中间段讨论，最后一段总结。
优点：其中最精彩的部分是第一段，用“解剖”法来描述漫画，将漫画分为“时间”、“空间”和“时空平衡”三类，并总结出相应的三种描述方法。
缺点：操作难度高，首先要对漫画进行拆分获取信息，其次要将漫画信息转换成简单的英语句子，最后将简单的句子组合成高级的长句。
社会热点类考研写作范文
(一)
There has been a significant change in home ownership in China from 1990 to 20_. As the chart shows, the percentage of state-owned houses in a certain city in China decreased considerably, from 75% in 1990 to 20% in 20_, while the percentage of private houses increased dramatically, from 25% to 80% over the same period.
This change may be attributed to China's housing reform in 1998. Until then, most urban employees in China had lived in allocated public houses. Since 1998, urban employees have been encouraged to buy their own homes by using their own savings, together with the one-off housing subsidies they receive or housing loans provided by banks. There is no doubt that the housing reform has led to the growth in the rate of private home ownership and a building boom, and has improved the living conditions of urban residents as well.
I believe this trend will continue for some years to come. A final word of caution-the government may have to be careful not to let housing prices get out of hand as a building boom may lead to a rise in property prices.
(二)
Symbolically depicted in the drawing above is a smoke-wreathed skull being emitted from a large chimney and covering the whole earth in a threatening manner. The caption underneath says: ^v^Environmental pollution^v^.
This obviously shows that pollution is affecting the world in a far more serious way than had been previously thought. Environmental pollution does not just affect the locality from which it originates but enters the atmosphere to join other locally produced pollution around the world which then becomes a global problem. Because the earth's atmosphere continually moves and revolves around the world, what seems to be just a problem in one area becomes a problem in a much bigger area. So this problem needs to be treated not only at a local level but at a global level too.
Of course, we should do what we can at home; but unless every country in the world joins forces to combat environmental pollution, no lasting solution can be found.
Directions:
You find your study load is too heavy. Write a letter to your college teacher:
1) you need to withdraw from two courses,
2) explain the reasons,
3) ask if it is possible to obtain a refund。
Dear Professor Shakespeare,
I am writing to formally request to withdraw from two courses: Introduction to Elementary Education and Teaching Methods。
The main reason for reducing my course load is that I am finding it extremely difficult to manage six courses. Because I really have to work part time, I have no other choice but to decrease my course load。
I would also like to request a tuition refund. I am sorry for any inconveniences I have caused by this change in plans. This decision was not taken lightly, and I do appreciate the kind consideration you have shown to me. Thank you for your attention to these requests. If you have any questions, please feel free to contact me at 82036600. I look forward to hearing from you soon。
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
This bar chart indicates different market shares of automobiles of three types of brand affiliations between 20_ and 20_.
In 20_，cars with Japanese brands topped the three types of vehicles，accounting for 35% of the total market. What follows is the cars with Chinese brands，hitting 25% of the auto market，with the share of American brand bottomed out at 15%. In 20_，some developments are noticeable in that the cars with the largest share became those of Chinese brands，which occupied roughly 32% of the market，while cars with Japanese and American brands took 25% and 15% of the whole market respectively.
It is observed that between 20_ and 20_，cars of Chinese and Japanese brands took turns to be the in terms of market share while those with American brands ranked the last in both years. And the share of Chinese-brand cars witnessed a mild increase and that of the Japanese-brand cars saw a moderate decrease，while the American-brand cars stayed the same.
From this graph，we can come to the safe conclusion that the Chinese automakers are doing a good job in outcompeting their Japanese and American counterparts in 20_，but the gap is not so significant and if no efforts were made from the part of the Chinese auto industry，the distribution map might be rewritten in the future.
January 16, 20_
An international conference on globalization, which would attract 200 leaders of famous corporations from all over the world, will be held next month. And 150 volunteers are needed for the preparation and organization of the conference. The basic requirements of volunteers include excellent mastery of English and familiarity with globalization. Those who have proficient computer skills and outstanding communication ability are preferred. If you have the qualifications stated above and intend to join in this program, please send your resume to abc@. We will notify you of our decision in two days.
Postgraduate Association
dreams/ objectives
the cartoon aims at informing us of the significance of our dreams/objectives. definitely, no once can deny the importance of it. our dreams/goals/ideals/objectives will prevent us from quitting easily especially when we are in great trouble. they will lead us to the destination we are eager to reach, bring out the best in us and stimulate us to remain firm in our faith. to further illustrate the importance of dreams/objectives, i would like to take helen keller as a case in point: how could she, a disabled woman who was born blind and deaf, finally be a world-renowned writer who wrote if i had three days to see without her dreams to overcome physical limitations.
accordingly, at no time should we underestimate the power of dreams/objectives. furthermore, we must set up proper goals before we start to do anything and stick to it whatever difficulties we meet . “one of the most dangerous forms of human error is forgetting what one is trying to achieve. ” paul nitze once said.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to raise some suggestions for improving the service of our university library.
Generally speaking, the library functions well, but there are still several problems. To begin with, more librarians should work in the circulation hall so that students can borrow and return books more quickly. In addition, the opening hours should be lengthened so that more students can take advantage of the library. Last but not least, the computer room should be expanded so that more students can gain access to the Intranet and the Internet.
I will be grateful if my suggestions receive your favorable consideration, and I firmly believe that the service level will be improved significantly in the near future.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
大家都知道无论你在上小学还是高中，甚至大学，作文占卷面分数总是最多的，考研作文当然也不会例外了。只要作文能拿到高分就能够决定全局。而大部分的考研朋友似乎对作文复习不太认真，准确的说是没有完整的思路，不知道从何下手。阅读理解和完型对大家来说应该不难，只要按步就搬的进行就OK，然而只要那起作文就不知如何是好了，这样情况是非成危险的，毕竟谁都不愿意打没有把握的仗，取胜的可能性根本是少之有少。所以呢？我建议大家如果你在作文上还没有做好复习准备的，那最后阶段就要努力准备了！
下来呢？我就根据自己的经验对考验作文的复习介绍一下吧！
大纲首先要明确，这是应试作文,所以我们的中心目的就是拿到高分!只要能够达到这个目的,其它的我们可以暂时不要去管。应试作文的特点非常明显,他给你的作文会有很多的限制,具体来说会有时间限制文体限制内容限制,所以说呢，很多时候是我们思想里的东西是不能随心发挥的,若是你可以在较短的时间内能够作出切合题意的文章就就是很不错的好文章了。 我们猜您可能喜欢以下文章： 加拿大留学 高考生申请留学的两种方式英国高考 A-Level考试是一边学习一边参加考试英国留学 高考生申请留学前应做的准备出国留学 盘点高考后申请留学的最佳方案美国留学 高考后申请留学双录取是最好的选择出国留学 高考后如何申请留学加拿大留学 高考后申请留学的热点问题美国留学 20xx高考生如何规划留学美国留学法国 国内高考分数须在专科线以上如何看待留学这个后高考时代的新问题 20xx年英语:提高考研英语作文的复习技巧
至于复习方面呢？我就说说短时间里的作文突击训练吧！可分为两个方面来说：
第一就是背诵，无论你看多少东西如果记不住，在不去背诵那也是枉然。你可以选择历年真题的范文还有一些与真题作文相近的文章来背诵。但是背诵并不是让你把文章全部背诵下来，即使你能全部背诵下来脑袋里面装的也是乱七八糟的，我们可以选择一些精彩的句子和起画龙点睛的文笔！偶尔也可以拿一些外语原著名篇来读或背，这样可以加强自己的语感，让字的表达灵活话不会死板。
第二就是写了，只靠背诵而不去写，作用也不是很大，你也要写呀！用句俗话说就是“眼过千边不如手过一边”更何况好多单词你也不是很熟悉呀！况且作文也是要你写出来的。在背诵的基础上自己可以开始练习写。你可以随意的写，也可以有目的的写。或者给自己出一定什么范围的题目，试试写出来。注意要把握好框架和中心内容，不可以偏离主题哦！
最后呢？我就说说在作文中应该注意到的问题，也许大家都是知道的。不过我还是在提醒一下喽！ 我们猜您可能喜欢以下文章： 加拿大留学 高考生申请留学的两种方式英国高考 A-Level考试是一边学习一边参加考试英国留学 高考生申请留学前应做的准备出国留学 盘点高考后申请留学的最佳方案美国留学 高考后申请留学双录取是最好的选择出国留学 高考后如何申请留学加拿大留学 高考后申请留学的热点问题美国留学 20xx高考生如何规划留学美国留学法国 国内高考分数须在专科线以上如何看待留学这个后高考时代的新问题 20xx年英语:提高考研英语作文的复习技巧
1.认真看题，不能偏离主题。（这个呢？不用我说大家都知道。切记看到作文题目后不要慌张，相信自己。先好好审题，弄清楚题目后在让自己来写。）
2.结构明了。（思维逻辑要清晰，让人一目了然。）
3.开门见山。（开篇就点题，他要你写什么你就写什么。）
4.表达要流畅。（可能一不小心紧张起来的时候感觉没话说,这时要尽量放松心情!从自己的日常生活中提取素材!）
the cartoon aims at informing us of the significance of unity. definitely, no one can deny the importance of unity. unity/solidarity enables people to achieve their objectives more smoothly and rapidly. by uniting, people are more likely to reduce unnecessary conflicts and frictions, take full advantage of each other’s strength and thus eventually defeat those seemingly invincible hardships and challenges. to further demonstrate the importance of unity, i would like to take the chinese communist party as a case in point: how could she achieve the victory of the anti-japanese war if she failed to unite chinese people of all ethnic groups?
from my perspective, at no time should we underestimate the power of unity. what’s more, we should foster the consciousness of unity and always bear in mind that it is unity, instead of individual’s capability, that the achievement of any course depends on. “united we stand, divided we fall.” the . president john adams also once said.
How impressive the set of pictures are! In the first picture, the mother takes the daughter by the hand, while after thirty years the daughter hold her mother’s hand which is depicted in the second picture.
The meaning conveyed in the two pictures reveals that to respect the old and love the young is the traditional virtue and should be passed on from one generation to another. In real life, our parents not only give us life but do much in bringing us up. As the time goes on, they grow so physically weak that they no longer have the power to support themselves. So it is human nature for us to take our responsibility of taking care of them when they are old. Meanwhile, the virtue of willing to support the graying parents should be educated among Chinese people, no matter how young they are. It is necessary to drill the idea to the young all the time, so that they can better respect the older in future.
With love for the young, our society will be full of sunshine; with respect for the old, our country will be harmony and prosperous.
Dear Prof. James,
I am writing to formally request to withdraw from two courses: Introduction to Elementary Education (EDU 602) and Teaching Methods (EDU 619).
The main reason for reducing my course load is that I am finding it extremely difficult to manage six courses. In the beginning of the term, I was perhaps overly optimistic about juggling both my full C time studies and my part C time job (20 hours/week). Because I really must work part time, I have no other choice but to decrease my course load. I am planning on taking the two courses during the summer semester, if they are available, so that I will be able to complete all the courses for the degree program by the following year.
I would also like to request a tuition refund, and hope I am not too late to receive the full reimbursement. I am sorry for any inconveniences I have caused by this change in plans. This decision was not taken lightly, and I do appreciate the king consideration you have shown to me.
Thank you for your attention to these requests. If you have any questions, please feel free to contact me at 277-9144. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Sincerely yours,
Jane Carter
the cartoon aims at informing us of the significance of confidence. definitely, no once can deny the importance of it. confidence enables us to achieve our objectives more smoothly and realize our dreams more rapidly. by being confident. we are more likely to win others’ trust and support, discover our potentials and overcome those seemingly-invincible and formidable setbacks. to further illustrate the importance of being confident, i would like to take jeremy lin as a case in point: how could he, once and ordinary and obscure basketball player at harvard university, achieve unprecedented success in nba?
accordingly, at no time should we underestimate the power of confidence. furthermore, when coming with setbacks and bottlenecks, instead of giving up easily, what we must do is to face it with confidence and fight against it without courage. “confident people never get hurt.” abraham lincoln also once said.
但最近几年，对于考研英语作文该不该使用模板这一问题，出现了很多争议。我们最好就是把模板变成自己的东西。
1、高分还是低分的主要因素，不是是否使用了模板，而是语言质量是否高级，是否出现特别低级的语言错误。
使用模板的人，有相当一部分是想借助模板来掩盖自己的写作错误。
如果掩盖好了，不出现问题，那自然没事;但如果掩盖不好，还是暴露了一些不该有的错误，甚至模板默写都能出错的话，那就是考生自己的问题。
考研阅卷人的阅卷量是非常大，而且阅卷时间非常短暂，在这么有限的时间里，不可能对你的内容逐字逐句分析，所以想要得高分更多的还是要靠你的语言水平，也就是单词和句型的质量。
2、 无论模板与否，阅卷人没有任何理由跟一篇完全写对了的文章过不去。
与其花时间纠结于用不用模板，不如考虑下自己写作的部分是否存在问题。说的通俗点，阅卷人不会跟一篇单词语法基本正确，没有重大错误，并且内容切题的文章过不去。
而且以上也符合考研写作大纲的要求，那又何必再去找其他根本没有提到的问题?
3、“模板痕迹”这个说法是典型的伪命题，不存在所谓的“模板痕迹”。
所谓“模板痕迹”的说法在阅卷中是不存在的，真实情况是：一些考生在使用模板的过程中，模板以外的部分出现了局部“致命”的错误，才导致了真实水平被阅卷人判断出来，从而分数特别低。
主要问题有三个方面：一，模板背诵、默写错误;二、自己填写部分的语法错误;三、模板内容选择跟文章不对应。
所以，究其原因并不是模板本身的问题，而是自己填入的词出现了问题。
4、 写作想脱离模板是60分以上考生的一个理想要求，即使到了这个水平，脱离也存在一定风险。
一部分基础相对较好的考生会问：如果我的写作完全不用模板，是不是就不会出现这样的问题了?其实并非如此。
很多人的作文水平还是非常有限的，倘若完全不使用模板，靠自己的语言去写一篇文章，对语言能力的要求还是极高的，稍有不慎，就会满盘皆输。
另外，一个人的文章写得再好，再多的内容是自己写的，文章也或多或少会存在通用的部分。所以，完全脱离模板是不可能的。
当然，适度使用模板是利大于弊的。因为当多数内容有了模板的铺垫，这时只要将精力集中在模板里自己填入的部分，从而大大降低错误率。
5、 写作的高分标准，一是错误率低，二是闪光点多，也就是单词和句式水平高，内容居其次。
写作如何拿高分?阅卷人比较倾向于什么内容?这是我们大多数人比较关注的问题。考虑到考生水平和阅卷时间，考研作文的方向标准大体上：错误率低，决定文章的分数下限;高水准句型，决定文章的分数上限。
所以在不跑题、论述合理的前提下，内容与文章的亮点就退居到了次要的位置。
6、考生真正要重视自己基本功的训练，而不是单纯纠结于用模板与否。
想要在模板和自己填入的内容间做出平衡，其实需要考生在平时多注重基本功的训练。但短期内把自己写作水平大幅度提高显然是不大可能的，而用一个模板去减轻写作压力，也是一个性价比较高的手段。
但是，为了避免模板以外的内容出错，还是建议考生在平时写作过程中尽可能将填入的部分多标记一下词性和结构，多总结下里面填入的内容，尽可能减少让阅卷人反感的错误。
7、适当重视试卷的外界因素，例如卷面和字数等。
这段时间，应该也要侧重重视一下英语能力之余的因素，比如说：卷面和字数。
阅卷老师是没有时间去数你的字数的。但是，字数多少不是一眼就能够看出来的么?
所以，为什么建议这段时间复习的时候，在答题卡上面进行练习，其实，就是让大家找到熟悉的答卷的感觉，也了解大约需要写多少。
小作文，130字左右，就比较划算。耗时不多，而且字数看上去很美。
关于字迹的问题。现如今，练字已经来不及了。想要追求好看是不大可能的。但是，强调，划重点，字迹整齐，是一定要做到的，而且也是一定能够做到的。卷面上少一点点涂抹，即便写错了，也请轻轻地画两条平行的删除横线，没有必要涂抹成一团黑。
而且，建议还是写得略微整齐一些。因为，这是和阅卷老师的第一次亲密接触，还是要留个好印象。毕竟关系到你的分数。试想，如果你对一个人印象不好，大约你看到的基本上都是缺点了。那么，同样，阅卷老师对于你的初始印象不好，大约也只能看到错误了。而，对于你们的作文来说，阅卷老师如果想要找错误啊，那简直不要再容易哦……
总之，大家要明白模板本身并没有绝对的褒贬色彩，绝对脱离模板的文章也是不存在的。
模板只是我们在平时写作过程中形成的固定格式，提供给了考生一个写作的思路和框架。就像建筑需要框架，人需要骨架一样。
但要想获得高分，就要在框架之上添加自己的内容，把模板变成自己的东西，只有文章中有自己的内容，才会吸引阅卷老师的眼球!
There is going to be a lecture, titled “Across Cultures: Communication and Digital Media”, in the meeting room of the Chinese Literature Department from 9:00am to 11:00am on January 12, 20_. The lecture will be given by Professor Robert Neon, who is from the Department of English Literature of University of Columbia. Professor Neon is known for his unique probing into the connection between culture and information technology, and he will present his latest research discoveries to us, from which you will certainly benefit a lot.
If you are interested in the topic and intend to attend, please send your application via abc@. All the teachers and students are welcome to attend this lecture.
Chinese Literature Department
一、保持卷面整洁
在阅卷老师阅卷的时候，卷面凌乱是非常容易失分的。因为，阅卷老师不是只批阅一份试卷，他们每天面对无数的试卷，这无数试卷的好与坏将很直接影响阅卷老师的情绪。所以，如果你很不走运，在阅卷老师心情不好的时候看到了你字迹潦草的作文，你想他会给你高分吗？
显而易见，那是不可能的。再者，在历年考研英语大纲中都有这样的一条规定，如有书写较差，而致影响读者理解的将分数降低一个档次。所以，同学们关键时刻可不能马虎大意，更不能将日常中一些不好的小习惯植入试卷当中。同学们不妨现在我们就养成一个好的习惯，在平日里练手的时候将卷面达到一个美观整洁的状态。
二、认真审题并列提纲
在同学们拿到作文试题时，记着千万不要着急着往答题卡上直接写。因为，如果写错了你就再也扣不下来啦。为了提高正确率，首先我们应该将作文主题以及要求认认真真的审核清楚，因为你错不起，也别给自己添堵。
在审题完毕之后，建议大家可以简单的草拟一个提纲，这不仅会使你明确主题，也会让你在之后的写作中抓住需描述的要点。因而，审题与提纲最好要并肩而立，不可闭着眼睛乱着思路盲目瞎编。
三、避免错误出现
考研英语作文中错误的出现可以说是致命的。因为，只要有错误，你的作文分数就会在原本的基础上扣上几分。如果，一篇文章中错误百出，那么亲爱的，距离考研成功的征程或许将会被无限拉长。
所以，我们在还没开始考试之前就要好好清算一下自己容易出现的问题。例如：单词拼写错误，语法运用错误等等。当然，还有一点很重要，那就是“字数”，一定要写够要求的.字数（当然也未必说写的越多越好），字数不够被扣分那是很惨的。
以上三点意见还希望20xx考研的小伙伴们加以重视，在剩下为数不多的时间里找到自己的不足对症下药。
对于考研写作，最基本的要求是考前能动笔写个20篇作文，建议对照近20年真题去做，这样有对比的比较权威的范文。
就算是没有人帮忙去修改参考，可以从几个方面着手去对比：①看看自己的构思和范文的有何区别;②自己的用词用句和范文有何区别;③你写的行文思路与范文有何区别。范文有他的优点，自己尽可能的向其靠拢。
就近几年来讲，写作的分数逐渐走低，究其原因，不难发现，批卷老师越来越严格地遵守评分标准，对于各项的评分都严上加严。小可爱们一定要重视写作，多加练习，才能在写作中取得高分。究竟怎么才能提高写作能力呢?
如何从不会写、写得烂到入得了批卷老师的法眼呢?首先大家要清楚地是：写作是语言的输出，而没有输入，又何来输出?
你不可能凭空的创造出正确的英语句子，实际上你说过的每一句外语都是在你见过并且记得类似的句子的情况下才能够正确的说出来，无非是更换其中的实意动词和名词。
所以，要想会写英语句子，首先需要你多读英语句子多背些英语句子。这就是为什么你从小学、初中到高中，语文和英语老师都逼着你背课文了，不是真的想要考验你的记忆力，是为了让你掌握更多的高级语言表达。
其次应该要多读或背诵哪些英语材料呢?当然是真题啊，真题就是一切啊!学习每一种题型的同时，针对其英语句子，可以作反向思考，如果用于我自己的作文中是否合适，或者我可以怎样改写?
这个句法表达很出彩，那么我应该积累记到笔记中，用于以后的作文写作中，多用多练自然就成了你自己的句子。当然除了输入，输出时还必须要注意，要写出语法正确的句子。
很多同学认为学英语语法很困难，实际上用于写作中的.语法知识都不难。
语法是使用过程中自然产生的，是符合人类大脑自然逻辑的，而英语之所以能够成为世界语言的其中一个最重要的原因就是英语的语法非常简单。
如果你背诵的东西里面有一个句式出现了三次，你就会对这个语法点有一个印象，如果出现了十次，你基本就自然而然地会用这个句式了，而这一切实际上都是发生在你的潜意识中的，你甚至有可能掌握了这个语法都没有办法一下子说出来语法规则是什么。
这个时候语法就成了你思维模式的一部分而不仅仅是一条知识信息。你可以想想汉语的语法规则你能说出来几个?但这并不影响你正确的使用汉语。
但不可避免的是，英语还不是我们的母语，除了英语专业的学生，平时英语应用和练习地频率也不是很高，所以还是有很多同学在写不同主题的文章和语句时，会出现各式各样的语法错误，这是正常情况。
最后那么我们怎么解决这个问题呢?一般来讲，你犯过的语法错误，如果没有人给你更正，你不知道的话就会再犯类似错误，所以练习写作中必不可少的一环就是“批改作文”。
有同学会说，范文背锅了，但是写作的时候还是不会写，原因可能是你没背熟和你动笔默写和自己写作文，只是单纯的死记硬背了。
检验背没背熟的方法就是如果一篇文章，你要想好久才能想起来，说明你没背熟。
除了背下来，另外就是要范文要默写。会背不一定会写，通过默写，会发现，其实很多单词你还不会拼写，语法顺序不对，标点符号不对等问题。
让大家背的都是范文，高分文章当然有他的可取之处，最后再模仿你背的文章，把里面的词汇，句型用到另外一篇话题相近的文章里去，这样套模仿写作，道长的课程里是有的，听了云里雾里的，但需要自己多揣摩，做到举一反三。
作文复习的时间其实完全不亚于精读一篇阅读的时间，需要经过：自己写，对比，背诵，默写，仿写等5个步骤才能完成一篇文章。
其实作文不需要背太多，背几篇典型文章(滚瓜烂熟)，总结出自己的作文模板。剩下的工作就是练字和总结一些话题内容。
再好的模板，如果所有的学生都是用也就变成了一张白纸，没有任何亮点。而这个错误也正是急功近利的学生容易犯的。所以只背诵模板是不行的，一定要在考前总结出一套自己的“模板”，在考场上任意发挥。
那么针对这些易犯错误，该如何改进，提高写作分数呢?
第一，端正心态，保持认真的态度，强化英语基本功
作为一个考生，首先应该有端正的考试心态，答题一定要非常认真仔细，那么对于写作来说，就应该尽量避免我们常说的“低级错误”，比如：拼写错误，单词使用错误。只有在平时注意积累，注意改正自己的错误，才会避免低级错误，才会运用正确的语法结构。
第二，重视动笔之前的审题和构思。
动笔之前，一定要认真审题和构思，要尽量明确写作的形式，内容。比如，是写书信，还是过图画表达含义等等，这些要弄明白。然后要注意看写作要求，这一点至关重要。比如，图画作文的第二段，有的要求用实例证明主题思想，有的要求深化主题，这两个不同的要求所体现出来的具体内容是不一样的，如果没有认真审题的话，见题就写，没有严谨的写作思路，很容易造成跑题，偏题，不符题意的错误，也就不能使模板中的句型和内容相匹配。
第三，学会活用模板，注重素材的积累，同时要适当加入自己的内容。
我们在初练写作的时候套用模板是正常的事情，也是一个经的过程，只有先试用别人的东西，才能学习和积累写作素材。模板要活学活用，不要一字不差的照抄无误，而是要根据自己所要表达的内容进行更改。写作不一定要字字句句都是难词，长句，而是要学会运用一些常见词的常见短语去表达，这样才能真正显示写作的水平。这就要求学生在平时的学习中注意积累常用的短语或者词组，以备写作之用。
另外，关于写作素材，不仅仅指写作常用的词汇，句型或者语法结构，还要包括所用的事例。比如：20_年的写作，要求写“爱心”，第二段要求用实例证明主题。有的考生见题就写“我考试面临很大的压力，我的朋友是如何帮助我排解压力的”，这显然就是素材贫乏造成的后果。题目中的“爱心”是指“大爱”，陌生人互帮互助的心态。如果写“汶川地震，希望工程”这类事例，显然非常符合题目要求，而且事例又广为人知，比写“朋友如何帮助我”更生动，更有说服力。因此，在平常的练习中要注意从阅读中积累素材，积累词句，而不要仅仅局限于模板之中。
第四，重视日常练习中的作文批改。
考生在备考写作时，大多忽视了写作训练，因而不能发现自己经常犯的语法错误，更不能克服提笔不知写什么的情况。虽然有部分同学意识到了作文训练的重要作用，但是面对自已“难产出来”的文章，怎么看怎么满意，却不知里面充满了基本的语法错误，以及与考研英语写作格格不入的内容，所以建议大家一定要重视写作练习后的批改。
最后提醒大家，模板只是给了考生一个写作的思路和框架，但是要想获得分，就要在框架之上填加自己的内容，把模板变成自己的东西，只有文章中有自己的内容，才会吸引判卷老师的眼球!
20_考研英语技巧：作文语法的应用技巧
考研英语一写作让很多同学都很头痛，尤其是英语基础不好的考生，词汇和语法两座大山难以跨越。一方面，英语的语法和汉语差异太大，另一方面，很多英语词汇具有一词多义现象，想要多方面掌握十分困难。
在考研英语备考中，学习词汇和语法一定要讲求方法，用来替代词汇书和语法书就是不错的方式，可以选择一本对讲解比较多方面细致的，比如说对文章作了“逐句精解”的《考研真相》，语法是一句一句讲的，词汇还进行了一定的拓展，可以帮助大家多方面掌握相关词汇。
下面给大家总结了写作语法使用的几点小细节：
(1)尽量少用缩写形式。如don't，can't，won't应写为do not，cannot，will not等。
(2)用更加正式的否定形式。如not… any应写为no, not… much写为little, not many写做few等。
(3)尽量少用“etc.”，“and so on”等表达方式。
As is vividly described in the left part of the drawing, thirty years ago, there stood a delicate mother, holding the tiny hand of a lovely girl, who wore a red scarf. On the contrary, the right part of the picture illustrates that with time flying quickly, the little girl, who has already grown up as a gorgeous lady, is supporting her old mother. We are informed: accompanying.
It is without saying that the old and the young are two indispensable parts in society. On the one hand, what we have and enjoy now was created by our parents in the early days, as the old Chinese saying goes, ^v^One generation plants tress under whose shade another generation rests^v^. On the other hand, all of us are supposed to take good care of the youngsters, too. It is children who make us see the future of our state, for they are the future builders of our country.
The young should consider it a moral obligation respecting and taking care of old parents. Meanwhile, it is also the duty of the parents to protect, educate and look after the youths. Let's bear this in mind and cultivate that virtue together, because only by doing so, can we feel as if we were living in a
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