15年中考英语写作突破:完形填空

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  完型填空 (补全短文)

  "三遍法":第一遍了解大意;第二遍作题;第三遍检查确认

  例题:

  Alex ___1___ in a factory in a big town. He liked ____2____ very much, and was very good at it. Whenever he was free, he went down to the small ___3___ behind the factory and tried to catch some fish, but there were very ___4____ there, because the water of the river was dirty.. then one summer he went to the seaside during his holidays and ___5__ at a small, cheap hotel.

  "I've never fished in the sea ____6___," he thought. "It will be rather different from fishing in our river."

  On the first day he ____7____ a lot of fish and was very ____8___. He gave them to he hotel, and they ____9___ them for all the persons at the hotel, and they enjoyed them very much. After that, he did this every day. But when he got his bill at the ____10____ of his holidays, he saw on it "For oil to fry fish (7days): 14 dollars."

  答案:1. worked 2. fishing 3. river 4. few 5.stayed 6. before

  7. caught 8.happy/pleased/glad 9. cooked 10. end

  3.短文写作

  短文写作评分标准

  评分标准:

  第一档:(15分-13分)符合题目要求,整篇表达清楚,语法无误,词汇拼写正确,卷面整洁。

  第二档:(12分-10分)符合题目要求,整篇表达清楚,语法有少量错误,少量拼写错误,卷面欠整洁。

  第三档:(9分-6分)基本符合题目要求,漏掉若干关键词,超出了题目限制,整篇表达基本清楚,语言有部分错误。

  第四档:(3分-5分) 只能写出题目要求的一两个要点;只有个别句子能看懂,语法、词汇错误很多。

  第五档:(1分-2分)只写出了符合题意的若干单词。

  写作要求: 符合题意;逻辑通畅;语法单词正确;卷面清洁。

  写作的难题--写作的步骤

  篇--段--句--词

      1."篇" 明确主题

      2."段" 构建结构

  运用"提纲"

  提纲案例

  《我最喜爱的老师》

  篇   主题:   

  段   提纲:            1. 老师基本信息介绍

  a. 年龄

  b. 相貌

  c. 所授科目

  d. …

  2.令我感动的小故事 (描写与叙事相结合)

  a. 时间 b. 地点 c. 事情的经过 d. 关键词 shy; encourage

  3.我对老师的评价

  关键词:enjoy his class; like

      3. "句"   填充内容

  多用短句(简单句),慎用长句(并列句/复合句/并列复合句)

  文中参杂若干语法正确的长句能够成为亮点并得到加分。

  短句为主,辅之于长句。

  句子的完整、时态、人称、单复数、以及动词的变形。

  修辞

  比喻  像…

  be like     The house is like a tank.

  He is like a panda.

  as… as…   I am as hungry as a wolf.

  The teacher is as busy as a bee.

  He is as strong as a horse.

  夸张       I am the luckiest boy in the world to have such a nice teacher.

  拟人       The sky is smiling with beautiful sunshine.

      4."词" 

  可分为 "一般词汇" 和 "具体词汇"

  一般词汇  He is a good man.  good

  → 具体词汇 honest; diligent; hardworking; kind; nice; warmhearted; brave; selfless.

  "一般描写" 和 "具体描写" 

  一般描写   She is very beautiful.

  → 具体描写   She is very beautiful. She has dark hair, big shining eyes, and pretty face.

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