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其实不难，大部分的同学都能得到12分以上，13、14分也是平常，但是要想得到15分甚至以上，就难上加难了。到底什么样的作文能得到16分以上？我们为同学们把中考英语作文评分标准做出了更深的理解。
一、中考英语写作的概述
关于体裁，本文包含记叙文和议论文两种最容易考到的类型，其他一些文体也有可能会综合涉及。
关于题材，同学们的反应可谓是几家欢喜几家愁。中考写作也有自己的特色：一般围绕着生活化、学校化来考察。近几年，考试题目实际上是一些比较贴近中学生活，为中学生能够接触的认识能力、生活经历所能驾驭的问题。
【比如】
20xx年题目Comics
20xx年题目Understanding、signs、understanding、languages
你对于在中考英语写作中拿高分有把握吗？实际考试中，许多学生却常常有无话可说的感觉。那要我们如何才能克服这种无话的状态，取得高分呢？
归根到底这是一个英语基本功单词、短语和句型的问题。英语作文的前提条件是掌握了一定量的词汇、语法及体裁、题材等方面的知识。学生如果想要在写作方面有本质上的提升，必须进行多次的写作练习。因此，必须合理地设置训练步骤，遵循从初级到高级，从简单到复杂的原则去练习，经过一段写作实践之后，写作水平一定会有大幅度的提高。
二、中考英语写作的评分标准
1、老师拿到的标准
写作水平的高低和文章的好坏，分数是最直接的评分标准，也是考生们最关心的。但是多少考生真正透彻知道中考英语写作的评分标准？什么样的文章才是阅卷老师眼中的好文章？
【评分标准】
1.整篇作文满分20分，其中内容8分，语言8分，结构4分。
2.内容贴切，句子流畅，用语准确，加整体印象分1分。
3.不满60个词，少15个词扣分，610个词扣1分。
4.所有给出问题涉及的三项内容，每少一项扣3分。
5.每个拼写，大小写，标点符号等错误扣分；同一的拼写错误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2分。
6.语法错误每项扣1分，同一错误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2分。
2、老师想看到的标准
语言(8分)：
词固定搭配、高频重点词汇；
句复杂句(各种从句)、特殊句型、正确的句子！
内容(8分)：(总、分)论点、论据支持句；
简洁、切合主题的记叙内容。
结构(4分)：语言结构句子重点突出、内容清晰；
内容结构论点、论据以及记叙之间的逻辑关系；
句数控制对于相对内容的句数掌握；
亮点、出彩点排比、拟人、谚语、成语、押韵等。
Dear Miss Wang,
I would like to recommend Amy for our monitor. Amy works hard and is careful
with everything. She is good at singing and dancing. She often helps others do some cleaning. She is a polite girl and she is friendly to all of us. Last Friday, she found a wallet on her way home after school. She kept on waiting until the owner came back to get it. The owner thanked her very much.
I think she’ll be a good monitor.
More and more middle school students use WeChat. Different students havedifferent opinions about using it.
Some students think WeChat is a very useful tool. It can provide a platformto communicate with their friends. Besides they can make more friends and learnmore knowledge by WeChat. However, some students think WeChat will affect theirstudy if they spend too much time using it. And they may be tricked by strangenet friends. Last but not least, it will also affect their vision to use WeChatfor a long time.
In my opinion, we should use WeChat properly by not using it more than twohours a day, and make sure that we don't use it when we are studying. Inaddition, we shouldn't add strangers or meet net friends casually.
（一）
观察题目和情景所提供的内容。分析、提炼要点，理顺要点。概括考题所要求表达的全部意思。
2.综合运用各项英语基础知识，灵活运用词汇和句型，正确地用词造句，连句成文，进行有效的信息表达与传递。
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3.认真思考，选择正确的表达形式，正确使用结构词和过渡句，使表达内容连贯。
4.书写要工整，要清楚。
（二）有关听力测试的答题方法及答题技巧
近几年听力测试虽然不纳入英语试卷，但听力测试的等级对考生的总成绩也有一定的影响。因此，同学们近阶段要加强对听力的练习。怎样做才能在听力测试中取得好成绩呢？
对话理解和短文理解，同学们除了应在听短文前，把所给的问题迅速过目，然后带着问题去听以外，还要知道短文一般涉及到哪几个问题，像短文中故事的人物、故事的主题、故事发生的时间、地点、还有对话中说话人的身份，谈话的话题，谈话的时间地点等。在听短文时，则要注意文章的整体性，还要善于抓住主要信息，捕捉关键词，这些关键词往往是提供信息和内容的重要关键。关键词听懂了，整句的意思也就基本理解了。
另一种考查短文理解的形式是将所听到的词或短语填入题中的空格中。这就要求考生在平时练习听力时，要注意训练自己的记录速度和准确性。一般来说，第一遍可边听边写，第二遍补充检查。待放音结束后，还应将短文从头至尾检查一遍，特别要注意词尾听不太清楚的一些词，像名词所有格、名词的单复数，动词的时态、语态，形容词、副词的比较级和最高级，单词的.大小写以及英语中同音异义词等。以便保持文章的正确性。最后谈几点有关听力的答题技巧。
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1.试卷发下来后，在未开始听力测试前，应抓紧时间抢读一些题，从而确定听音重点，使听音具有明确的方向性、选择性。
2.适当做些记录，提高记忆效果(年、月、日、时间等)。
3.在听力中如有一题未听清而被卡住，应马上放弃这一题，集中精力应对下一题，否则就会因跟不上语速而漏题。
4.情绪稳定，沉着冷静，只有沉着冷静，考试中才能正常发挥。
Let’s Do Something to Save Our Environment
It is recently reported that some rivers and lakes have dried up in SouthChina. A lot of fishes died. The bottoms of the rivers and lakes have becomegrass land. The water is becoming less and less because of the bad weather.
So everyone should do something to save our environment. First, we shouldsave every drop of water, such as turning off the taps after using it andrecycling the water. For example, we can water the plants and clean the restroom with our used water. Second, we should save energy, such as less turning onthe lights and turning off the lights when we leave;Do more walking, morebicycling and less driving and so on. Third, we should ask our government tocontrol the pollution from the factories.
Let’s act now from everything to save our environment. Don’t let our tearsbe the last drop of water in the world!
With the development of the modern technology，private car is no longer aluxurious thing for ordinary people，more and more people drive to work insteadof going by bus. The popularization of private car has many ，itis very convenient and time-saving，you can drive your own car to the workplaceinstead of waiting for the crowded bus and afraid of being late ，it can also improve the traffic structure，and help to mitigatethe stress of the ，the popularization of private car can help topromote the car industry and any other interrelated industries. I believe thatin the future the private car will become the most important vehicle and wecann't live without it.
Nowadays, working overtime is so common in many companies, especially inforeign companies, private companies, and joint ventures. As far as I amconcerned, there are two main reasons of working overtime. For one thing, thereis indeed too much work to do. If it is so, the boss should compensate staffs bypaying them as overtime salary or giving them vacations. For another, somestaffs are not suitable for their positions. In that case, the boss ought tohelp them to improve their working efficiency. If they are still not qualified,boss may change the positions for them, or to the worst, dismiss them. That'sall what I think about working overtime.
当今社会，与人交往越来越成为一种不可或缺的能力，作为中学生，学会如何与人相处尤为重要。假如上周你们班对“如何与人相处”展开了讨论，请根据以下的讨论结果，以“How to get on well with others?”为题，写一篇英语短文。
20_年中考英语所有常考作文话题
注意：
(1)词数80左右;
(2)可适当发挥，以使行文连贯;
(3)文中请勿提及你的真实姓名和学校。
【优秀满分范文】
How to get on well with others
As we all know, students should learn how to get on well with others. But in what ways?
First of all, we should respect others. Everyone has their own way to do things, so we should understand each other. Besides, it is important for us to communicate with each other and share our happiness and sadness. What’s more, we should be kind to others and offer necessary help to those who are in trouble.
In my opinion, we should treat others in an honest way. Only in this way can we get along well with each other and feel happy.
【考试的滋味】
明天又要进行月考了，虽然不能决定命运，但是年级排名次、班级排名次及排位子，各科老师讲评，家长狂轰滥炸……就够我们受的了。我们或是心悦诚服总结教训，或是口是心非地承认不足，或什么感觉都没有。不管怎么样，我们还得临阵磨枪呀!夜车也不能不快开喽!
第二天，我机械地走进考场，直挺挺地坐在座位上，等待监考老师。这时大脑里一片空白。接过卷子，我的心咚咚乱跳，头皮发胀，眼前卷子上的字也直跳。我闭上眼睛晃晃脑袋，想想老师曾讲过要镇定，先看简单题。于是睁开眼全神贯注地看一遍题，挑着做了几道小题。
这时，心神稳定下来，答题速度也快了。会做的题做完了，再挑些似会非会又弄不准确的题。同时调动全部精力，回忆老师是怎样讲评类似的题型的，课本上又是如何讲解的，东一耙子西一扫帚，尽量地多写。然后再仔细地给难题“相面”，寻找突破口，力争解决它。这时需有耐心，而恰恰心跳又一次加快，头脑又不十分灵活了。我无计可施，而又不甘失败，于是重新振作，再次审题，柳暗花明，真的答出了一道题，刹那间心情万分愉快。真是美哉妙也。然而事情不可能总是十全十美，有些题我脑汁绞尽也无济于事，真令我懊恼沮丧极了。
90分钟飞逝而过。目光在龙飞凤舞的“豆芽”上搜寻，力求找出差错，哪怕一点点。这时喉中犹如鲠住一个辣椒，难受死了。
走出考场，我们激烈地探讨答案、分数，想知道成功的经验、失败的教训的心情与秒俱增，心都被悬挂起来了。听了七嘴八舌的议论，却又心烦意乱。直到成绩公布了，而那时那刻又是几家欢乐，几家愁。
考试，考试，那滋味呀，是甜，是酸，是苦，还是辣?唉!
My plan for summer vacation
Summer vacation is coming. I think I’ll have a busy vacation. In June, I plan to practise the violin every morning. You know practice makes perfect. I will have many lessons and take part in a concert. Then every afternoon, I will spend some time doing my homework and playing with my friends. But I will spend most of my free time watching TV. In July, my parents will take me to Australia. It must be relaxing and interesting.
Mr Li is one of my beloved taught us physics when we were in Senior was old,but he taught very could make his classes lively and interesting. Mr Li made good preparations for his lessons and was strict with us, we made mistakes in our homework,he would ask us to correct and do it again. I used to be poor in physics. Mr Li often helped me with my lessons very to his help and hard work,I have made good progress and caught up with the a retired teacher,he's still working hard for our educational cause(教育事业).
篇三：中考英语作文范文： view on school uniform
At our school , we have to wear uniforms every day. The problem is that all my classmates think the uniforms are ugly. We think young people should look smart and so we would like to wear our own clothes. Our teachers believe that if we did that. We would concentrate more on our clothes than our studies. We disagree. We should feel more comfortable and thate is good for studying. If we can’t do that, we should be allowed to design our own uniforms. We also think everyone should be different from others. That would be a good way to keep both teachers and students happy.
篇四：中考英语作文范文： My opinions on volunteering
We are middle school students and we are busy with our lessons. So some people think we should concentrate more on our studies. If we volunteer to help others, it’s a waste of time. But I think volunteering is great. I not only feel good about helping others but also get to spend time doing what I love to do. And from volunteering I have learned many things that I have never learned in class. So if I have an oppoutunity, I’d like to visit old people’s home to clean up for them. I’d also like to help sick kids in hospital. I love kids and I plan to put my love to good use by working in hospital. In a word, I’d like to help people who need help. If everyone helps out a bit, the world will be more colorful.
低碳生活
Presently, a new lifestyle called low carbon life is spreading every corner of our country. The concepts of low carbon are low energy and no waste. It is such a significant project that I can’t wait to present my ideas on how to promote it.
On the first place, a no-car day is supposed to set up every week in our school. Because cars not only cause serious air pollution but also waste energy. On no-car day, neither students nor teachers are allowed to drive to school. Meanwhile, just walk, jump, cycle or run. Use our legs and enjoy the fun.
On the second place, we had best not use plastic bags any more. No one can stand the “white pollution”. So, it is wise to use bags which can be reused again and again.
Finally, one thing that we should keep in mind: every big thing comes from the subtle. Therefore, as students, we ought to turn out the lights the moment we leave, turn off the tap in time, and reuse our textbook and so on.
All in all, it weighs greatly for all of us to put the low carbon lifestyle into practice. Just set our mind to these: no-car day, no plastic bags, and no waste. Let’s do it now.
父亲节
Yesterday was Father’s Day. I had planned to give my father a present. But I didn’t remember it until in the was too late to post a card to him. So I decided to buy something. When I was in the department store. I found it was not easy for me to choose something right for him. Suddenly I
got an idea. I ran home and opened my computer. I made a beautiful card and mailed him through the Internet. then I began to make supper. When father came home, he was very glad to find a big meal on the table. then I asked him to check his e-mail. He was amazed to find a beautiful card in his e-mail-box.
What a wonderful surprise!
世界杯
World Cup (soccer), two international soccer tournaments, one for men and one for women, each held every four years. Both tournaments are the pinnacle of international competition in the sport.
The men’s World Cup is considered the most popular sporting event in the world and is followed with passionate interest around the globe—the final game of the 1998 tournament was played to a television audience of more than 1 billion viewers. Founded in 1930 with just 13 teams, the tournament now attracts entries from more than 140 countries. The teams must participate in elimination games within their own continents before qualifying to become one of the 32 nations participating in the final tournament.
The women’s World Cup was first played in 1991 and has gained popularity steadily since then. More than 90,000 fans attended the finals of the 1999 tournament—one of the largest crowds ever to witness a women’s sporting event. Nearly 75 nations attempted to qualify for the 1999 event, which was a 16-team elimination tournament.
世博会(考得太多，所以机率不大)
Shanghai will host the 20_ World Expo. The World Expo has a long
history but it has never been held in Asia. So the 20_ World Expo is
an honor for all of the Asians. Our government has promised that it will be the best one. And Shanghai, as a host city, will have more chances to develop quickly. As a student in Shanghai, I should learn English well so that I can be a volunteer in the Expo to help foreigners know more about Shanghai
玉树地震
Qinghai lies in the northeastern part of the Tibetan Plateau, which formed due to the ongoing collision of the Indian Plate with the Eurasian Plate. The main deformation in this area is crustal shortening, but there is also a component of left lateral strike-slip faulting on major west–east trending structures such as the Kunlun and Altyn Tagh fault systems that accommodate southeastward translation of the Tibetan area
欢迎阅读其他英语作文范文：
It was my special day last Sunday because it was my mother’s forty-first birthday.
I did a lot of things on that day. In the morning, I went to the supermarket. I bought a yellow sweater for my mother as her birthday present .It was my first time that I bough the present for my I make money by myself. I sold newspapers for a week. My mother was very pleased with what I did. How happy my mother and I were.
Beijing has a history of over 3,000 years with a population of nearly 13million and a lot of places of interest around it. In recent years, the city ofBeijing has been advancing very quickly. You can see more museums, parks anshopping centers here and there. More and more highways and overhead walkwayshave been built up. Whats more, a lot more buses which burn cleaner fuel, suchas CNG or LPG, are put into use, to prevent air from being polluted. Water inthe rivers is clean again. Wherever you go, you can see GREen trees, grass andbeautiful flowers. All these make life in Beijing more convenient, pleasant andcolorful. Beijing is still advancing to the bright future.
面对英语作文，很多学生都表示头疼，自己觉得写的还比较理想，成绩却不理想，有些同学不顾得分要点，一味追求难的语法及高级的词汇，结果导致错误不 断，本末倒置，不但没有拿到得分亮点，反而扣分，这是由于大部分同学对英语作文打分规则不太清楚导致。今天特级教师帮大家理一下英语作文的得分要 点，以助于大家能够拿到一个好的分数。
同学们首先要知道，英语作文分为四等。一等文：13-15分;二等文：9-12分;三等文：5-8分;四等文：0-4分。以下教大家四点如何拿到英语高分作文：
1.把握要点：
实际上中考英语写作就等于两个字，翻译!因为中考英语写作一般会给出几个要点，要求必须在文章中有所体现。文章写的再好，只要缺少要点就会扣分。所以要点，也就是文章的第二段内容，要做到全，围绕中心。
2.理清结构
中考最流行的结构就是三段式，深受各地区中考英语写作阅卷老师的喜爱。为什么尼?因为这种结构十分清 晰。“观点——要点——总结”让人一目了然。三段式的第一段：简单明了，开门见山，不超过2句话，如，我们想表达小强很强壮，第一段直接说 XQ is extremely strong. 观点明确，这一句足矣。
第二段：分2-3点说为什么他强壮。1. 每天吃10顿饭，He has ten meals everyday! 详举吃的是什么。2. 每天运动2小时，He does exercise 2 hours a day! 详举做了什么运动。
第三段：经过第二段的论证，可以得出结论。但请注意，不能完全照抄第一段，要有升华。也可以提出希望和建议等。如，How strong and robust XQ is! I hope to be him one day!
中考英语作文对考生的要求有四点：1、内容要完整。 2、语句流畅。3、没有语法错误。4、书写规范。能达到上述要求的作文，都会得到相应的高分。
一：先看一下扣分点：
1.内容方面：要点缺失，可酌情扣分。比如中考作文“I want to do something for my school”，若没有写一件具体的事情，是要扣3分以上的;若写的事情太过于虚幻，没有实际内容，也会扣1-2分。
2.字数：少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。
中考英语作文要求60字以上，标点符号不算，少了就要扣分。但是60字的作文能不能得高分?从我们拿到的实例作文来看，16分以上的作文，没有少于75字的，甚至少于80字的也少之又少。当然，也极少有超过100字的，因为中考试卷的短线格一共80个，在格子下面大约还有2行的空间，可以加20字左右，再多阅卷人就很难看清了，也会影响卷面的美观。所以，同学们如果想让作文得到高分，最好是让字数在75-100字之间。
3. 语法和拼写错误：每个扣，重复错误不计;
4. 标点错误：每4个扣.
二：加分点
除了这些扣分点，还有一些得分点：比如说作文的组织结构分，就是根据学生使用复杂句型、单词和谚语、俗语的情况来加分。
只要文章中有1个亮点，基本就可以争取到1分(3分的文采分是很难全部拿到的)。而这1分的亮点，是可以提前准备的。例如，有一些“万金油”式的复杂句型，例如强调句型、only相关的倒装句等，只要同学们多操练几次，几乎是一定能用到作文当中，从而为自己争取到这1分。
其次就是卷面分
很多家长和同学，尤其是部分书法并不是十分整洁的同学，都会关心是否真的有“卷面分”的存在。虽然在阅卷标准里面并没有卷面分这一项，但是这个分数却真切地反映在了同学们的分数里面。
据阅卷老师的经验，在阅卷的时候并不是按这3个部分逐项打分的，而是在第一遍读完全文之后，心里已经形成了一个“印象分”，然后再细读第二、三遍，把印象分分配到各个打分部分。因此，这个“印象分”就非常重要，而同学们的书法，也正是在这个环节，影响到了自己的分数。所以初三的考生，如果书法不好，一定要注意。所谓的书法并不需要写的很漂亮，符合3个简单的标准即可：没有斜体、没有连笔、涂改较少。
一、充分准备，打好基础。
为了提高书面表达水平，平时应加强阅读，多背诵一些句形、段落甚至短文。俗话说：读书破万卷，下笔如有神，只有多读，多记，多背诵，才能出口成章，下笔成文。此外，还要掌握一些应用文体的写作方法，如书信、日记、通知等，它们大多有固定的格式。
二、认真审题，明确要求
仔细看清写作要求和提示，分清材料的主次，接着确定体裁、格式和人物、地点等要素；最后确定时态，同时考虑相关的语态搭配用法。
三、遣词造句、表达规范
用词要恰当，不可逐句把提示翻译成英语。写作时，应尽量选用你最熟悉、最有把握的词和句型来表达思想。如果有些单词不会些，有些句型不会表达，可以设法绕开，用熟悉的同义词、同义短语或同义句来代替。要学会善于运用适当的关联词，如and,or,but,so，because,since等，以使行文逻辑紧密，自然流畅。
四、认真撰写，卷面整洁
如果考试时间允许，书面表达一定要先写草稿。在抄写入答题卷前，要先进行检查修改。首先检查所写内容是否切题；之后检查主题是否明确，表达方式是否恰当；最后检查所用时态、语态、人称是否符合要求，前后是否一致。
英语作文卷面要求：
1.标题应写在第一行的中央。标题中的每一个实词的第一个字母均应大写。
2.段与段之间，一般不空行，但每段第一行应缩进3–4个字母所占的位置。
3.书写要工整，字体稍大，词间距离要一致，行间距离要一致，尽量避免一个单词隔行书写。
With the improvement of living conditions, more and more people can livelonger. However, many old people always suffer from loneliness, which is one ofthe major problems in today’s society. To make the old people live better, somegood advice must be followed. Firstly, the young should spare more time to talkand communicate with their parents, so as to relieve their loneliness. Secondly,the old ought to understand the work pressure and family burden of the , the society are supposed to organize more activities for the old,so that they can make more friends and have more joys and happiness in theirlife.
克服社交恐惧症Overcoming Social Phobia
We live in a world that surrounded by people, we need to communicate with others, for the purpose of share our emotions and keep survive. While some people have social phobia, they are afraid of talking to others, they can’t make the social communication. This is such a big illness, but they can overcome it. First, they need to take the positive attitude to life, having more communication with others can enriches their knowledge, they can share happiness and sorrow with friends, when they are in trouble, friends will help them. Second, they should open their hearts, don’t be afraid of talking to others, once the mouths are opened, the world will be lit up.
我们生活在一个被人群包围的世界，我们需要和别人进行交流，为了和别人分享我们的情感和在这个世界生存。然而一些人有社交恐惧症，他们害怕和别人聊天，无法进行社交。这是很严重的病，但是他们可以克服。第一，他们需要对生活抱有积极的态度，和别人进行多点交流，可以丰富他们的知识，也可以和朋友分享喜怒哀乐，当遇到困难的时候，朋友会帮助他们。第二，他们应该打开心扉，不要害怕和别人交流，一旦开口，世界将被点亮。
中考的脚步越来越近，有的同学开始焦虑：时间越来越短，那么如何才可以在短时间内提高自己的写作水平呢?其实，中考英语写作是很容易提高的。以下写作文时需要注意的四个方面，希望对大家有所启发。
第一，词汇量要充足。
词汇量多少很大程度上决定作文是否能写得下去，很多时候想到一个很好的句子或文字，但一下子词汇不记得了，没法写。词汇量不足的学生，建议使用英语背单词的软件，在较短时间内迅速提高词汇量。
第二，审题要充分。
仔细审题和构思就成了写作的第一步。审题的重点放在写作体裁、格式、字数方面，确保第一遍审题就能保证得到基本分。同时还要文体和时态，因为不同的文体要求的写作格式也是不同的，时态的要求也非常重要。
第三，提纲要详细。
审完题后一定要列提纲。很多学生认为，中考英语作文译成中文，最多是小学二年级的语文作文水平，所以根本没有必要列提纲。其实，这种想法是非常错误的，因为提纲不仅能使文章的结构清晰，还有很重要的一点：防止漏掉作文内容。因为中考英语作文有一个很重要的要求：要点要全。如果你漏掉了需要写的内容，即使文章写得再优美，用词再准确，也拿不了高分。最后要注意打草稿，然后修改。这样可以保证错误降低至最少或者没有错误，同时也能保持卷面整洁。
第四，文化差异要注意
我们要时刻牢记一点，中英文表达方式有很大的差异，所以体现在作文表达上也常常会出现生硬的中国式作文表达，降低了我们的作文质量。所以注重中英语言差异，并努力找到两者之间的表达方式上的共通点，并且有意识的运用就能避免类似的问题。
最后，细节错误要摒弃。
很多孩子在写作文时常常感觉写得非常好，用上了几个高级句型或者不错的词汇短语，以为可以得高分，但最终结果出来后却与预想差距很大。主要的原因是很多细节没有注意。比如第三人称单数，名词的单复数，大小写，甚至标点、书写、段落安排等，这些细节问题也很重要。
做好以上几个方面，中考英语写作是很容易提高的!祝愿大家在中考中能取得理想的成绩!
题目：请向你未见面的笔友写一封自我介绍信，字数不少于60单词。
Dear Bob,
亲爱的鲍勃，
Yesterday I heard from you. I am very glad to be your pen friend. My name is Peter Zhang. I am sixteen years old. I live in...
昨天我收到了你的来信，我很高兴成为你的笔友。我的名字叫张彼德。我今年十六岁，我住在......
I am a middle school student, too. I like English and maths very much. I also like sports. I am good at singing. I know a little about America. Could you tell me something more about your country in your next letter?
我也是一名中学生，我非常喜欢英语和数学。我还喜欢体育运动，我很擅长唱歌。我对美国的了解不多，下次来信时能多跟我聊聊你们国家的事吗？
Please write to me soon.
期待着你的来信。
Yours
Peter Zhang
My Low-carbon Life
The environmental pollution is worse and worse today. Many trees are cut down, and water and air are polluted. As a student I try to have a low-carbon life to save energy and reduce pollution.
Firstly, I often walk to school. It can reduce air pollution. Secondly, I always turn off the lights and fans when leaving the classroom. Thirdly, I always make full use of paper and other school things and never waste water.
I wish more students to join me and make the earth more and more beautiful.
中考英语作文【7篇】
中考的脚步越来越近，有的同学开始焦虑：时间越来越短，那么如何才可以在短时间内提高自己的写作水平呢?其实，中考英语写作是很容易提高的。Teresa总结了以下写作文时需要注意的四个方面，希望对大家有所启发。
第一，词汇量要充足。
词汇量多少很大程度上决定作文是否能写得下去，很多时候想到一个很好的句子或文字，但一下子词汇不记得了，没法写。词汇量不足的学生，建议使用“背单词”软件，能够在较短时间内迅速提高词汇量。
第二，审题要充分。
我所教的学生中在写英语作文时，普遍存在这样一个情况：看完作文题，就开始写，想到哪写到哪，只要把字数凑够了就停笔了。这样写出来的文章，看起来就像在记流水帐，没有任何逻辑，杂乱无章，毫无条理，同时容易出现用错时态、用错格式等的情况。试想，如果你是试卷的命题人，你出作文题的时候，肯定有出这道题的独特的道理。所以仔细审题和构思就成了写作的第一步。审题的重点放在写作体裁、格式、字数方面，确保第一遍审题就能保证得到基本分。同时还要文体和时态，因为不同的文体要求的写作格式也是不同的，时态的要求也非常重要。
第三，提纲要详细。
审完题后一定要列提纲。很多学生认为，中考英语作文译成中文，最多是小学二年级的语文作文水平，所以根本没有必要列提纲。其实，这种想法是非常错误的，因为提纲不仅能使文章的结构清晰，还有很重要的一点：防止漏掉作文内容。因为中考英语作文有一个很重要的要求：要点要全。如果你漏掉了需要写的内容，即使文章写得再优美，用词再准确，也拿不了高分。最后要注意打草稿，然后修改。这样可以保证错误降低至最少或者没有错误，同时也能保持卷面整洁。
第四，文化差异要注意
我们要时刻牢记一点，中英文表达方式有很大的差异，所以体现在作文表达上也常常会出现生硬的中国式作文表达，降低了我们的作文质量。所以注重中英语言差异，并努力找到两者之间的表达方式上的共通点，并且有意识的运用就能避免类似的问题。
最后，细节错误要摒弃。
很多孩子在写作文时常常感觉写得非常好，用上了几个高级句型或者不错的词汇短语，以为可以得高分，但最终结果出来后却与预想差距很大。主要的原因是很多细节没有注意。比如第三人称单数，名词的单复数，大小写，甚至标点、书写、段落安排等，这些细节问题也很重要。
做好以上几个方面，中考英语写作是很容易提高的！祝愿大家在中考中能取得理想的成绩！
Dear Xiaowei,
Weight problem is quite common among teenagers everywhere. So I don’t think you have much to worry about. Here are my suggestions. Eating late at night is OK, but you should to eat more fruit and vegetables, which are good for you.
Also, when you are free, you’d better do more exercise. Running is great. You don’t like running alone, but what about running with your friends? Or you can do some team sports like basketball. I’m sure your friends will be willing to help you lose weight. I hope you have as much success in losing weight as you have had in your studies. “Believe myself, and I will win.” It’s really important for us when we meet difficulties. Don’t lose heart; I’m sure you will succeed one day.
九月一开学，初三生就正式吹响了中考复习的号角，很多考生都在担心能否提高自己的学习成绩，尤其是英语作文写作。其实，英语作文写作还是较容易提高的，只要你多注意下写作要点，那你知道中考英语作文写作要点有哪些吗?
第一，词汇量要充足。
词汇量多少很大程度上决定作文是否能写得下去，很多时候想到一个很好的句子或文字，但一下子词汇不记得了，导致无从下笔。词汇量不足的学生，要在接下来的时间里重点抓单词记忆。在记忆单词时要讲究方式方法，合理利用记忆规律。
第二，审题要充分。
很多同学在写英语作文时，普遍存在这样一个情况：看完作文题，就开始写，想到哪写到哪，只要把字数凑够了就停笔了。这样写出来的文章，看起来就像 在记流水帐，没有任何逻辑，杂乱无章，毫无条理，同时容易出现用错时态、用错格式等的情况。因此，仔细审题和构思就成了写作的第一步。审题的重点放在写作体裁、格式、字数方面，确保第一遍审题就能保证得到基本分。同时还要文体和时 态，因为不同的文体要求的写作格式也是不同的，时态的要求也非常重要。
第三，提纲要详细。
审完题后一定要列提纲。很多同学认为，中考英语作文译成中文，最多是小学二年级的语文作文水平，所以根本没有必要列提纲。其实，这种想法是非常错误的， 因为提纲不仅能使文章的结构清晰，还有很重要的一点：防止漏掉作文内容。因为中考英语作文有一个很重要的要求：要点要全。如果你漏掉了需要写的内容，即使文章写得再优美，用词再准确，也拿不了高分。最后要注意打草稿，然后修改。这样可以保证错误降低至最少或者没有错误，同时也能保持卷面整洁。
第四，文化差异要注意。
我们要时刻牢记一点，中英文表达方式有很大的差异，所以体现在作文表达上也常常会出现生硬的中国式作文表达，降低了我们的作文质量。所以注重中英语言差异，并努力找到两者之间的表达方式上的共通点，并且有意识的运用就能避免类似的问题。
最后，细节错误要摒弃。
很多孩子在写作文时常常感觉写得非常好，用上了几个高级句型或者不错的词汇短语，以为可以得高分，但最终结果出来后却与预想差距很大。主要的原因是很多细节没有注意。比如第三人称单数，名词的单复数，大小写，甚至标点、书写、段落安排等，这些细节问题也很重要。
（浙江丽水）Ellen看到大家都对自己的未来充满期待，感到特别高兴。为了鼓励大家学好英语，他准备出一期英语学习经验交流专刊。请根据以下问题和答案的提示并结合你的实际情况，以“My English Learning”为题写一篇80词左右的英文稿件，要求至少涉及其中的三个问题，并且不能出现你的真实姓名、校名和县名等。提示：
When did you start learning English? (in … /…years ago)
How do you learn English? (listen carefully, study with a group, read English every day…)
What is difficult to learn? (listening, grammar…)
What other helpful ways do you know to learn English well? (watch English movies, sing English songs…)
参考作文：
English is one of my best subjects and I started learning English when I was ten years old. But at the very beginning, listening seemed a little difficult for me. So I have been doing a lot of listening practice, such as listening to tapes, watching English TV programs. And I found it really helped a lot. In fact, there are some more helpful ways to learn English well. For example, I enjoy singing English songs and I want to join an English club or find a pen pal from English-speaking countries. I believe that nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it.
小组合作学习
1.互相帮助
2.学会倾听
3.与他人合作
4.发表个人见解
自主学习
1.制定学习计划
2.合理安排时间
3.独立思考
4.做学习的主人
注意：
1.词数100左右;
2.可适当发挥，加入个人观点;
3.发言稿的开头已给你写好，但不计入总词数
参考词汇：study in groups, work together, make good use of time
Dear friend,
Welcome to our
Thanks for listening!
参考答案：
Dear friend,
Welcome to our school. I would like to talk about two ways of study in our school. The first way is to study in groups. When we study in groups, we can help each other. We can learn to listen to others and how to work together. Also, everyone can have chances to express his own ideas. The other way we like is to study by ourselves. We can make our own plans for study and learn to make good use of time. We can also learn to think by ourselves. And the most important thing is that we we can be the master of our own study Thanks for listening!
Mr Green,
I'm Wang Gang. I'm very sorry to tell you that I was ill. I'm not feeling well. This morning I went to see a doctor. He told me that I had caught a bad cold. I have to stay at home for two days. So I can't go to school today or tomorrow. I hope I'll get well soon. I'll ask you for your help when I meet you in two days. Thank you.
Yours,
Wang Gang
Our School Rules
There are many rules in our school.
From Monday to Friday，we have to get to school before 7：00 in the must wear school uniforms，and I think it is good for us because uniforms canmake us look smart. We must listen to our teachers carefully in class and finishour homework after school. We are not allowed to use mobile phones in class. Ithink the rules are very strict but useful，and we should follow them. However，wehave so much homework that we have little free time to do what we love todo.
In my opinion，we should have more free time to take part in all kinds ofactivities and improve our abilities.
Todayis Women's Day. I think it would be one of the most beautiful memories in mymother's life.
今天是妇女节。我觉得它会是我妈妈人生中最重要的记忆之一。
Afterschool, I head to the supermarket which is not far from my home. Yes, you areright! I intend to cook a simple meal for my mother. It takes me an hour and ahalf to cook two dishes and a soup. It is not until my mom comes back that Ifinish my cooking. There is a sweet smile on her face. At that moment, there’snothing could be better than her smile. Everything I do is worthy. With an airof warmth, I say, ''Mom, Happy Women's Day.'' Thenshe smiles.
放学后，我去了离家不远的超市。是啊，你猜对了。我想为妈妈做一顿简单的饭菜。我花了一个半小时，煮了两菜一汤。我妈妈回来前，我就煮好了。她脸上露出了甜美的微笑。在那一刻，没有什么能比她的微笑更美好的了。我所做的.一切都是值得的。在温暖的气氛中，我说，' '妈妈，妇女节快乐。”然后她微笑了。
Howwonderful today is! I sincerely hope that my mother is happy every day.
今天是多么美妙啊!我真诚的希望我的母亲每天都是快乐的。
1.内容完整，语句流畅，无语法错误，书写规范，给9-10分;
2.内容较完整，语句较流畅，基本无语法错误，书写较规范，给6-8分;
3.内容不完整，语句欠流畅，语法错误较多，书写较规范，给3-5分;
4.只写出个别要点，语法错误较多，书写欠规范，只有个别句子可读或不知所云，给0-2分。
对考生的作文要求有四点：1、内容要完整。2、语句流畅。3、没有语法错误。4、书写规范。能达到上述要求的作文，都会得到相应的高分。所以，在写作文的时候，大家要牢记这些要求。
要做到内容完整，我们首先要认清看好题目的要求，抓住要点，注意文体。我们可以在写作之前好好构思一下，自己将从几个方面来写。是否能将所有内容都包含在内。在写完之后，再检查一遍。看看有没有内容的缺失。
要做到语句的流畅，这就要求有扎实的英语基本功。在平时的积累上，注意一些语义的表达方法。要尽量使用自己能够正确运用的语句和表达方式。注意句子之间的连贯性。这不仅仅指从语法上，也指句意上的连贯。
在初中阶段，考生应注意语法点有：动词单三形式，时态(包括：现在进行时，一般过去时，将来时)，定语从句(此项语法建议考生尽量不要使用)，语态，单复数，主谓一致，冠词等还有一些表达方式。比如，我非常喜欢足球。考生经常会写成Iverylikefootball.这样的错误一定要避免。
书写一定要规范。要了解英语作文的书写规则。同时，要知道应用文的写作方法。
除了以上的四个方面，还建议考生们要检查：单词的拼写、大小写和标点符号。
考试的时候，要尽量留出充足的时间给作文。这样，我们才能有足够的时间去构思，去打草稿。在评卷的时候，第一印象很重要，所以考生们一定要让自己的作文看起来舒服，干净，整齐。
中考英语中，很多学生自感基础很差，主动放弃了作文的15分。即便学生表达能力很差，但只要所写文章中包括题目要点中的部分信息，依然能得1-3分的最低档分数;如能完整表达题目给出的要点和要求，同时文章通顺，无严重语法和拼写错误，一般能得到4-11分的中档分。
Elephants
Elephant is the largest animal on land today When it is 12 years old, it studs over three meters and does not grow any more Usually moving in groups and caring for each other, Elephant is know to be a very and gentle creamre Elephant has been and is a vital tool for people to do many things that would normally be imposs-ible Its size
大象是陆地上最大的动物。它生下来体重约90公斤，身高约1米。到12岁时，象就不再长了，身高3米多。大象通常是灰色的，有长鼻子，大大的象牙从嘴的两侧伸出。大象通常喜欢集体行动，彼此之间相互照顾。众所周知大象是性情温和的动物。很多年来，人们利用大象拖木，举圆木。大象一直是人们做许多事物的重要工具，特别是一些人力不能做的事情。大象过去一直是、将来也会是人们接触过的最大的`一种动物。它的庞大、美丽和力量将永远对人类有益。
要点+结构+逻辑+语法+亮点
要点：实际上中考英语写作就等于两个字，翻译!因为中考英语写作一般会给出几个要点，要求必须在中有所体现。写的再好，只要缺少要点就会扣分。所以要点，也就是的第二段内容，要做到全，围绕中心。
结构：中考最流行的结构就是三段式，深受各地区中考英语写作阅卷老师的喜爱。为什么尼?因为这种结构十分清晰。“观点——要点——总结”让人一目了然。三段式的第一段：简单明了，开门见山，不超过2句话，如，我们想表达小强很强壮，第一段直接说 XQ is extreel strng. 观点明确，这一句足矣。
第二段：分2-3点说为什么他强壮。1. 每天吃10顿饭，He has ten eals everda! 详举吃的是什么。2. 每天运动2小时，He des exercise 2 hurs a da! 详举做了什么运动。
第三段：经过第二段的论证，可以得出结论。但请注意，不能完全照抄第一段，要有升华。也可以提出希望和建议等。如，Hw strng and rbust XQ is! I hpe t be hi ne da!
逻辑：这里的逻辑实际指的就是逻辑词。最常用的就是表示递进的，转折的，总结的逻辑词等。递进：除了first, secnd, third, finall 等还可以使用高级点的，如first f all(首先)，in additin, what's re, rever(都是另外的意思)，in a wrd, all in all(表示总结的)。转折：but, et, hwever等。真正有经验的阅卷老师会很注意这些逻辑连接词，因为这些词体现了这个的思路。
语法：其他几点都不是硬性的要求，不那样做不能说是错，只能说是不好，但是语法却是硬性的。如，单词的使用，时态等。
亮点：当我们将前八个字都做得很完美的时候也只能得到一个二等文的上。要想得到一等文，最后两个字，亮点至关重要。大家设想如果我们是阅卷老师。有两篇写人美丽的作文摆在我们面前，都是结构清晰的三段式，要点都很全，都用了一些逻辑词，都没有语法错误，但是A篇只用了beautiful,gd-ling,B篇却用到了attractive，charing，catching等，我坚信正常人都会给B篇高分的。这些高级一点的词汇，词组，句型便是我们得到一等文的最有力的绝招。所以，以后写英语作文要养成一般词汇限量用的好习惯。
审题细心
审题好比驾驶员打方向，方向对了，哪怕开得慢点，也会顺利到目的地。如果审题不清，书面表达的成绩不知道会有多惨。学生真正开始写作前，必须花相当一部分时间做写前阅读、思考等准备，包含以下四方面：
1)审体裁。根据情景提示首先要弄清写何种体裁文章。
2)审结构。明确开始部分、正文部分和结尾部分，定好段落。
3)审格式。如日记、便条、书信、通知的格式等。
4)审内容。弄清什么必需写，哪些略写，尤其是图画式书面表达，要学会连贯性，读懂图的意思
时态要准确
英语作文除了结构，还有一个是阅卷老师最敏感的，那就是时态，这也是一篇作文是否得高分的关键。要明确文章的时态、同时人称要一致、数要一致、首尾要呼应。再根据内容要求，现确定事情是过去已经发生还是未来即将发生，比如记叙一件事要用一般过去时;写经常发生的事或对人物的描写，要用一般现在时;对于未来的憧憬要用一般将来时;过去的事情对现在造成的影响或过去延续到现在的状况都用现在完成时。一定不能乱用乱配。
提炼字词句
一篇作文是由单词和句子组成的。这是写作最基本的要素，就像万丈高楼需要一砖一瓦层层盖起来一样，如果砖瓦质量不好，那么这座高楼很快就会垮掉。同样的，如果基本的词句掌握不好，那么我们在写文章的时候就会感觉提笔无从下手，甚至连一个句子都很难写出。这就是因为头脑中没有“存货”造成的。
Lifeis a mirror. If we smile to her, she would also return the happiness to us. Butif we cry, she would be disappointed. Therefore, we should be positive towardlife, so as to get happiness.
生活就是一面镜子。如果我们对她微笑，她也会回报我们幸福。但如果我们哭泣，她会很失望。因此，我们应该积极的态度对待生活，从而得到幸福。
Actually,happiness is everywhere if we keep a good attitude. As we keep a good mood, ourworld will be a sunny land, which is resounded with soft music. However, if weare pessimists, we'll find our world is full of darkness.
其实，如果我们保持良好的心态幸福无处不在。如果我们保持一个好心情，我们的世界将是一个充满阳光的地方，充满了柔和的音乐。然而，如果我们是悲观主义者，我们会发现我们的世界充满了黑暗。
Whileon the other side, happiness is not a destination but a journey. Because there's no paradise at all, but wecan make a paradise if we're hard-working and intelligent. So we should worklike we don't need money, smile like we've never been hurt, and perform ourselveslike no one can see us.
而另一方面，幸福不是目的地，而是一段旅程。因为根本就没有天堂，但如果我们勤劳有智慧，我们可以自己弄一个天堂。所以我们应该就像我们不需要钱一样工作，就像从未受伤过一样微笑，就像没有人能看到我们一样表演。
I will work harder
I didn’t do well this term. I was a little lazy. I didn’t study hard at math, because I thoug
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