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中考英语作文对考生的要求有四点:1、内容要完整。 2、语句流畅。3、没有语法错误。4、书写规范。能达到上述要求的作文,都会得到相应的高分。
一:先看一下扣分点:
1.内容方面:要点缺失,可酌情扣分。比如中考作文“I want to do something for my school”,若没有写一件具体的事情,是要扣3分以上的;若写的事情太过于虚幻,没有实际内容,也会扣1-2分。
2.字数:少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。
中考英语作文要求60字以上,标点符号不算,少了就要扣分。但是60字的作文能不能得高分?从我们拿到的实例作文来看,16分以上的作文,没有少于75字的,甚至少于80字的也少之又少。当然,也极少有超过100字的,因为中考试卷的短线格一共80个,在格子下面大约还有2行的空间,可以加20字左右,再多阅卷人就很难看清了,也会影响卷面的美观。所以,同学们如果想让作文得到高分,最好是让字数在75-100字之间。
3. 语法和拼写错误:每个扣,重复错误不计;
4. 标点错误:每4个扣.
二:加分点
除了这些扣分点,还有一些得分点:比如说作文的组织结构分,就是根据学生使用复杂句型、单词和谚语、俗语的情况来加分。
只要文章中有1个亮点,基本就可以争取到1分(3分的文采分是很难全部拿到的)。而这1分的亮点,是可以提前准备的。例如,有一些“万金油”式的复杂句型,例如强调句型、only相关的倒装句等,只要同学们多操练几次,几乎是一定能用到作文当中,从而为自己争取到这1分。
其次就是卷面分
很多家长和同学,尤其是部分书法并不是十分整洁的同学,都会关心是否真的有“卷面分”的存在。虽然在阅卷标准里面并没有卷面分这一项,但是这个分数却真切地反映在了同学们的分数里面。
据阅卷老师的经验,在阅卷的时候并不是按这3个部分逐项打分的,而是在第一遍读完全文之后,心里已经形成了一个“印象分”,然后再细读第二、三遍,把印象分分配到各个打分部分。因此,这个“印象分”就非常重要,而同学们的书法,也正是在这个环节,影响到了自己的分数。所以初三的考生,如果书法不好,一定要注意。所谓的书法并不需要写的很漂亮,符合3个简单的标准即可:没有斜体、没有连笔、涂改较少。
第一,词汇量要充足。
词汇量多少很大程度上决定作文是否能写得下去。
第二,审题要充分。
我所教的学生中在写英语作文时,普遍存在这样一个情况:看完作文题,就开始写,想到哪写到哪,只要把字数凑够了就停笔了。这样写出来的文章,看起来就像在记流水帐,没有任何逻辑,杂乱无章,毫无条理,同时容易出现用错时态、用错格式等的情况。试想,如果你是试卷的命题人,你出作文题的时候,肯定有出这道题的独特的道理。所以仔细审题和构思就成了写作的第一步。审题的重点放在写作体裁、格式、字数方面,确保第一遍审题就能保证得到基本分。同时还要文体和时态,因为不同的文体要求的写作格式也是不同的,时态的要求也非常重要。
第三,提纲要详细。
审完题后一定要列提纲。很多学生认为,中考英语作文译成中文,最多是小学二年级的语文作文水平,所以根本没有必要列提纲。其实,这种想法是非常错误的,因为提纲不仅能使文章的结构清晰,还有很重要的一点:防止漏掉作文内容。因为中考英语作文有一个很重要的要求:要点要全。如果你漏掉了需要写的内容,即使文章写得再优美,用词再准确,也拿不了高分。最后要注意打草稿,然后修改。这样可以保证错误降低至最少或者没有错误,同时也能保持卷面整洁。
第四,文化差异要注意
我们要时刻牢记一点,中英文表达方式有很大的差异,所以体现在作文表达上也常常会出现生硬的中国式作文表达,降低了我们的作文质量。所以注重中英语言差异,并努力找到两者之间的表达方式上的共通点,并且有意识的运用就能避免类似的问题。
第五,细节错误要摒弃。
很多孩子在写作文时常常感觉写得非常好,用上了几个高级句型或者不错的词汇短语,以为可以得高分,但最终结果出来后却与预想差距很大。主要的原因是很多细节没有注意。比如第三人称单数,名词的单复数,大小写,甚至标点、书写、段落安排等,这些细节问题也很重要。
最后:背诵阅读优秀的中学生的作文集
写作很容易在短时间内有大的飞跃,要做的就是积累一些经典的句型、地道的表达方式。可以背诵阅读优秀的中学生的作文集,把精彩的段落和句子抄下来并仿写,最后整理出几十个最常用、最精彩的`表达法,写作文时有意识地想一想,总能用上几个。
做好以上几个方面,中考英语写作是很容易提高的!
中考的脚步越来越近,有的同学开始焦虑:时间越来越短,那么如何才可以在短时间内提高自己的写作水平呢?其实,中考英语写作是很容易提高的。Teresa总结了以下写作文时需要注意的四个方面,希望对大家有所启发。
第一,词汇量要充足。
词汇量多少很大程度上决定作文是否能写得下去,很多时候想到一个很好的句子或文字,但一下子词汇不记得了,没法写。词汇量不足的学生,建议使用“背单词”软件,能够在较短时间内迅速提高词汇量。
第二,审题要充分。
我所教的学生中在写英语作文时,普遍存在这样一个情况:看完作文题,就开始写,想到哪写到哪,只要把字数凑够了就停笔了。这样写出来的文章,看起来就像在记流水帐,没有任何逻辑,杂乱无章,毫无条理,同时容易出现用错时态、用错格式等的情况。试想,如果你是试卷的命题人,你出作文题的时候,肯定有出这道题的独特的道理。所以仔细审题和构思就成了写作的第一步。审题的重点放在写作体裁、格式、字数方面,确保第一遍审题就能保证得到基本分。同时还要文体和时态,因为不同的文体要求的写作格式也是不同的,时态的要求也非常重要。
第三,提纲要详细。
审完题后一定要列提纲。很多学生认为,中考英语作文译成中文,最多是小学二年级的语文作文水平,所以根本没有必要列提纲。其实,这种想法是非常错误的,因为提纲不仅能使文章的结构清晰,还有很重要的一点:防止漏掉作文内容。因为中考英语作文有一个很重要的要求:要点要全。如果你漏掉了需要写的内容,即使文章写得再优美,用词再准确,也拿不了高分。最后要注意打草稿,然后修改。这样可以保证错误降低至最少或者没有错误,同时也能保持卷面整洁。
第四,文化差异要注意
我们要时刻牢记一点,中英文表达方式有很大的差异,所以体现在作文表达上也常常会出现生硬的中国式作文表达,降低了我们的作文质量。所以注重中英语言差异,并努力找到两者之间的表达方式上的共通点,并且有意识的运用就能避免类似的问题。
最后,细节错误要摒弃。
很多孩子在写作文时常常感觉写得非常好,用上了几个高级句型或者不错的词汇短语,以为可以得高分,但最终结果出来后却与预想差距很大。主要的原因是很多细节没有注意。比如第三人称单数,名词的单复数,大小写,甚至标点、书写、段落安排等,这些细节问题也很重要。
做好以上几个方面,中考英语写作是很容易提高的!祝愿大家在中考中能取得理想的成绩!
Chinese food is colorful, varied, delicious, and nutritious. Chinese people cares not only about the taste of the food, but also about its color and smell. Food in different places has different flavors. Beijing food is quite oily and salty; Shanghai food is sweet and light; Sichuan food is spicy and hot; and Cantonese food is fresh and tender. What's more, there are some popular local snacks. For example, Beijing Roast Duck has a good reputation for its tender meat, while the steam buns in Shanghai are well known for their juicy ingredients.
小组合作学习
1.互相帮助
2.学会倾听
3.与他人合作
4.发表个人见解
自主学习
1.制定学习计划
2.合理安排时间
3.独立思考
4.做学习的主人
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可适当发挥,加入个人观点;
3.发言稿的开头已给你写好,但不计入总词数
参考词汇:study in groups, work together, make good use of time
Dear friend,
Welcome to our
Thanks for listening!
参考答案:
Dear friend,
Welcome to our school. I would like to talk about two ways of study in our school. The first way is to study in groups. When we study in groups, we can help each other. We can learn to listen to others and how to work together. Also, everyone can have chances to express his own ideas. The other way we like is to study by ourselves. We can make our own plans for study and learn to make good use of time. We can also learn to think by ourselves. And the most important thing is that we we can be the master of our own study Thanks for listening!
现在我们周围的环境污染越来越严重。作为一个中学生,我们应节约资源,保护环境,从我们身边的小事做起,做一个“低碳生活”的中学生。请以“My Low--carbon Life”为题,写一篇短文描述自己的“低碳生活”。
内容包括:1.地球的污染越来越严重,我们能看到森林被砍伐、水污染和空气污染。2.你是怎样从身边小事做起,做到“低碳生活”的。如:每天步行上学、离开教室及时关灯和电扇、充分利用纸张、节约用水等。3.号召更多的人加入到“低碳生活”中来。
作文要求:1.不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。2.语句连贯,词数80个左右。作文的题目已经给出,不计入总词数。
My Low--carbon Life
The environmental pollution is worse and worse today.
Mr Li is one of my beloved taught us physics when we were in Senior was old,but he taught very could make his classes lively and interesting. Mr Li made good preparations for his lessons and was strict with us, we made mistakes in our homework,he would ask us to correct and do it again. I used to be poor in physics. Mr Li often helped me with my lessons very to his help and hard work,I have made good progress and caught up with the a retired teacher,he's still working hard for our educational cause(教育事业).
篇三:中考英语作文范文: view on school uniform
At our school , we have to wear uniforms every day. The problem is that all my classmates think the uniforms are ugly. We think young people should look smart and so we would like to wear our own clothes. Our teachers believe that if we did that. We would concentrate more on our clothes than our studies. We disagree. We should feel more comfortable and thate is good for studying. If we can’t do that, we should be allowed to design our own uniforms. We also think everyone should be different from others. That would be a good way to keep both teachers and students happy.
篇四:中考英语作文范文: My opinions on volunteering
We are middle school students and we are busy with our lessons. So some people think we should concentrate more on our studies. If we volunteer to help others, it’s a waste of time. But I think volunteering is great. I not only feel good about helping others but also get to spend time doing what I love to do. And from volunteering I have learned many things that I have never learned in class. So if I have an oppoutunity, I’d like to visit old people’s home to clean up for them. I’d also like to help sick kids in hospital. I love kids and I plan to put my love to good use by working in hospital. In a word, I’d like to help people who need help. If everyone helps out a bit, the world will be more colorful.
Myfavorite building is Zhuhai Fishing Girl, which is located at the scenicXianglu Bay, in Haibin Park. The statue is composed of granite and stands high, weighing 10 tons. It was built by a professor called Panhe fromGuangzhou Art College in 1982. Now it has become the landmark of Zhuhai. Itlooks so glorious.
Look, she holds a pearl highly in the air with both of herhands in an elegant pose, as if she is greeting the guests from also symbolizes the brightness of Zhuhai. Every year, thousands of peoplecome to see it with their own eyes.
If you travel to Zhuhai, I'd love to showyou around there. Maybe you'll have a nice time.
Transportation has been greatly changed in the past few years. In ancientdays, people used to travel by horse or carriage. The journey was often tiringand tedious. Then people had buses, trains and ships, which could shorten thetime of the long-distance trip. Now we have not only more private cars, but alsoplanes and high-speed rails. All of these modern transports could offer us aquick and pleasant travel. Thus, more and more people enjoy traveling very muchthese days. In conclusion, modern transportation has completely changed ourlife. Thanks to modern transportation, our world is becoming smaller andsmaller.
我最好的朋友
My best friend
My best friend is Jack.
He is 15 years old. We are both in the same class. He works very hard. He is never late for school and he does well in all his lessons. He is always ready to help others. My math is very poor, so he often helps me with my math after class.
His parents are both teachers. They are very busy, so he often helps do the housework at home.
He is a little shorter than me but he is very strong. He likes playing football very much at school. We often play football together and he plays it pretty well. He gets on well with us, so everyone in our class likes him.
实现有效的沟通,建立良好的人际关系,不仅要善于表达,更要善于倾听。请你根据表格中所提供的信息,写一篇题为“Being a Good Listener”的英文演讲稿。
注意:1.词数90左右。短文开头和结尾部分己为你写好,不计入总词数;2.短文需包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺;3.短文中不要出现具体的学校姓名利人名。
Being a Good Listener
Good afternoon,everyone!
Today I’d like to share my ideas of“Being a Good Listener”with you.
Thank you for your listening!
Timeflys. A week has been gone.
This week I have nothing sepecial except helping anold lady across the road. I left home for school in a hurry on Monday morning,because I had flag-raising ceremony on that morning. When I was nearly arrivedat school, I saw an old lady whose hair is all white and she seemed didn’t movesmoothly. I worried about that she would have accidents without help. So I help her to go through theroad. As a result, I was late for school, but I was very happy.
假设不久前你们学校为贫困地区的孩子们筹款举办了一次慈善行活动。请据此在制定的位置上,以“Walk for children in poor areas”为题,为某中学生英文报写一篇报道,内容要点如下:
1. 目的:为贫困地区的孩子们筹款2. 10月23日,星期六3. 路径:学校—市中心4. 简况:学生把自己分成四人一组,出发前计划好了一切,步行很艰辛,但活动过程中大家互相帮助,互相支持。最终在许多人的帮助下,筹得善款5万多元。5. 感受:每个人都很累,但都很高兴,因为…注意:1. 报道须包括所给内容要点,要求语句通顺,意思连贯;2. 第5要点的内容须用至少2句话展开合理想象,作适当发挥;3. 词数80个左右。【优秀满分范文】Walk for children in poor areas Not long ago, our school organized a charity walk to raise money for children in poor areas.
It was on Saturday, 23 rd October. We walked from the school to the centre of the city. Before the walk, we grouped ourselves into a team of four and planned everything well. It was a hard (tough) work. But during the walk, we supported and helped each other. With the help of many people, we raised over (more than) 50,000 yuan in the end.
We all felt tired, but we were very happy. Because it was a meaningful experience and it was an excellent chance to learn team spirit.
旅游介绍
介绍首都北京
Dear Li Lei,
I haven't heard from you for a long time. I'm glad to tell you that I'll visit Beijing this summer vacation.
It is said that Beijing is a great city with a long history and more changes have taken place since the 20_ Olympic Games. I would like to know something about Beijing, such as places of interest, the environment, traffic and people there.
I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Tommy
★ 范文
Dear Tommy,
I'm glad to know you will come to Beijing.
Beijing, the capital of China, is one of the largest cities in the world. There are many places of interest, such as the Summer Palace, the Forbidden City and the Great Wall. All of them are beautiful and well-known to the world. Great changes have taken place in Beijing since we successfully held the 20_ 0lympic Games.
Now, people pay more attention to the environment. More trees and flowers have been planted. For the traffic, it is very convenient for people to travel around Beijing, because several new subway lines have been built. If you come to Beijing, you will find people here are very friendly and helpful. What's more, a lot of people can speak English. Beijing is really an attractive city with a long history.
I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Li Lei
交通问题
越来越多汽车进入我们的家庭生活,改善了我们的生活,但同时也带来了很多问题,如堵车和车祸,给家庭和社会带来极大的危害。作为中学生,我们应该怎样做呢?
请写一篇有关交通安全的短文(80字左右)。
内容包含:
遵守交通规则,如走人行道/过斑马线。
别在街道上或马路上玩耍和踢球。
劝父母不能酒后驾车。
你可以适当增加内容,让短文通顺,过渡自然。
参考词汇:sidewalk 人行道 zebra-crossing 斑马线
注:第一段已给出,不计入总词数
★ 范文
With more and more cars coming into our families, we are happy that it has greatly improved our life. But unluckily, it has also brought many problems, such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents.
Traffic safety is everybody's business. We must obey the rules. For example, we must walk on sidewalks , when we cross zebra – crossing, stop and look right and left, and then go across fast. Don’t play football on the road .we can tell our parents not to drink before they drive, not to run through red lights, not to talk and laugh while driving.
We can say cars are coming into our life, but only when everybody thinks traffic safety is everybody's business can we be safe driving on roads and walking on sidewalks.
With the development of the modern technology,private car is no longer aluxurious thing for ordinary people,more and more people drive to work insteadof going by bus. The popularization of private car has many ,itis very convenient and time-saving,you can drive your own car to the workplaceinstead of waiting for the crowded bus and afraid of being late ,it can also improve the traffic structure,and help to mitigatethe stress of the ,the popularization of private car can help topromote the car industry and any other interrelated industries. I believe thatin the future the private car will become the most important vehicle and wecann't live without it.
(浙江丽水)Ellen看到大家都对自己的未来充满期待,感到特别高兴。为了鼓励大家学好英语,他准备出一期英语学习经验交流专刊。请根据以下问题和答案的提示并结合你的实际情况,以“My English Learning”为题写一篇80词左右的英文稿件,要求至少涉及其中的三个问题,并且不能出现你的真实姓名、校名和县名等。提示:
When did you start learning English? (in … /…years ago)
How do you learn English? (listen carefully, study with a group, read English every day…)
What is difficult to learn? (listening, grammar…)
What other helpful ways do you know to learn English well? (watch English movies, sing English songs…)
参考作文:
English is one of my best subjects and I started learning English when I was ten years old. But at the very beginning, listening seemed a little difficult for me. So I have been doing a lot of listening practice, such as listening to tapes, watching English TV programs. And I found it really helped a lot. In fact, there are some more helpful ways to learn English well. For example, I enjoy singing English songs and I want to join an English club or find a pen pal from English-speaking countries. I believe that nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it.
Nowadays, working overtime is so common in many companies, especially inforeign companies, private companies, and joint ventures. As far as I amconcerned, there are two main reasons of working overtime. For one thing, thereis indeed too much work to do. If it is so, the boss should compensate staffs bypaying them as overtime salary or giving them vacations. For another, somestaffs are not suitable for their positions. In that case, the boss ought tohelp them to improve their working efficiency. If they are still not qualified,boss may change the positions for them, or to the worst, dismiss them. That'sall what I think about working overtime.
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