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The cartoon is simple but thought-provoking. As is vividly shown in the picture, there are two passengers sitting in a bus. One of them is a male, who is sitting cross-legged and smoking. The whole bus is filled with the black smoke. While the other one is a female, who is sitting in front of the man and covering her nose with a tissue to prevent the harm of the secondhand smoke. There is no doubt that the picture implies that the secondhand smoke exists everywhere and it is hazardous.
This phenomenon has an undesirable impact on our daily life. Firstly, it does harm to and sacrifices our physical and mental health. What’s worse, it is the main cause of lung cancer and about 10% people die of it every year. In addition, our environment and ecosystem will be severely polluted and thus it hinders our sustainable and scientific development. Were the situation to continue, we would pay a high price.
Accordingly, it is imperative for us to take drastic and effective measures to control this situation. Firstly, we should appeal to the government to make strict laws and regulations to ban smoking in public places. As for ourselves, we should take practical actions to stop smoking and protect our living environment. Only in this way can we have opportunities to expect a beautiful world and a bright future to come.
考研英语发展到今天已经非常科学标准,对于每个同学来讲最重要的一点是,同学们要知道究竟我们的考研英语在21世纪的05年之后它是一个什么样的变化,其实从05年到今天已经差不多有5年的历史了,我们看到每一年考研英语的大纲在稳定中可能有局部的微调,比如像一些单词的变化,其它的一些形式内容包括题目来源都是没有变化的。
关于同学们关注的新大纲变化,从我个人角度来讲,我认为仍然是延续了去年的一种标准与科学。今天想和大家说,如果你已经走进了夏季考研备考的队伍,尤其对考研英语这个项目来说,我建议大家还是应该重点的把自己的目光去了解一下我们在去年大纲之后包括我们在历年真题当中,所有的这些老师和同学们一起了解研究过程中我们所体会的一些重要信息。
关于大纲怎么变,我想说今年仍将延续去年的风格。整个100分的试卷,三个部分构成,英语知识的运用,阅读部分,写作。
关于完形填空部分,题目来源肯定还是和之前一样的,完型的表现形式是每篇280个单词左右20个空白每个空白4个选项,但是考点是应该没有变化的,比如说像一些连接词关联词的问题,副词的关联词的问题,最明显的一个话题就是曾经20xx年考试的时候第一篇英语知识的运用和第一个分考的就是一个副词inside,作为一个关联处理,那么类似这样的一种考点是不可能变的。
阅读:传统的四篇阅读。从去年和前年来讲我们的文章几乎都是让同学们能够看懂的,但是很多同学反映文章都看得懂,就是题目做不对。为什么?英语复习到了这个时候,必须结合真题,去洞悉为什么会有这样的选题出现,直白的说英译汉的功底,也就是同学们在复习时一定重点强调的是定点的英译汉,看明白是基础,重点在理解。
翻译。从形式上来讲,变化应该不会太大,从近几年的考题当中也看到,同学们的翻译水平也在不断的提高,这也是一个可喜的现象。以上这70分和09年下午考试的形式应该是一样的,那么我对考试的预测我觉得也是这样,“不变中如何发现变化”。
写作。同学一定注意对情景的描述很重要。20xx年大纲对写作的诠释应该说是和20xx年的诠释是一样的。
最后我们总结一下,对新大纲诠释:变或不变都是微调,变永远是对的,因为变是绝对的,但是我们说不变中会有一些细微的小小的变化,这小小的变化主要是一些内容。
关于暑期复习:熟悉真题,记笔记,认真接受辅导老师的教授。英语知识运用:必须要花时间;阅读:四篇传统阅读理解,花时间是肯定的,态度一定要端正,英译汉的功底要重视,同时近年的真题一定要非常熟悉,要有价值的重复;写作:水到渠成。一定要多看,多练,写出来了到底怎么样,符不符合命题老师的审视。
最后告诉同学们,心态上要保持耐心和从容,以好心情去学习,去欣赏去爱上,才能够有所成为!希望同学们都能够乐观看待问题,勇敢迎接明天,明天一定更美好!
求职信段落设置如下:
第一段:初步表明求职意向,说明“如何知晓这一职位”,表达意愿。
第二段:针对职位所需条件阐述自己所具备的资格。
第三段:表达得到回复的希望,希望有机会面试。
求职信框架:
Dear Sir or Madam,
As a major in(学科),borm in(年份),I am very interested in(与职位相关的领域或职位本身).The most important qualification I have,I think,is my ability to(do sth.).It is beyond doubt that the ability to(do sth.)plays an indispensable role in doing the job of(职位).In the second place,I have been accumulating experience by(doing sth.与职位相关的事情),which is,directly or indirectly,helpful to doing the job you required am very confident that,by working hard and learning under your guidance,I can be competent for the post.
I am expecting your reply at your earliest am looking forward to seeing you and getting the chance of proving myselr to you face to face.
Yours truly,
Li Ming
告示格式:
标题:实词首个字母要大写
日期:要求注明,写在标题下一行的右端
正文:按照提纲分段、分点写
署名:个人、单位(实词首个字母要大写)
例题:
Directions:
The student union of your department is planning a Chinese Speaking an announcement which covers the following information:
1)the purpose of the contest,
2)time and place of the contest,
3)what is required of the candidates,
4)details of the judges and awards.
You should write about 100 words.
范文
Chinese Speaking Contest
February 3,20_
To improve students' ability to speak Chinese and enrich after-class activities,the Student Union of Department of Chinese Language and Literature is organizing a school-wide Chinese Speaking Contest to be held on Saturday next week(February 10)at the Students' Auditorium.
Those who are interested in taking part in it may sign up with the monitors of their classes before next professors will be invited to be the first six winners will be given is welcome to be present at the contest.
The Students' Union
The picture above presents to us a scene that a boy is dozing off when an actress dressed in Chinese traditional costume is trying to impress her audience by special tone and symbolic gesture, but an old man is absorbed in her performance. On the face of it, the actress’ endeavor is differently received, but on closer observation and further consideration, we can learn from the picture that the contrasting attitudes towards the Chinese drama performance is a miniature of the current situation of Chinese traditional culture.
The picture reflects a noteworthy trend that Chinese traditional culture is facing an unprecedented challenge, because it is losing its appeal for the young generation. Two reasons can be concluded about the phenomenon. In the first place, the fact that more and more foreign cultural products flock into our country, and we are surrounded with varieties of entertainments puts many forms of Chinese traditional culture at the risk that many people may have little use for them. In the second place, all of us, especially the school education and the media, didn’t attach enough importance to the popularization and promotion of Chinese traditional culture, which aggravates the worrying situation.
In my opinion, we must reverse the worrisome trend, because a nation’s traditional culture is spiritual bonds between people, and plays a key role in a nation’s development of society. Many examples all over the world are living proofs that a nation’s traditional culture is a prerequisite for its societal development, so it’s no exaggeration to say that without the traditional culture, we would lose many valuable things that should be preserved and cherished. But the revitalization of our traditional culture needs our joint efforts. I hope we can see our prosperous culture in the near future.
(Seemingly the Chinese traditional culture is in a losing battle with other entertainments and foreign cultural products, but it still has a fighting chance if we join our efforts to retrieve the situation. However, to revitalize our traditional culture entails our media’s popularization, our government’s promotion and everyone’s endeavor. We should bear in mind that only when everyone knows the importance of traditional culture protection can our nation’s culture enjoy prosperity in the future.)
模板1:
According to the two pictures presented,it can be observed http:// the left picture, the same time,as the right one people have different views on _________.
Some people support by claiming http:// their opinion,http:// addition,,there are some people,especially young men, reasons are quite different,sometimes for_________,sometimes for_________,sometimes simply for_________.
In my point of view,both sides are partly thoroughly analyze this problem,we should take into consideration of all relevant aspects,so as to make the right ,my conclusion would be that_________.
模板2:
From the drawing,we can learn can be seen easily can deduce from that people's opinion on vary from person to person.
Some people take it for granted that_________. For example,they firmly believe they often neglect that fact there are also another group of people who hold a different point of think ,_________.
Personally,my attitude for this matter is positive,with reasons as ,,,_________Therefore,_________.
Dear John,
Six months have elapsed since our last meet. How have you been these days?
Seeing that all of us have finished our final examinations and have leisure time now, I think it’s necessary to hold a party to relax and to gather together, sharing our joy and hardship in the past several months.
The party will be held in my home next Sunday, from 6pm to 10pm, in which you may see Peter, Mary and our many friends. The activities in the party include having a dinner, watching an Oscar-winning movie and a surprise in store for you that I couldn’t tell you now. I’m confident that we will have a good time next Sunday evening.
If you don’t have any prior appointment that day, I hope you can come. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
In the pictures above are a father and her beloved son. In the left cartoon, smoking a cigarette and sitting in a sofa comfortably, the father is watching a football match on TV and shouting, “Son, study hard for me!” On the contrary, in the left portrayal, at 9 . , the father is studying together with his son, both totally absorbed in their books. The caption indicates, “Instead of merely making a request, setting an example.”
The purpose of the pictures is to show us that utmost significance should be attached to practicing what you preach. On the one hand, parents teach much more by their actions, than by their words. Some of them may say to their children, “don’t say nasty things about so and so”, and then the children will hear them criticize their friends and neighbors. On the other hand, parenting is such a crucial responsibility, yet there are no required courses to prepare one to undertake this role in life. The only learning is the example from one’s own parents.
To sum up, parents are the best teachers.
Obviously, if parents’ actions don’t conflict their own words, they would have the opportunity to be outstanding examples of their children. Just as an old saying goes, “Action speak louder than words.”
在上面的图片中是一个父亲和她心爱的儿子。在左边的卡通,抽着烟,舒适的坐在沙发上,父亲在电视上看一场足球赛,大喊一声:“儿子,给我努力学习!“相反,在左边的描述,在9点,父亲和他的儿子一起学习,完全沉浸在他们的书。标题所示,”而不是仅仅发出请求,树立榜样。”
图画的目的是告诉我们,最大的意义应该练习你所说。一方面,父母教更多的行动,而不是他们的话。他们中的一些人可能会对他们的孩子说,“不要说坏话某某”,然后孩子们会听到他们批评他们的朋友和邻居。另一方面,父母是这样一个至关重要的责任,然而没有必修课程准备一个在生活中承担这个角色。唯一的学习例子从自己的父母。
总之,父母是最好的老师。
显然,如果父母自己行动不冲突的话,他们将有机会成为优秀孩子的例子。正如那句老话,“行动胜于言语”。
投诉信是考研英语中比较常见的题型,应该予以重视。投诉信虽然是“投诉”,但表达方面依然要彬彬有礼,不可以有“威胁”之辞。
投诉信段落设置如下:
第一段:大致提出投诉原因,表达不满。
第二段:具体阐述投诉原因,提出让对方尽快解决。
第三段:期望尽快回复、解决。
投诉信框架:
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to you to express my regret to you for what am very disappointed to tell you that(what you did)has brought us great inconvenience and details are as follows.
To my surprise,the service you offered/the product you delivered is far away from our expectations.
Unfortunately,we found that you had made a terrible mistake about(具体事项).
Much to my regret,we did not get the right and immediate response.
I sincerely hope that you can find out the solution as soon as possible before things get worse.
I am looking forward to your reply and immediate immediate reply and solution would be fully appreciated.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
考生注意:
虽然是投诉信,最后一段依然要期待回信,礼貌表达。注意投诉信和建议信有可能一起考:投诉并提出相关建议。这要引起重视,只需要把投诉信和建议信的句型融合一下即可。
一、要量化分数
确定自己应该能写到哪个档次的水平。做到心中有数。从大小作文来看,“稳拿”的分数究竟在哪一个档次,在此基础上,能力范围之内再做提升。如果基础相对比较弱的同学,不要一味地追求高,难的写作风格,一不留神容易出错,适得其反。其中,针对所有学生的建议就是:小作文要做到:“简单”,不要特别复杂的词与句;“正确”,尽量做到不要出现错误就好,词汇的正确性,语法结构的正确使用都是很重要的;“清晰”,针对性的做到题干要求的一定要写到,最好做到在句与句之间的层次,逻辑以及条理清晰。而对于大作文,除了做到上面要的几点之外,就要求大家尽量学习一些词汇和句式都相对高级点的来做替换,在大作文上面尽量体现自己的语言水准。
二、量化文章的字数
考研英语的写作是有字数要求的,一般小作文100字,大作文,英语一的要求是200字,英语二的要求是160左右。一般建议大家可多不可少,但是字数多的话也要适度,超出要求范围20个字左右可以接受,要考虑到万一写太多,一是错误出现的概率比较大,二来对于阅卷老师来讲会觉得啰嗦,不能在规定的范围内完成思想的表达;三则会导致卷面留出来的写作空间不够大家发挥就更加麻烦了。那么常规来看,写三段,这就要求大家做到能量化在每一段能够写的字数范围大概在多少字。比如,如果是图画描述,最好能控制在50字左右,从句子的量化来看,差不到3-4句话,有长有短,可以保证在有限的字数之内规定应该能完成的任务要求。而对于最后的段落则是弹性相对比较大的,可根据前文的结构和字数来调整最后一段到底写多少是合适的,如果前文篇幅较长,后文则简单收尾,不必太细化。但是,如果前文相对内容有欠缺,字数太少,则可根据最后一段做弥补。
三、突击大作文第二段
从重要性来讲,还是从字数来讲都是考生最为关注的一段。也是用所谓的“模板”最少的一段,那么如果想做到有话可讲,则要尽可能细的列提纲,(考场上时间是不允许的)。所以在接下来不到一个月的复习过程当中,要尽量做到每写一篇大作文都要打草稿细化第二段的内容,做到结构合理,内容不重复,然后再在前期积累的基础上做到字词句的丰富化和多样化,最后又有亮点的体现,以保证作文能够在最后有一个很大的提升,争取取得比较满意的成绩!
在任何专业或学科中,英语不仅是考生考研的必备水平,也是让他们最头疼的一门考试。从小学到考研,有多少学生跌出英语,没有突破。那么怎样才能突破考研的关口呢?首先要树立信心。许多人越来越不想学英语,因为他们努力学习,然后他们没有得到好的结果。他们越不想学,就越难。树立良好的信心和毅力,输不起。下面是给考生的一些英语学习技巧。
首先,词汇
许多人认为他们英语不好的根本原因是词汇量太小。所以无论什么英语考试,第一件事就是背单词。因为每个人背单词的方式不同,最有效的背单词方式也不同。最重要的是在学习英语的初期,找到自己背单词的方法。这里我给大家一些建议,供大家参考。
如果你觉得自己基础差,但是考研要背单词,时间充裕。可以先选一个比较简单的单词书,比如四六级的单词书。比如四级词汇书上说四级需要4750个单词。事实上,即使你在六级之后读了它,你仍然会觉得有很多单词你记不住了。这4500个单词中,有些你一定不熟悉。熟悉就看一遍。如果每天能看100个单词,45天就能看完,比直接看考研的单词还快。之后如果还有时间可以背一些比较难的单词书。这样做的目的是避免因为单词太多而失去对一些简单单词的掌握。
不要光背单词。如果你的计划是每天花6个小时学英语,那就觉得基础不好就背单词,然后在这6个小时里完整的背单词。这样做是非常不可取的。这里我举个例子。如果你是羽毛球新手,想先练习发球,如果一直练习发球,经过长时间的练习,发球可能会有进步,但整体羽毛球技术很难提高。学习英语也是如此。背单词需要一个小时,阅读需要一个小时,翻译需要一个小时。
背单词的时候注意它的用法,尽量自己造句联想。如果每一个单词都用句子和联想来背,单词的形象就会深刻。作为高题量,心烦的时候看专业课,背单词,能让你快速专注一件事,让自己高度集中。
二.阅读
阅读是提高英语学习的根本途径。在阅读中,你可以学习单词、语法和英美文化,这可以从整体上提高英语水平。考试中的阅读与词汇或背单词有关,但阅读中遇到的单词会让人记忆深刻。想考研,时间不急的话,平时可以看看英文报纸。如果你看不懂,你可以用字典试着翻译一本。
三.书写
写作要注意语法和句子结构。写作中抛弃简单句总是好的,哪怕是用和连接。比如你想说我想说的话,第一反应可能是我觉得……但是我觉得换成我怀疑会更好。尽量不要在你的写作中频繁使用我想……我……你可以试着用一些名词做主语,或者定语从句和非限制性定语从句,让你的句子更高级。同样,你可以用高级词汇代替简单词汇,强迫自己接受更高更难的写作技巧。
在研究生准备英语写作的时候,可能会有很多学生会试图记住很多优秀的整篇文章。虽然好文章很多,但是不可能全背下来。你可以挑出你读过的、感觉很精彩、应用范围很广的句子,这不仅对你的英语考试有帮助,对你以后的英语写作也有帮助。
邀请信是考研英语中常见的题型。邀请可包括各种各样的场合:宴会、午餐、晚餐、聚会、舞会、婚礼等等。一般来讲,邀请信分为正式和非正式两种。正式邀请就是请柬,请柬有固定的格式;而非正式邀请即一般邀请信,是常考的应用文。
邀请信段落设置:
第一段:直接表达邀请的意愿,提出邀请的原因。
第二段:详细说明邀请的场合、时间、地点及规格。
第三段:期望回复,祝好。
邀请信框架:
Dear Sir or Madam,
On behalf of sb.,I am writing this letter to cordially invite you to do sth.(give a lecture/attend an evening party).
As our distinguished guest,I am hoping that you will be available for sth.(the lecture or the party)in a specified place(地点)at a specified time(具体时间)on a specified date(日期).There will be one hour and a half(时长)for sth.(the lecture or the party)including...
Since it is a relatively formal occasion,it is also of great importance for you to pay close attention to your clothing.
I hope you will have time for sth.(the lecture or the party).I am looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience!
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
考生注意:
邀请信第二段是邀请的具体内容,包括地点、时间、主要内容等等。考生要根据题目的具体要求来写,务必明确完整,不可含糊其辞使对方捉摸不定,信中要写明场合、地点、年月日及具体时间。
这个判断要从三方面去理解。
首先看向考纲中的评分细则,官方考纲对于第五档(A节9-10分,B节17-20分)的评分标准要点:
考试大纲里规定了五个方面的评分细则,分别涵盖了“1.内容要点,2.语法和词汇, 3.语法错误, 4.衔接和层次, 5.格式和语域。”
可以看出细则1,3和5是属于基础要求,即不要跑题(细则1),没有错误(细则3),格式正确、语言得体(细则5),而细则4规定了衔接词的使用,即衔接词是明确得分点之一。和写作能力最相关的是第2条,“使用丰富的语法结构和词汇”,但是显然这一条讨论的仍然是语言的形式本身,丰富的语法结构包含什么呢,比如倒装句、非谓语动词、插入语、虚拟语气、强调句、并列句、被动语态、从句等等,也就是说阅卷老师并不十分关心大家在运用英文写作时内容是否逻辑严密、明确具体,而是更关心大家对语言的控制力。
这种重语言形式而轻内容的倾向,也和实际的阅卷过程息息相关。全国每年有几百万份试卷,一篇作文的评分时间是30-40秒,这就决定了在阅卷时没有时间成本去细究内容层面的逻辑是否严密连贯,论点是否新颖独到,只要没有明显的硬伤即可。
其次,考研英语作文的命制风格也与其评分标准相适应,究竟是先制定了作文评分标准再命题,还是先命制题目再制定评分标准,是一个先有鸡还是先有蛋的问题,已不得而知。但是可以明确的是作文题目命制风格和评分标准高度一致,下图是近五年的英语一作文真题。
近五年的考察的话题分别是“以身作则”“实干”“直面挑战的勇气”“坚持”“习惯(或时间管理)”。可以看出,都是一些较为抽象和宏大的品质,对比雅思写作题目,比如“很多人从乡村迁往城市,你从多大程度认为这是一个好的趋势?”,要完成这样一篇开放式作文,大部分同学能思考出相应中文观点就很不容易了,更不要说有相应的词伙积累(例如shortage of labour, job opportunities, improve living standards, consumer goods, public services等)来支撑自己完成论点的组织了。但是好在考研英语作文题目足够地抽象和宏大,不用去讨论太具体的事物,并不需要大量的知识储备,内容层面和思维难度要求比较低。
最后,从实际情况来说,真正具有英文写作能力的考生屈指可数,我和大家一样,从小到大学的都是中国式英语,深知我们的英语教学里对写作的忽视。命题专家肯定比我们更了解这个事实,如果用类似于雅思作文这种开放式作文题目来考察大家,就相当于用高中议论文题目去考察小学生,这样的结果就是考生上了考场现编,绝大多数作文都惨不忍睹,对于选拔性考试来说,这种结果显然是不可取的。
再者,既然是研究生入学考试,所考察的一定是作为一个准研究生应具备的能力,或者说通过考试引导大家提前培养该能力,直到我自己读研后才明白,95%的国内研究生在读研阶段根本不需要用英文写作,所以考研英语写作确实不用去考察真正意义上的英文写作能力。
那么,考研英语作文本质上究竟在考察什么?接着往下看。
第一步:整理独一无二模板
第二步:三个切忌
1.切忌中文思维模式
考生在完成考研英语大、小作文时,通病就是用中文思维模式写英语作文,把中文含义直接用英语翻译过来,导致文章不符合英文的成文成句规律,阅卷老师读起来很别扭。摆脱中文思维模式的关键在于培养英语语感,考生在平常模拟练习时要多积累英语文章的成文模式,切忌把中文按照字面含义形象化地直译,如people mountain people sea(人山人海)。
2.切忌错词、病句
考研英语写作可谓困扰了一大批考生,的确,作文部分考察考生综合能力的运用,从词汇到语法再到立意,可谓十分广泛。其实英语词汇非常丰富,通常每个词汇都有其他同义或近义词,因此在个别词汇拿不准的情况下尽量使用其他词汇代替。在完成作文时,有的考生滔滔不绝没有终点,有的考生无话可说,一个含义的句子反过来掉过去的叙述,让人十分头疼。在平常做题过程中多积累闪光词汇和闪光句型,不但不写错词病句,还让自己文章内容“闪”到阅卷老师。
3.注意格式正确
在英语小作文的完成上,要注意格式的正确与否,信头、称呼、结束语、签名是否齐全。在下笔之前还要注意试卷答题卡留出的答题区域大小,在心中做一个规划。20xx考研英语小作文的答题区域较小,有些考生没有规划好就造成了书写的不美观。
第三步:保持整洁卷面
整洁的卷面让阅卷老师心情愉悦,给出的总体印象分较高。要知道在考研中一分决定了能否上线,决定了是否具有复试的资格,所以每一个能得到分数的机会各位考生都不可小觑。在写作这个主观性发挥的题型中,要完成到最好,就必须养成良好的书写习惯,保持卷面整洁。
通过以上的分析,相信各位考生都认真的学习了英语作文完美收官三部曲,希望在宝贵的备考时间里,考生能保持两天完成一套考研英语历年真题作文的进度,培养良好的写作手感和语感,在考场上下笔有神。中公考研预祝各位考生都能取得自己满意的成绩!
此阶段也是考研英语作文备考的最佳阶段,在备考过程中,考生们可以拿以下几个话题来练习写作,多动笔对于写好考研英语作文很有帮助,希望能够帮助到大家!
核心:老师认为,提高英语写作只有三种方法:多读、多记、多写。背诵要求是:脱口而出,越多越好。
优点:深入解读新考研英语大纲,透视1998-20_年考研写作问题,从框架、思维、语言三个层次突破。
将实用作文、图片作文、图表作文完美结合,对真题进行分类分析,推荐经典题目和范文,总结出完美的写作框架。
缺点:耗时,每个科目都要根据分数来分配学习时间,英语只有100分,作文只有30分,背诵几十篇文章是一种非常耗时的方法,成本不值。
《朱伟写作宝典》
核心:朱伟老师给出了传统的三段写作方法,第一段点题,中间段讨论,最后一段总结。
优点:其中最精彩的部分是第一段,用“解剖”法来描述漫画,将漫画分为“时间”、“空间”和“时空平衡”三类,并总结出相应的三种描述方法。
缺点:操作难度高,首先要对漫画进行拆分获取信息,其次要将漫画信息转换成简单的英语句子,最后将简单的句子组合成高级的长句。
对于考研写作,最基本的要求是考前能动笔写个20篇作文,建议对照近20年真题去做,这样有对比的比较权威的范文。
就算是没有人帮忙去修改参考,可以从几个方面着手去对比:①看看自己的构思和范文的有何区别;②自己的用词用句和范文有何区别;③你写的行文思路与范文有何区别。范文有他的优点,自己尽可能的向其靠拢。
就近几年来讲,写作的分数逐渐走低,究其原因,不难发现,批卷老师越来越严格地遵守评分标准,对于各项的评分都严上加严。小可爱们一定要重视写作,多加练习,才能在写作中取得高分。究竟怎么才能提高写作能力呢?
如何从不会写、写得烂到入得了批卷老师的法眼呢?首先大家要清楚地是:写作是语言的输出,而没有输入,又何来输出?
你不可能凭空的创造出正确的英语句子,实际上你说过的每一句外语都是在你见过并且记得类似的句子的情况下才能够正确的说出来,无非是更换其中的实意动词和名词。
所以,要想会写英语句子,首先需要你多读英语句子多背些英语句子。这就是为什么你从小学、初中到高中,语文和英语老师都逼着你背课文了,不是真的想要考验你的记忆力,是为了让你掌握更多的高级语言表达。
其次应该要多读或背诵哪些英语材料呢?当然是真题啊,真题就是一切啊!学习每一种题型的同时,针对其英语句子,可以作反向思考,如果用于我自己的作文中是否合适,或者我可以怎样改写?
这个句法表达很出彩,那么我应该积累记到笔记中,用于以后的作文写作中,多用多练自然就成了你自己的句子。当然除了输入,输出时还必须要注意,要写出语法正确的句子。
很多同学认为学英语语法很困难,实际上用于写作中的.语法知识都不难。
语法是使用过程中自然产生的,是符合人类大脑自然逻辑的,而英语之所以能够成为世界语言的其中一个最重要的原因就是英语的语法非常简单。
如果你背诵的东西里面有一个句式出现了三次,你就会对这个语法点有一个印象,如果出现了十次,你基本就自然而然地会用这个句式了,而这一切实际上都是发生在你的潜意识中的,你甚至有可能掌握了这个语法都没有办法一下子说出来语法规则是什么。
这个时候语法就成了你思维模式的一部分而不仅仅是一条知识信息。你可以想想汉语的语法规则你能说出来几个?但这并不影响你正确的使用汉语。
但不可避免的是,英语还不是我们的母语,除了英语专业的学生,平时英语应用和练习地频率也不是很高,所以还是有很多同学在写不同主题的文章和语句时,会出现各式各样的语法错误,这是正常情况。
最后那么我们怎么解决这个问题呢?一般来讲,你犯过的语法错误,如果没有人给你更正,你不知道的话就会再犯类似错误,所以练习写作中必不可少的一环就是“批改作文”。
有同学会说,范文背锅了,但是写作的时候还是不会写,原因可能是你没背熟和你动笔默写和自己写作文,只是单纯的死记硬背了。
检验背没背熟的方法就是如果一篇文章,你要想好久才能想起来,说明你没背熟。
除了背下来,另外就是要范文要默写。会背不一定会写,通过默写,会发现,其实很多单词你还不会拼写,语法顺序不对,标点符号不对等问题。
让大家背的都是范文,高分文章当然有他的可取之处,最后再模仿你背的文章,把里面的词汇,句型用到另外一篇话题相近的文章里去,这样套模仿写作,道长的课程里是有的,听了云里雾里的,但需要自己多揣摩,做到举一反三。
作文复习的时间其实完全不亚于精读一篇阅读的时间,需要经过:自己写,对比,背诵,默写,仿写等5个步骤才能完成一篇文章。
其实作文不需要背太多,背几篇典型文章(滚瓜烂熟),总结出自己的作文模板。剩下的工作就是练字和总结一些话题内容。
模板1:
As the old Chinese saying goes, echoes with this picture in title of the picture further points out that_________.
The picture is meant to far as I am concerned,I universal truth can be particularly proved in the field of_________, where_________.
A brief survey of history about also demonstrates the fundamental importance example, same principle applies to common people as well,and I am sure everybody can benefit from_________.
模板2:
From the picture we can perceive astonishes the drawing and the readers is is known to all that_________,but it seems_________.
The artist utilizes this artistic presentation to imply a spreading vogue , the trend boils down ,_________. To worsen the problem, this behavior is evoking_________.
In my point of view, we are in a prime time to curb the problem from deteriorating. First and foremost, the whole society should arrive at the consensus that , an awareness of should be infused into everybody's mind.
This picture is simple but significant. As is vividly shown in the picture, wearing traditional Chinese costume, a foreigner is saying “Happy New Year” to a Chinese girl in Chinese, even though his pronunciation is not accurate enough. There is no doubt that the picture implies that a growing number of foreigners are starting to be interested in Chinese culture in this day and age.
Why should this phenomenon take placeThere are generally three factors accounting for it. First of all, due to the fast economic and social development, the world is becoming smaller and smaller. Accordingly, international cultural exchange is becoming increasingly frequent. Besides, learning traditional Chinese culture, which is priceless spiritual treasure, can give those foreign friends a new perspective of the outside world. Last but not least, this kind of cultural exchange is beneficial for both our Chinese and foreign friends to broaden our horizons, widen our knowledge, and eich our experience.
From what has been discussed above, we may come to a conclusion that our traditional culture is popular among the whole world and should be preserved and cherished. Therefore, the mass media, such as television, radio and Internet should try best to propaganda and advocate it. As for ourselves, we should cultivate the awareness of learning national culture. Only in this way can we have opportunities to expect a more vigorous and prosperous world to come.
To Whom It May Concern,
I have read your recruitment announcement for volunteers and decided to apply for the position. The World Exposition is a platform for all the countries all over the world to show mankind’s achievements in technology, economy and culture. As a Chinese, I glory in the fact that the World Expo can be held in China, and I will be proud if I can be accepted as a volunteer.
Having served the Student Union of my university for three years, I have rich experience to assist you to prepare and organize the World Expo, even a small part of work I can do. In addition, my proficiency in computer and familiarity with Chinese culture fit me for the volunteer position. The attached resume gives details of my study and work experience, and I can say with certainty that all of that will qualify me for the position.
I really hope to have a chance to contribute to the World Expo, and I look forward to your decision and reply. You can call me at 66667777, or email me via abc@.
Sincerely yours.
Li Ming
Dear John,
I have just heard the news that you propose to organize an end-to-the-term party. I support your plan, because after a term of painstaking study, we deserve and need a recreation to relax and to gather together, sharing our joy and hardship in the past several months.
However, seeing that to hold a satisfying party is not an easy task, I think it’s necessary for me to help you. Having served the Student Union for three years, I have enough experience to help you prepare and organize the party, and I will do my best to offer my help. If you think it necessary, I will assist you in arranging the party according to the program I made last year when our Student Union held a similar party, and I will help you rent the classroom we need.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm writing to apologize for ____,Had I paid more attention then, I wouldn't have made such a stupid mistake.
Now something must be done to solve the problem because I understand _______,Please accept my sincere apology for any any inconveniences it may cause. I have come up with several remedies to make up _______.
Please let me know which solution you prefer at your earliest convenience. I really hope you will accept my sincere apology.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
参考译文:
尊敬的先生或女士:
我写信为_______道歉,如果当时我多留意的话,就不会犯如此愚蠢的错误。
由于我知道_______, 现在我必须做一点事情来解决这个问题。对于由此可能带来的不便之处,请接受我诚挚的道歉。我想了几种补救方法去弥补______。
请尽快告诉我您更喜欢哪种解决措施。真心希望您接受我诚挚的道款。
您真诚的,
This picture is simple but significant. As is shown in the picture above, rising up his head, a young boy is holding a glorious sun with his firm hand. The caption indicates that, “ with dreams, our hearts can fly high; with flight, our dreams will not be far away.”
Why are dreams so importantWe may attribute its significance to three factors. First and foremost, dreams can give us courage and strength to overcome all the difficulties in our lives. Besides, having dreams is beneficial for us to be confident, passionate and energetic, and it may put us in a favorable position in our life journey. On the contrary, were there no dreams, our life will be dull and meaningless. Last but not least, if all of us have dreams, our society will be more vigorous and harmonious.
Considering every aspect of this positive issue, we should bear in mind that dreams are of great significance to both our society and , the mass media, such as television, Internet and radio, should try best to propaganda and advocate it. As for ourselves, we should take practical actions to cherish our precious dreams and let them be realized. Then, we have every reason to be convinced that we can have a bright future if we have dreams.
This cartoon depicts an ironic scene: a man is walking dangerously on a wire with a pole in his hand. On one end of the pole hangs a box which is named ^v^the convenience of jobs^v^ while on the other end hangs a box which is labelled^v^illegal profits^v^. The man is trying hard to reach the end of the wire, where a piece of papar is attached which says ^v^you should be responsible for what you have done. ^v^ However, the man believes that he will not be blamed since he has taken just a little. The sobering aspect of this cartoon is corruption always happens on those who think they are the lucky ones.
Human nature being what it is, most people have a kind of fluke mind that they may not be punished since the amount they take illegally is small. However, this idea could not be more wrong in our contemporary society. Let's assume that all the government officials in China hold this idea. If this assumption comes true, it will definitely exert a butterfly effect: the appetite of these officials will become even bigger. The amount of money they take may end up as astronomical figures. One day their behavior will be revealed as severe crime and they will spend the rest of their lives in jail.
So it can be justified without any exaggeration that when we look at the consequences of curruption, we may find it very difficult to assess the costs. But these costs can be very considerable and may even hurl the whole society system into a occurs to many that the most effective solution is to appeal to the authorities, or to take legal means. But that is just a passive wayand only works on extreme cases. Therefore, I recommend that massive media, school education and family cultivation should be activated to call for self-discipline on this matter.
这幅漫画描述了一个具有讽刺意味的场景:一个人走路危险与钢管线在手里。在杆的一端挂一盒被命名为“工作”的便利而在另一端挂一盒贴上“非法利润”。男人努力达到线的结束,在一片分析附加说“你应该为你的所作所为负责。“然而,男人认为他不会指责,因为他一点点。这幅漫画是腐败的发人深省的方面总是发生在那些认为他们是幸运的。
人性就是这样,大多数人有一种侥幸心理,他们可能不会受到惩罚,因为他们非法量小。然而,这一想法不能更多的错误在我们的现代社会。假设所有的政府官员在中国持有这个观点。如果这种假设成真,它肯定会产生蝴蝶效应:这些官员的胃口将变得更大。他们的钱最终可能是天文数字。有一天,他们的行为将会发现是严重犯罪,他们将在^v^度过他们的余生。
所以可以证明没有任何夸张,当我们看的'后果,我们可能会发现很难评估成本。但这些成本是非常可观的,甚至可能把整个社会系统陷入混乱。发生很多,最有效的解决办法是吸引当局,或采取法律手段。但这只是一个被动的学汉语只有在极端情况下工作。因此,我建议大规模媒体,学校教育和家庭培养应该激活呼吁自律在这个问题上。
模板1:
We can see from the picture that__________, but __________.
If__________,he would surely are three reasons to explain why it happens ,__________,which resulted ,though__________,,__________Thirdly,__________.
I maintain that effective measures should be taken to put an end to this ,we need to endeavor to ,strict regulations should be enacted and enforced to create a harmonious and orderly through the combined efforts can we eliminate this“tumor”forcefully and completely.
模板2:
As is shown in the cartoon, in the cartoon for example__________.
This phenomenon appears commonly in our daily ,,they only try their best to Such deeds not only __________,but also__________.
Therefore,it is of great significance to take actions to change this and foremost,http:// addition, these steps can help guarantee a solid economic order and a harmonious society.
Dear Sir or Madam,
Generally speaking, the services you offer here are quite good; however,I have some suggestions for you to adopt. And I would like to extend my great appreciation if you are so kind as to take my suggestions into consideration.
I have been______ for many years with a great enthusiasm and interest. It is my view that ______ is of utmost significance. To crack this hard nut, I would like to give/offer/render/propose some/several useful/practical/conducive recommendations as follows. First and foremost, it is imperative for us to_____. In addition, we should _____. Last but not least, _____.
I hope you will find the above proposals conducive and 1 would like to discuss this matter to further prompt atention to my sggestions would be highly appreciated.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
参考译文:
尊敬的先生或女士:
总体来说,您这里提供的服务相当不错,但我有一些建议希望您采纳。如果您能考虑我的建议,我将非常感谢。
多年来我一直以极大的热情和兴趣_____。 我认为_____非常重要。为解决这个难题,我想提出以下几条实用的建议。首先,我们的当务之急是_____,其次,我们应该_____。最后但同样重要的是,_____。
我希望您觉得上述的建议有益,同时希望进步讨论这一问题。十分感谢您对我的建议给予及时的关注。
您真诚的,
This picture is really thought provoking. As is vividly shown in the above picture, a book is lying above the grass and beautiful flowers. Beside it, there is a topic thatsays:“reading”. There is no denying that the picture implies that reading is of utmost importance to us.
Considering every aspect of it, we may attribute its significance to three factors. First of all, reading can broaden our horizon, widen our knowledge and eich our experience. Besides, reading is to success what water is to a fish. It can put us in a favorable position in the job market. Last but not least, if all of us are willing to read more and extensively, our society will be more progressive and prosperous.
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw a conclusion that reading is indispensable in our daily life. Therefore, the mass media, such as
television, Internet and radio, should try best to propaganda and advocate it. As
for ourselves, we should take practical actions to enhance our awareness of reading. Then, we have every reason to be convinced that we can have a bright future and a beautiful world.
Dear David,
I have arrived in my hometown last night, and when I got up this morning, I found the vacation is so relaxing. I know you are fond of sightseeing tour, so I wonder if you are interested in having a visit to my home town in a few days.
You know my hometown is Hua Yin, where Mountain Hua is situated. If you can come, I will conduct you around the famous tourist attractions and introduce local dishes to you. By the way, I think it’s necessary for me to tell you how to get to Hua Yin. You can buy a train ticket direct to Hua Yin, or fly to Xi’an, and I w
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