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.Hi, TigerMom ,
What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China . My idea is that it is quite right for you to do so .
Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university admission , development in wisdom emotion ,health and life attitude should never be ignored . There are many examples around us . Some all—A students in school have turned out not to be as successful in society as they were expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities . Furthermore , punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically .
So I suggest that you take your friends’ advice . More importantly, let her live like a lovely girl ; let her have more friends and social activities ; and let her make mistakes of her own as we teenagers often do .
【例文】
Tourism in China
Recent years have seen a tendency in China that tourism is growing faster. According to a recent survey made by some experts, about 47% urban residents travel regularly, and 28% rural residents also make their tour across the country. The survey also shows that more people are interested in tourism, and will join the army in the future.
Facing this tendency, we can’t help exploring some underlying factors that are responsible. In the very first place, with the policy of reform and opening up, Chinese people’s living standard has been greatly improved, and therefore, most of them can afford to travel around. What’s more, it is believed that people now take a more positive attitude to tourism, and regard it as a life style. In addition, tourism facilities are becoming better and better. For example, transportation develops fast, and many scenic spots are available now.
【译文】
中国旅游
最近几年，在中国的趋势，旅游业增长较快。根据最近的一项调查显示一些专家认为，约47%城镇居民定期作出旅行，28%的农村居民，也使他们的全国巡演。该调查还显示，更多的人在旅游有兴趣，并会在将来加入军队。
面对这一趋势，我们不能不说是负责任的开发一些潜在因素。在第一个地方，随着改革开放政策，对中国人民的生活水平有了很大提高，因此，他们大多数都不能周游。更重要的是，它相信，人们现在更积极的态度，旅游业，把它作为一种生活方式。此外，旅游设施正在变得越来越好。例如，交通运输发展迅速，许多景点都已经上市。
Dear teachers and schoolmates,1t’s a great pleasure for me to be here today and share my experience of learning English with you . I'm interested in English , and hope to be an interpreter in the future . Naturally it’s very important for me to learn English well . As everybody knows vocabulary is an important part of language , just like bricks in a building . I usually memorize twenty new words a day and put them to use whenever possible . After class .I often listen to English programs on TV and on the radio . Besides , I've learned a lot from the Internet and other sources.
Now , I'd like to make some suggestions on English teaching and learning in our school . Firstly , we should be given more opportunities to use what we’ve learned in order to have a better grasp of it . Secondly ,I hope our teachers can recommend more interesting books and magazines and give us more free time to read them . Finally ，1 suggest we have more English activities，such as English contests and festivals .
Thank you for listening .
假设你叫王明，昨天收到了笔友David的e-mail，得知他不久要到北京来学习中文。他想了解如何学好中文。请你用英文给他回复一封e-mail，介绍学习中文的体会和方法，提出你的建议，以及表达你帮助他学好中文的愿望。
Dear David,
I'm glad you'll come to Beijing to learn Chinese. Chinese is very useful, and many foreigners are learning it now. It's difficult for you because it's quite different from English. You have to remember as many Chinese words as possible. It's also important to do some reading and writing. You can watch TV and listen to the radio to practise your listening. Do your best to talk with people in Chinese. You can learn Chinese not only from books but also from people around you. If you have any questions, please ask me. I'm sure you'll learn Chinese well.
Hope to see you soon in Beijing.
Yours,
Wang Ming
【翻译】
亲爱的大卫，
我很高兴你会来北京学习中文。中国是非常有益的，许多外国人正在学习，现在。这很难为你，因为它是相当的英语不同。你要记住尽可能多的中国话。同样重要的是做一些阅读和写作。你可以看电视，听广播练习你的听力。你不要谈论与中国人民。你可以学习汉语，不仅从书本上，而且从你周围的人。如果您有任何问题，请问我。我敢肯定你会学好中文。
希望能尽快看到你在北京。
此致，
【例文】
Where is my home?
Some fish are forced to leave polluted water and are flying in the sky. But unfortunately, air is also so polluted that they have to wear masks. Each of them is crying, “Where is my home?” What a terrible sight!
Mankind has brought so much pollution. Waste is being poured into rivers and seas. Poisons to kill pests in farming and chemicals go into rivers and seas, too. Poisonous gasses from factories also make the air so dirty. The whole balance of nature is being destroyed as a result of our ignorance of the environmental protection.
Personally, man can not live alone on the earth. Should fish die from serious pollution, so would man! It is high time we did something to prevent such a scene from happening.
【译文】
何处是我家?
一些鱼类被迫离开受污染的水，并在天上飞。但不幸的是，空气污染，也使他们不得不戴上口罩。他们每个人都在哭，“我的家在哪里?”这太可怕了!
人类带来了如此多的污染。废物被排入河流和海洋。毒药杀死农业害虫和化学品进入河流和海洋去，太。从工厂有毒气体也使空气这么脏。整个自然界的平衡被毁坏了我们对环保的无知造成的。
就个人而言，人不能独自生活在地球上。如果鱼死了严重的污染，将男人!现在是时候我们做了一些，以防止发生这样的场面。
【例文】
Career or Family: which is more important?
When asked about their opinion of career and family, people always respond differently. Some people deem it more important to pursue their career, while there are always other people who argue that family should be the number one in one’s life.
It goes without any question that career plays a key role in our life. In the very first place, career can give us an aim to live on. Without career, much of our living time will be certainly wasted. What’s more, career can provide us with a means to live on. Most of the people earn their income from a job. On the other hand, family is also an indispensable part of life, as many people will admit. Family is always regarded as a place where we can escape from troubles in life. In addition, we can obtain a sense of belonging to from family. Without it, anyone will feel lonely and desperate.
In my opinion, career and family are not in opposition to each other. Rather, they can enhance each other so that one’s life can become better and better. Therefore, it’s not a choice between right and wrong, but one between ideal and practical.
【翻译】
职业或家庭：哪个更重要?
在谈到自己的事业和家庭的意见要求，人总是有不同的反应。有些人认为这更重要的是追求自己的事业，而总有那么谁认为家庭应该是一个人的生活的人数1人。
毫无疑问，任何事业在我们生活中起着关键作用。在第一个地方，可以给我们一个职业生涯的目标是生活。没有职业生涯中，大部分时间我们的生活一定会被浪费。更重要的是，职业生涯可以提供一种手段，对我们的生活。大多数人从工作中赚取的收入。另一方面，家庭也是生活中不可缺少的一部分，因为很多人会承认。家庭一直被认为是一个地方，我们可以摆脱生活中的麻烦。此外，我们可以得到一个属于家庭的感觉。没有它，人会感到孤独和绝望。
在我看来，职业和家庭是不反对对方。相反，它们可以加强彼此，使自己的生活能够越来越好。因此，它不是对与错之间的选择，但理想和现实之间的一个。
下面是幅照片，表现了女儿为妈妈拿包的情景“to ease the pain in her back, I remove the heavy load from mom’s shoulder”
你短文应包括：1.描述照片的内容 2. 结合自身情况谈谈你的感想 3.举例说明你能为家长肩负做些什么
范文：
The burden of students has been a hot topic for many years, but the load of parents has received little attention ,especially from their own children .
The picture shows us a touching moment when a little comes to greet her working mother . Realizing that her mother must be very tired after a day’s work , the girl helped to remove the bag from her shoulder. In response , the mother kneels down to show how happy and thankful she feels.
All that reminds me of my mother who has been doing whatever she could to let me have the best. But , totally engaged in studies , I seldom pay attention to what mother needs and feels, and always think studying is the only thing I could do in return .Now I know I can do my bit to help with the everyday washing , bedroom cleaning ,or at least prepare breakfast myself , so as to share mom’s daily burden. The picture convinces me that it is even more important to be a good daughter than a “good” student”.
【例文】
Doing sport builds up our body strength and reduces diseases.
Though we lead a better life, our health is becoming worse now. So ^v^EXERCISE ONE HOUR A DAY，KEEP ILLNESS AWAY^v^ has been raised by the government.
At noon or after school we play ball games, swimming and running. Look!The playground seems smaller because lots of students are playing on school life has become colorful and we are a result we study harder and better.
The Sunny Sports has brought an exciting change to us. Let’s keep on doing it.
【翻译】
做运动建立了我们的身体力量，减少疾病。
虽然我们过上更好的生活，我们的健康越来越差了。因此，“每天要锻炼1小时，保持因病逝世”已经提出的政府。
在中午或放学后，我们玩球，游泳和跑步。瞧!操场似乎较小，因为很多学生都在操场上后援学校生活变得丰富多彩，我们因此我们努力学习，更好。
在阳光体育运动带来了一个令人振奋的变化给我们。让我们继续这样做。
This summer, I had some special days. I joined Dongzhou International Educational Exchange Summer Camp.
First, I will tell you about our foreign teachers, they are Shrina and Rebecca. They are friendly and beautiful. They are students at Oxford University.
We talked about many things: famous people, subjects in England, different jobs, our deal days, western star signs, what can we say in a restaurant and so on.
We know lots of things, like what the difference is between “chef” and “cook”, all the parts of the body…
We tried to write a letter to Principal Zhang. We made a play and we drew our own comics and tried to sell it. We gave some other students English lessons, we taught them about Chinese Dragon, Chinese Martial Arts and the Olympics.
Every afternoon, we played exciting games: Chinese Whispers, Tongue Twisters, Wheelbarrow, egg and spoon, three legs…
On the last day, we had a good time. We made black tea. We put tea bags, some milk and lots of water in to a big bowl, and then we stirred the tea until it became red and dark. Oh, it tasted good! Later, we used eggs, flour and milk to make many pancakes. To cook them is very interesting. When we finished it, the pancakes looked round and nice. We put some jam on it. How delicious! I won’t ever forget it.
The summer Camp is a really good chance for me. I know the local things in England. I learned a lot and like English more. I also know better ways to learn English well.
I hope one day I can see you in England.
Mr. Li was hurrying to attend a lesson of an Australian teacher when he caughtsight of the red light. In Gold Coast there were much fewer passers-by than inShanghai, especially at 1:30 p. m. when people were busy working. Nobody wouldhave noticed him had he neglected the red , he waited, and waited for the green light. ^v^ There might besomething wrong with the light,^v^ thought he, but anything against the traffic ruleswas out of the question, for he wass a visiting Chinese teacher. Just then came an oldAustralian gentleman, who felt surprised at the foreigner waiting alone by the road.^v^Good afternoon,^v^ he said in Japanese, unexpectedly. ^v^Good afternoon, butsorry I don't know much Japanese, for I am a Chinese,^v^. responded Mr. Li, inEnglish. Obviously astonished, the Australian explained he took it for granted that Mr. Li was from Japan, for Japanese tourists were always in good manners. Mr Li often tell us students to always remmember we're from China,and we Chinese people are always in good manners.
Dear Mr. Green,
I am very excited that we are going to start a magazine together . It in indeed wonderful idea and everyone hopes for its success .
I would like the magazine to have three columns : news , Teachers’ advice and students’ voice . From the news column we can learn about what is gong in both of our schools . In teachers’ advice, our teachers can give us such help as we may not be able to get in the classroom . Students’ voice will allow us to freely express our thoughts and feelings about our lives and studies .
I believe this magazine will surely strengthen our ties ,and I am looking forward to reading it .
Yours faithfully ,
Li hua
健康对于我们每个人来说是非常重要的，但你的父母天天忙于工作而忽略了这个问题，你很为他们担忧。请你以此为话题，并结合提示给他们写一封信。
提示：
1.要走路去上班，而不是开车或坐车;
2.每周至少去体育馆锻炼一次，或打球、或游泳;
3.饮食要健康;
4.不要工作太晚，要早休息。
要求：
1.短文结构完整，意思连贯，语言流畅，语法准确，符合逻辑;
—100词左右;
3.开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数。
【例文】
Dear Dad(Mum),
You’re so busy every day that you don’t pay much attention to your health. I’m worried about your health all the time. I’d like to give you some suggestions. I hear walking is the best sport. Your company isn’t far from home, is it? Why not walk to the office? You’d better take exercise at least once a week, such as playing tennis in the gym. Going to swim is also a nice choice, too. What’s more, it’s necessary to have healthy food. Try not to stay up too late. Having enough sleep can help your brain work better.
Dad, please accept my advice. I really wish you healthy!
Your loving son (daughter)
Tom (Mary)
【翻译】
亲爱的爸爸(妈妈)，
【例文】
Different Job Outlooks
Nowadays university graduates have different job outlooks. For most of them, to find a job with satisfactory pay is their most important wish while majority want to be self – employed. However, a certain number of graduates are not in a hurry to hunt for jobs. They are just waiting for better chances. Toward this point of view, some experts warn that it is not wise to be just waiting. They advise that graduates should find a regular, full-time job as quickly as possible so that they can earn money to support themselves and get working experience, which will help to find a better position later. Moreover, it might be more difficult to find a satisfactory job next year.
【译文】
不同的工作观
如今大学毕业生的就业前景不同。对于大部分孩子来说，要找到一个令人满意的支付工作是他们最重要的希望，而多数是希望能够自我 - 就业。但是，一定数量的毕业生不急于寻找就业机会。他们只是在等待更好的机会。对这一观点，一些专家警告说，只是等待这是不明智的。他们提醒毕业生应该找到一个正规，全职工作，以便尽可能快的挣钱来养活自己和获得工作经验，这将有助于找到更好的更高的位置。此外，明年可能更难找到一个称心如意的工作。
On May Day , Liyue and zhang hua , students from class three ,Grade two , went to sunshine nursing home and did some voluntary work . Upon their arrival, Li yue and Zhang hua were warmly welcomed ,and respectfully, they presented the elderly with fruits and flowers .Then they started working at once ,cleaning the windows and sweeping the floor . Everything done, they sat in the yard chatting with the elderly people.
When it was time for the volunteers to leave, the elderly people thanked them for their kindness . They said it was such a beautiful day that they would remember it forever.
Li yue and zhang hua were very happy. What they did has brought joy to other people and enriched their own lives.
By chen jie , school newspaper
Our English Teacher
Our English teacher, Ms Huang, came to our school in 1970. She has been an English teacher for more than 30 years. She works hard and has been a model teacher for many years.
She is kind and friendly to us after class, but She is rather strict with us in class. She always encourages us to speak and read more English. She often says, ^v^Practice makes perfect.^v^
She is good at teaching and tries her best to make every lesson lively and interesting. She often gives us slide shows, teaches us English songs and helps us to put on short English plays.
She is not only our teacher but also our friend. We all respect and love her.
Tomorrow she is going to attend an important meeting, at which she will be given a medal for her advanced deeds.
Some think we should try to help strangers. Helping others is a virtue，and helping others is helping may come across some trouble and need others' help some everyone isn't willing to help us just because we are strangers to them，it's hard to imagine what our world will be like.
However，some are afraid that helping others can sometimes bring us we are just misunderstood and even have to pay the cost of kindness.
In my opinion，we should try our best to help others when they are in need of help，but we should also protect ourselves from getting into everyone tries a little kindness，our world will be full of love.
应用文题型(1) 申请信Your addressMonth, Date, YearReceiver’s addressDear _______ , I amextremely pleased to hear from you. / to see your advertisement for theposition in——(地方). AndI would like to write a letter to tell you that——(自我介绍) / Iam confident that I am suitable for the kind of the job you are advertising——(职位)/ Ifeel I am competent to meet the requirements you have listed. On the one hand, ——(原因一). Onthe other hand, ——(原因二). I am enclosing my resume for yourkind consideration and reference. I shallbe much obliged if you will offer me a precious opportunity to an interview. Iwill greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience./ I amlooking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience. Bestregards for your health and success. Yourssincerely, Li Ming(2)邀请信Dear _____, Therewill be a——(内容)at/in——(地点)on——(时间). Wewould be honored to have you there with us. Theoccasion will start at——(具体时间). This will be followed by a ——(进一步的安排). Ataround ——(时间), ——(另一个安排). I reallyhope you can make it. I’ll be expecting you on the——(时间). Yourssincerely, Li Ming(3)投诉信Dear _____， I am_______(自我介绍). Ifeel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaintabout——(事件). Thereason for my dissatisfaction is ——(总体介绍). In the firstplace，——(抱怨的第一个方面). Inaddition，——(抱怨的第二个方面). Underthese circumstances，I find it——(感觉)to——(抱怨的方面给你带来的后果). Iappreciate it very much if you could——(提出建议和请求)，preferably——(进一步的要求)， andI would like to have this matter settled by——(设定解决的最后期限). Thank you foryour consideration and I will be looking forward to your , Li Ming(4)感谢信Dear _____, I amwriting to express my sincere gratitude for——(感谢的原因). If it had notbeen for your assistance in ——(对方给予的具体帮助), I fear that I would have been——(没有对方帮助时的后果). Every oneagrees that it was you who ——(给出细节). Again, Iwould like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude. Yourssincerely, Li Ming
十八年后再看一次《卧虎藏龙》，最动人的不再是竹梢对决、舒展飘逸的武打动作，也不再是“江湖里卧虎藏龙，人心何尝不是?”的经典台词，而是“一种很深的寂静”和这寂夜里的弦声。
粉墙黛瓦，板桥流水，一个祥和安静的江南水乡，舒缓的大提琴音乐节奏之中夹杂着一丝丝的忧伤，为观影者建起一个暂时远离血雨腥风的清平世界，在此后故事的诸层进程中，大提琴和竹笛、二胡、琵琶、马头琴等渐次响起，乐声为我们演绎了清代中晚期那段诗意江湖的故事：竹笛配《南行》;葫芦丝配《丝绸之路》;《闹婚》开端即为紧凑的短拍，最适合紧张的剧情;《夜斗》手鼓、京鼓、各种鼓，联想夜行人互相追逐的脚步，和无声的过招、缠斗，精准狠……最爱这段《夜斗》和《交锋》，没有了人声，再用鼓点和青筝的乐音直接替换了金属兵器相交的声音，讲述白日和暗夜里惊心动魄的打斗。
原来，弦语可以绘画面，说故事。
想说说箫和二胡。
中国的传统乐器——箫被引进影片中，它的幽远萧瑟的声音，似乎为这江湖纷争平添了一抹神秘的色彩：一袭白色长衣，垂辫负手的李慕白背执青冥剑伫立在竹梢之上，似乎抱着一种看破红尘、超然脱俗的心态出现在观众的眼前。
说起李慕白和俞秀莲之间的纠结牵绊的爱，那真的要感谢二胡，当大提琴缓慢下来进入到了一个暗淡的空间，声调更显凄凉和伤感，观众也为他们的爱情唏嘘不已的时候，马晓晖的二胡突然来了一个二度滑音，哽咽凄楚，而又抑扬顿挫，几根弦瞬间道出了人类情感中那份最无法言说的痛。
是的，弦语道出了人心人情。
还想说说李安、谭盾。
看似中西合璧的\'李安，骨子里仍然是东方的文化传统，他试图讲述道家的“退隐”的无奈，用剧中李慕白的话就是表现了人“被一种寂灭的悲哀环绕。”深谙李安之心的谭盾大胆地在音乐上中西合璧，把这种道家情怀表现的非常精彩。
华裔马友友的大提琴，马晓晖的二胡，这两种极具中西特色的乐器对话，更让观众沉浸在一种苍凉的东方式的江湖氛围中：“卧”与“藏”表达了对于人在江湖的无奈，李安要的是一种无尽的寂寞与怅然，谭盾的音乐紧扣整个电影的脉博，也是如此贯穿电影始终。
“一种很深的寂静”，音乐在说着江湖，更是在演绎文化的忧伤。
“人即是江湖……我们能触摸的没有永远。”剧中人深深的伤感，随提琴与二胡回荡在江湖的暗夜，这弦语细听来却又分明寂然无声……
Everyone must work to live, but many people are fortunate enough to make more money than they immediately need. What should they do with this extra income? While it is tempting for people to spend it all on things they desire, I believe it is better to save at least a portion of the extra income for the future.
By saving money, people give themselves more security. They cannot predict the future; perhaps one day they will be jobless. At a time like this their savings can spare them a great deal of suffering and help to see them through the hard time. In addition, saving money allows people to build up a larger sum. They can then buy something more worthwhile than the small things they can but if they spend the money right away. For example, they may be able to buy a house with their savings. Finally, he practice of saving helps people develop the habit of setting goals and planning for their future. In this way they are bound to lead more meaningful and successful lives.
Most people would like to enjoy their money immediately. Nobody likes to wait for the things that he wants. However, if we learn to save our money, we cangain more advantages in the future. We will lead more secure and, thus, happier lives. We will also be able to buy the things we truly want but cannot afford right now.
一看作文题，我便不假思索地想起了央视新闻《大国工匠》节目中那个錾刻师傅，他在普通而平凡的岗位上，利用自己的一技之长，创造了别人认为不可能的可能，我们为他的执着追求、技艺精湛、爱岗敬业精神而喝彩!
錾刻者是北京某集团的一名工艺师，他用纯银精雕细琢錾刻的“和美”纯银丝巾，在去年北京的一次国际峰会上，作为国礼赠送给峰会的^v^和夫人，“和美”纯银丝巾得到外国友人的青睐，在一片赞美声中，中国的錾刻工艺，名声大震，促进了中国和其他国家的文化交流。
錾刻是我国一项历史悠久的传统工艺，它使用的工具叫錾子，上面有圆形、细纹、半月形等不同形状的花纹，工匠敲击錾子，就会在金、银、铜上錾刻出千变万化的浮雕图案。
有人问錾刻者，像丝巾这样精美的工艺品，他是怎样做出来的?
錾刻者说，为了分别作出果盘的.粗糙感和丝巾的光感，他反复琢磨、试验，亲手制作了几十把錾子，最小的一把在放大镜下做了好几天。
錾刻者说，开好錾子仅仅完成了制作国礼的第一步，最难的是，在这个厚度只有零点几毫米的银片上，有无数条细密的经纬线相互交错，在光的折射下才能形成图案，而这需要进行上百万次的錾刻敲击。
錾刻者说，下手时必须稳、准、狠，要特别精细，全神贯注，更不能錾透了。上百万次錾刻，只要有一次失误，就前功尽弃。
追求极致是錾刻者给自己提的标准，为了做出支撑果盘的中国结，他的右手曾经起了厚厚一层茧子。
有人问，用手工编织中国结那么辛苦，为什么不用机械铸造呢?
錾刻者说，他们是设想过用机械铸造出来，再焊接到果盘上。但是，铸造出来的银丝上有砂眼，尽管极其微小，但他心里却怎么也过不去。在他心目中，没有瑕疵，并且是纯手工，这才配得上做国礼。
听了錾刻者的这些话，我心里由衷的感动，对錾刻者辛勤劳动、诚实劳动和创造性劳动的崇高品质和伟大精神致以崇高的敬意!
但想到当今社会中“劳动信仰”缺失，劳动观念淡薄，好逸恶劳、投机取巧、坑蒙拐骗、不惜泯灭人性侵占别人劳动成果的丑恶现象，心里感到无尽的愤怒和忧虑。
唉!什么时候，錾刻者的品质和精神才能广泛被人们效仿呢?
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议论文是论述问题的,当然要有一定的思路,即议论文各部分之间要有必然的内在联系。我们知道,议论文是论证问题的,你在提出议论文论点后,就要摆事实,讲道理,让你提出的论点令人信服地确立起来。因此,中心论点和各分论点之间就应当是因果联系,即中心论点是“果”,分论点是“因”。这个因果联系就是议论文的思路之“格”。
作为一个高中生的议论文作文,最起码要做到在中心论点和各分论点之间 ,论点和论据之间要有一定的因果联系。
学生提出中心论点后,只要围绕中心论点问一个“为什么”,就能找到提出分论点的方向。如中心论点是“只有坚守,才能使人的思想品德升华,才能成就一番事业”。稍加分析,就可发现这个观点是在说“坚守”的重要性,于是,分论点就要回答“为什么坚守很重要”这个问题。那么就可从“为什么”和“何果”这两个向度来立分论点。如“坚守是一种执着,使绝望变成希望”,“坚守是一种信念,使普通变得高尚”,“坚守是一种职责,使平凡变得伟大”。如果我们要检验这三个分论点和中心论点之间有没有必然的内在联系的话,只需在这三个分论点之前加上“因为”,在“坚守很重要”之前加上“所以”,再连起来念一下即可。
同样,分论点和议论文的论据之间,也应当是因果联系。如在“坚守是一种职责,使平凡变得伟大”这个分论点后面,就可这样展开论述:“边防战士的坚守,使国家安定祥和;人民教师的坚守,使桃李满天下;白衣天使的坚守,使病魔为之屈服。”又如在“自由是思想的漫飞”这个分论点下可以这样展开论述:“行动可以受制于客观现实,思想却永远享受绝对的自由。有了这份思想的自由,才有了集豪放与浪漫于一身的诗仙李白;才有了身陷囹圄还在感叹‘故国不堪回首月明中’的落魄后主李煜;才有了向往‘面朝大海,春暖花开’的天才诗人海子。总之,因为这份思想的自由,社会才会在其牵引之下不断地进步,才会创造出一个个永载史册的人类奇迹。”
请你根据下面的提纲，以“我的家乡”为题，写一篇100—120字的短文。
提纲：
(1) 家乡的地理位置;
(2) 解放前的情况;
(3) 解放后的变化;
(4) 对家乡的感情。
【例文】
My Home Town
My home town is a beautiful place. It stands beside a wide river and is rich in fish and rice.
But in the old days it was a poor and backward little town. Many people had no work. They lived a hard life.
In 1949 my hometown was liberated. Since then great changes have taken place there. The streets have been widened. Factories, schools, hospitals, cinemas and theatres have sprung up one after another. The life of the people is greatly improved.
I love my hometown. All the more I love its people. They are working hard so as to make it still richer and more beautiful.
【翻译】
我的家乡
我的家乡是一个美丽的地方。它站在旁边是一个宽阔的河流和丰富的鱼和米饭。
但它是一个贫穷落后的小镇时光。许多人没有工作。他们过着艰苦的生活。
1949年我的家乡解放。自那时以来已发生很大变化那里。街道已拓宽。工厂，学校，医院，电*和剧院便如雨后春笋，一个接一个。人民生活大大改善。
我爱我的家乡。更爱我的人。他们正在努力，以使其更丰富，还有更美丽。
The seats in our school reading-room are not enough for all the students. Many people get there very early to 'seize' a seat every day. So do I. One day a 'special' thing happened to me. And I learned a lesson that I shall never forget.
It happened on a Wednesday morning last January, just before our final examation. I got to the reading-room very early to occupy a seat. I put a book on the desk and then went to have breakfast. But when I hurried back into the reading-room,我的第一个绘画老师(My First Drawing Teacher), I found someone was sitting on the seat which I had occupied in advance. I ran to him immediatly and shouted at him angrily, 'Go away. It's my seat.' Everyone raised their eyes and stared at me unfriendly. My face turned red and I felt ashamed of myself. I took my book and fled helter-skelter before so many eyes.
I dared not go to the reading-room for several days. I learned a lesson in the reading-room. Since then I have been keeping the lesson in mind: To be polite to everyone.
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