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第一,词汇量要充足。
词汇量多少很大程度上决定作文是否能写得下去。
第二,审题要充分。
我所教的学生中在写英语作文时,普遍存在这样一个情况:看完作文题,就开始写,想到哪写到哪,只要把字数凑够了就停笔了。这样写出来的文章,看起来就像在记流水帐,没有任何逻辑,杂乱无章,毫无条理,同时容易出现用错时态、用错格式等的情况。试想,如果你是试卷的命题人,你出作文题的时候,肯定有出这道题的独特的道理。所以仔细审题和构思就成了写作的第一步。审题的重点放在写作体裁、格式、字数方面,确保第一遍审题就能保证得到基本分。同时还要文体和时态,因为不同的文体要求的写作格式也是不同的,时态的要求也非常重要。
第三,提纲要详细。
审完题后一定要列提纲。很多学生认为,中考英语作文译成中文,最多是小学二年级的语文作文水平,所以根本没有必要列提纲。其实,这种想法是非常错误的,因为提纲不仅能使文章的结构清晰,还有很重要的一点:防止漏掉作文内容。因为中考英语作文有一个很重要的要求:要点要全。如果你漏掉了需要写的内容,即使文章写得再优美,用词再准确,也拿不了高分。最后要注意打草稿,然后修改。这样可以保证错误降低至最少或者没有错误,同时也能保持卷面整洁。
第四,文化差异要注意
我们要时刻牢记一点,中英文表达方式有很大的差异,所以体现在作文表达上也常常会出现生硬的。中国式作文表达,降低了我们的作文质量。所以注重中英语言差异,并努力找到两者之间的表达方式上的共通点,并且有意识的运用就能避免类似的问题。
第五,细节错误要摒弃。
很多孩子在写作文时常常感觉写得非常好,用上了几个高级句型或者不错的词汇短语,以为可以得高分,但最终结果出来后却与预想差距很大。主要的原因是很多细节没有注意。比如第三人称单数,名词的单复数,大小写,甚至标点、书写、段落安排等,这些细节问题也很重要。
最后:背诵阅读优秀的中学生的作文集
写作很容易在短时间内有大的飞跃,要做的就是积累一些经典的句型、地道的表达方式。可以背诵阅读优秀的中学生的作文集,把精彩的段落和句子抄下来并仿写,最后整理出几十个最常用、最精彩的表达法,写作文时有意识地想一想,总能用上几个。
做好以上几个方面,中考英语写作是很容易提高的!
背景设定:最近,康敏的加拿大朋友Michael给他发来电子邮件,想了解康明家乡的变化。假如你是康敏,请根据以下提示,给Michael回一封电子邮件。
生活条件差,道路狭窄,车辆少,住不好,吃不饱,联系不便。。。。。。
生活条件优越,道路宽,车辆多,住得舒适,手机普及。。。。。。
要求:1。围绕以上内容进行合理表述;
2。所表述的内容必须包含表中的所有方面;
3。词数80词左右,开头语以给出中考英语满分作文范文不计入词数。
参考词汇:living conditions, narrow, be crowded into, communications中考英语满分作文范文通讯,telegram, thanks to, rapidly, mobile phone, policy
[优秀满分范文]
Dear Michael,
You want to know the changes about my hometown。 You know, great changes have taken place since 60 years ago。
In the past, the living conditions were very poor。 There were not many buses or cars, and the roads were narrow。 Usually, a big family was crowed into a small, dark house。 Most families couldn’t get enough food。 The communications were simple and slow。 People kept in touch with their friends and relatives far away mainly by letter or telegram。
Thanks to the government, our hometown has developed rapidly in recent years。 The living conditions are much better and more comfortable。 The roads are wide。 Some people have their own cars。 Most of the people have lived in big new houses。 Quite a few adults have mobile phones。 Because of many good policies, I think our lives will become better and better。
Sincerely
Kang Min
Changchun South Lake Park is located in the southwest of Changchun City, with a total area of square meters and a lake area of hectare. The scale of the park is the first in the whole city. It has four distinct seasons and pleasant scenery.
Walking along the clear water, you can enjoy the singing of willow trees and birds, and there are fragrant flowers everywhere. You can not only relax in the beautiful park, but also take part in various activities in summer You can go fishing, boating and swimming. In winter, you can take part in skiing, skating, or just enjoy the ice lantern show.
There are also folk performances, such as the Lantern Festival. Believe it or not, tourists will enjoy traditional activities, such as dog plow or camel plow. If you want to have more fun, you must come to Nanhu Park.
中文翻译:
长春南湖公园位于长春市西南部,公园总面积平方米,湖面面积公顷,规模居全市公园之首,全国第二,四季分明,景色宜人漫步在清澈的水边,你一定能欣赏到柳树飞鸟的歌声,到处都是芬芳的花朵,不仅可以在美丽的公园里放松身心,还可以参加夏季的各种活动,可以钓鱼、划船、游泳,冬天可以参加滑雪,滑冰,或者只是欣赏一下冰灯表演还有民俗表演,比如说灯会,信不信由你,游客们一定会在传统活动中尽情享受,比如狗犁或骆驼犁,如果你想玩得开心不止,一定要来南湖公园。
Liu Changchun, a student at Northeastern University, dreams of participating in the Olympic Games. However, because China is in a state of war and the school is forced to close down, Liu Changchun has to return to his hometown to continue training. With the help of Zhang Xueliang, he overcame all difficulties and came to Los Angeles in the United States, and finally joined the Olympic Games as a Chinese athlete.
中文翻译:
在东北大学的学生刘长春,梦想参加奥运会,然而,由于中国处于战争状态,学校被迫关闭,刘长春不得不回到家乡继续训练,在张学良的帮助下,他克服一切困难来到美国洛杉矶,最终加入作为一名中国运动员参加奥运会。
其实不难,大部分的同学都能得到12分以上,13、14分也是平常,但是要想得到15分甚至以上,就难上加难了。到底什么样的作文能得到16分以上?我们为同学们把中考英语作文评分标准做出了更深的理解。
一、中考英语写作的概述
关于体裁,本文包含记叙文和议论文两种最容易考到的类型,其他一些文体也有可能会综合涉及。
关于题材,同学们的反应可谓是几家欢喜几家愁。中考写作也有自己的特色:一般围绕着生活化、学校化来考察。近几年,考试题目实际上是一些比较贴近中学生活,为中学生能够接触的认识能力、生活经历所能驾驭的问题。
【比如】
20xx年题目Comics
20xx年题目Understanding、signs、understanding、languages
你对于在中考英语写作中拿高分有把握吗?实际考试中,许多学生却常常有无话可说的感觉。那要我们如何才能克服这种无话的状态,取得高分呢?
归根到底这是一个英语基本功单词、短语和句型的问题。英语作文的前提条件是掌握了一定量的词汇、语法及体裁、题材等方面的知识。学生如果想要在写作方面有本质上的提升,必须进行多次的写作练习。因此,必须合理地设置训练步骤,遵循从初级到高级,从简单到复杂的原则去练习,经过一段写作实践之后,写作水平一定会有大幅度的提高。
二、中考英语写作的评分标准
1、老师拿到的标准
写作水平的高低和文章的好坏,分数是最直接的评分标准,也是考生们最关心的。但是多少考生真正透彻知道中考英语写作的评分标准?什么样的文章才是阅卷老师眼中的好文章?
【评分标准】
1.整篇作文满分20分,其中内容8分,语言8分,结构4分。
2.内容贴切,句子流畅,用语准确,加整体印象分1分。
3.不满60个词,少15个词扣分,610个词扣1分。
4.所有给出问题涉及的三项内容,每少一项扣3分。
5.每个拼写,大小写,标点符号等错误扣分;同一的拼写错误不重复扣分,扣分总和不超过2分。
6.语法错误每项扣1分,同一错误不重复扣分,扣分总和不超过2分。
2、老师想看到的标准
语言(8分):
词固定搭配、高频重点词汇;
句复杂句(各种从句)、特殊句型、正确的句子!
内容(8分):(总、分)论点、论据支持句;
简洁、切合主题的记叙内容。
结构(4分):语言结构句子重点突出、内容清晰;
内容结构论点、论据以及记叙之间的逻辑关系;
句数控制对于相对内容的句数掌握;
亮点、出彩点排比、拟人、谚语、成语、押韵等。
It was a sunny day. We decided to have a picnic outside the city. In the morning, we took an early bus to Nanhui. It was quite a colorful world. there were GREen trees, orange leaves,red peach blossoms. At noon, we reached the place, we sat by the river bank and took out a lot of things, such as bread, orange juice, apples, cakes, eggs and so on. But all of a sudden, it began to rain. Unluckily there was no shelter nearby. We had to take a bus to go back home in a hurry.
What an unforgettable picnic it was!
以上就是张承辉博客为大家整理的中考英语作文60词左右范文。
“张承辉博客” 中考英语作文60词左右范文
Life is a colorful picture full of different feelings. I’d like to be happy because happiness is important to everyone. I have an unforgettable experience to share with all of you.
Last Sunday my grandparents gave me some pocket money and with the money I brought some books and instead of snacks. The next day I took the books to school. After lunch, I showed the books to my classmates and we read together. We learned a lot from the interesting books.
Both reading and sharing made me happy. I wish everybody is happy all the way.
中考满分英语作文范文翻译:
生活像是一幅画满了各种心情的图案。我想要快乐,因为快乐对每个人来说都很重要。我有个难以忘怀的记忆要与大家分享。
上个星期天我的爷爷奶奶给了我一些零花钱。我用钱买了些课外书而不是零食。第二天,我把这些书带到了学校。午饭过后,我把书拿出来,和我的同学一起阅读。从这些有趣的书中,我们学到了很多知识。阅读和分享让我感到很快乐。 我希望每个人都快快乐乐的。
父亲节马上就要到了,但是有些同学不知道送什么礼物给父亲。请根据下面的提示进行适当扩展,并向同学们提出一些建议。80词左右,开头和结尾以给出中考英语满分作文范文不计入总词数。
提示:1。如果有足够的零花钱,可以为父亲买一些使用单不贵的东西,如领带等:
2。还可以为父亲做些力所能及的事情中考英语满分作文范文do something that you can do,如为父亲准备一杯茶等他下班后饮用等。
[优秀满分范文]
Father’s Day is coming and you must be thinking of giving a present to your father。 Different people like different kinds of gifts。
If you have enough pocket money, you can buy a useful but not expensive thing, like a tie。 I think your father will like it。 But if you don’t have enough pocket money, you can do something that you can do, for example, you can prepare a cup of tea。 When your father comes back from work, he can drink it。
No matter what you do, the most important thing is to make your father happy on Father’s Day。 Don’t you think so?
第一,词汇量要充足。
词汇量多少很大程度上决定作文是否能写得下去。
第二,审题要充分。
我所教的学生中在写英语作文时,普遍存在这样一个情况:看完作文题,就开始写,想到哪写到哪,只要把字数凑够了就停笔了。这样写出来的文章,看起来就像在记流水帐,没有任何逻辑,杂乱无章,毫无条理,同时容易出现用错时态、用错格式等的情况。试想,如果你是试卷的命题人,你出作文题的时候,肯定有出这道题的独特的道理。所以仔细审题和构思就成了写作的第一步。审题的重点放在写作体裁、格式、字数方面,确保第一遍审题就能保证得到基本分。同时还要文体和时态,因为不同的文体要求的写作格式也是不同的,时态的要求也非常重要。
第三,提纲要详细。
审完题后一定要列提纲。很多学生认为,中考英语作文译成中文,最多是小学二年级的语文作文水平,所以根本没有必要列提纲。其实,这种想法是非常错误的,因为提纲不仅能使文章的结构清晰,还有很重要的一点:防止漏掉作文内容。因为中考英语作文有一个很重要的要求:要点要全。如果你漏掉了需要写的内容,即使文章写得再优美,用词再准确,也拿不了高分。最后要注意打草稿,然后修改。这样可以保证错误降低至最少或者没有错误,同时也能保持卷面整洁。
第四,文化差异要注意
我们要时刻牢记一点,中英文表达方式有很大的差异,所以体现在作文表达上也常常会出现生硬的中国式作文表达,降低了我们的作文质量。所以注重中英语言差异,并努力找到两者之间的表达方式上的共通点,并且有意识的运用就能避免类似的问题。
第五,细节错误要摒弃。
很多孩子在写作文时常常感觉写得非常好,用上了几个高级句型或者不错的词汇短语,以为可以得高分,但最终结果出来后却与预想差距很大。主要的原因是很多细节没有注意。比如第三人称单数,名词的单复数,大小写,甚至标点、书写、段落安排等,这些细节问题也很重要。
最后:背诵阅读优秀的中学生的作文集
写作很容易在短时间内有大的飞跃,要做的就是积累一些经典的句型、地道的表达方式。可以背诵阅读优秀的中学生的作文集,把精彩的段落和句子抄下来并仿写,最后整理出几十个最常用、最精彩的`表达法,写作文时有意识地想一想,总能用上几个。
做好以上几个方面,中考英语写作是很容易提高的!
在成长的过程中,我们会遇到很多人很多事,有些人在这个过程中会给我们留下深刻的印象,让我们能够离开深雾的阴霾,感谢遇见——我的英语老师。
刚上初中,踏进教室,偌大的教室,却没有一张熟悉的面孔,习惯沉默不爱说话的我,总是静静地看书学习,很少与人交流。我的英语笔试成绩还不错,在班级排第一,可是口语成绩差得很,基本上都是倒数,所以成绩也被拉下来了。也许是由于自己害羞的原因,就连对着电脑前说英语都会紧张得支支吾吾。
每次上英语课,老师让我们互相说英语对话,互相练习的时候,全班除了爱睡觉的人在继续趴着的时候,也只有我一个人低着头看着英语书,显得是那么的出众。本以为就可以躲过被提问的尴尬时刻,可是英语老师却偏偏点了我的名字,让我和同桌用英语对话,“怎么办怎么办?”我心里那可是无比的紧张,连拿着书的.手都在颤抖着,同学说的很畅,而我说得有一个单词没有一个单词的,连声音都是颤抖的,吞吞吐吐的哽咽完后,尴尬地低下头,脸红得像个苹果。
英语老师没有责怪我,反而还在全班同学前面表扬我,让我继续加油,此时的我心“碰碰”快速频率的跳动。下课后我松了一口气,心想着老师下节课应该不会提问我了吧,回答得这么惨不忍睹。另我想不到的是,第二天的英语课老师又提名提问我,更荒唐的是老师竟然让我上台上讲!此时我的心更加地惶恐,感觉整个身体都不是我能支配的,站在讲台,用颤抖的手接过老师手里的麦克风,脚不停地抖动,幸亏讲台掩饰了我颤抖的双脚。声音更是抖动,都无法辩认出是自己的声音,最后只能是羞愧地低着头强忍着讲完。虽然我是非常紧张地,可是很明显地看到老师明亮的目光和亲切的眼神,老师还是像上节课一样表扬了我,说我进步了,此时我明白老师是想鼓励我走出紧张的害羞,走出阴霾。之后的每节课英语老师都会让我在台上讲英语,虽然都会很紧张,可是慢慢地竟然习惯了这种场景,变得越来越不紧张,越显轻松。
感谢遇见我的英语老师,是她用她的耐心和对我的不放弃让我摆脱无比的紧张,重拾信心和勇气,让我成长。并鼓励我参加学校的口语比赛,最后得了一等奖,当我站在领奖台上,我对英语老师深深地鞠了一恭。
若你不够勇敢,我定会给你勇气。感谢遇见,我的英语老师。
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Mr Li is one of my beloved taught us physics when we were in Senior was old,but he taught very could make his classes lively and interesting. Mr Li made good preparations for his lessons and was strict with us, we made mistakes in our homework,he would ask us to correct and do it again. I used to be poor in physics. Mr Li often helped me with my lessons very to his help and hard work,I have made good progress and caught up with the a retired teacher,he's still working hard for our educational cause(教育事业).
篇三:中考英语作文范文: view on school uniform
At our school , we have to wear uniforms every day. The problem is that all my classmates think the uniforms are ugly. We think young people should look smart and so we would like to wear our own clothes. Our teachers believe that if we did that. We would concentrate more on our clothes than our studies. We disagree. We should feel more comfortable and thate is good for studying. If we can’t do that, we should be allowed to design our own uniforms. We also think everyone should be different from others. That would be a good way to keep both teachers and students happy.
篇四:中考英语作文范文: My opinions on volunteering
We are middle school students and we are busy with our lessons. So some people think we should concentrate more on our studies. If we volunteer to help others, it’s a waste of time. But I think volunteering is great. I not only feel good about helping others but also get to spend time doing what I love to do. And from volunteering I have learned many things that I have never learned in class. So if I have an oppoutunity, I’d like to visit old people’s home to clean up for them. I’d also like to help sick kids in hospital. I love kids and I plan to put my love to good use by working in hospital. In a word, I’d like to help people who need help. If everyone helps out a bit, the world will be more colorful.
Changchun is the capital and the largest city of Jilin Province, located in the northeast of the people's Republic of China, is a sub provincial city. Changchun has a population of 10000, including counties and county-level cities, with a total urban population of 10000. Compared with other historical cities in China, it is still a young city.
For example, it is located in the middle of Songliao plain, with a total area of about square kilometers Shape, then Changchun is an eye of this huge rooster, you can imagine its important position.
中文翻译:
长春市是吉林省省会和最大的城市,位于xxx东北部,是一个副省级城市。长春市人口万,包括县、县级市,市区总人口万它有着多年的历史,与中国其他历史城市相比,还是一座年轻的城市,像先it位于松辽平原的中部,总面积约平方公里(吉林省省会城市,以君子兰为市花,长春是政治城市,经济文化中心如果说中国的领土是公鸡的形状,那么长春就是这只巨大公鸡的一只眼睛你可以想象它的重要地位。
My Low-carbon Life
The environmental pollution is worse and worse today. Many trees are cut down, and water and air are polluted. As a student I try to have a low-carbon life to save energy and reduce pollution.
Firstly, I often walk to school. It can reduce air pollution. Secondly, I always turn off the lights and fans when leaving the classroom. Thirdly, I always make full use of paper and other school things and never waste water.
I wish more students to join me and make the earth more and more beautiful.
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