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邀请与答复
Dear Mr. / Ms,
We should like to invite your Corporation to attend the 20xx International Fair which will be held from August 29 to September 4 at the above address. Full details on the Fair will be sent in a week.
We look forward to hearing from you soon, and hope that you will be able to attend.
Yours faithfully
尊敬的先生/小姐,
在上述地址,我们想请贵公司参加于八月二十九日到九月四日举办的20xx国际商品交易会,关于交易会的详情我们一周内将寄给你。希望不久能收到你的来信,并能来参加。
您诚挚的
肯定答复
Dear Mr. / Ms,
Thank you for your letter of June 28 inviting our corporation to participate in the 20xx International Fair. We are very pleased to accept and will plan to display our electrical appliances as we did in previous years.
Mr. Li will be in your city from July 2 to 7 to make specific arrangements and would very much appreciate your assistance.
Yours faithfully
尊敬的先生/小姐,
感谢六月二十八日来信邀请我们公司参加20xx国际商品交易会。我们乐于参加并计划展示我们前几年生产的电子设备。李先生将于七月二日至七日去你市做具体安排,非常感谢你的协助。
你诚挚的
否定的答复
Dear Mr. / Ms,
Thank you very much for your invitation to attend the 20xx International Fair. As we are going to open a repair shop in your city at that time, we are sorry that we shall not be able to come.
We hope to see you on some future occasion.
Yours faithfully
尊敬的先生/小姐,
非常感谢您邀请我们参加20xx国际商品交易会。由于我们将于同一时间到你市新开一家维修店,非常抱歉我们不能前去。
希望以后在某些场合见到您。
您诚挚的
如果你接触过的商务邮件够多的话,你会发现:商务英语邮件中的语言和大家平时说的、听的地道的口语表达没有太大差别。商务英语邮件在“腔调”上虽然有“正式”和“非正式”的区别,但是它们都必须是“自然的(natural)” :
商务英语邮件中的语言虽然是written English, 但它们在“腔调”上应该和spoken English相似。
很多学生在刚刚开始学习商务英语邮件写作的时候,经常会因为过度追求“专业化”和“职业化”而使写出来的句子特别拗口、晦涩。比如下面这个例子:
As per your request, please find enclosed herewith acheck in the amount of $ .
这个句子中使用了如“as per”和“herewith”这样的看起来很专业但是却没有太多实际意义的词。这些词的使用导致整个句子理解起来很费劲。其实这个学生犯了我们很多学生都会犯的错误:试图通过使用一些big words来提升自己的专业度。但是这样的做法往往适得其反。我们来看下这个句子可以怎么改使其看起来更natural 一些:
As you requested, I’m enclosing a check for $ .
怎么样,修改后的句子是不是看起来更清爽,更容易理解呢?的确,这句话的“腔调”要更加natural一些。首先,这个句子中也因为用到了“you”“I”这样的词而使它更有亲和力,而不是那么冷冰冰。其次,从专业的角度来看,修改后的句子简明扼要,既节约了写信人的写作时间,又节约了收信人的阅读时间,这种“减法”恰恰体现了高效的商务沟通对专业度的要求。
大家再来看两封邮件,这两封邮件都是在阐述同一个问题。相信大家读完这两封邮件后,会对邮件的“腔调”有一个更加直观的认识。
——例1——
Dear :
With reference to your order for a Nashito Camcorder, we are in receipt of your check and are returning same.
I beg to inform you that, as a manufacturer, our company sells camcorders to dealers only. In compliance with our wholesale agreement, we deem it best to refrain from direct business with private consumers.
For your information, there are many retailers in your vicinity who carry Nashito Camcorders. Attached please find a list of said dealers.
Hoping you understand.
Yours truly,
Ava
——例2——
Dear :
We have received your order for a Nashito Camcorder but, unfortunately, must return your check.
As a manufacturer, we sell only to dealers, with whom we have very clear wholesale agreements.
Nevertheless, we sincerely appreciate your interest in Nashito products. We are therefore enclosing a list of retailers in your community who carry a full line of our camcorders. Any one of them will be happy to serve you.
Sincerely yours,
Ava
怎么样,乍一看,很难看出两封邮件写的是一件事情吧?例2的第一段就把主旨意思点明了:我们已经收到了你的订单,但是很遗憾,我们不得不退还你的支票。而例1绕来绕去绕到最后才知道原来是要拒绝订单。
综上所述,商务英语邮件的“腔调”其实没有那么复杂,表达自然、言简意赅就可以写出一个漂亮的邮件。
Dear Mr. Jones:
Thank you for your inquiry of 16 March. We are pleased to hear that you are interested in our product _toaster_.
We've enclosed the photo and detailed information of the product for your reference:
Product: toaster
Specification:
Package: 1pcs/box
Price: 10usd/pcs
Payment: L/C
For purchase quantities over 1,000pcs of individual items we would allow you a discount of 1%. Payment is to be made by irrevocable at sight.
We look forward to receiving your first order.
Sincerely,
Dear Mr. Jones:
We have refreshed our online catalog at , and now it covers the latest new products, which are now available from stock.
We believe that you will find some attractive additions to our product line. Once you have had time to study the supplement, please let us know if you would like to take the matter further. We would be very happy to send samples to you for close inspection.
We will keep you informed on our progress and look forward to hearing from you.
Sincerely,
Letters of Introduction Dear Mr. / Ms.,
This is to introduce Mr. Frank Jones, our new marketing specialist who will be in London from April 5 to mid April on business.
We shall appreciate any help you can give Mr. Jones and will always be happy to reciprocate.
Yours faithfully
Dear Sir:
I am writing to you for the mobile phone of Dephone-S250 I bought on 20th at Tele Mall in Wuhan, . China. Ten days after that, it didn’t ring and send short messages. Then I took it to the seller, but was told that the model had been sold out and I had to wait at least three months for a new one. I had no choice but to go to the repairman. To my disappointment ,he said since it was a new model in China, it was impossible to fix it without the right spare parts. I was so desperate on hearing that for I can not wait that long. Therefore, I have to require that you send me a new one of the same model within a month.
Thank you for your consideration.
Sincerely yours,
Bu Manyi
As the development of technology, today people keep in touch with each other not only by cell phone, but also through email.
When we open computer, we may find all kinds of message, some are important, they are sent from friends, while some are rubbish message, which are sent by the unknown ones.
As we can get the message from all resources, we may be cheated any time. There are always some messages about ads in our emails, such as the car secure, some ads say you are the one who hits their luck, you can have the big prize if you give them some message they need.
A lot of people get cheated, because they want to try to get the prize. When we read the email, we should take care of the fraud, never be greed, the fortune can’t fall from the sky, only we work for it.
Mail To:
Subject : I am stuck!
Will anyone out there teach me how to set up my CyberNet email program ? currently , I am using a freeware email program running on windows 98, but I want to switch to CyberNet Navigator (Ver . ) . Today I spent the whole day trying to set it up by myself , but I was just wasting my time you are willing to teach me to how , please do so like you are talking to a ten-year old . I am not a computer whiz and I do not understand any of those geek codes like PPP , POP , FTP and so on . Thanks in advance.
Yours , lost in Cyberspace
Dear Mr. Jones:
We understand from your information posted on that you are in the market for textiles. We would like to take this opportunity to introduce our company and products, with the hope that we may work with Bright Ideas Imports in the future.
We are a joint venture specializing in the manufacture and export of textiles. We have enclosed our catalog, which introduces our company in detail and covers the main products we supply at present. You may also visit our online company introduction at which includes our latest product line.
Should any of these items be of interest to you, please let us know. We will be happy to give you a quotation upon receipt of your detailed requirements.
We look forward to receiving your enquires soon.
Sincerely,
John Roberts
Dear sir/madam:
Thank you for your letter of [date]. I’m glad that you are also going to [place] next month. It would be a great pleasure to meet you at the [exhibition/trade fair].
Our company is having a reception at [hotel] on the evening of [date] and I would be very pleased if you could attend.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
[name]
[title]
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