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“Are you OK？ ” he asked, breathing heavily. Rebecca nodded. She was glad they managed to escape. It took them five minutes to catch their breath and calm themselves down. Rebecca checked to make sure that the seedlings were still William gave Rebecca a grateful hug. “Thanks,sister. I’d have done the same for you back there.” Rebecca said with a grin. “You couldn’t have, for you don’t wear petticoats！” Laughing, they raced back to the woods.（160 words）
1.根据Paragraph1提示句I was holding the pants tightly under my arm when my mother went to pay the money.可分析，此段可以细致刻画妈妈付款的一举一动，然后可以对妈妈钱的来源提出疑问，为下一段埋下伏笔。但无论后续事件怎样设计，都要注意过渡自然、合情合理。
2.根据Paragraph2提示句We took the trolley back home.分析，此段着重介绍坐车过程以及回到家中的具体细节，也可以在此段中对钱的来源给出合理的解释，升华文章续写的主题。设计后续事件要向好的方面发展，要有积极进取的价值取向。
3.充分体现自己的写作水平，续写过程中的一词一句都是展示个人语言基本功的绝佳机会，因此在保持原作语言风格的基础上，要充分调动已有的生活经验和知识遣词造句，增强语言表现力。
4.语言上，也要使用一些承上启下的过渡性词语，并且合理使用一些比较高级的句式，以增加文章的风采。
“Are you OK？ ” he asked,breathing heavily. Rebecca nodded, She said happily,“Thankfully, we managed to escape safely.” They both had a rest for a while and calmed themselves down. Rebecca examined whether the seedlings were still complete. But unfortunately, she dropped two seedlings when she together with William was escaping. They raced back to the woods to find them“They are over there！” Rebecca shouted loudly, and then they picked them up and turned back to their far away, they saw their father resting on a big rock, because there were no seedlings.（157 words）
It was the winter of 1937, just after Depression was still going on, but I was in good was going to graduate from elementary_school,_but my mother still dressed me in of my classmates had given up wearing the graduation ceremony, all the boys were expected to dress white shirts and darkblue wool pants.
I waited until a week before I told a cold Monday afternoon I went home from school.
“Mom，” I said, “about graduation ...”
“Yes？ ” she answered.
“They are going to give me the firstprize medal，” I said.
Still working over the_stove,_she looked over her shoulder at me and smiled broadly.“That's wonderful， and I will both be there, and we'll be the proudest in the place.”
She must have seen by the look on my face that something was turned her back and said，“ So？ ”
“So, I have to get long pants，” I said.
“Babe, we don't have the money for new_pants right now，” she said.
“Okay，” I burst out.“Then I won't go to , I'm running away from home！ ”
“If I were you, I wouldn't pack my 'll solve the pants problem somehow，” she said.
The following Saturday, when my mother said，“Let's go shopping，” I knew that she had solved the we left took_the_trolley and got off at Southern Boulevard, the best shopping clothing store was just a couple of blocks away.
But first we walked a short way down the Boulevard and stopped at a place I had never noticed before.
“Wait here，” she she opened the door with the hand with a gold_wedding_ring on her ring_finger and entered a storefront that looked like a bank.
She went out about ten minutes later with a purse in her left_hand,_and then we went to the pants store. I chose a pair of pants. After a patient bargain with the_seller,_my mother bought it at the price of three dollars and fifty cents and handed it to me.
In his diary, the man mentioned he wished to sink to the ocean with his wife but for their daughter he had to live. Without him, their baby daughter would become an orphan. After drowning himself in sorrow for a short time, he uplifted himself and learned how to raise baby. Whenever faced with hardships, he would inspire himself with his wife’ words—“Take care of our child.” Seeing the little girl grow into a sunny, pretty girl with double love from both parents, the man knew he made it to keep his promise.
The story was finished and the class was silent. Nobody talked or laughed as usual. Instead, it seemed that every student was lost in deep thought, tasting the moving life story. The teacher was sure that the students were reflecting on their replies and that they had understood the moral of the story. Of the Good and Evil in this world, there are hidden secrets behind them. So we should not really focus on the surface and judge anyone without understanding them first. Put yourself in others’ shoes and then you can really understand their behavior.
“Get ready to run, William,” she said,keeping an eye on the motionless snake. Rebecca opened the dripping petticoat softly and gently,aimed at the snake and then dropped the petticoat on top of he rattlesnake with her hands trembling. “NOW！she shouted to her twin brother,William when the snake began to move towards the dugout. William swiftly jumped over the covered snake and desperately ran towards his father, and meanwhile, Rebecca was following him.
Walking close, Chrissy noticed a small hole in the fence where the little girl might have climbed out. In front of a house, Chrissy could see a policeman talking to a woman who looked upset. “Is this your girl?” Chrissy called out. Then the woman and the policeman came running towards the fence. Minutes later, the girl was in the arms of her mom. Just then, Chrissy’s mom and her brother Russell came looking for her. The policeman told them that Chrissy had probably saved the girl’s life.
“You have a very responsible daughter there,” the policeman said to Chrissy’s mom. Hearing that, her mom smiled proudly. The next day, the headline in the newspaper read: Responsible Nine-Year-Old Girl Saves A Baby—with an article about Chrissy. After reading it, her parents said, “We’re proud of you, Chrissy. You really are a responsible young lady.” Feeling inspired, Chrissy now is never late for school. She almost always remembers to hang up her clothes, and is careful when she pushes Russell on the swing. And nobody ever calls her “irresponsible” anymore.
So I walked over to her daughter. “Mind some advice?” I asked. She rolled her eyes and said, “of course not.” I smiled to show her I wasn’t criticizing. “Cherish her and cherish every single moment you can stay with her,” I said. And then I answered her curious expression by saying, “When she's gone, it's these little moments that will come back to you. Moments like this. I know.” Having finished saying this, I noticed the elderly woman moving with her deliberation back to her daughter.
Together they made their way toward the store's exit. Then the daughter glanced over her elderly mother. And slowly, almost unwillingly, she placed her arm with apparently unaccustomed affection around her mothers’ shoulders and gently guided her back into the crowd. Tears filled my eyes when I watched them disappearing in the crowd.
Then I looked down at his hands to see that he was holding a travel bag. “Is it yours? I've found it at the airport and tried to catch up with you.xxx the man said. I opened the bag and it contained my passport, return tickets, as well as cash and letters for the university. I had left it behind on the trolley at the airport and this man had been trying to return it to me. At this moment, I realized that we had wronged him completely.
With a sigh of relief, I took my bag and thanked this stranger. The stranger's friendly smile put me at ease. I imagined the horrible scenario had he not returned it. When we arrived, the driver wished me luck with my university studies and drove away. These acts of kindness instantly cheered me up and thanks to this honest stranger, the initial self-doubt I had about my decision to study so far away from home was replaced with hope and excitement.
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