分析英语高分作文范文共49篇

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分析英语高分作文范文 第一篇

Recently, more and more attention has been paid to the phenomenon that many people participate in talent shows / more and more people shop online. We can easily recognize its advantages. First of all, we can see its advantages.

In addition, last but not least, all the advantages mentioned above. In my opinion, for this phenomenon, if we do not take into account the second point mentioned above, its negative effects will far exceed my understanding. We'd better make full use of the advantages while minimizing the negative effects ring.

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分析英语高分作文范文 第二篇

三 考查another, the other, others, the others的用法

[考点解读]

●another泛指三个或三个以上的人或物中不确定的另一个,如例19?another还可以作形容词,表示“另一个的”

●the other指已知的两个人或物中的另一个

●others和“other + 名词”均泛指“别的人或物”

●the others指“一定范围内其余的人或物”,如例23?如果被指代的名词是不可数名词,则用the rest替代,

四 考查(a) little, (a) few, some, any的用法

[考点解读]

●few和little可用作代词和形容词?few和a few可以修饰或代替可数名词复数?few有否定含义, a few有肯定含义, little和a little可以修饰或代替不可数名词?little有否定含义, a little含肯定含义,?

●some和any表示“一些”,可用作代词和形容词?some用于肯定句,如例31; any用于否定句?疑问句和条件句中, some也可用于疑问句,如例32和例33; any也可用于肯定陈述句中,表示“任何一个”。

分析英语高分作文范文 第三篇

After several days of so-called mock tests, I think I will die very well. I think I am not the only one who thinks that Fasis will be defeated in the world in a few years. Putin held an international conference today to remind the world of this.

But in my opinion, he is only participating in some consultation activities. He does not really regret the loss caused by Fasis, but he just wants to improve Russia Ross's economic situation and international status, for example, fortunately, I still know what's going on outside the house. I'm moving my apartment tomorrow.

It's next to my school, but there's no Internet connection. I think I'll have to keep silent for the next week. Everyone emphasizes it to me in order to get high marks in the coming national college entrance examination It's a turning point in my life, and my mother has been mumbling to herself.

I think it's time for me to study hard. If I'm a person who only depends on the examination or a few days' examination, how can I become an outstanding person? You may say that I'm very cynical, but how can the examination affect one's life? Or can you imagine that God will curse it.

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分析英语高分作文范文 第四篇

With the wide spread of hamburger Restaurant, especially the McDonald and KFC, our children are exposed to these kinds of high calorie , some people worry that if our children eat too much hamburgers, then they would gain weight quite easily. Some people argue that hamburgers do no bad to children’s health. Standing on my point of view, I suggest that children shouldn't eat hamburgers. Reasons are listed below.

First of all, eating hamburgers leads to fat. It is known to all that all the hamburgers are junk food containing high calorie and high fat while low nutrition. If our children eat them often, then they will be gaining weight easily. What’s worse, they will be dystrophic so as to affect body development.

Secondly, eating hamburgers often will cause cancer. Most hamburgers are fried food. It is investigated that if we eat fried food often, then we will be easy to get cancer.

All in all, though hamburgers are popular around the world, they are classified into the circle of junk food because it will lead to fat and even cause cancer if our children eat too many. So, we shouldn’t take our children to eat hamburgers.

分析英语高分作文范文 第五篇

作文题目

假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文,来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息,写信介绍住房的情况,并告知住房面积为25平方米,月租500元。

注意:1、词数:100左右;2、参考词汇:房租―Tent(n.).

作品一:

I’m very happy to receive your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I’ll try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.

Hope you will come here soon!

All the best!

Yours,

Li Hua

满分理由

作品二:

Dear Bob,

Welcome to China! You wrote to me to find a place for you.

I have found an apartment on Fangcao Street near Jianxin Chinese School. It is on the third floor and there’re three rooms in it: a bedroom, a kitchen, and a bathroom. There is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair in the bedroom. The house is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan per month.

Also from this house you can get to your school easily. Just take the bus at the bus-stop in front of the building. It is only one stop. At last, will you please tell me the time you arrive? Then I’U be able to meet you at the airport,see you.

Best wishes !

Yours,

Li Hua

满分理由

本文格式正确,内容完整,表述清楚,衔接紧密流畅,时态语态使用准确,特别是结尾末段适度的发挥,既充实了内容,又符合逻辑,成为本文与众不同的亮点。

作品三:

Dear Bob,

How are you these days?

I’m so glad to know that you’ll come to our city to learn Chinese. You asked me to find a place for you. Now I’ve found one which I think is pretty good. The place is on Fang Cao Street which is near the bus stop. It’s just one stop away from Jianxin Chinese School.

There are three rooms, a kitchen, a bathroom and a bedroom. Though it is not very big, only 25 square metres, I think it is suitable. By the way, the rent is 500 yuan per month. I hope you’ll like it. If not, I’ll try to find another place for you.

Yours,

Li Hua

满分理由

本文内在逻辑性很强,由远及近。由外及内,层次分明,错落有致。同时让步状语从句运用得恰到好处,很出彩,再则结构完整,从开头的问候语到结尾都很完备。

作品四:

Dear Bob,

I’m glad to hear from you.

Welcome to our city in september. I’ve found a suitable house for you.

The house is on Fang Cao Street, not far from the Jianxin Chinese School. If you take the bus, it is just one stop.

It is a flat on the third floor of a building. It has three rooms, a living-room, a bathroom and a kitchen. You can cook yourself. The mirror, the basin and the bathtub are very convenient for you. In the living-room, there is a bed, a sofa and a desk with chair. The desk is next to the window. It will be good for study. The total size is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan a month.

Will you be satisfied with this flat, or you want another one? Just let me know. I’ll try my best to help you.

Yours,

Li Hua

满分理由

本文内容详实,描述具体细腻,用词适当准确,如“suitable house”、“not far from’’等,另外文中的选择疑问句也很有新意。

分析英语高分作文范文 第六篇

In the picture, there stands a tree full of fruit on one side of the stream. Across the stream, a man is trying to reach out on the edge of the band for the fruit with a net attached to a pole. Not far away there is a bridge that can lead him to the tree for more fruit.

The message conveyed in the picture is clear. In pursuing a dream, we might focus on only one say of making it come true, forgetting that there may be alternatives. As indicated in the picture, if the man is willing to look for other possibilities, he can find a better and more rewarding way to achieve his goal. All he has to do is to turn around, cross the bridge and walk to the tree.

分析英语高分作文范文 第七篇

一、使用词典及注重阅读

词典是学习一门语言的工具,很多学生学英语没有经常查英语词典的习惯,这是不良的学习习惯,应该多多使用词典。有的语言学家认为甚至看一个学生使用什么样的词典就可以判断的的学习水平。我认为首选的应该是经济实惠的英汉双解词典,如:《郎文英汉双解活用词典》(LONGMAN ACTIVE STUDY ENGLISH-CHINESE DICTIONARY)(上海译文出版社,32元),然后再过度到使用英英词典。当然,查名词通常需要借助汉英词典。在查英语词典的时候我们还应该学习的是词语的搭配。如:because of后只能接名词词组(做宾语),because后只能接表示原因的从句。学习单词时请记住英语单词的词性。如bribe可以是名词,也可以作为动词来使用。如:The bank teller bribed his banker.(银行出纳员贿赂他的上司) The banker was charged with taking bribes from the bank teller.(银行经理被指控接受出纳员的贿赂)The government fights against the bribery(政府打击行贿受贿)。学习词的时候一般情况下不要孤立地学,否则容易忘记。尽量作到“词不离句,句不离文。”有的学生写作文的时候从英语词典里找到他们需要的词。这并不是明智的学习英语写作的方法。或者根据自己的汉语思维将要表达的意思写出来,写出来的英语往往给人感觉非常蹩脚而不自然。前提是他在写作文以前到没有大量的阅读中去吸取知识的养分,培养语感,就象蜜蜂不采蜜就酿不出蜜的道理一样。

二、善用词汇提高写作水平

句子是由词组合而成的。有的学生在写英语作文的时候,喜欢用生僻的词,认为这样可以得到高分。我觉得这似乎有些“为赋新诗强说愁”的味道。如I deem(我想),而不用I think.一位美国的心理学博士Lois Gail认为:deem通常不可以取代 think. 因为 deem 是英语中非常正式的说法,包含了判断和权威。她用英语讲解:In current English, “deem” is very formal and almost connotes judgment and is not commonly used as a substitute for “think.” 用什么样的词要分场合。如果是一个非常庄严肃穆的场合,可以用deem, 但如果表达个人对某一问题的看法,还是要用think合情理些。

有的学生写作文的时候反复用一个词组,会给人枯燥的感觉。如:Every morning, I get up early, then go to do some sports. Doing sports makes me healthy and smart.作文中的用法都是正确的,但更好的则是:Every morning, I get up early to play basketball or go some jogging, which makes me healthy and energetic. 中国学生在英语作文中喜欢用的一个英语表达法do some sports(从事体育运动),是从中学英语课本学来的。可是在现代英语里,这个表达法几乎没有人使用了。如果从事体育运动,就具体表达成:play basketball, play football.等等。

三、善用句型提高写作水平

写作文首先是从写正确的句子开始。一个句子从语法上讲是指由大写字母开始,由名词,动词或词组构成的一个陈述句,祈使句,惊叹句和疑问句。由句号,疑问号或惊叹号来结束。表示一个意思讲完了,它表示停顿和呼吸。音乐的乐谱讲“乐句,”一个乐句弹奏完了要停顿一下是一样的道理。 要注意的是很多(包括美国)学生在写英语作文的时候,不知道英语的句号要用在引号前面。正确的例句如:She said, “You are a good girl.”这一细节请注意。有的学生写英语作文喜欢用复合句,认为这样不容易出错。其实,很多学生连简单的英语句子都不能保证写对的时候,就写出来些错误的复合句。这就象一个小孩还没有学会走路就开始学跑步,肯定是要跌跤的。我认识一位美国的高中英语教师,美国文学学士Temple Sterling 女士认为将英语作为外语来学习的学生还是先学会使用简单句然后再学习复合句也不迟。

(一)尽量使用基本句型

英语句子结构的特点是:相对于德语,法语,俄语,英语“比较简单,自然,合乎逻辑思维的自然顺序。”(李赋宁《英语学习经验谈》147页)。要写好英语作文首先要掌握基本的英语句型:英语千变万化的句子归根到底都离不开以下这五个基本的句型。(《大学英语》:语法与练习 第一册第1页)通常情况下,一个句子的关键在于动词。有人提出的观点是:动词是一个句子的灵魂。

1. Mary is a (主——动——主补)

2. The flowers are blooming. SV (主——动)

3. I have a pen. SVO(主——动——宾)

4. The mother will buy the girl a bike. SVOi (间接宾语)Od(直接宾语) (主——动——间宾——直宾)

5. The parents consider the child a genius. SVOCo (主——动——宾——宾补)

英语中的系表结构也很常用。如:You look 与happy构成系表结构。

(二)活用英语连词

英语里有些短语就象水泥一样把整个段落的构连架连接起来。如:表示结果:as a result, consequently, therefore, etc. in contrast, however, etc. 递进:furthermore, in addition, etc. 总结:in a word, in brief, in short, etc. 转折:but, in spite of, etc. 原因:because, because of, 让步:though

(三)学会使用平行结构

平行结构相当于汉语里的排比结构,它是英美人喜欢使用的一种语言结构,即将相类似的词或者动词结构放在一起,这样不容易出错,并且排列整齐,营造出一种气势。根据一个美国老师的观点,如果一个中国人向英国或是美国的公司用写英语求职信,会使用平行结构的人将会被优先录用。

平行结构例句1,Mary is a kind, cute, clever, happy girl.

例2,Every morning, after I get up, I get dressed, make bed,brush my teeth, wash my face, have breakfast and go to school.(有下划线部分为平行结构。)

(四)运用语气加强情感

英语里有一些缩写,如I#39;m , he#39;s , she#39;s, I#39;ve, I don#39;t 等等,you#39;re 的读音与your 相同。所有的这些缩写形式都是英语里不正式的用法和语气。在正式语体中,如果给美国总统写信,就不可以用缩写形式,而必须要用 I am, You are, He is 等等。用He is hard-working 比he works hard.语气弱。(be 结构比动词的气弱要弱。)long for语气很强,一般只能在恋人之间使用。如英语一首情歌歌词:I am longing for you.

四、段落层次分明

一个典型的英语段落往往先点明主题思想,即(topic sentence),然后再对该主题加以分析,论证,即(support),最后是一个总结性的句子,即(conclusion)。(姚君伟《跨文化语境下的外语教学》188页)

例:(主题句:)Competition is common in every field of life.(展开部分:)(1:) For example, the Olympic Games is the most famous competition in the world. (2:)In the four hundred meter swimming race, the swimmers plunge into the water at the signal.( 3:)Each swings his or her arms and legs and tries his or her best to be the first. (4:)Also there is the competition for jobs, for promotion, for customers, and so on. (总结:)We can say ,in a certain sense, competition stimulating people#39;s interest in work helps society to go forward.

如果 将段落的结构再扩展,就成为一篇文章的结构。美式写作结构的特点是:段落层次分明,观点阐述平行推进,直线思维,逻辑性强,行文如流水,简洁明了。(崔晓霞《大学英语作文应试章法》第7页)

五、运用口语培养英语思维

提高英语的作文可以从训练英语口语开始,口语是文字的先锋。“口头语言早在人类社会形成之初就已出现,至尽已经存在了几百万年,而书面文字的历史只有短短几千年。”(胡壮麟《语言学简明教程》133页)英国著名的英语教学专家格兰特在20xx年3月20日的`英语《二十一世纪报》增刊上谈到口语的提高可以促进英语作文水平。他在文中指出:“Oral skills are important both in themselves, and also because they help one to prepare for writing. The best oral activities often lead to written activities that benefit from them.” 还应该多与英美人交流,在实际的生活中了解他们的语言习惯与思维习惯,还可以学到书本上学不到的知识。

思维是写作的前提条件。著名语言学家王力先生曾说“中国的语言是人制的,西洋的语言是法制的。”所以他们的语言逻辑性强,人情味淡;我们的语言逻辑性差,人情味强。如:1)我的祖母还健在。英语:My grandma is still alive(我的祖母还活着).我想只有通过大量的阅读才能培养良好的英语的思维和语感,克服来自母语的干扰。话题又回到阅读上来,读多了就自然培养英语思维,就可以不再受母语思维的干扰。“英语思维在写作中的好处是可以用英美人习惯的言语来表达思想。”

分析英语高分作文范文 第八篇

The table below shows the results of a survey of visitors to four categories of tourist attractions in the UK. The pie chart compares the number of tourists from four types of tourist attractions and five different theme parks. It is obvious that theme parks and museums / galleries are the two most popular types.

Among the tourist attractions of that year, the proportion of tourists received by the beach of Blackpool playground was the highest among theme parks. Looking at the information in detail, we can see that some of the tourists surveyed went to the theme park Garden, where people go to museums or art galleries. In contrast, only in the sample, wildlife parks and zoos are the least popular of the four types of tourist attractions, with only theme park visitors, but almost half of the respondents have been to the Alton tower of Blackpool leisure beach Towers was the second most popular amusement park, followed by Southport's pleasant land, and finally, chesington adventure world and Lego and Windsor welcomed the visitors respectively.

中文翻译:

下表显示了一项对英国四类旅游景点游客的调查结果。饼图比较了四类旅游景点和五个不同主题公园的游客人数,很明显主题公园和博物馆/画廊是最受欢迎的两种类型在当年的旅游景点中,布莱克浦游乐场海滩接待的游客比例在主题公园中是最高的 更详细地看信息,我们可以看到,被调查的游客中,有人去了主题公园,其中的人去了博物馆或美术馆。相比之下,只有样本中,野生动物园和动物园是四类旅游景点中最不受欢迎的,只有主题公园部分的游客,但几乎一半的受访者曾去过布莱克浦休闲海滩阿尔顿塔楼(Alton Towers)是第二大最受欢迎的游乐园,其次是Southport的Pleasureland,最后,切辛顿冒险世界和乐高和温莎分别对受访游客表示欢迎。

分析英语高分作文范文 第九篇

The seats in our school reading-room are not enough for all the students. Many people get there very early to xxxseizexxx a seat every day. So do I. One day a xxxspecialxxx thing happened to me. And I learned a lesson that I shall never forget.

It happened on a Wednesday morning last January, just before our final examation. I got to the reading-room very early to occupy a seat. I put a book on the desk and then went to have breakfast. But when I hurried back into the reading-room, I found someone was sitting on the seat which I had occupied in advance. I ran to him immediatly and shouted at him angrily, xxxGo away. It's my seat.xxx Everyone raised their eyes and stared at me unfriendly. My face turned red and I felt ashamed of myself. I took my book and fled helter-skelter before so many eyes.

I dared not go to the reading-room for several days. I learned a lesson in the reading-room. Since then I have been keeping the lesson in mind: To be polite to everyone.

分析英语高分作文范文 第十篇

形容词和副词

【考点分析】

1.形容词、副词的作用与位置;

①多个形容词作定语排列的顺序

②enough作修饰成分时的位置问题及形容词作后置定语

③形容词作伴随状语和原因状语

2.表语形容词的特点及连系动词+形容词作表语;

3.形容词、副词比较等级的用法;

①原级的用法

②比较级的用法

③最高级的用法

④形容词和副词前面使用冠词的情况

⑤由as/so组成的形容词或副词短语

⑥more /less than及其相关结构

4.容易混淆的形容词、副词的区别。

【知识点归纳】

形容词和副词是历年英语高考的重点。要复习好这一块知识点,考生不仅要掌握其基础知识,同时要牢记其中的重点和难点,也是高考的热点。

I.形容词、副词的作用与位置

1.形容词是用来修饰名词的,常被放在名词前作定语,或放在系动词后面作表语。而副词则用来修饰形容词、动词,其他副词或者句子,一般位于形容词之前,动词之后或句子之首。以下属几种情况,须牢记:

①几个并列的形容词作定语,其语序通常为:

限定语(The、A)+ 描绘性形容词 + size(大小)+ shape(形状)+ age(年龄、时间)+ color(颜色)+origin(国籍、来源)+material(材料)+ purpose(目的)+名词;

a heavy black Chinese steel umbrella,

the man’s first tow interesting little red French oil paitings

熟记口诀就可以顺利解题:限定描绘大长高,形状年龄和新老,颜色国籍跟材料,作用类别往后靠。

②形容词短语作定语,定语后置;

a language difficult to master,

a leaning tower about 180 feet high

This is a student worth of praise.

They will turn their motherland into a country, beautiful and modern.

③表语形容词(afraid、alike、alone、asleep、awake、alive等)作定语,定语后置;

a man alive:活着的人

有些表身体健康状况的形容词如well、faint、ill只作表语。sick既可作表语又可作定语,ill如作定语意为“bad”;

④形容词作定语修饰由不定代词one、no、any、some和every构成的复合词如anything、something等时,通常后置;

I have something important to tell you.

⑤enough、nearby修饰名词前置或后置,程度副词一般位于形容词、副词前面,enough修饰形容词、副词时,必须后置;

⑥else常用作疑问代词和不定代词的后置定语;

⑦几个副词并列作状语时,其顺序较灵活,但一般是:方式→地点→时间;

⑧频度副词如often、always、usually等在be动词后,行为动词前;

⑨副词作定语,定语后置;

The person there is waiting for you.

⑩复合形容词常用作定语,个别也可以作表语。

He was a 12-year-old boy.

He is good-natured.

复合形容词的构成:

▲形容词+名词-ed:kind-hearted好心的,white-haired白发的

▲形容词+形容词:red-hot炽热的,dark-blue深蓝的

▲形容词+现在分词:good-looking好看的,easy-going随和的

▲副词+现在分词:hard-working勤劳的,fast-moving快速转动的

▲副词+过去分词:hard-won得来不易的,newly-made新建的

▲名词+形容词:life-long终生的,world-famous世界闻名的

▲名词+现在分词:peace-loving爱好和平的,fun-loving爱开玩笑的

▲名词+过去分词:snow-covered白雪覆盖的,hand-made手工的

▲数词+名词 + ed:four-storeyed 4层楼的,three-legged 3条腿的

▲数词+名词(名词用单数):ten-year 的, two-man两人的

2.形容词作伴随状语和原因状语

He spent 7days in the wind and snow,cold and hungry.

他在风雪中度过了7天,又冷又饿。

She stared into the distance, speechless for a long time.

她盯着远处看,好长时间不讲话。

Afraid of being caught,the thief hid himself under a bed.

因为害怕被抓,这个小偷藏在床下面。

II.连系动词与形容词

象get,grow,become,feel,appear,prove ,look,keep,smell,taste,sound,go,turn,remain等这些动词既可以用作为实义动词又可以用作连系动词,因而要根据上下文语境判断究竟是什么性质的动动词才能正确解题。

请看下面这道选择题:

▲We don't care if a hunting dog smells_____,but we really don't want him to smell_____.

A. well; well B. bad; badly C. well; badly D. badly; bad

第一个“smell”是“闻起来”的意思,是连系动词,用形容词。第二个“smell”是实义动词,用副词来修饰;此外well作形容词是表示人身体好、气色好,用在此句中不行,只能作副词用。答案是B。句意是:“我们不在乎猎狗闻起来难闻,但是我们确实不希望它的嗅觉力差。

III.形容词、副词比较等级的用法

形容词、副词有三个等级:原级、比较级和最高级,其构成形式如下:

规则变化:单音节词和少数双音节词,加词尾-er,-est来构成比较级和最高级

构成法

比较级

最高级

一般单音节词未尾加-er,-est

tall

taller

tallest

以不发音的e结尾的单音词和少数以-le结尾的双音节词只加-r,-st

nice

nicer

nicest

以一个辅音字母结尾的闭音节单音节词,双写结尾的辅音字母,再加-er,-est

big

bigger

biggest

“以辅音字母+y”结尾的双音节词,改y为i,再加-er,-est

busy

busier

busiest

少数以-er,-ow结尾的双音节词未尾加-er,-est

clever

narrow

cleverer

narrower

cleverest

narrowest

其他双音节词和多音节词,在前面加more,most来构成比较级和最高级

important

easily

more important

more easily

most important

most easily

不规则变化

比较级

最高级

good/well

better

best

bad/ill

worse

worst

old

older/elder

oldest/eldest

much/many

more

most

little

less

least

far

farther/further

farthest/furthest

注意:many,old和far比较级及最高级用法的区别

①如果后接名词时,much more +不可数名词,many more +可数名词复数。

②old有两种比较级和最高级形式: older/oldest 和elder/eldest。elder,eldest只用于兄弟姐妹的长幼关系。

My elder brother is an engineer.

Mary is the eldest of the three sisters.

③far有两种比较级,farther,further..在英语中两者都可指距离。

在美语中,father表示距离,further表示进一步

I have nothing further to say.

分析英语高分作文范文 第十一篇

本周与同学们继续分享英语二图表作文的写作思路及语言,上周我们分析的是柱形图的写作思路和模板,这周我们继续进行表格的写作和模板的介绍,首先同学们要知道我们图表的写作是不同的图表有着不同的特点和写作的要点,而表格是近几年的考的只考过一次,但是作为重点考察的表格来说,同学们也要进行重点学习。表格体现的特点是数据的之间的差异,而这种写作的思路是要应用在文章中间得到体现的,那我们就来看一下针对于柱型图有什么写作的要点和写作的思路。首先我们一起来看一下20xx年的真题:

Directions: Write an essay based on the following table. In your writing, you should

1) describe the table, and

2) give your comments.

You should write at least 150 words.

Write your essay on ANSWER SHEET 2. (15 points)

20xx年的题目考察的还是类似的考察特点。拿到一个题目还是先要进行图片文字部分的阅读,本年的题目还是要求两个部分,同学们可以分为三段来进行写作:图画描述段、分析论证段和趋势预测段。首先第一段的写作思路遵循整体五句话的写作思路:直观评价、图表标题、主流趋势、最大变化和过渡句。首先直观评价是最简单的一句,可以说这是一个简洁又准确的表格等,同学们可以适当的更改自己的语言。第二句图表标题依然采用倒鱼钩的翻译方法,图表标题是某公司员工工作满意度调查,可以翻译为the job satisfaction of the employees in a certain company,主流趋势是表格的特点,即所有指数针对于同一个话题体现了不同的趋势,首先同一个话题是工作满意度,那所有指数是什么呢?我们可以看见这个表格体现的不同年龄段的员工对于工作满意度有不同的趋势或者态度,所以这句话可以说the employees at different ages show total different inclination towards the problem of job satisfaction。最大差异表现的数据中最有说服力最明显的数据,通过表格可以看出这个数据就是和, 在描述时描述的是该数据体现的意义。过渡句比较简单,直接说出上述现象值得我们更深一步的考虑即可。在第二段时注意分析上文最大差异产生的原因,这个图主要分析在40-50岁的员工中为什么员工满意度最低或者为什么不满意度最高的原因,可以从以下的角度进行解释:人到中年的职业发展前景并不是很好以及中年人有更多的责任,容易对工作不满意等等方面进行分析,注意将每句话写成整个的句子进行添加。最后一段进趋势预测,直接写这种趋势将会持续下去就可以了,那么基于以上思路,我们来看一下范文:

Here is a table chart, telling us an interesting phenomenon. There is no denying that the chart records the job satisfaction of the employees in a certain company, which successfully arouses our curiosity. As is clearly reflected by the chart, the employees at different ages show total different inclination towards the problem of job satisfaction. Especially, the employees in their forties show the most obvious inclination that 64% of them are dissatisfied with their jobs. Obviously, the inclinations, clearly reflected by the chart, should be given more consideration.

Theoretically, several reasons may trigger the trend that people in their forties show the most satisfaction, but for my part, the following two are of great importance. On the top of list is that the people face the heaviest burden of supporting children and aged people in their family. In addition, there is the other point that no one can ignore. It is universally admitted that they are not open-minded towards success like people over 50 years old.

Taking into account what has been discussed above, we may safely come to the conclusion that the current situation will continue in the forthcoming years. 上面就是整个真题的写作的思路和语言表达,考研不是一个人的旅程,在考研的漫漫长路上,中公名师常伴你左右!

分析英语高分作文范文 第十二篇

We have seen some famous movies, such as Harry Potter and Twight, both are hot sell novels. When we see the novels have been put into the screen, it is naturally that we will compare the original one and the adapted one, the latter is always being critical, I prefer to see the novels.

我们都看过了一些著名的电影,比如《哈利波特》和《暮光之城》,这两部都是热销的小说。当我们看到小说被放上屏幕的时候,很自然地,我们会拿原版和改编的版本来比较,改版的总是受到批评,我比较喜欢看小说。

The English novels are excellent, the first novel I saw was Twight, it is about a vampire named Edward and a human girl named Bella, they fall in love, but the different identities makes them hard to be together. When I read the story, I was so impressed, Bella’s inner voice is so strong that I imagine myself is her. While when I saw the movie, the plot happens so fast, Bella’s love is still strong, but for the audience, it is hard for them to understand. The long story is shorten, we have to finish the story in one and a half hour. The quick watch makes the audience hard to perceive the character’s inner world, so the strong feeling is weaker.

英语小说很好看,我看的第一部小说是《暮光之城》,这是关于一个叫爱德华的吸血鬼和一个人类女孩贝拉的故事,他们相爱了,但是身份的不同让他们很难在一起。当我读到小说时,我印象很深刻,贝拉内心的声音很强烈以至于我把自己当成了她。然而当我看到电影时,情节进行得很快,贝拉的爱依旧强烈,只是对于观众来说很难理解。长故事被缩短,我们不得不在一个半小时内看完。如此快速的观看让观众难以察觉到人物的内心世界,因此强烈的感情被淡化了。

So for me, I like to read novels, I can perceive the character’s emotion and be immerged in the novel world.

所以对于我来说,我喜欢看小说,我可以察觉到人物的感情,融进小说的世界。

分析英语高分作文范文 第十三篇

1. Scott Hahn, cofounder with Gregory of Rogan and Loomstate, which uses all-organic cotton, says hi 0 1. Scott Hahn, cofounder with Gregory of Rogan and Loomstate, which uses all-organic cotton, says high-quality sustainable materials can still be tough to find. (6月)

【分析】本句为复合句,主干为Scott Hahn says…。high-quality sustainable…find为says的宾语。which引导的非限制性定语从句which uses all-organic cotton修饰的是Rogan and Loomstate。cofounder with Gregory为Scott Hahn的同位语。

【译文】Scott Hahn与Gregory同为使用全有机棉的Rogan和Loomstate公司的创始人,他声称,高质量的可持续使用面料仍然很难寻觅到。

2. Most designers with existing labels are finding there aren’t comparable fabrics that can just replace what you’re doing and what your customers are used to,” he says. (206月)

【分析】本句为复合句,主干为Most designers…are finding…。there aren’t…used to为省略了that的宾语从句。that引导的定语从句that can just replace…修饰fabrics。what引导的两个宾语从句what you’re doing和what your customers are used to作replace的宾语。

【译文】他说,“大多数现有品牌设计师发现,并没有匹配的面料能代替你正用着的和顾客们已经适应的面料。”

3. Last year the influential trade show Designers & Agents stopped charging its participation fee for young green entrepreneurs (企业家) who attend its two springtime shows in Los Angeles and New York and gave special recognition to designers whose collections are at least 25% sustainable. (年6月)

【分析】本句为复合句,主干为… Designers & Agents stopped charging…and gave special recognition…。who引导的定语从句who attend its…York修饰entrepreneurs,whose引导的定语从句whose collections are…sustainable修饰designers。

【译文】去年,颇具影响力的Designers & Agents对参加其在洛杉矶和纽约举办的两次春季展览的年轻环保企业家们实行免费入场,同时给予那些作品中包括至少四分之一可持续产品的设计师们以特别表彰。

4. This week Wal-Mart is set to announce a major initiative aimed at helping cotton farmers go organ 0 4. This week Wal-Mart is set to announce a major initiative aimed at helping cotton farmers go organic: it will buy transitional (过渡型的) cotton at higher prices, thus helping to expand the supply of a key sustainable material. (20_年6月)

【分析】本句为复合句,主干为Wal-Mart is set to announce a… initiative。aimed…organic为后置定语,修饰initiative。冒号后的句子it will buy…prices即initiative的内容,相当于initiative的同位语从句。helping to…sustainable作伴随状语。

【译文】本周沃尔玛特打算宣布一大重要举措,旨在帮助种植棉花的农民走有机种植之路:它将以稍高价收购过渡型的棉花,以此帮助扩大一种主要的可持续使用面料的供应量。

5. Scientists have devised a way to determine roughly where a person has lived using a strand (缕) of hair, a technique that could help track the movements of criminal suspects or unidentified murder victims. (20_年6月)

【分析】本句为复合句,主干为Scientists have devised a way…。a technique为a way的同位语。where引导的宾语从句where…lived作determine的宾语。using…hair为现在分词作方式状语。that引导的定语从句that…victims修饰technique。

【译文】科学家已经设计出一个方法,凭借人的一缕头发便能大致确定某人曾经居住过的地点,这项技术可能能够帮助跟踪锁定犯罪嫌疑人或不明身份案件受害人的活动场所。

6. Todd Park, a local detective, said the method has helped him learn more about an unidentified woman whose skeleton was found near Great Salt Lake. (20_年6月)

【分析】本句为复合句,主干为Todd Park said…。a local detective为Todd Park的同位语。the method has…为省略了引导词that的宾语从句,该宾语从句中又包含一个由whose引导的定语从句whose skeleton…Lake,修饰的是woman。

【译文】当地的侦探Todd Park说这个方法帮助他了解到关于一具在大盐湖附近发现的不明身份女尸骸的更多信息。

7. He had a perfect résumé and gave good responses to her questions, but the fact that 07. He had a perfect résumé and gave good responses to her questions, but the fact that he never looked her in the eye said “untrustworthy,” so she decided to offer the job to her second choice. (20_年6月)

【分析】本句为复合句,主干为He had a…résumé and gave…responses, but the fact…said untrustworthy…so she decided…。从句that he never looked her in the eye为the fact的同位语。and连接He的两个谓宾,but表转折,so则表结果。

【译文】这位应试者的履历非常完美,并且对她的问题回答得不错,但是,他不敢正视她这一事实意味着“不值得信赖”,因此她决定把工作留给第二个候选人。

8. When we begin to question our assumptions and challenge what we think we have learned from our past, from the media, peers, family, friends, etc., we begin to realize that some of our conclusions are flawed (有缺陷的) or contrary to our fundamental values. (20_年6月)

【分析】本句为复合句,主句为we begin to realize…,从句为When引导的时间状语从句When we…etc.。主句中包括一个由that引导的宾语从句that some…values,作realize的宾语。从句中包含了一个由what引导的宾语从句what we think,作challenge的宾语;而think后又带了一个省略引导词的宾语从句we have learned from…etc.。

【译文】当我们开始质疑自己的假设,并且向那些我们认为是从我们的过去、媒体、同辈、家人、朋友等那里学到的东西发出挑战的时候,我们就开始意识到我们的结论有些是有缺陷的,或者说与我们的基本价值是相违背的。

9. We need to train ourselves to think differently, shift our mindsets and realize that diversity opens doors for all of us, creating opportunities in organizations and communities that benefit everyone. (20_年6月)

【分析】本句为复合句,主干为We need to…。to后带了三个并列的不定式,分别是train ourselves to think,shift our mindsets和realize,而that引导的宾语从句that diversity opens…us则作realize的宾语。creating…communities作伴随状语,该状语中又包括一个由that引导的定语从句that benefit everyone,修饰的是opportunities。

【译文】我们需要训练自己用不同的思维方式去思考,转变我们的思维,并且意识到多元化的大门向我们每一个人开放,这样就能创造机会,使组织和社区中的每一个人都受益。

10. They only come in when a friend drops dead on the golf course and they think, ‘Geez, if it 010. They only come in when a friend drops dead on the golf course and they think, ‘Geez, if it could happen to him, …’(12月)

【分析】本句为复合句,主句为They only come in,从句为when引导的时间状语从句。从句中包含两个由and连接的并列结构a friend drops dead和they think…。‘Geez…’为think的宾语,该宾语的省略号里其实省略了与it could happen to him结构对应的it could happen to me too。

【译文】某个朋友在打高尔夫时猝死,他们会想:‘天啊,如果这能在他身上发生……’,只有这个时候他们才会来(医院)。

11. He believes most diseases that commonly affect men could be addressed by preventive check-ups. (月)

【分析】本句为复合句,主干为He believes…diseases…could be addressed…。that引导的定语从句that commonly affect men修饰most diseases。by preventive check-ups为be addressed的方式状语。

【译文】他相信,那些经常感染男性的疾病大多数都可以通过预防性的检查来处理掉。

12. Shoppers seldom complain to the manager or owner of a retail store, but instead will alert their friends, relatives, coworkers, strangers — and anyone who will listen. (年12月)

【分析】本句为复合句,主干为Shoppers seldom complain to…but…will alert…。破折号在这里起到强调或引起别人注意破折号后面要说的话的作用。在破折号后,who引导的定语从句who will listen修饰的是anyone。

【译文】顾客很少向经理或者零售店的老板投诉,相反,他们会转而向他们的朋友、亲戚、同事、陌生人——以及任何可以听到的人吐苦水。

13. This guidance eliminated the need for customers to circle the parking lot endlessly, and avoided confrontation between those eyeing the same parking space. (20_年12月)

【分析】本句为简单句,主干为This guidance eliminated the need…and avoided confrontation…。eyeing the same parking space为现在分词作后置定语,修饰those。

【译文】这些引导消除了顾客在停车场无尽地兜圈子的必要,而且避免了顾客之间因抢占空车位而引发的冲突。

14. Customers can also improve future shopping experiences by filling complaints to the retailer, in 014. Customers can also improve future shopping experiences by filling complaints to the retailer, instead of complaining to the rest of the world. (20_年12月)

【分析】本句为简单句,主干为Customers can…improve…experiences。方式状语by filling complaints to the retailer修饰improve future shopping experiences。instead of表示否定,其前后成分结构一致,complaining前其实省略了by。

【译文】顾客也可以通过向零售商投诉来改善今后的购物体验,而不是向全世界其他的人抱怨。

分析英语高分作文范文 第十四篇

A grain of Sand William Blake / see a world in a grain of sand, see a heaven in a wilderness, Hold infinity in your hand, and love your life forever in an hour Henry David Thoreau / no matter how mean your life is, welcome it, live it, don't run away from it, call it by its name, it's not as bad as you are, it looks when you're richest It is the poorest critic who will find faults in heaven and love your life. Although you are poor, you may have some pleasant, exciting and glorious time. Even in the poorhouse, the sunlight reflected from the windows of the workhouse is as bright as that from the windows of the rich house.

In the early spring, the snow melts in front of the door. I can't see it, but a quiet person may live there as contentedly and happily as in a palace. In my opinion, the poor people in the town tend to live the most independent lives.

In any case, they are great and can be accepted without hesitation. Most people think that they are above the support of the town, but they often feed themselves dishonestly, which should be more disgraceful. Whether it is a herb or a garden, it is a matter of bringing up a new subject, like a plant, but not a friend.

Things don't change. We change our clothes and keep your mind pure, bright and beautiful. It arouses our hearts when we are young, the impulse of silent prayer, the dream of love and truth, the longing after losing something, the cry of soul longing, the pursuit of good hope.

These things will never die. The timid hand reaches out to help a brother in need, in the dark time of sorrow This kind words prove the pity of a friend. When justice is near, he breathes softly, the sorrow of regret.

These things will never die, because everyone must find a job to do. Don't lose the opportunity to wake up love. Be firm, just, a light that never fades on you.

The voice of an angel says to you, these things will never die It will not die out. The life I hope for must be the stories of countless couples. The lifestyle it provides has a kind of family style elegance.

It reminds you of a quiet stream. It winds through the green pastures, under the pleasant shade of trees, and finally falls into the vast sea. But the sea is so calm, so quiet, so indifferent that you are a trout.

中文翻译:

一粒沙子威廉·布莱克/从一粒沙子看到一个世界,在一片荒野中看到一个天堂,把无限握在手心,永恒在一个小时内爱你的生命亨利·大卫·梭罗/不管你的生活多么卑鄙,迎接它,活出它,不要逃避它,直呼它的名字它没有你那么糟糕,当你最富有的时候它看起来是最贫穷的爱吹毛求疵的人会在天堂里发现缺点爱你的生活,尽管贫穷,你也许会有一些愉快、激动、光荣的时光,即使在贫民院,夕阳从济贫院的窗户反的阳光和从富人家的窗户反的阳光一样明亮。在春天的早些时候,门前的雪就融化了。我看不到,但一个安静的人可能在那里生活得像在宫殿里一样心满意足,思想愉快。

在我看来,镇上的穷人往往过着最的生活不管怎样,他们都是伟大的,可以毫无顾虑地接受。大多数人认为他们是超脱于由镇上供养的人,但他们经常会以不诚实的方式养活自己,这应该是更不光彩的。像花园里的草本植物一样培养贫穷,像圣人一样不要为获得新事物而烦恼,无论是衣服还是朋友,都要变老,回归主题。

事物不变。我们换衣服,保持你的思想纯洁、明亮、美丽,它在年轻时激起了我们的心,无

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