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Among all the instructive proverbs that give people advice, the one I like most is “Where there is a will, there is a way”. This short, beautiful sentence tells us an incontrovertible truth: if you have a dream and stick to it, you will realize it sooner or later.
For me, the saying has a special meaning. When I was in Junior Middle School, I was so poor in my studies that I nearly gave up. But my head-teacher was always there and gave me confidence every time I lose heart. He used to say, “a little more effort and you will make it.”
Thanks to my dearest teacher, all my efforts paid off and finally I became a top student. “Nothing is impossible to a willing heart”, as long as you have a dream, keep trying and you?ll make it, too.
评分细则
优秀(22--25)：紧扣主题，覆盖所有要点，内容充实;语法结构多样，词汇丰富，行文流畅，显示出较强的语言运用能力，允许有个别语言错误，但不影响意思表达。
良好(18--21)：紧扣主题，覆盖所有要点，内容较充实，行文较流畅，语言有少量错误，但基本不影响意思表达。
一般(15--17)：紧扣主题，基本覆盖所有要点，语言错误已影响了部分意思的表达，但多数句子基本正确;基本达到预期写作目的。
较差(11--14)：要点不全，内容不完整，行文不够连贯;语言错误较多，半数句子基本正确。
差(6--10)：内容混乱，或主要内容偏离主题，尚能够写出少数与内容相关的可读句。
极差(0--5)：只能写出与内容相关的词语，没有有效信息;抄写其他文章，或只是写出与作文无关的内容。
英语作文：三点关键定档因素(不跑题是前提)
词汇多样性
语法复杂性
文章连贯性
书信作文模板
Dear X X X， 亲爱的X X X
I am extremely pleased to hear from you.(我很高兴收到你的来
信) And I would like to write a letter to tell you that_____. (我很高兴写封信告诉
你。。。) I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience/I am looking f0rward to your replies at your earliest convenience. (我希望你可以在空闲的时候尽快给我回信)
Best regards for your health and success. 祝你身体健康万事如意
Sincerely yours，你最真诚的X X X
X X X
高考英语作文推荐
In recent yearsRecently,more and more students have studied hard to go to universityies.（It's actually better for you to use the present continuous tense here coz ur trying to explain a well known concept）. However,universities always have some limitations tofor students,like the number of students??.So in that case some students often loselost their chances to accept their educationgetting college phenomenon is quite 's a real our lifeves,we all know that students need to pass the entrance of examination to enter the universityies.,And there are many difficulties may it may happen that some talented students missed their chances of getting to entering their imagining dream universityies in the most important it happened,these students may then loset addition,it is terrible for them to leave school to obtaintheother knowledge which is not fitting to them.????They could have stayed in their universities which they wanted to go all along but they now are wasting their precious life which is the most important time to do other things which they do not like.??On the other hand,our society lost the recourse which they could have given their best??.Future more,it brought some negative things including that students who can not go to universities to master of right views.??In a word,that is why it is justified and necessary for the government to intake expansion in Chinese 's not a word Only in this way, more and more students can achieve their dreams of studying in their imagining only in this way can our country be richer in knowledge.
Volunteers Wanted
Our annual English Festival, which will be held on June 15-17, 20xx, is now looking for 20 student volunteers to provide service for Talent Show, Speech Contest, and English Debate. If you are interested, please send an application email at your earliest convenience to at chenlaoshi@.
写作要点：
1.表示写信意图；
2.陈述应征目的；
3.说明应征条件（性格、能力等）。
写作要求：
1.邮件词数不少于100；
2.开头和结尾部分已写好，不计入总词数；
3.可根据情况增加细节，使行文连贯；
4.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
Dear MS Chen ,
I’m Li Hua, a student from Class2, Grade 3.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
Were I three years younger than I am now, I would strongly recommend that I set more practical and specific goals. As an old saying goes, living without a clear and achievable aim is like sailing without a compass. Compared with many abstract objectives, practical ones can bring us more courage and confidence whenever we make one step forward. If only I could go back and reset my goals.
我现在比我小三岁,我会强烈建议我设定更实际和具体目标。俗话说得好,生活没有一个清晰的和可实现的目标就像航海没有罗盘。与许多抽象的目标相比,实际的能给我们带来更多的勇气和信心当我们使人进步。要是我能回去重置我的目标。
结构单一句：I'm Li Hua. I'm a middle school student. I'm from China.
修改句：I'm Li Hua, a middle school student from China.
结构单一句：You practice more reading, you will improve your reading ability.
修改句：If you practice more reading, you will improve your reading ability.
对策：学会恰当使用连接词、同位语、非谓语动词、短语等对结构单一的英语句子进行合并，进行简单句和复合句的转换训练，逐步掌握较复杂句式。
评分标准
1、本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分
2、评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定是否达到及格线(15分)，然后确定其所属的具体档次，以该档次的要求来衡量，最后给分。其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。
3、词数少于80和多于120的，从总分中减去2分。
4、评分时应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性及上下文的连贯性。
5、若缺少要点，分数降一档处理。
6、拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。
7、书写较差以至于影响交际，将其分数降低一个档次。
In the picture, there stands a tree full of fruit on one side of the stream. Across the stream, a man is trying to reach out on the edge of the band for the fruit with a net attached to a pole. Not far away there is a bridge that can lead him to the tree for more fruit.
The message conveyed in the picture is clear. In pursuing a dream, we might focus on only one say of making it come true, forgetting that there may be alternatives. As indicated in the picture, if the man is willing to look for other possibilities, he can find a better and more rewarding way to achieve his goal. All he has to do is to turn around, cross the bridge and walk to the tree.
全国一卷英语作文：写一封志愿者申请信。李华要去伦敦，想去美术馆当志愿者。
全国二卷英语作文：以李华的身份给队友写信，让队友做好排球比赛的赛前准备。
全国三卷英文作文：帮李华写作文叫艾伦参加音乐节（邀请信）。
李华在高考中到底有多忙
李华，高考英语作文常现人物，最早出现在1995年全国高考卷甚至更早的个别城市模拟卷中。他通常是红星中学高三（1）班的学生，担任该校学生会主席。
经过了从小学到高中会考等无数次英语考试作文的洗礼，我们不难发现，作文里的李华是这样一个人：
1，英语不好或者说很烂
2，经常用些鸡毛蒜皮的小事麻烦别人，例如写个信，发个邮件什么的。因为他自己不会用电脑写邮件。
3，好高骛远，肚子里连点儿墨水都没有就想要参加学生会组织个什么什么活动，还让别人出谋划策。
4，曾经喜欢过唱歌，曾经喜欢过跳舞，曾经参加过朗诵比赛，当过奥运志愿者，还想去世博会当志愿者，曾幻想过去支教。
6，不断留级几十年来还没有毕业，并且在几十年中平均一个月换一次学校，而且还是如红星小学，红星中学之类名字非常具有乡土气息的学校。
7，他会分身术，能同时以多个年级身份出现在多个地方。
8，性别随机改变（尚未发现变化周期）。
9，不过李华还是有优点的，就是特别能节约用水，并且还是学校节水俱乐部的一员。
10，在20_年1月14日是李华对外宣称他的外国朋友overweight了，他随意泄露了他人的秘密！看来李华是个多嘴之人！
11，他热心公益，每次活动都要当志愿者，天天给报社投稿，但是一直没有见到回复。
12，身边朋友中，国外友人居多。
13，李华总是爱举办或参加各类节日纪念日，并能从中得到人生感悟
14，李华对于国家的时事政治都看在眼里，记在心头，喜欢和国外朋友讨论文化差异
15，李华旅游的时候丢过钱包，迷过路，吃过面条，李华还老春游夏游秋游冬游班级游。
Mrs Wilson ,
Im going out shopping , and wont be back until about 5:00 pm. I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the city library . At about 1 oclock this afternoon , Tracy called ,saying that she couldnt meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to . She felt very sorry about that , but said that you could set some other time for the meeting . She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home . She has already told Susan about this change.
LI Hua
有关高考英语作文
Some people in the fierce competition of the rough waves swept away, has never recovered. Some people are against the tuyere, set foot on top, on the shore, they succeeded. Because they have much a stick to it. Forefront for them is not a stumbling block, but padding their own foundation.
Born easy, live easy, life is not easy. Life is a process of life. No wind, no rain? It is because of the baptism of wind and rain to see the colorful rainbow; With the pain of failure will taste the joy of success. Turgenev in the rudin, said: “although our life short and small, but great everything is caused by the hand of the people; a life, realize the lofty mission, that is their supreme happiness in life.” We are to create this society, inevitably some injury, through the tears.
Time, fast turn, across one dream magic song.
Life, be about to rush out a way to! In order to cause, in order to struggle in life, despite losing a lot of, but is there will be! And are often more important than lost, it is the value and meaning of life.
Life is long, the years.
How can we predict the future? But only clear conscience my heart! Life, because there is competition, people have power; Life, because of the struggle, the people to the pursuit of excellence.
Smoke in life, like a cloud, the wind. Transient. “Only the people and the backing car, there is no reverse time and road”, since we came to today, and possession of today's social status and responsibility, only forward, forward, forward again! Don't retreat. Young people, more important is to see tomorrow, seize today, forge ahead in the quiet, perhaps before the sun mountain tomorrow, you created a miracle again!
每个星期二和星期五晚上看到李小姐，一天的辛苦工作之后，我的邻居，在一个公司赶回家，一个秘书，吞下她吃饭然后赶紧去车上她的英语课。李小姐的.情况并非独特，现在越来越多的城市成年人度过他们的业余时间，试图提高自己在学校或学院。
有很多理由可以为他们的教育。有些人，如李小姐，都在做这件事来获得另一个学位或文凭来给社会留下深刻印象。对他们更多的知识，或者说，更多的证书意味着更多的机会，更好的工作和更快的晋升。
其他人，特别是下岗或失业的人去职业学校，准备回到就业市场。他们渴望新的技能，使他们能够胜任在零售行业，管理，教育和其他服务类的工作，他们是奇怪的，因为他们大多是蓝领工人在工厂。
也有人前来参加中国传统医学、绘画、书法、摄影等课程。当他们工作周的时候，人们开始有时间来满足他们对他们内心的渴望的梦想。
出于必要或出于兴趣，人们为了共同的目标去上学，为了提高自己，而这一热潮在成人教育，反过来，有助于提高整个国家的智力水平。
1、上海英语作文题目
假如你是明启中学的高三学生李华，你邀请王磊参加露天音乐会，但是王磊拒绝了邀请，因为路途遥远，交通不方便的原因，不想去郊外公园参加露天音乐会；
1、针对李华的犹豫不决给出解决的答案；
2、给他来参加露天音乐会的理由。
2、上海英语作文点评
写作部分要求考生写邮件说服好友，任务真实，考查了考生的语言交际能力。试题全面考核了考生的语言知识和语言能力，既体现了课程标准的基本要求，又凸显了对考生在不同语境中灵活运用语言能力的考查，对高中英语教学起到了积极的引导作用。
上海英语试卷命题依据英语学科考试说明，难易度适切，区分度合理，测量目标明确，与以往考试保持一致。试卷内容围绕人与自然、人与社会、人与自我三大主题，综合考查英语语言运用能力，突出学科核心素养，凸显思辨能力的考查，彰显人文学科的本质。
今年的高考英语有什么新动向，如何备战才能获得高分？在日前由《中国电脑教育报》和DEC中恒联合举办的'21世纪语言与情景教学高级专家论坛上，来自北京外国语大学、清华大学、北京大学等知名学府和权威语言教学机构的英语教育专家透露：今年高考英语将更加突出语言的整体运用功能，“情景”考察的比重进一步加大，所有题型从听力到书面表达无不是在语境中进行词汇、语法等单项的考察。专家提醒广大考生，要彻底丢弃过去那种死记硬背单词、生呑活剥语法的“头痛医头脚痛医脚”式复习方法，从整体上把握英语，以能力的提高为应试的基石，否则难获高分。
专家分析说，近几年高考英语单项选择一般是15道题，其中有10道题是直接在语境中进行考察的，只有5道题或者是句子结构分析或者词义辨析，即使是纯结构和辨析题也都包含一定的语境。所以，教师在平时编题，考生在复习时都应该遵从这个比例配置，把语境题放在主导地位。阅读理解尽管包含了各种各样的话题，但是历届高考阅读题细节占的比重最大，所谓细节其实就是语境、情景。在听力方面，输出的信息完全在语境中进行。而书面表达，一般是情景作文，或者开放式的情景作文，在一定情景基础上给学生更大的思维空间，目的是培养学生的创新能力。
审题的概念
拿到试卷后，首先浏览书面表达的题目，研究题目要求。正确的审题内容包括A、审标题B、审体裁C、审要点。审标题：看文章是否要求有题目(title)或者主题(topic)能够确保你不跑题;审体裁：确能够定文章的文体，为你写作提供方向。审要点：如果英语作文中，有要求要点的，一般打分时是踩点给分的，准确把握住要点，是高分的一个诀窍。
如何审要点?要做到以下两个方面：
总结归纳要点：不是所有内容都要写出来，而是抓住其中的关键要点、衔接要点!
理顺要点：将提炼的要点按逻辑关系(如时间关系、因果关系、转折关系等)重新安排，这样整篇文章看起来就整体有序，流畅自然，更加容易打动评分老师，从而作文分数提升一档。
构思文章提纲：根据题目的要点，安排好段落和主次关系。要形成良好的分段意识，写作分段是必须要进行的(2至4段为佳)，这样显得文章不会拥挤并且层次分明。在行文意识上，要注意突出要点。
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