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Laziness is a sin. everyone knows that. We have probably all had lectures pointing out that lazi-ness is immoral, that it is wasteful,and that lazy people will never amount to anything in life.
But laziness can be more harmful than that, and it is often caused by more complex reasons than the simple wish to avoid work. Some people who appear to be lazy are suffering from much moreserious problems. They may be so distrustful of their fellow workers that they are unable to join in any group task for fear of being laughed at or fear of having their ideas stolen. These people who seem lazy may be deadened by a fear of failure that prevents fruitful work. Or other sorts of fantasies may prevent work: some people are so busy planning, sometimes planning great deals of fantastic achievements, that they are unable to deal with whatever xxx lesser xxx work is on hand. Still other people are not avoiding work, strictly speaking; they are nearly procrastinating---rescheduling their day.
Laziness can actually be helpful. Like procrastinators,some people look lazy when they are really thinking, planning, researching. We should all remember that some great scientific discoveries occurred by chance. Newton wasn't working in the orchard when the apple hit him and he devised the theory of gravity. Taking a rest can be particularly helpful to the athlete who is trying too hard or the doctor who's simply working himself overtime too many evenings at the clinic.
So be careful when you' re tempted to call someone person may be thinking, resting or planning his or her next book.
之所以增加这部分,是因为我的角色后来发生了很大转变,期间有很多思考也有很多纠结的地方。写前面部分时我刚考完研没多久,后来成为了一名XDF的考研英语讲师,后来读研比较忙加上与公司一些理念问题而离职,出来后花了几年时间和女票还有一群小伙伴儿做出了一本作文书,还是有一些“心路历程”的。
作为一个在国内应试系统里从学前班读到硕士的学生,我曾一度相当自洽,认为好的英语文章就是要用各种复杂的语法结构,句子越长越好,一句话能写40个词绝不会只写20个;单词越难越好,significant肯定比important高级,palatable肯定比delicious高级,那时我根本不在乎内容。直至笔者考了几次雅思,发现原来老外眼里的好文章,首先是easy to read的,原来一篇好文章不需要那么多复杂的语法结构,原来单词没有高级和不高级之分只有准确和不准确之分,原来我们写的各种高分作文在老外看来很尴尬。
学雅思的过程中,顾家北老师对我的影响的最大的。他推出AC确定法组织论点,即思考论点时要一小步一小步地往前推进,A和C之间一定能找出B,这一方法当时就让我耳目一新。因为以往任何老师教写作都是以“块”的形式教的,什么叫“块”呢,就是背短语背句子甚至背文章。可以去看教考研写作的很多名师,哪怕是有着几十年教龄的德高望重的功勋名师,都这么讲课。拿出范文开始一通分析,哪儿哪儿好,用了什么单词什么词组什么语法结构,用得挺好的,最后就是,背下来。然后下一篇,如此循环下去几十个课时就没了。
国内英语考试拿到任何题目都可以翻来覆去用那几句话去写,题目是环境污染了,可以写“随着经济的发展人们让环境遭受了污染”;题目是虐待老人,可以写“随着经济的发展人们开始虐待老人”;题目是“文化融合”,可以写“随着经济的发展文化开始融合”。
这样的教学方法导致的结果是,经典永远是经典,十几年前的范文还是现在的范文,学生写的也是十几年的东西。这样就导致在阅卷的时候在很大一个区间内没有区分度,全国考生背的都是那几本作文书,翻来覆去就是那些内容,记性好的阅卷老师都能背下来了。我一个前同事,从大学里出来的,以前参加过考研阅卷,在新东方的时候他给我们培训作文阅卷标准时讲过,北京地区的作文给分极其扁平化,一篇没有错误的大作文,看个二十几秒,写的是老生常谈,就会给个10分左右。
我曾为此觉得十分矛盾,一方面官方公布满分范文,名师引用范文,但是另一方面考生都写这样的范文却无法得高分,我想为什么这么多年都不更新呢?后来我从考研英语写作的评分标准中发现语言是第一位的,结构是第二位的,内容是第三位的,也就是说内容几乎是被忽视的。10年前的考研满分作文的论点,到现在仍然可以用,阅卷老师根本不在乎。但是根据我同事的判卷经验,北京这种大旱地区给分都是很扁平的。也就是说,内容陈旧不会判你错,但是就是可能会和高分失之交臂。
意识到这一点后,很长时间内我仍然困惑,我天真地想为什么考研英语写作就不能像雅思写作一样设立一个coherence and cohesion的评分标准以杜绝这种天马行空式的跳跃写作呢?杜绝了这种跳跃式写作,就必须更新内容和语料了。再者按照我阅读学术论文的体验,我认为写作的跳跃不仅对写作本身损害极大,也会影响一个人思考问题的方式,我觉得考研英语写作作为选拔性考试的重要部分,应该起到引导的作用,应该去督促每一个未来的研究生有逻辑性地组织自己的观点并用文字的方式表达,我觉得这是考研英语写作应该起到的作用。
那段时间我还在北京新东方教考研英语写作,我尝试着在日常的教学中加入我的理想。于是我时常给学生讲,考研满分范文无疑是一篇好的考研英语作文,但是不一定是一篇好的文章。甚至在讲课中如果讲到考研英语作文评分标准也会花少量时间给学生讲雅思作文的评分标准。我自认为我其实是在妥协,每次我站在讲台,我看着台下这群疲惫的年轻人的眼神,他们不关心什么是一篇好的英语作文,他们只关心能不能提分。我万分理解他们,因为这就是曾经的我,而我现在只不过变成了那个能帮助他们提分的人。所以我只是偶尔假装无意间提一嘴,并不会占用他们太多时间。
但是,在有一次批课的时候,我习惯性地提了几句,一位资深的前辈,也是集团培训师毫不留情地批评了我,她说提及雅思评分标准只会让学生更困惑,没有任何意义,以后不要再讲这个了。那一刻,我想反驳,但是自己的反驳却显得那么不合时宜,因为这里就是一个让学生提分的地方,我讲的东西就是格格不入的。
那次受批评以后,我又想了很久,我想,既然考研写作并不是为了教学生什么是真正的英文写作,既然是为了让学生顺利通过考试能得高分就行了,我们大可以用最高效最简单的方法啊。我找到主管,表达了我的观点,我说写作不必以“基础班—强化班—冲刺班”的形式安排那么多节课,我说只需要8-10个课时就能让考生得高分了,8-10个课时都用来教他们怎么写模板背模板,只需要用足够丰富的语法结构和最新的语料就可以,而不是花大量的课时教学生怎么写定语从句怎么写独立主格结构怎么写倒装句等等,我说他们不需要会写所有的定语从句,相反,他们只需要写两三个定语从句。
我的想法很简单,既然不考察真正的写作能力,既然能以“块”的形式去教,那么就应该把考生的工作量降到最低。
主管很诧异地看着我,我知道他的意思,他应该觉得我是傻X,因为一方面课程架构根本不是我一个底层讲师能决定的,也不是他能决定的,另外XDF老师的收入来源就是课时费,没有老师不想要课时费的,所有老师都巴不得给自己多排几节课,而只有我,竟然要求削减课时。但是主管还是说他考虑考虑,过段时间给我答复。
没多久,主管组织了一场在总部南楼的教师模拟考试,这次我有备而来,带上了我自己考研时整理的模板和用模板套写的历年真题范文,一沓A4纸,考完试我把模板给主管看,他看了一眼显然眼睛亮了一下,问我是我试讲的时候的作文思路是吧,我说是。当时进公司第二轮试讲是他面试的我,我讲的就是这个作文备考思路,他对我有知遇之恩。紧接着他又皱眉头,说你这个现在拿出来太早了,等冲刺课的时候考生都快急死的时候拿出来,你好好做PPT,到时候有可能给你排个抢分班。我沉默不语。
这次和主管谈完后不了了之,因为集团一直强调标准化,课程设置都是统一安排的,不会因为我一个小讲师而有什么变化,我也没有做PPT。但是,我到后期的时候越来越痛苦。我看着那些学生们,他们交了大几千上万的学费,早起挤地铁来上课,我明知道考研写作是那么地简单,却要因为课时要求把一些简单的问题复杂化。讲的东西对考研有帮助吗,肯定是有的,但是不是我心里我手中的那把利器。
又这么耗了一段时间,我,终于,离职了。
离职之后我第一件想做的事就是把材料开发出来,期间自己研究生开学,意识到之所以考研英语写作不注重真正意义上的写作,是因为95%的国内研究生不需要用英文写作,那少量的5%的需要用英文撰写学术文章的研究生,考研英语写作对他们来说没有任何障碍。意识到这一点,我释然了,考研英语写作确实不用在意内容。
在我准备做一份专门应对考研英语写作的材料的时候,认识了我女朋友,本硕留学6年中她写了不少paper,对英文写作很有经验。当时她在一家基金公司上班,工作轻松稳定。
我怂恿她辞职了,辞职后她开始接手我的事情,成立了一家小小的教育公司,研发的第一个材料就是考研英语作文模板。紧接着有一些留学回来的同学加入了我们,我在清华北大里也找到了几个愿意做这事儿的同学,我们一起大刀阔斧地开始了。一旦开始后,发现我们国内学生和海归的工作方式大相径庭,有很多差异也有一些冲突,我在很多时候扮演着一个调节者的角色。至于具体的工作方式的差异以及碰撞出来的火花,这都是非常有趣的事情,也让我个人收获良多。
举个例子,留学回来的同学由于写论文的经历对他们影响太深,他们在写模板前都会把每一个题目做大量的research,于是他们竟然找到了很多作文题目的命题来源,举两个例子,20_年和20_年的题目是这样的。
20_年是“乐观”,他们找到了著名的“半杯水实验”,这个实验就是用来测试一个人是乐观主义者还是悲观主义者的。
他们是以写学术论文的方式在写作文模板,举个例子,对20_年真题“直面困难的勇气”,于是他们开始大量的查资料,然后轻松摘出来两个句子:
根据这两个句子,他们改写出一个新的句子:
Additionally, courage is an action word that leads us to unleash our best potential, so as to discover new oceans by losing sight of the shore.
(此外,勇气并非让我们原地踏步,而是会引导我们发挥最大的潜能,从而告别眼前的海岸,发现新的海洋。)
这个句子足够地道,也达到了考研的难度,同时还足够的模板化,把勇气换成乐观、自信、坚持、合作等话题都能适用。
他们有很多发现,我也有很多收获,更多的时候他们都太过于理想主义,比如为了一个单词用得更加准确而花大量的时间做research,我总说可以了可以了,这个放在考研里已经足够拿高分了,这时候总是会遭到他们的鄙视。原来,他们真的是把模板在当论文在写,我是汗颜的,我可能在国内的应试系统里浸淫太久,所以总是希望到某一个度而停止。但是又突然想起我还是一个文艺青年时,深信木心先生的一句话:永远不要低看你的读者。
所以后来我就淡化成了一个把关者的角色,我考过研并且拿到了高分,也当过国内最大的考研机构的老师,改过千余份作文,知道什么样的作文能在考研里拿高分。而这群海归,写过大量paper,被各种native speaker教授折磨过,他们知道什么样的文章是一篇好文章。于是,我们一起共事,向彼此靠近一点,希望能开发出一些既能得高分也是好文章的模板。他们会写论文会查资料,但是我还是要坚持以马斯洛需求为切入点的思路,这个思路太重要了,不能放弃。
有时候我在想我们这么做的意义,因为似乎大部分考生其实是没有判断力的,大家背诵的就是“with the development of economy”且奉为至宝,因为作文书都太经典太稳定了,可能拿上5本作文书也就是翻来覆去那些东西,可以看看最著名的某满分范文写作宝典,10年前的范文仍然在。
为了每年都有更新,我们95%的时间都花在研发上,宣传只是我在知乎上写写答案,我们一致认为首先把东西做出来再说。女票相信,总有一天会有更多同学知道我们。
但是,我们还是要好好做这件事啊,两年过去了,已经累计有一万多名同学用过我们的材料,不乏上岸清北以及英语85+的。而我们的作文模板也集结成了一本书出版了,已初具体系。
前面写了,官方公布范文,名师引用范文,考生背诵范文,导致大家写出来的作文其实差别不大,最终的结果就是大家的作文成绩极为扁平化。所以我们的核心任务之一就是保证使用我们材料的同学保持在一个较少的数量,我们的策略是分版本且每个版本全国限量三千册,不同版本的模板文章不一样。三千和名师动辄几十上百万的销量比,放在全国是微不足道的。
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告别死记硬背二十篇的梦魇,科学高效备考考研英语作文~~
These two drawings, apparently, can be associated with two distinct habits. In the left one, there is a girl beside a desk, being absorbed in learning, with an idea in her mind —it is advisable to complete as early as possible. By contrast, in the right picture, a young guy sits leisurely in a sofa, telling himself, “I need not act until the deadline.” Finally, two Chinese characters can be noticed, which say “habit”.
Successful figures are usually characterized by their diverse merits, including diligence, perseverance and striving every day. However, in reality, a host of youngsters are accustomed to taking no action until the last day. This terrible habit is particularly worth concerning and as a matter of fact, their laziness has constituted an obstacle that hinders their personal growth and progress.
To my understanding, we are supposed to accomplish our assignments on time each day. This good habit can be likened to a journey, leading to success and a promising future. A case in point is myself. During the past year, as a senior who has been preparing for the national entrance examination for postgraduates, I have never postponed one day’s task until the next day. This excellent habit ensures my motivation for learning, brings me power and helps me accumulate knowledge every day.
To conclude, never put off till tomorrow what you can do today. Meanwhile, every one should bear in mind that a positive habit means a lifelong treasure.
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显然,这两幅图能联系到两种截然不同的习惯。左图中,书桌旁有一个女孩儿,专注学习的同时,大脑中还在想:尽早完成才放心。相反,右图中,一个男孩儿悠哉悠哉地坐在沙发上,告诉自己:不到最后不动手。最后,两个汉字能被注意到,其内容是:习惯。
成功人士的特征通常是他们的众多优点,包括勤奋、持之以恒和每天的`奋斗。然而,在现实生活中,很多年轻人习惯于直到最后一天才会有行动。这种糟糕的习惯很值得关注,而且事实上,他们的懒惰已经构成了一种障碍,阻碍着他们个人的成长和进步。
在我看来,我们应该每天按时完成当天的任务。这种好习惯能被比喻成一条路,通向成功和美好未来。一个典型例子就是我。在过去的这一年,作为一名一直在为考研做准备的大四学生,我从未将当天的任务拖延至第二天。这种好习惯确保了我学习的动力,带给我力量,帮助我每天积累知识。
总之,今日事今日毕。同时,每个人都应该牢记:一个好习惯是一生的财富。
part a
directions:
restrictions on the use of plastic bags have not been so successful in some regions. xxxwhite pollution xxxis still going on. write a letter to the editor(s) of your local newspaper to
give your opinions briefly and
make two or three suggestions
you should write about 100 words. do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. use xxxli mingxxx instead. you do not need to write the address.
范文:
dear editor:
i am writing this letter to draw your attention to the deteriorating situation of “white pollution” in some regions despite the implementation of restrictions on the use of plastic bags.
in order to put an effective stop to the wide spread of “white pollution”,i would like to make the following suggestions . firstly,the price of plastic bags should be further raised; secondly,special government departments should be established to supervise the making and using of plastic bags to ensure they are used when really needed.
i hope my suggestions would be of help and thank you for your attention.
20xx年的考研越来越近了。英语是每年考研必考的科目之一,得到了同学们足够的重视,而同学们在考研英语复习上也是花费了足够多的功夫。可是你有没有发现自己面对密密麻麻的英文学习起来吃力而且收效甚微呢,不是你不够努力,而是你学习英语的方法不对。那么今天就和大家来谈谈考研英语的学习方法。
一,单词的学习方法。
英语词汇是整个考研英语的基础,可以说你掌握的英语词汇越多,在20xx考研英语中你的优势就越大。然而,很多同学反映自己在英语词汇的学习上事倍功半。记忆单词,要把时间安排在自己记忆力最好的时候,比如早上,或是晚上睡觉前半个小时,注意每天给自己一定的任务,比如,20个单词,每天还要复习昨天的单词,经验表明,这种重复记忆的效果最好。不仅如此,还有把自己容易记错、混淆的单词整合起来,集中区分记忆,加深对每个单词的理解。坚持下来,持之以恒,你必会掌握丰富的考研英语词汇。
二,考研阅读的学习方法。
阅读理解,是整个考研英语的核心部分,这个部分占的分数比例也是最高的,所以,考研英语的学习重点应该放到阅读理解上来。前期,可以做一些英语阅读理解的专项训练,每天在自己规定的时间内完成多少篇英语短文,把自己放在考试的时间环境与心态下,提高自己阅读理解解题能力。而到了后期,则要着重做历年真题,尤其是最近十年的阅读理解,单独拿出来,反反复复的做透,相信你的阅读理解会取得一个质的提升。而在平常,空闲时间的时候,多读读时事热点的英语文章,对把握英语的出题思路,也是十分有好处的。
三,英语作文的复习方法。
英语考研作文是整个考研英语的点睛之笔,是对你整个英语学习的综合测试,是你英语能力的集中体现。考试中,也是拉高英语成绩的利器。老师的建议是多读读历年真题的优秀范文,反复体验,学习其中的写作方法,仔细琢磨某些句子的绝妙的用法,在你自己的英语作文中,就可以用到你学习的方法,来提高自己英语作文的亮点。对于自己中意的文章,最好能熟练的全文背诵,每种类型的文章都要能熟练掌握一篇。相信到考试的时候,你也可以写出引人赞叹的英语文章。
考研英语复习重在坚持,持之以恒的遵照自己的学习方法来学习英语,不可半途而废。也许在学习的过程中,充满了枯燥、痛苦,但是,要想在20xx考研中取得一个良好的考研英语成绩,这些都是必须要经历的`,没有捷径可走,你必须这样一步一个脚印的坚持下去,才能在风雨之后,看见彩虹。最后祝每一位学子都能考试自己理想的学校。
This bar chart indicates different market shares of automobiles of three types of brand affiliations between 20_ and 20_.
In 20_,cars with Japanese brands topped the three types of vehicles,accounting for 35% of the total market. What follows is the cars with Chinese brands,hitting 25% of the auto market,with the share of American brand bottomed out at 15%. In 20_,some developments are noticeable in that the cars with the largest share became those of Chinese brands,which occupied roughly 32% of the market,while cars with Japanese and American brands took 25% and 15% of the whole market respectively.
It is observed that between 20_ and 20_,cars of Chinese and Japanese brands took turns to be the in terms of market share while those with American brands ranked the last in both years. And the share of Chinese-brand cars witnessed a mild increase and that of the Japanese-brand cars saw a moderate decrease,while the American-brand cars stayed the same.
From this graph,we can come to the safe conclusion that the Chinese automakers are doing a good job in outcompeting their Japanese and American counterparts in 20_,but the gap is not so significant and if no efforts were made from the part of the Chinese auto industry,the distribution map might be rewritten in the future.
Dear my friend,
With the development of our society and economy, the number of vehicles in our city is soaring, which not only results in heavy traffic congestion and air pollution, but also brings much inconvenience to us. Everyone need desirable living environment, and it’s imperative for us to get moving to make us live better now.
Seeing that the more and more private cars is the main cause of such problems, the shift from you private cars to the public transport, such as the bus and subway, is the most effective means to ease the troublesome situation. So, let’s make our joint efforts to build a better city.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
internet is becoming more and more popular in the world. as is shown in the pictures, two persons are sitting in front of their own computer in different places. they seem to be very happy owing to the accession to internet. we can see clearly that the left fellow(guy) types a message and sends it to the right one, the message says:”david, would you have a coffee tonight?” the right one receives it and quickly replys:”sure,where?”what a convenient tool of internet is! with the rapid development of high technologies and economy, people will get more and more benefits from the use of internet.(or: people will benefit a lot from internet)
there is no denying that computer network is an indication of social civilazation and progress. internet is an information pool , people can search anything they want by typing the key words. for eample, someone wants to know the great wall of china, what he/she need to do is only to open an internet eporer and type the words:” the great wall” and search it, then he/she can get so many relevant links. what’s more, people can purchase their favorite goods through the internet instead of going shopping in chaotic streets. last but not least, people also can make full use of internet to study online .
from the analysis made above, we can come to (or reach)a conclusion that we should make the best use of internet, which can brings us a great deal of benefits. as a citizen of china we should study hard. only in this way can we have a brighter future and make our country flourishing(or: prosperous).
in the late 1960s, many people in north america turned their attention to environmental problems, and new steel-and-glass skyscrapers were widely criticized. ecologists pointed out that a cluster of tall buildings in a city often overburdens public transportation and parking lot capacities.
skyscrapers are also lavish consumers, and wasters, of electric power. in one recent year, the addition of 17 million square feet of skyscraper office space in new york city raised the peak daily demand for electricity by , 000 kilowatts-enough to supply the entire city of albany, new york, for a day.
glass-walled skyscrapers can be especially wasteful. the heat loss (or gain)through a wall of half-inch plate glass is more than ten times that through a typical masonry wall filled with insulation board. to lessen the strain on heating and air-conditioning equipment, builders of skyscrapers have begun to use double-glazed panels of glass, and reflective glasses coated with silver or gold mirror films that reduce glare as well as heat gain. however, mirror-walled skyscrapers raise the temperature of the surrounding air and affect neighboring buildings.
skyscrapers put a severe strain on a citys sanitation facilities, too. if fully occupied, the two world trade center towers in new york city would alone generate million gallons of raw sewage each year-as much as a city the size of stanford, connecticut , which has a population of more than 109, 000.
The Significance of the Immaterial Culture Heritage Education in Improving University Students’ National Spirit
Immaterial culture heritage refers to various forms of traditional culture including traditional performance, folk activities, and a lot of national ceremony and celebration, which is close related to the life of common people and passed on from generation to generation. Against the background that China’s traditional culture is facing an unprecedented challenge propelled by and modernization, it’s imperative to educate graduates with China’s immaterial culture heritage to strengthen their national spirit and national identity. Firstly, being a part of the conveyors of immaterial culture heritage, university students will naturally be proud of their nationality. Secondly, such education can motivate them to love their history, culture motherland and compatriots. Finally, university students can bring innovative spirit into the process of learning and strengthen their national spirit in practice.
From the picture above,we can see a spical xxxhotpotxxx,which contains many unique ingredients,stand for xxxLAO SHExxx,xxxKONG FUxxx,xxxDecompostionxxx and some things to that the bottom of the picture,a sentence stands there extremely prominent,which can be brielf interpreted by this way:culture xxxhotpotxxx is not only good tasting but also strongly good for one`s health. A bit exggerating picture is,however,through careful observation,we may discover that behind this strange senario,what the cartoonist intends to show us is extremely obvious:the significance of integration between Chinese culture and other countries` culture.
With the implementation of the China`s reform and opening up,an emerging tendency is that more and more foriegners are getting fascinated with our Chinese come to China to learn Chinese language,taste delicious Chinese foods,make friends with Chinese people,and these make them pretty comfortable and the same time,however,this phenomenon also stirred a heated dated in our society,so,how to render the other countries` culture be more compatible with our Chinese culture has caused wide public concern.
As far as I am concerned,before giving my opinion I think we should take closely look at the culture`s function should be more aware of that culture integration not only benefits to our making a further development but exerts a great contribution to the world peace.
王江涛《考研英语高分写作》、潘赟《九步搞定考研英语高分作文》、何凯文《这才是写作高分攻略》
01王江涛《考研英语高分写作》
适用人群:《考研英语高分写作》销量和口碑都很不错,考研备考冲刺阶段去图书馆逛一圈,几乎人手一本的红皮书,书确实是本好书。
优点:作文话题归类全面,一目了然,有大量优质的范文,是个不错的语料库,适合用来积累一些精华句。
缺点:①背诵需要投入大把时间、大量精力,
②其次可能就是因为人手一本,可能考场上出来的“模板”都是差不多的了
总结:建议结合王江涛的这边作文书,后期结合这些积累好的句子还是整理一个属于自己的模板,自己的!!! 如果不确定自己整理出来的模板是否准确,可以找擅长英语的老师或者小伙伴帮你把关一下呢~ 千万不要把江涛大佬的原封不动的照搬过来,你不疲劳,阅卷老师也会疲劳的。
02潘赟《九步搞定考研英语高分作文》
缺点:
“非模板流”四个大字就表明了这种方法需要你花很多时间去练习才能掌握,对新手小白不太友好
书中介绍了很多写作方法,例如第二段的因果分析法、对立观点分析法等,这种意识形态层次的理论,从终生学习的角度来看,掌握好了绝对益处多多,但对于应试来说,性价比较低
适用人群:写作小白,不知道作文每段应该写什么,可以买来看一看,学习一下这种 “九宫格”的写作框架,明确自己的写作思路。语料库不如《考研英语高分写作》丰富,可以两本书结合着来看。
03何凯文《这才是写作高分攻略》
优点
何凯文这本书里主要讲到作文结构怎么写,以下是我根据书里内容总结得出的框架结构胶,大家可以参考一下。
第一段:①总体描述→②细节描述→③点明主旨
第二段:④开头承接→⑤原因分析→⑥总结论证
第三段:⑦引出结论→⑧具体措施→⑨畅想未来
书中还讲如何把其中的一些词语和句子转化成更高级的词汇和句子,可操作性比较强。
缺点:
尤其是何凯文讲到可以通过评价主题的利弊,利用平行展开法来论述第二段,可以用来拓展写作思路,构建作文框架。
作文书里很多句子针对性较强,不可灵活运用到其他作文之中。词汇语句,质量参差不齐,不如《考研英语高分写作》中的句子高级。
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The picture above presents to us a soothing scene that a seriously sick old man is on a young man’s back, who volunteer to send him to the hospital. The young guy is running and sweating, saying that “Grandpa, let me take you to the hospital”. It seems that they are relatives, but the dialogue between them reminds us that they barely know each other before.
The purpose of the picture is to eulogize the practice of selfless offering help to those in need, and to call on us to follow the man’s example. Unfortunately, the reality about the good deeds seems to be a little paradoxical and a bit worrisome. It’s not difficult to find in the TV programmes and newspapers that many people announce that they will render assistance without taking any reward if seeing someone in need. When asked why, they may answer: “it’s an acknowledged virtue that should be preserved.” However, it’s also not difficult to find in today’s society fueled by money and self-interest that many people pursue their fame and wealth in the name of devotion, not to mention the ruthless passers-by who turn a blind eye to Wang Yue, a two-year-old girl who has just suffered a hit-and-run accident. The status quo arouses our puzzlement and worry about the discrepancy between intention and action.
In my opinion, a harmonious society is based on sound and mutual-trusting relationships among common folk, and such relationships depend on our practice of mutual aid. To promote the virtue, what’s the most important is that school education should help children establish a notion of offering favors to each other, and should urge them to put the spirit conveyed in the picture into practice. Accordingly, we should bear in mind that only when mutual aid becomes a habit shared by all Chinese, especially the youngsters, can we have a better place to live in.
(According to a survey conducted by Chinese Academy of Social Sciences, a high proportion of people polled (about 80%) hold the opinion that they will render assistance without taking any reward if seeing someone in need.)
(According to a report of Nan Fang Daily last year, a high proportion of people interviewed (about 80%) hold the opinion that they will render assistance without taking any reward if seeing someone in need.)
Dear Lily,
Last week, you said you propose to do a part-time job in the coming summer vacation. And now, here is a surprise for you.
After having my dinner this noon, I found a notice posted on the billboard that a private English tutor is needed to guide the advertiser’s daughter though GRE. I strongly recommended it to you, because I know you took and passed the test last year. This experience certainly has equipped you with the skills necessary to get through the test, not to mention your acknowledged proficient mastery of English. Incidentally, the reward seems considerably handsome according to the notice. In short, I think no other part-time jobs will be better than this, and I hope you can take this opening into consideration.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
How concise but thought-provoking the picture is! What is clearly depicted in the picture is that a boy,sitting in front of a computer, is selecting courses through the system of selecting courses, who takes a considerable number of factors into consideration ,which include the emphasis of innovation, the updating of knowledge and the level of difficulty as well as the scoring, the qualified rate and burden of assignment. Apparently,it is how to make the best courses for college students that is what the author intends to convey to us.
It is not uncommon to find that with the development of society and economy,the competition is becoming increasingly intense and the updating of knowledge is getting quicker and some courses are easy to learn and get high scores,it may be out of addition ,it has been universally acknowledged that the awareness of innovation will not only be beneficial to our personal growth and success but also contribute to the development and progress of society and economy ,which is the most essential qualification that anyone who wants
to achieve success should ,the courses stressing innovation should be , the way to success is full of obstacles and hardships. Anyone who is eager to get successful must realize that there is no shortcut to success at all because all achievements come from laborious trial and effort. Accordingly ,young students are supposed to choose some courses with great difficulties to improve their abilities.
After what we have discussed above,we can reasonably come to the conclusion that whatever the prospect is,however difficult the situation is,we ,young students ,should have the courage to face difficulties ,be willing to absorb new knowledge and cultivate the consciousness of am strongly convinced that only by doing so,can our promising future be guaranteed.
This picture is really thought provoking. As is vividly shown in the above picture, a book is lying above the grass and beautiful flowers. Beside it, there is a topic thatsays:“reading”. There is no denying that the picture implies that reading is of utmost importance to us.
Considering every aspect of it, we may attribute its significance to three factors. First of all, reading can broaden our horizon, widen our knowledge and eich our experience. Besides, reading is to success what water is to a fish. It can put us in a favorable position in the job market. Last but not least, if all of us are willing to read more and extensively, our society will be more progressive and prosperous.
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw a conclusion that reading is indispensable in our daily life. Therefore, the mass media, such as
television, Internet and radio, should try best to propaganda and advocate it. As
for ourselves, we should take practical actions to enhance our awareness of reading. Then, we have every reason to be convinced that we can have a bright future and a beautiful world.
For over a decade, the craze of Chinese college graduates taking qualifying examinations to become civil servants has remained unabated. An important proportion of graduates view civil service as their top priority in job selection and they spare no efforts in preparing for those examinations, sometimes years before their graduation.
To some extent, this craze is a modern revival of the ancient notion that “those who excel in academics end up in officialdom.” In the present-day China, however, there are complicated reasons underlying this phenomenon. The jobs in sectors other than civil service are insecure and unstable, and employees have to work under greater stress faced with growing competitions in the workplace and the industry. Some government departments are related to monopolized industries and civil servants can enjoy unusually high salaries and welfare benefits. Finally, government officials are usually regarded as occupying the highest rung of the social hierarchy and a student who succeeds in becoming government official is considered the pride of the family, adding prestige and glory to the entire clan.
For all the apparent attractions of the officialdom, the craze of entering the civil service is a distorted one. In the United States, truly ambitious students enter the industry instead of civil departments, where they apply their individual initiative to achieve personal success. It has already been pointed out that, with so many best minds of the nation fighting their way into the civil sectors, the consequences are catastrophic. The civil servants system, with its inherent bureaucracy and rigid rules, would inevitably turn the otherwise energetic and aggressive young people into docile followers of their superiors’ instructions and dutiful but mediocre implementers of executive orders. This will considerably undermine the vitality of a whole generation and the competitiveness of the entire country in the international arena. All forms of craze are accompanied by elements of irrationality and abnormality and, the sooner this craze vanishes, the better.
The photos show two big fans of Beckham—a British football star. One writes the star’s name on his face and the other is having his hair made an expensive Beckham style.
From them, we can vividly sense the enthusiasm of hero worship, which is an ordinary phenomenon in modern society. As a matter of fact, with mass media and multi’ culture fast developing, hero worship covers an increasingly large scope. People from all walks of life, usually if they are successful, outstanding or popular, may be admired by others.
Hero worship is not absolutely right or wrong. It depends on what the worshipper does for his idol. If handled appropriately, hero worship may stimulate the positive aspects in us, such as passion for life, motivation for work and noble values. Learning from our idols we can gain enlightenment, encouragement and qualities that we need when we strive for a career. By loving them, we can add color to our life and explore a larger range of social experiences.
Dear Editor:
I am writing this letter to draw your attention to the deteriorating situation of “white pollution” in some regions despite the implementation of restrictions on the use of plastic bags.
In order to put an effective stop to the wide spread of “white pollution”, I would like to make the following suggestions . Firstly, the price of plastic bags should be further raised; Secondly , special government departments should be established to supervise the making and using of plastic bags to ensure they are used when really needed.
I hope my suggestions would be of help and thank you for your attention.
【英语考研必背范文3】
Directions:
Write a letter to your university library, making suggestions for improving its service.
You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead. Do not write the address. (10 points)
the prevalence of pressure phenomenon has concerned a multitude of individuals from four corners of the world. many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that pressure harm characters mind grossly. for my part, governments are supposed to spare no effort to solve this multiple problem. pressure, which looks hard to get rid of, can be relieved through a variety of methods.
as to me, i choose happiness over depression when i face trying circumstance causing great tension. i am a web surfer and internet eerts a tremendous fascination on a great number of people, with no eception to me. in all websites, i warm to diandian best. my introduction to diandian, which is an ecellent forum, came from a friend’s recommendation. the night i got my first taste on diandian was unforgettable. in diandian, mr. ding, who is an enthusiastic and superecellent teacher, will help you asking any english questions to him. furthermore, you can freely epress views and enjoy classic music in it. in short, diandian forum eceedingly appeals to me. so it should come as no surprise that i indulged myself in diandian as soon as i have web access on it. as yet, diandian, under mr. ding guidance, has become the best english forum in its own right and the potential of diandian is bound to be ever greater.
some fear a circumstance with so many pressures. however, i think not because diandian will accompany me on hard learning journey. as to myself, surfing on diandian forum is the best way relieving pressure.
If you could change one important thing about your hometown, what would you change? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.
If I could change one thing about my hometown, I think it would be the fact that there's no sense of community here. People don't feel connected, they don't look out for each other, and they don't get to know their neighbors.
People come and go a lot here. They change jobs frequently and move on. This means that they don't put down roots in the community. They don't join community organizations and they're not willing to get involved in trying to improve the quality of life. If someone has a petition to put in a new street light, she has a very hard time getting a lot of people to sign. They don't feel it has anything to do with them. They don't get involved in improving the schools because they don't think the quality of education is important to their lives. They don't see the connection between themselves and the rest of their community.
People don't try to support others around them. They don't keep a friendly eyes on their children, or check in on older folks if they
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