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俗话说:“予人玫瑰,手留余香。”在我们的日常生活中,我们会遇到各种困难。因此,我们会需要他人的帮助;但同时,我们也要学会帮助他人。其实,帮助他人就是在帮助自己。请你结合身边的事例,以“帮助”为话题,用英语写一篇短文。
【注意】
1.无需写标题,开头已经给出,但不计入总词数;
2.文中要结合你帮助别人或别人帮助你的一件事例;
3.文中不得透露任何个人和学校的真实信息;
4.词数为80左右。
As the saying goes, roses given, fragrance in hand. In our daily life, we will meet with a lot of trouble.
1、审题要充分
在写英语作文时,普遍存在这样一个情况:看完作文题,就开始写,想到哪写到哪,只要把字数凑够了就停笔了。这样写出来的文章,看起来就像在记流水帐,没有任何逻辑,杂乱无章,毫无条理,同时容易出现用错时态、用错格式等情况。
2、背诵满分作文
英语学习就是一个背诵的过程,因为它是一门语言学科,既需要我们去理解,同样要求我们去熟记。每一篇满分作文都有其独特之处,我们应该从中汲取自己所缺少的知识,将其应用到我们的写作之中,只有胸中有了一定量的料,我们在考场上才能下笔如有神。
3、句式丰富
一篇可读性强的文章,通常能较好体现学生对英语语言结构、词块、句式的运用。因此各类句式的多元呈现往往可以提升书面表达的成绩。
4、卷面干净容易得高分
据阅卷老师的经验,在阅卷的时候并不是按这3个部分逐项打分的,而是在第一遍读完全文之后,心里已经形成了一个“印象分”,然后再细读第二、三遍,把印象分分配到各个打分部分。因此,这个“印象分”就非常重要,而同学们的书法,也正是在这个环节,影响到了自己的分数。所以初三的考生,如果书法不好,一定要注意。所谓的书法并不需要写的很漂亮,符合3个简单的标准即可:没有斜体、没有连笔、涂改较少。
5、思维多元
从近五年中考书面表达命题情况看,书面表达话题虽多元,但在设题上基本为半开放形式,因此半控制部分学生需要涵盖题目所给信息并进行适当发挥,而半开放部分,则要求学生根据话题内容、自己的生活阅历、个人思维层次结合自己的英语表述自己的个人看法。
拓展阅读:英语作文评分标准
中考作文一般从内容、语言、组织结构这三方面进行评分(总分20分):
1、内容(满分8)
7-8分:内容切题,意思连贯,表达清楚、完整。
5-6分:内容基本切题,意思大致连贯,表达基本清楚、但不够完整。
2-4分:内容不够切题,意思不够连贯,表达不够清楚、有些离题。
0-1分:文不对题,表达不清。
2、语言(满分8)
词数:每少5个单词扣分,以此类推。只写出个别单词、词不成句不给分。
拼写:每处错误扣分,同一错误不重复计数。
语法:每处错误扣分,同一语法错误不重复扣分。
标点符号、大小写:每两处错误扣分,但扣分总和不超过1分。
3、组织结构(满分4)
内容充实,上下文连贯,用语规范,表达准确,无语法错误;词汇和句型句式运用恰当,多见好句型和习惯表达用语者,可给3-4分。
内容充实,不写废话,上下文连贯,用语规范,表达准确,无或少见语法错误;词汇和句型句式运用恰当,多见好句型和习惯表达用语者,可给2分。
一般情况下,内容和语言累计得分在15分以上者(含),方可得到1-2分组织结构分。
内容和语言在15分以下者,如文中有值得肯定的好的句型和表达,可酌情考虑给1分组织结构分。
通篇句型句式单一、词汇贫乏者,即使无语法错误,一般也不予给组织结构分。
一、充分准备,打好基础。
为了提高书面表达水平,平时应加强阅读,多背诵一些句形、段落甚至短文。俗话说:读书破万卷,下笔如有神,只有多读,多记,多背诵,才能出口成章,下笔成文。此外,还要掌握一些应用文体的写作方法,如书信、日记、通知等,它们大多有固定的格式。
二、认真审题,明确要求
仔细看清写作要求和提示,分清材料的主次,接着确定体裁、格式和人物、地点等要素;最后确定时态,同时考虑相关的语态搭配用法。
三、遣词造句、表达规范
用词要恰当,不可逐句把提示翻译成英语。写作时,应尽量选用你最熟悉、最有把握的词和句型来表达思想。如果有些单词不会些,有些句型不会表达,可以设法绕开,用熟悉的同义词、同义短语或同义句来代替。要学会善于运用适当的关联词,如and,or,but,so,because,since等,以使行文逻辑紧密,自然流畅。
四、认真撰写,卷面整洁
如果考试时间允许,书面表达一定要先写草稿。在抄写入答题卷前,要先进行检查修改。首先检查所写内容是否切题;之后检查主题是否明确,表达方式是否恰当;最后检查所用时态、语态、人称是否符合要求,前后是否一致。
英语作文卷面要求:
1.标题应写在第一行的中央。标题中的每一个实词的第一个字母均应大写。
2.段与段之间,一般不空行,但每段第一行应缩进3–4个字母所占的位置。
3.书写要工整,字体稍大,词间距离要一致,行间距离要一致,尽量避免一个单词隔行书写。
1.内容完整,语句流畅,无语法错误,书写规范,给9-10分;
2.内容较完整,语句较流畅,基本无语法错误,书写较规范,给6-8分;
3.内容不完整,语句欠流畅,语法错误较多,书写较规范,给3-5分;
4.只写出个别要点,语法错误较多,书写欠规范,只有个别句子可读或不知所云,给0-2分。
对考生的作文要求有四点:1、内容要完整。2、语句流畅。3、没有语法错误。4、书写规范。能达到上述要求的作文,都会得到相应的高分。所以,在写作文的时候,大家要牢记这些要求。
要做到内容完整,我们首先要认清看好题目的要求,抓住要点,注意文体。我们可以在写作之前好好构思一下,自己将从几个方面来写。是否能将所有内容都包含在内。在写完之后,再检查一遍。看看有没有内容的缺失。
要做到语句的流畅,这就要求有扎实的英语基本功。在平时的积累上,注意一些语义的表达方法。要尽量使用自己能够正确运用的语句和表达方式。注意句子之间的连贯性。这不仅仅指从语法上,也指句意上的连贯。
在初中阶段,考生应注意语法点有:动词单三形式,时态(包括:现在进行时,一般过去时,将来时),定语从句(此项语法建议考生尽量不要使用),语态,单复数,主谓一致,冠词等还有一些表达方式。比如,我非常喜欢足球。考生经常会写成Iverylikefootball.这样的错误一定要避免。
书写一定要规范。要了解英语作文的书写规则。同时,要知道应用文的写作方法。
除了以上的四个方面,还建议考生们要检查:单词的拼写、大小写和标点符号。
考试的时候,要尽量留出充足的时间给作文。这样,我们才能有足够的时间去构思,去打草稿。在评卷的时候,第一印象很重要,所以考生们一定要让自己的作文看起来舒服,干净,整齐。
中考英语中,很多学生自感基础很差,主动放弃了作文的15分。即便学生表达能力很差,但只要所写文章中包括题目要点中的部分信息,依然能得1-3分的最低档分数;如能完整表达题目给出的要点和要求,同时文章通顺,无严重语法和拼写错误,一般能得到4-11分的中档分。
Protect environment(环境保护)
The earth scale change of climate has brought a new kind of natural disaster and the developed and complicated city system is holding a latent risk of expanding the damage artificially. Also people has been spoiling the health since the immense quantity of chemicals have been produced and already used in pursuit of convenience and various toxic substances have been produced unintentionally and accumulated in environment. Therefore, We need some countermeasures from the viewpoint to prevent the city environment form disaster and to manage environmental risks. So we will develop and improve a new risk management system and a disaster prevention system to preserve and create the city environment where people feel easy and sound in theilifer.
Dear Miss Wang,
I would like to recommend Amy for our monitor. Amy works hard and is careful
with everything. She is good at singing and dancing. She often helps others do some cleaning. She is a polite girl and she is friendly to all of us. Last Friday, she found a wallet on her way home after school. She kept on waiting until the owner came back to get it. The owner thanked her very much.
I think she’ll be a good monitor.
中考英语作文评分细则
满分档(20分):长度符合要求(100—110字),书写规范,涵盖所有要点,结构规范,条理清楚,逻辑严密,词汇丰富,没有任何语法错误。
第五档(15—19分):文本长度符合要求,书写规范,涵盖所有要点,结构规范,条理清楚,逻辑严密,词汇比较丰富有少量语法错误。
第四档(9—14分):文本长度符合要求,书写规范,基本涵盖要点(有2要点得给9—10分),行文比较连贯,词汇不够丰富,有一些语法错误。
第三档(6—8分):文本长度与要求有明显距离,书写不规范,要点不完整(只有1个要点),行文不连贯,词汇量不足,错误较多,勉强能看出作文意图。
第二档(3—5分):能用句子表达,错误百出,只能勉强猜测出作文意图。
第一档(0—2分):有一些英语单词,但与话题毫不相干。(白卷0分)
拓展阅读:中考英语复习注意事项
1、每天要坚持听录音、跟读初三的英语课文,在听读过程中留意单词拼写、重点词汇与句型以及需要掌握的语言点,从而进一步落实基础知识。
2、花一些时间整理中考模拟卷和纠错本,帮助自己查漏补缺、温故知新,从而达到有效复习的目的。同时尽可能利用你的周围资源,如请同学和老师来帮你答疑解惑。
3、适当地给自己增加一些中考模拟题的练习,但在做题的过程中应避免偏题和怪题。完型填空和阅读理解每天坚持做1—2篇,在规定时间内完成。良好的语感的养成对英语解题是很有用的。
4、在最后的复习阶段要提醒自己注重解题技巧。比如选择题应采用排除法等进行解答,以便确保准确率。
5、平时应多看一些范文。
比如:报纸中的作文题,都会有范文提供,这些范文都应看一下,尤其要注意文中承前启后的句子,把这些句子正确的用在自己的作文中,得分就会高很多。平时作文的得分在10分以下的,自己应该多练,并请老师给你面批,这样进步会很快。
6、临近中考时,家长和学生都会越来越担心到时候能否考好,所以也往往容易急躁和焦虑。作为家长很有必要帮助自己和孩子调整好心态。只有这样,学生在中考的考场上才能无所畏惧,信心百倍,最大限度地发挥自己的能力。
题目:请向你未见面的笔友写一封自我介绍信,字数不少于60单词。
Dear Bob,
亲爱的鲍勃,
Yesterday I heard from you. I am very glad to be your pen friend. My name is Peter Zhang. I am sixteen years old. I live in...
昨天我收到了你的来信,我很高兴成为你的笔友。我的名字叫张彼德。我今年十六岁,我住在......
I am a middle school student, too. I like English and maths very much. I also like sports. I am good at singing. I know a little about America. Could you tell me something more about your country in your next letter?
我也是一名中学生,我非常喜欢英语和数学。我还喜欢体育运动,我很擅长唱歌。我对美国的了解不多,下次来信时能多跟我聊聊你们国家的事吗?
Please write to me soon.
期待着你的来信。
Yours
Peter Zhang
I love the art of calligraphy. Chinese calligraphy has a long history and is one of the treasures of our country. Pen and ink calligraphy are vigorous and bold, elegant and beautiful.
But what I like most is pen calligraphy. Why do I like to use pen? It's because no one in our family has ever written in the father's capacity to change the fact that I learn brush calligraphy. Therefore, I have an indissoluble bond with calligraphy When I first started practicing calligraphy, I couldn't learn it well, and I didn't have the patience to learn it.
Once, I asked my calligraphy teacher, _teacher, I've been learning calligraphy for half a year. Why can't I learn English well?_ the teacher laughed and said to me, _to learn calligraphy, first of all, we should have confidence, second, we should have determination. Finally, no matter what we do, we must have patience.
We must have_ three hearts _to do well The teacher's words, feel very reasonable, so in unremitting efforts to gradually practice calligraphy, I have an interest in calligraphy, progress is growing, so I practice a whole year of calligraphy, and finally have achievements.
中文翻译:
我热爱书法艺术,中国书法源远流长,是我国的瑰宝之一,笔墨书法刚健豪放,笔法高雅,优美,但我最喜欢的是钢笔书法为什么我喜欢用笔,那是因为我们家祖祖辈辈都没有一个人以笔父的身份来写字改变这个事实,叫我学毛笔字,所以,我和书法有着不解之缘,当我刚开始练书法的时候,我也学不好,也没耐心学记得一次,我问我的书法老师:“老师,我学书法已经半年了,为什么学不好英语”老师笑着对我说:“学书法首先要有信心,第二要有决心,最后无论做什么也要有耐心,一定要有‘三心’,才能做好”我听了老师的话,觉得很有道理,于是在不懈努力下逐渐练字,我对书法产生了兴趣,进步越来越大,于是我练了整整xx年的书法,终于有了成绩。
People begin to prepare for the coming new year, which is called _new year_. The shop owners are busy, and everyone goes out to buy the necessities for the new year, not only cooking oil, rice, noodles, chicken, duck, fish, meat, but also fruits, candy, nuts, all kinds of decorations, new clothes and shoes for children, gifts for the elderly and friends, are all new Before the arrival of the year, they were listed on the purchase list. People cleaned their homes and clothes thoroughly, bedding and all the utensils.
Then people began to decorate their clean rooms with a happy and festive atmosphere. Spring Festival couplets will be pasted on all door panels, and Chinese calligraphy will be highlighted in bold on red . The contents range from the owner's wishes for a better future to good luck in the new year.
The designs of door god and God of wealth will be pasted on the front door to drive away evil spirits and welcome peace. The Chinese character _Fu_ is necessary. The word _Fu_ on the can be pasted normally or upside down.
Because _Fu_ and _Fulai_ are homophonic, both are called _fudaole_. Moreover, two big red lanterns can be raised on both sides of the front door. Red cutting can be seen on the window glass, and bright colored New Year pictures with auspicious meanings can also be hung on the wall.
At that time, people attached great importance to new year's Eve, and all family members had one Start eating.
中文翻译:
人们开始为即将到来的新年做准备这被称为“过年”,店主们忙得团团转,大家都出去买过年必需品,不仅有食用油、米、面、鸡、鸭、鱼、肉,还有水果、糖果、各种坚果,还有各种各样的装饰品,给孩子们买的新衣服、新鞋,给老人、亲朋好友的礼物,都在新年到来前被列入清单,人们把家里的室内外和衣服都彻底打扫干净,被褥和所有的用具然后人们开始装饰他们的洁净室,充满欢乐和喜庆的气氛。所有的门板都会贴上春联,在红纸上用黑体字突出中国书法,内容从业主对美好未来的祝愿到新年的好运,门神、财神的图案会贴在前门,以驱邪迎平安。汉字“福”是必须的。
纸上的“福”字可以正常粘贴,也可以倒贴,因为“福”与“福来”谐音,两个字都叫“福道乐”,而且前门两侧都可以升起两个大红灯笼,窗户玻璃上可以看到红色的剪纸,墙上还可以挂上色彩鲜艳、寓意吉祥的年画,当时人们非常重视除夕夜,所有家庭成员一起吃饭。
低碳生活
Presently, a new lifestyle called low carbon life is spreading every corner of our country. The concepts of low carbon are low energy and no waste. It is such a significant project that I can’t wait to present my ideas on how to promote it.
On the first place, a no-car day is supposed to set up every week in our school. Because cars not only cause serious air pollution but also waste energy. On no-car day, neither students nor teachers are allowed to drive to school. Meanwhile, just walk, jump, cycle or run. Use our legs and enjoy the fun.
On the second place, we had best not use plastic bags any more. No one can stand the “white pollution”. So, it is wise to use bags which can be reused again and again.
Finally, one thing that we should keep in mind: every big thing comes from the subtle. Therefore, as students, we ought to turn out the lights the moment we leave, turn off the tap in time, and reuse our textbook and so on.
All in all, it weighs greatly for all of us to put the low carbon lifestyle into practice. Just set our mind to these: no-car day, no plastic bags, and no waste. Let’s do it now.
父亲节
Yesterday was Father’s Day. I had planned to give my father a present. But I didn’t remember it until in the was too late to post a card to him. So I decided to buy something. When I was in the department store. I found it was not easy for me to choose something right for him. Suddenly I
got an idea. I ran home and opened my computer. I made a beautiful card and mailed him through the Internet. then I began to make supper. When father came home, he was very glad to find a big meal on the table. then I asked him to check his e-mail. He was amazed to find a beautiful card in his e-mail-box.
What a wonderful surprise!
世界杯
World Cup (soccer), two international soccer tournaments, one for men and one for women, each held every four years. Both tournaments are the pinnacle of international competition in the sport.
The men’s World Cup is considered the most popular sporting event in the world and is followed with passionate interest around the globe—the final game of the 1998 tournament was played to a television audience of more than 1 billion viewers. Founded in 1930 with just 13 teams, the tournament now attracts entries from more than 140 countries. The teams must participate in elimination games within their own continents before qualifying to become one of the 32 nations participating in the final tournament.
The women’s World Cup was first played in 1991 and has gained popularity steadily since then. More than 90,000 fans attended the finals of the 1999 tournament—one of the largest crowds ever to witness a women’s sporting event. Nearly 75 nations attempted to qualify for the 1999 event, which was a 16-team elimination tournament.
世博会(考得太多,所以机率不大)
Shanghai will host the 20_ World Expo. The World Expo has a long
history but it has never been held in Asia. So the 20_ World Expo is
an honor for all of the Asians. Our government has promised that it will be the best one. And Shanghai, as a host city, will have more chances to develop quickly. As a student in Shanghai, I should learn English well so that I can be a volunteer in the Expo to help foreigners know more about Shanghai
玉树地震
Qinghai lies in the northeastern part of the Tibetan Plateau, which formed due to the ongoing collision of the Indian Plate with the Eurasian Plate. The main deformation in this area is crustal shortening, but there is also a component of left lateral strike-slip faulting on major west–east trending structures such as the Kunlun and Altyn Tagh fault systems that accommodate southeastward translation of the Tibetan area
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Our School Rules
There are many rules in our school.
From Monday to Friday,we have to get to school before 7:00 in the must wear school uniforms,and I think it is good for us because uniforms canmake us look smart. We must listen to our teachers carefully in class and finishour homework after school. We are not allowed to use mobile phones in class. Ithink the rules are very strict but useful,and we should follow them. However,wehave so much homework that we have little free time to do what we love todo.
In my opinion,we should have more free time to take part in all kinds ofactivities and improve our abilities.
面对英语作文,很多学生都表示头疼,自己觉得写的还比较理想,成绩却不理想,有些同学不顾得分要点,一味追求难的语法及高级的词汇,结果导致错误不 断,本末倒置,不但没有拿到得分亮点,反而扣分,这是由于大部分同学对英语作文打分规则不太清楚导致。今天特级教师帮大家理一下英语作文的得分要 点,以助于大家能够拿到一个好的分数。
同学们首先要知道,英语作文分为四等。一等文:13-15分;二等文:9-12分;三等文:5-8分;四等文:0-4分。以下教大家四点如何拿到英语高分作文:
1.把握要点:
实际上中考英语写作就等于两个字,翻译!因为中考英语写作一般会给出几个要点,要求必须在文章中有所体现。文章写的再好,只要缺少要点就会扣分。所以要点,也就是文章的第二段内容,要做到全,围绕中心。
2.理清结构
中考最流行的结构就是三段式,深受各地区中考英语写作阅卷老师的喜爱。为什么尼?因为这种结构十分清 晰。“观点——要点——总结”让人一目了然。三段式的第一段:简单明了,开门见山,不超过2句话,如,我们想表达小强很强壮,第一段直接说 XQ is extremely strong. 观点明确,这一句足矣。
第二段:分2-3点说为什么他强壮。1. 每天吃10顿饭,He has ten meals everyday! 详举吃的是什么。2. 每天运动2小时,He does exercise 2 hours a day! 详举做了什么运动。
第三段:经过第二段的论证,可以得出结论。但请注意,不能完全照抄第一段,要有升华。也可以提出希望和建议等。如,How strong and robust XQ is! I hope to be him one day!
第一,词汇量要充足。
词汇量多少很大程度上决定作文是否能写得下去。
第二,审题要充分。
我所教的学生中在写英语作文时,普遍存在这样一个情况:看完作文题,就开始写,想到哪写到哪,只要把字数凑够了就停笔了。这样写出来的文章,看起来就像在记流水帐,没有任何逻辑,杂乱无章,毫无条理,同时容易出现用错时态、用错格式等的情况。试想,如果你是试卷的命题人,你出作文题的时候,肯定有出这道题的独特的道理。所以仔细审题和构思就成了写作的第一步。审题的重点放在写作体裁、格式、字数方面,确保第一遍审题就能保证得到基本分。同时还要文体和时态,因为不同的文体要求的写作格式也是不同的,时态的要求也非常重要。
第三,提纲要详细。
审完题后一定要列提纲。很多学生认为,中考英语作文译成中文,最多是小学二年级的语文作文水平,所以根本没有必要列提纲。其实,这种想法是非常错误的,因为提纲不仅能使文章的结构清晰,还有很重要的一点:防止漏掉作文内容。因为中考英语作文有一个很重要的要求:要点要全。如果你漏掉了需要写的内容,即使文章写得再优美,用词再准确,也拿不了高分。最后要注意打草稿,然后修改。这样可以保证错误降低至最少或者没有错误,同时也能保持卷面整洁。
第四,文化差异要注意
我们要时刻牢记一点,中英文表达方式有很大的差异,所以体现在作文表达上也常常会出现生硬的中国式作文表达,降低了我们的作文质量。所以注重中英语言差异,并努力找到两者之间的表达方式上的共通点,并且有意识的运用就能避免类似的问题。
第五,细节错误要摒弃。
很多孩子在写作文时常常感觉写得非常好,用上了几个高级句型或者不错的词汇短语,以为可以得高分,但最终结果出来后却与预想差距很大。主要的原因是很多细节没有注意。比如第三人称单数,名词的单复数,大小写,甚至标点、书写、段落安排等,这些细节问题也很重要。
最后:背诵阅读优秀的中学生的作文集
写作很容易在短时间内有大的飞跃,要做的就是积累一些经典的句型、地道的表达方式。可以背诵阅读优秀的中学生的作文集,把精彩的段落和句子抄下来并仿写,最后整理出几十个最常用、最精彩的`表达法,写作文时有意识地想一想,总能用上几个。
做好以上几个方面,中考英语写作是很容易提高的!
其实不难,大部分的同学都能得到12分以上,13、14分也是平常,但是要想得到15分甚至以上,就难上加难了。到底什么样的作文能得到16分以上?我们为同学们把中考英语作文评分标准做出了更深的理解。
一、中考英语写作的概述
关于体裁,本文包含记叙文和议论文两种最容易考到的类型,其他一些文体也有可能会综合涉及。
关于题材,同学们的反应可谓是几家欢喜几家愁。中考写作也有自己的特色:一般围绕着生活化、学校化来考察。近几年,考试题目实际上是一些比较贴近中学生活,为中学生能够接触的认识能力、生活经历所能驾驭的问题。
【比如】
20xx年题目Comics
20xx年题目Understanding、signs、understanding、languages
你对于在中考英语写作中拿高分有把握吗?实际考试中,许多学生却常常有无话可说的感觉。那要我们如何才能克服这种无话的状态,取得高分呢?
归根到底这是一个英语基本功单词、短语和句型的问题。英语作文的前提条件是掌握了一定量的词汇、语法及体裁、题材等方面的知识。学生如果想要在写作方面有本质上的提升,必须进行多次的写作练习。因此,必须合理地设置训练步骤,遵循从初级到高级,从简单到复杂的原则去练习,经过一段写作实践之后,写作水平一定会有大幅度的提高。
二、中考英语写作的评分标准
1、老师拿到的标准
写作水平的高低和文章的好坏,分数是最直接的评分标准,也是考生们最关心的。但是多少考生真正透彻知道中考英语写作的评分标准?什么样的文章才是阅卷老师眼中的好文章?
【评分标准】
1.整篇作文满分20分,其中内容8分,语言8分,结构4分。
2.内容贴切,句子流畅,用语准确,加整体印象分1分。
3.不满60个词,少15个词扣分,610个词扣1分。
4.所有给出问题涉及的三项内容,每少一项扣3分。
5.每个拼写,大小写,标点符号等错误扣分;同一的拼写错误不重复扣分,扣分总和不超过2分。
6.语法错误每项扣1分,同一错误不重复扣分,扣分总和不超过2分。
2、老师想看到的标准
语言(8分):
词固定搭配、高频重点词汇;
句复杂句(各种从句)、特殊句型、正确的句子!
内容(8分):(总、分)论点、论据支持句;
简洁、切合主题的记叙内容。
结构(4分):语言结构句子重点突出、内容清晰;
内容结构论点、论据以及记叙之间的逻辑关系;
句数控制对于相对内容的句数掌握;
亮点、出彩点排比、拟人、谚语、成语、押韵等。
The environmental pollution is worse and worse /more and more seriouslytoday. Water is polluted; we have no clean water to drink. Many trees arecutting down, some animals is getting less and less. Some factories are pouringdirty air in the sky, the population is increasing faster and faster, resourcesare getting less and less…etc. Not only does it affect our lives and health, itbut also has a great affection in the future. People's health has been greatlyaffected by air, noise and water pollution. Many people died of diseases. Inorder to live a better life, we need protect our world.
We shouldn’t throw away rubbish everywhere. We want to recycle, reduce,reuse things .Don’t waste things. This saves money and reduces pollution. Usethings for as long as possible. We don’t use plastic bags. We must plant moretrees and stop the people cutting them .We hope our world becomes more and morebeautiful.
要点+结构+逻辑+语法+亮点
要点:实际上中考英语写作就等于两个字,翻译!因为中考英语写作一般会给出几个要点,要求必须在中有所体现。写的再好,只要缺少要点就会扣分。所以要点,也就是的第二段内容,要做到全,围绕中心。
结构:中考最流行的结构就是三段式,深受各地区中考英语写作阅卷老师的喜爱。为什么尼?因为这种结构十分清晰。“观点——要点——总结”让人一目了然。三段式的第一段:简单明了,开门见山,不超过2句话,如,我们想表达小强很强壮,第一段直接说 XQ is extreel strng. 观点明确,这一句足矣。
第二段:分2-3点说为什么他强壮。1. 每天吃10顿饭,He has ten eals everda! 详举吃的是什么。2. 每天运动2小时,He des exercise 2 hurs a da! 详举做了什么运动。
第三段:经过第二段的论证,可以得出结论。但请注意,不能完全照抄第一段,要有升华。也可以提出希望和建议等。如,Hw strng and rbust XQ is! I hpe t be hi ne da!
逻辑:这里的逻辑实际指的就是逻辑词。最常用的就是表示递进的,转折的,总结的逻辑词等。递进:除了first, secnd, third, finall 等还可以使用高级点的,如first f all(首先),in additin, what's re, rever(都是另外的意思),in a wrd, all in all(表示总结的)。转折:but, et, hwever等。真正有经验的阅卷老师会很注意这些逻辑连接词,因为这些词体现了这个的思路。
语法:其他几点都不是硬性的要求,不那样做不能说是错,只能说是不好,但是语法却是硬性的。如,单词的使用,时态等。
亮点:当我们将前八个字都做得很完美的时候也只能得到一个二等文的上。要想得到一等文,最后两个字,亮点至关重要。大家设想如果我们是阅卷老师。有两篇写人美丽的作文摆在我们面前,都是结构清晰的三段式,要点都很全,都用了一些逻辑词,都没有语法错误,但是A篇只用了beautiful,gd-ling,B篇却用到了attractive,charing,catching等,我坚信正常人都会给B篇高分的。这些高级一点的词汇,词组,句型便是我们得到一等文的最有力的绝招。所以,以后写英语作文要养成一般词汇限量用的好习惯。
九月一开学,初三生就正式吹响了中考复习的号角,很多考生都在担心能否提高自己的学习成绩,尤其是英语作文写作。其实,英语作文写作还是较容易提高的,只要你多注意下写作要点,那你知道中考英语作文写作要点有哪些吗?
第一,词汇量要充足。
词汇量多少很大程度上决定作文是否能写得下去,很多时候想到一个很好的句子或文字,但一下子词汇不记得了,导致无从下笔。词汇量不足的学生,要在接下来的时间里重点抓单词记忆。在记忆单词时要讲究方式方法,合理利用记忆规律。
第二,审题要充分。
很多同学在写英语作文时,普遍存在这样一个情况:看完作文题,就开始写,想到哪写到哪,只要把字数凑够了就停笔了。这样写出来的文章,看起来就像 在记流水帐,没有任何逻辑,杂乱无章,毫无条理,同时容易出现用错时态、用错格式等的情况。因此,仔细审题和构思就成了写作的第一步。审题的重点放在写作体裁、格式、字数方面,确保第一遍审题就能保证得到基本分。同时还要文体和时 态,因为不同的文体要求的写作格式也是不同的,时态的要求也非常重要。
第三,提纲要详细。
审完题后一定要列提纲。很多同学认为,中考英语作文译成中文,最多是小学二年级的语文作文水平,所以根本没有必要列提纲。其实,这种想法是非常错误的, 因为提纲不仅能使文章的结构清晰,还有很重要的一点:防止漏掉作文内容。因为中考英语作文有一个很重要的要求:要点要全。如果你漏掉了需要写的内容,即使文章写得再优美,用词再准确,也拿不了高分。最后要注意打草稿,然后修改。这样可以保证错误降低至最少或者没有错误,同时也能保持卷面整洁。
第四,文化差异要注意。
我们要时刻牢记一点,中英文表达方式有很大的差异,所以体现在作文表达上也常常会出现生硬的中国式作文表达,降低了我们的作文质量。所以注重中英语言差异,并努力找到两者之间的表达方式上的共通点,并且有意识的运用就能避免类似的问题。
最后,细节错误要摒弃。
很多孩子在写作文时常常感觉写得非常好,用上了几个高级句型或者不错的词汇短语,以为可以得高分,但最终结果出来后却与预想差距很大。主要的原因是很多细节没有注意。比如第三人称单数,名词的单复数,大小写,甚至标点、书写、段落安排等,这些细节问题也很重要。
中考英语作文对考生的要求有四点:1、内容要完整。 2、语句流畅。3、没有语法错误。4、书写规范。能达到上述要求的作文,都会得到相应的高分。
一:先看一下扣分点:
1.内容方面:要点缺失,可酌情扣分。比如中考作文“I want to do something for my school”,若没有写一件具体的事情,是要扣3分以上的;若写的事情太过于虚幻,没有实际内容,也会扣1-2分。
2.字数:少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。
中考英语作文要求60字以上,标点符号不算,少了就要扣分。但是60字的作文能不能得高分?从我们拿到的实例作文来看,16分以上的作文,没有少于75字的,甚至少于80字的也少之又少。当然,也极少有超过100字的,因为中考试卷的短线格一共80个,在格子下面大约还有2行的空间,可以加20字左右,再多阅卷人就很难看清了,也会影响卷面的美观。所以,同学们如果想让作文得到高分,最好是让字数在75-100字之间。
3. 语法和拼写错误:每个扣,重复错误不计;
4. 标点错误:每4个扣.
二:加分点
除了这些扣分点,还有一些得分点:比如说作文的组织结构分,就是根据学生使用复杂句型、单词和谚语、俗语的情况来加分。
只要文章中有1个亮点,基本就可以争取到1分(3分的文采分是很难全部拿到的)。而这1分的亮点,是可以提前准备的。例如,有一些“万金油”式的复杂句型,例如强调句型、only相关的倒装句等,只要同学们多操练几次,几乎是一定能用到作文当中,从而为自己争取到这1分。
其次就是卷面分
很多家长和同学,尤其是部分书法并不是十分整洁的同学,都会关心是否真的有“卷面分”的存在。虽然在阅卷标准里面并没有卷面分这一项,但是这个分数却真切地反映在了同学们的分数里面。
据阅卷老师的经验,在阅卷的时候并不是按这3个部分逐项打分的,而是在第一遍读完全文之后,心里已经形成了一个“印象分”,然后再细读第二、三遍,把印象分分配到各个打分部分。因此,这个“印象分”就非常重要,而同学们的书法,也正是在这个环节,影响到了自己的分数。所以初三的考生,如果书法不好,一定要注意。所谓的书法并不需要写的很漂亮,符合3个简单的标准即可:没有斜体、没有连笔、涂改较少。
Nowadays, working overtime is so common in many companies, especially inforeign companies, private companies, and joint ventures. As far as I amconcerned, there are two main reasons of working overtime. For one thing, thereis indeed too much work to do. If it is so, the boss should compensate staffs bypaying them as overtime salary or giving them vacations. For another, somestaffs are not suitable for their positions. In that case, the boss ought tohelp them to improve their working efficiency. If they are still not qualified,boss may change the positions for them, or to the worst, dismiss them. That'sall what I think about working overtime.
在中考英语试卷中,最后一项“书面表达”题普遍失分较多,这一方面与学生的基础有关,另一方面与应试的方法和策略也有很大的关系。结合各省市近几年“书面表达”命题特点,我们归纳出如下答题对策。
一、给写作留有充分的时间
在中考英语题中,“书面表达”往往是最后一项,有的学生把最后几分钟用在写作上,匆匆了事,这是很不明智的。学生用在写作上的时间应不少于10分钟,力争不丢分,少丢分。
二、认真审题,先打草稿
写之前一定要认真阅读写作要求,切忌见题就写。中考作文主要有两种类型:“提示作文”和“看图作文”。“提示作文”一般已经给出要点,而“看图作文”则需根据图画及提示在很短的时间内将要点列出。把要点列出后,在草稿纸上写提纲,打草稿,就可以看出大概有多少字。在正式往试卷上写之前,根据题目要求适当增减内容,保持卷面整洁。
三、正确使用标点
学生在初中学习阶段,对标点符号的用法极不重视,因此,考试中明显的标点错误屡有发生,在一定程度上影响学生的成绩。另外,大小写错误也常有发生。有的甚至一篇文章从头到尾没有一个大写字母,再加上标点不正确,让人看了不知所云,以致直接影响考试成绩。
Health is very important to us. We can't study or work without a healthy body. First of all, we should keep exercising every day.
After school, we can walk to school instead of taking the bus; if we live in a high-rise building, we can spend an hour playing ball s, we can walk upstairs or downstairs. Finally, we should have a balanced diet. We must remember: _early to bed and early rising is the way to keep healthy, wealthy and wise._.
中文翻译:
健康对我们来说很重要。没有健康的身体我们就无法学习或工作。首先,我们应该坚持每天锻炼身体。
放学后我们可以步行去上学而不是坐公共汽车;如果我们住在高层建筑里,我们可以花一个小时打球赛,我们可以走上楼或下楼,最后我们应该有一个平衡的饮食,我们必须记住:“早睡早起是保持健康、富裕和明智的方法”。
Mr Green,
I'm Wang Gang. I'm very sorry to tell you that I was ill. I'm not feeling well. This morning I went to see a doctor. He told me that I had caught a bad cold. I have to stay at home for two days. So I can't go to school today or tomorrow. I hope I'll get well soon. I'll ask you for your help when I meet you in two days. Thank you.
Yours,
Wang Gang
克服社交恐惧症Overcoming Social Phobia
We live in a world that surrounded by people, we need to communicate with others, for the purpose of share our emotions and keep survive. While some people have social phobia, they are afraid of talking to others, they can’t make the social communication. This is such a big illness, but they can overcome it. First, they need to take the positive attitude to life, having more communication with others can enriches their knowledge, they can share happiness and sorrow with friends, when they are in trouble, friends will help them. Second, they should open their hearts, don’t be afraid of talking to others, once the mouths are opened, the world will be lit up.
我们生活在一个被人群包围的世界,我们需要和别人进行交流,为了和别人分享我们的情感和在这个世界生存。然而一些人有社交恐惧症,他们害怕和别人聊天,无法进行社交。这是很严重的病,但是他们可以克服。第一,他们需要对生活抱有积极的态度,和别人进行多点交流,可以丰富他们的知识,也可以和朋友分享喜怒哀乐,当遇到困难的时候,朋友会帮助他们。第二,他们应该打开心扉,不要害怕和别人交流,一旦开口,世界将被点亮。
Dear David, how are you? I hope you are healthy now. Let me tell you how to learn Chinese well. First of all, you can do a lot of things.
You can read some Chinese books and listen to some Chinese music. You should make some Chinese friends and talk to them every day. Finally, you can play football, play basketball and go swimming with your Chinese friends.
It's easy to learn Chinese. I hope you will fall in love with it, Wang ming'e.
中文翻译:
亲爱的大卫,你好吗?我希望你现在身体健康,让我告诉你如何学好汉语首先你可以做很多事情,你可以读一些中国书,听一些中国音乐,你应该交一些中国朋友,每天和他们交谈。最后,你可以踢足球,打篮球,和你的中国朋友一起去游泳。学中文很容易。
我希望你会爱上它的,王明娥。
I will work harder
I didn’t do well this term. I was a little lazy. I didn’t study hard at math, because I thought it was too difficult for me. I like football, so I usually played it with my classmate after school. Then when I went back home, I was so tired that I couldn’t study well. So maybe I will fail in the final tests. But I will study harder next term. And I will keep studying English in the summer holiday because it’s my favourite subject.
It was my special day last Sunday because it was my mother’s forty-first birthday.
I did a lot of things on that day. In the morning, I went to the supermarket. I bought a yellow sweater for my mother as her birthday present .It was my first time that I bough the present for my I make money by myself. I sold newspapers for a week. My mother was very pleased with what I did. How happy my mother and I were.
Calligraphy is easier. Calligraphy is the art of beautiful or elegant calligraphy. Calligraphy literally means beautiful writing.
A few years before the invention of the printing press, this was how books were made. Every book was written by a scribe working in a writing room, using a quill pen and ink, on materials such as kraft or parchment. The style of the font is a period of time Booksellers, such as today's rural, Caroline, black letter, etc., have three main types or styles of Calligraphy: Western or Roman, Arabic, and Chinese or Oriental.
This project focuses on Western calligraphy and gives a glimpse of the other two styles.
中文翻译:
书法更容易书法是使美丽或优雅的书法的艺术这是一门熟练的书法艺术书法一词字面意思是美丽的书写在印刷机发明前几年,这就是书籍的制作方法每一本书都是由一个在写字间工作的抄写员用鹅毛笔和墨水在牛皮纸或羊皮纸等材料上手写字体的风格是一个时期的书商,像今天的乡村,加洛林,黑信等等,有三种主要的书法类型或风格:西方或罗马,伯,和中国或东方本项目主要侧重于西方书法,并对其他两种风格进行一窥。
审题细心
审题好比驾驶员打方向,方向对了,哪怕开得慢点,也会顺利到目的地。如果审题不清,书面表达的成绩不知道会有多惨。学生真正开始写作前,必须花相当一部分时间做写前阅读、思考等准备,包含以下四方面:
1)审体裁。根据情景提示首先要弄清写何种体裁文章。
2)审结构。明确开始部分、正文部分和结尾部分,定好段落。
3)审格式。如日记、便条、书信、通知的格式等。
4)审内容。弄清什么必需写,哪些略写,尤其是图画式书面表达,要学会连贯性,读懂图的意思
时态要准确
英语作文除了结构,还有一个是阅卷老师最敏感的,那就是时态,这也是一篇作文是否得高分的关键。要明确文章的时态、同时人称要一致、数要一致、首尾要呼应。再根据内容要求,现确定事情是过去已经发生还是未来即将发生,比如记叙一件事要用一般过去时;写经常发生的事或对人物的描写,要用一般现在时;对于未来的憧憬要用一般将来时;过去的事情对现在造成的影响或过去延续到现在的状况都用现在完成时。一定不能乱用乱配。
提炼字词句
一篇作文是由单词和句子组成的。这是写作最基本的要素,就像万丈高楼需要一砖一瓦层层盖起来一样,如果砖瓦质量不好,那么这座高楼很快就会垮掉。同样的,如果基本的词句掌握不好,那么我们在写文章的时候就会感觉提笔无从下手,甚至连一个句子都很难写出。这就是因为头脑中没有“存货”造成的。
Mr Li is one of my beloved taught us physics when we were in Senior was old,but he taught very could make his classes lively and interesting. Mr Li made good preparations for his lessons and was strict with us, we made mistakes in our homework,he would ask us to correct and do it again. I used to be poor in physics. Mr Li often helped me with my lessons very to his help and hard work,I have made good progress and caught up with the a retired teacher,he's still working hard for our educational cause(教育事业).
篇三:中考英语作文范文: view on school uniform
At our school , we have to wear uniforms every day. The problem is that all my classmates think the uniforms are ugly. We think young people should look smart and so we would like to wear our own clothes. Our teachers believe that if we did that. We would concentrate more on our clothes than our studies. We disagree. We should feel more comfortable and thate is good for studying. If we can’t do that, we should be allowed to design our own uniforms. We also think everyone should be different from others. That would be a good way to keep both teachers and students happy.
篇四:中考英语作文范文: My opinions on volunteering
We are middle school students and we are busy with our lessons. So some people think we should concentrate more on our studies. If we volunteer to help others, it’s a waste of time. But I think volunteering is great. I not only feel good about helping others but also get to spend time doing what I love to do. And from volunteering I have learned many things that I have never learned in class. So if I have an oppoutunity, I’d like to visit old people’s home to clean up for them. I’d also like to help sick kids in hospital. I love kids and I plan to put my love to good use by working in hospital. In a word, I’d like to help people who need help. If everyone helps out a bit, the world will be more colorful.
When you were born, you need to face the ups and downs in our life. Forexample, you need to learn to speak, learn to walk, learn to write, learn toread, and so on. Whenever you learn a new thing, you will be always full of the hardness only you know. Perhaps, you have thought about giving up, butin the end you insist on. In this world, there is no difficult, only those whodo not adhere to. As long as you can hold on, that's not a thing. Perseveranceprevails! This is the eternal law! Come on.
Dear Xiaowei,
Weight problem is quite common among teenagers everywhere. So I don’t think you have much to worry about. Here are my suggestions. Eating late at night is OK, but you should to eat more fruit and vegetables, which are good for you.
Also, when you are free, you’d better do more exercise. Running is great. You don’t like running alone, but what about running with your friends? Or you can do some team sports like basketball. I’m sure your friends will be willing to help you lose weight. I hope you have as much success in losing weight as you have had in your studies. “Believe myself, and I will win.” It’s really important for us when we meet difficulties. Don’t lose heart; I’m sure you will succeed one day.
As the saying goes, roses given, fragrance in hand. In our daily life, we will meet with a lot of trouble. So it is necessary for us to help those who are in trouble.
I still remember I helped one of my classmates with his English when we were in the first term of Junior Eight. Li Hua, one of my classmates, was not good at English while I did well. One day, he asked me to help him. So from then on, whenever he had problems, he would ask me, and I was patient to explain them to him. Slowly, his English improved with my help. At the same time, I found my English improved too.
Actually, helping others is helping ourselves.
参考译文
俗话说:“予人玫瑰,手留余香。”在生活当中,我们会遇到很多的困难,所以我们有必要去帮助那些需要帮助的人们。
我还记得在八年级第一学期时,我曾经帮助过一位同学补习英语。那位同学叫李华,他的英语不是很好,而我的英语还不错。有一天,他遇到不会的题找我帮他解答。从那以后,他一有什么问题,就会来问我,我也耐心地回答。慢慢地,在我的帮助下,他的英语进步了。与此同时,我发现我的英语也进步了。
其实,帮助他人就是在帮助自己。
(一)
观察题目和情景所提供的内容。分析、提炼要点,理顺要点。概括考题所要求表达的全部意思。
2.综合运用各项英语基础知识,灵活运用词汇和句型,正确地用词造句,连句成文,进行有效的信息表达与传递。
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3.认真思考,选择正确的表达形式,正确使用结构词和过渡句,使表达内容连贯。
4.书写要工整,要清楚。
(二)有关听力测试的答题方法及答题技巧
近几年听力测试虽然不纳入英语试卷,但听力测试的等级对考生的总成绩也有一定的影响。因此,同学们近阶段要加强对听力的练习。怎样做才能在听力测试中取得好成绩呢?
对话理解和短文理解,同学们除了应在听短文前,把所给的问题迅速过目,然后带着问题去听以外,还要知道短文一般涉及到哪几个问题,像短文中故事的人物、故事的主
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