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假设你是新华中学的李华,你和在上海上学的英国朋友Tom 约好下周去北京旅游,但你因故不能赴约。请给他写封Email 1. 表示歉意 2.解释原因 3.另约时间
范文:
Dear Tom,
I am indeed very sorry that I can’t go to Beijing with you next week, which I have promised. I feel sorry about it and want you to know what happened.
Just now , my cousin ,Li qiang ,who left home to Australia for his further study last year, informed me that he would return this Saturday morning and asked me to pick him up at the airport with his family. You know , we haven’t seen each other for nearly a year.
I sincerely hope you can accept my apologies and understand me . I would appreciate your allowing me to make another date to show you around Beijing . Once again, I’m sorry for any inconvenience caused.
Sincerely yours ,
Li hua
假定你是李华,将于今年七月从新星外语学校毕业。你从报纸上得知B&B公司要招聘一名英文秘书,你很感兴趣。请给该公司写一封信,1.年龄 2.学习情况和英文水平 3.兴趣特长 4.性格特点
范文:
Dear Sir /Madam ,
I learned from the newspaper that your company needs an English secretary . I’m really interested in this position and hope I can work for you.
I’m 18 years old and will be graduating from xinxing Foreign Languages School this July. I’m an excellent student ,among the top 5 in my class of 50 students. I’m good at English , especially spoken English .I often use the computer and I type very fast . In my spare time ,I read a lot . Poems are my favorite . I enjoy music very much too. Being an active young person , I like sports and outdoor activities . Besides , I ‘m easy to get along well with and I like to make friends .
I’m looking forward to your reply .
Sincerely yours,
Li hua
北京高考英语作文评分标准:评分档次
A.第五档(很好):(21-25分)1.完全完成了试题规定的任务。2.覆盖所有内容要点。3.应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。4.语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误,但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备较强的语言运用能力。5.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。6.完全达到了预期的写作目的。
B.第四档(好):(16-20分)1.完全完成了试题规定的任务。2.虽漏掉1、2个次重点,但覆盖所有主要内容。3.应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。4.语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确,些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。5.应用简单的语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。6.达到了预期的写作目的。
C.第三档(适当):(11-15分)1.基本完成了试题规定的任务。2.虽漏掉一些内容,但覆盖所有主要内容。3.应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。4.有一些语法结构或词汇方面的'错误,但不影响理解。5.应用简单的语句间的连接成分,使全文内容连贯。6.整体而言,基本达到了预期的写作目的。
D.第二档(较差):(6-10分)1.未恰当完成试题规定的任务。2.漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容,写了一些无关内容。3.语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。4.有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响了对写作内容的理解。5.较少使用语句间的连接成分,内容缺少连贯性。6.信息未能清楚地传达给读者。
E.第一档(差):(1-5分)1.未完成试题规定的任务。2.明显遗漏主要内容,写了一些无关内容,原因可能是未理解试题要求。3.语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。4.较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响对写作内容的理解。5.缺乏语句间的连接成分,内容不连贯。6.信息未能传达给读者。
F.不得分:(0分)未能传达给读者任何信息:内容太少,无法评判;写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。
从上面可以看出英语作文高分的关键因素及高分秘诀:
北京高考英语作文评分标准:点关键定档因素(不跑题是前提)
词汇多样性
语法复杂性
文章连贯性
北京高考英语作文评分标准:书面表达的五项秘诀
审题,遣词,造句,润色,谋篇
既然知道了这些关键因素和高分秘诀,我们要如何从这些方面入手呢?
审题的概念
拿到试卷后,首先浏览书面表达的题目,研究题目要求。正确的审题内容包括A、审标题B、审体裁C、审要点。审标题:看文章是否要求有题目(title)或者主题(topic)能够确保你不跑题;审体裁:确能够定文章的文体,为你写作提供方向。审要点:如果英语作文中,有要求要点的,一般打分时是踩点给分的,准确把握住要点,是高分的一个诀窍。
如何审要点?要做到以下两个方面:
总结归纳要点:不是所有内容都要写出来,而是抓住其中的关键要点、衔接要点!
理顺要点:将提炼的要点按逻辑关系(如时间关系、因果关系、转折关系等)重新安排,这样整篇文章看起来就整体有序,流畅自然,更加容易打动评分老师,从而作文分数提升一档。
构思文章提纲:根据题目的要点,安排好段落和主次关系。要形成良好的分段意识,写作分段是必须要进行的(2至4段为佳),这样显得文章不会拥挤并且层次分明。在行文意识上,要注意突出要点。遣词的注意点
不出现语言错误词语和短语搭配适度使用加分词汇避免词语重复
注意词语和短语搭配使用可以适度的使用加分词句:高级词、同义词、短语等替代
北京高考英语作文评分标准:造句的原则
表达意思要清楚无误。多种表达方式表达相同含义,避免句式单调(简单句,并列句,复合句等适度调整)表达意思清楚无误:具体化,细节化可以用形象思维来表达(什么叫形象思维?比如说你朗读的“很好听”,用“抑扬顿挫”来表达就是形象思维)
谋篇的攻略
注意分段、详略搭配、注意连贯
行文时多用关联词、引导词,把文章句子通过各种关系整合起来,达到起承转合,运用自如的目的,从而获取高分。
具体的连接关系有:并列关系、递进关系、因果关系、转折关系、让步关系、列举关系、条件关系、举例关系、时间关系等。
一、英语写作的重要性
1。英语写作有益于扩充词汇量
口语所使用的语言一般是比较简单和常用的。而在用英语写作时,所使用的语言则是多种多样的。从极简单到较复杂的语言都要使用,所使用的词汇和句型也比口语中使用的相对要多,这对英语词汇量的扩充有很大帮助。
2。英语写作训练有助于提高逻辑思考及分析能力
写一篇作文,不论长短,都需要妥善地组织材料,得出结论,作到重点突出,条理清楚。这样,在锻炼写作能力的同时,也锻炼了分析与处理问题的能力。
3。英语写作有助于提高使用英语的准确性
只要写一个句子,更不用说一段,一篇,就要力求拼写,用词,句法,标点等完全正确,而且与前后句紧密连贯。写和说不同,写好后可以检查修改,而一次修改就是一次提高。写得越多,语言使用就会越准确。
4。英语写作有助于阅读,听力,口语,翻译等能力的提高
自己知道写作的甘苦,对别人的写作技巧就会乐于学习。分析问题的能力提高了,听别人说话就会善于抓住要点。语言质量提高了,口语也会准确很多。
二、如何写好一篇英语作文
1。打好扎实的英语语言基础
要写好英语作文,首先必须掌握一定数量的英语单词。此外还得掌握好一定的英语语法知识。若有不太清楚的地方,应通过查阅语法书和词典来逐步解决,不能偷懒,随便乱写。
2。广泛进行英语阅读
假设你李华,你的美国朋友Tom 上个月来北京学习。七月份你将去北京参加暑期中学生英语演讲比赛(speech contest),你在搜集资料,语言运用方面遇到了困难。请根据要点给Tom 写封email 1. 询问Tom的学习和生活情况 2. 谈谈你的困难并请他帮忙 3.你打算比赛后去看他。
范文:
Dear Tom,
How time flies! You have been studying in Beijing for nearly a month, during which you must achieved a lot .Well , how is everything going ? It is reported that the weather there is very hot and dry these days, which is different from that of your country . Have you adapted to it ? In addition, you once complained that the food served there is not to your taste. I hope that should have been improved.
I am glad to tell you that I am going to Beijing to take part in an English speech contest in July ,which is not only an honor ,but also an opportunity for me to improve myself. And now I try my best to make preparations for it .However , I have some trouble in collecting the materials relevant and using the language. I would appreciate it if you give me a hand to solve the problems
After the contest , I am to drop in at your school to visit you. Please wait for my phone.
Yours ,
Li hua
请做自我介绍?
英语作文:
Everybody is good! But you want to know me, well, then I can tell you. It is crystal li. How, isn't it cool?
My sex, of course, need not I said, everyone should can guess. So, tell you a secret: although I was a little girl, but sometimes doing things like a careless boy, a lot of my classmates call me fake boy in his class, for this, I really very upset. Ok, or introduce me, you all must wait urgent!!!!
Advantages: lively open and bright, take an active part in activities, from the day of school is especially listen to the teacher. Get along with classmates, love to help others, love of labor, is a good assistant of the teacher, the students of the good, always writes on parents notice xxxcollective solidarity, love of laborxxx and other words. Love reading, writing, painting, and a great ideal, that is to be a famous senior dance teacher. I think that my dream can realize... Well is endorsed back especially fast, usually two poems, I will be back in five minutes, and especially good at English.
Weakness: my weakness greatly more, generally speaking, the disadvantages outweigh the advantages, but to sum up, what time is, for example, careless, brain cells are always straight, a class like to glance left and right, learning is not serious, learning needs with whips, also is not active. Sometimes too strong curiosity, disaster, when the exam is always not careful, careless. Alas! Really can't stand it.
Wish: hope to be able to get rid of faults, study actively, realize the desire, come on!
中文翻译:
大家好!我的可是你想知道的,好吧,那我就告诉你。它是——李雪莹。怎么样,是不是很酷呢?
当然我的性别就不用我说了,大家应该就能猜到。那么,告诉大家一个秘密:别看我是个小女生,但有时候做起事来就像一个大大咧咧的小男孩,班上好多同学都叫我假男孩,为此,我真的很苦恼。好啦,还是向大家介绍一下我吧,想必你们都等急了吧!
优点:活泼开朗,积极参加活动,从开学的那一天就特别听老师的话。与同学友好相处,爱帮助他人,热爱劳动,是老师的好助手,同学们的好榜样,家长通知书上总是写着“团结集体,热爱劳动”等词语。爱看书,爱写作,爱画画,还有一个伟大的理想,那就是当一名赫赫有名的高级舞蹈老师。我认为,我的理想可以实现……还有呢就是背书背得特别快,通常一两首诗,我在五分钟之内就能背完,而且英语学得特别好。
缺点:我的缺点大大的多,总的来说,缺点大于优点,但是总结起来,大的就是几点,例如:粗心,脑细胞总是直直的,上课喜欢左顾右盼,学习不认真,学习需要用鞭子抽打,也就是不主动呗。有时候好奇心过强,就会酿成大祸,考试时总是不细心,粗心大意。唉!真是受不了。
愿望:希望能够改掉缺点,积极学习,实现愿望,加油!
1. 祝贺他获奖;
2. 肯定他付出的努力;
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations to you on your winning the first prize in the Chinese Chess Network Challenge. As your friend, I just want you to know how glad I am at your success.
“Everything comes to him who waits.”For these years, you’ve shown GREat interest in Chinese chess and kept on prACTicing it every day. Not only have you read many books about Chinese chess strategy, but also you have competed in all kinds of Chinses chess contest. Finally, you succeeded in wining the online competition!
So I’m so happy that you become the champion of this network challenge. At last, I hope to play Chinese chess with you so that we can make proGREss together. Please tell me when you have time.
Congratulations again.
Yours,
Li Hua
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