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结构单一句:I'm Li Hua. I'm a middle school student. I'm from China.
修改句:I'm Li Hua, a middle school student from China.
结构单一句:You practice more reading, you will improve your reading ability.
修改句:If you practice more reading, you will improve your reading ability.
对策:学会恰当使用连接词、同位语、非谓语动词、短语等对结构单一的英语句子进行合并,进行简单句和复合句的转换训练,逐步掌握较复杂句式。
Mrs Wilson ,
Im going out shopping , and wont be back until about 5:00 pm. I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the city library . At about 1 oclock this afternoon , Tracy called ,saying that she couldnt meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to . She felt very sorry about that , but said that you could set some other time for the meeting . She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home . She has already told Susan about this change.
LI Hua
写出“出彩”的高考英语作文很难吗?
喜爱英语,英语成绩优秀的考生对其是如珠如宝、爱不释手、情有独钟;不喜欢英语,英语成绩一般或是较差的考生对其是恨之入骨、深恶痛绝、愁眉苦脸。
可是不管对英语是什么态度,高考也躲不开它。在高考中,能展现你英语水平的,除了英语成绩外,最主要的还有英语作文,要是在英语作文写作中,能摆脱平铺直叙,写出一些深受阅卷老师喜欢的句型,那更能展现你的英语水平。为此,零点高三认为,考生在平时必须多多积累一些英语作文句型,在英语考试中巧妙的将其运用到作文中,能够作文增色不少。
一.经典开头句型
far as ...is/am/are concerned 就而言
can be said with certainty that... 可以肯定地说......
the proverb says,... 正如谚语所说的,......
generally recognized that... 普遍认为......
hardly that... 这是很难的......
no denying the fact that... 毫无疑问,无可否认......
is more important than the fact that... 没有什么比......更重要。
far more important is that... 更重要的是...
二.经典结尾句型
will conclude by saying... 最后我要说...
, we have the reason to believe that... 因此,我们有理由相信...
may be safely said that... 它可以有把握地说......
what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that...通过以上讨论,我们可以得出结论...
data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that 通过数据我们得到的结论是,....
can be concluded from the discussion that... 从讨论中我们可以得出......的结论
my point of view, it would be better if... 在我看来,如果也许更好
三.衔接句型
case in point is ... 一个典型的例子是......
the problem is not so simple. Therefore,... 然而问题并非如此简单,所以
its a pity that... 但遗憾的是...
, we hold the opinion that... 此外,我们坚持认为,......
, the difficulty lies in... 然而,困难在于...
it has been mentioned above... 正如上面所提到的
this respect,... 从这个角度上,......
四.常用于引言段的句型
people think that 有些人认为...
be frank, I can not agree with their opinion for the reasons below. 坦率地说,我不能同意他们的意见,理由如下。
3. I believe the statement is valid because 我认为这个论点是正确的,因为...
4. Along with the development of, more and more... 随着的发展,越来越多的...
5. As far as I am concerned, I completely agree with the former/ the latter. 就我而言,我完全同意前者/后者的观点。
五.表示比较和对比的常用句型
1. A is completely different from B. A和B完全不同。
2. The difference between A and B is/lies in... A和B不同的地方是......
六.因果推理法常用句型
we read the book, we have learned a lot. 由于阅读这本书,我们已经学到了很多。
2. We read the book; as a result / therefore / thus / hence / consequently / for this reason / because of this, weve learned a lot. 由于阅读这本书,我们已经学到了很多。
3. As a result of /Because of/Due to/Owing to reading the book, weve learned a lot. 由于阅读这本书,我们已经学到了很多。
高考英语书面表达求助信点评
评分标准
1、本题总分为25分,按5个档次给分
2、评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定是否达到及格线(15分),然后确定其所属的具体档次,以该档次的要求来衡量,最后给分。其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来衡量,确定或调整档次,最后给分。
3、词数少于80和多于120的,从总分中减去2分。
4、评分时应注意的主要内容为:内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性及上下文的连贯性。
5、若缺少要点,分数降一档处理。
6、拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。
7、书写较差以至于影响交际,将其分数降低一个档次。
评分细则
优秀(22--25):紧扣主题,覆盖所有要点,内容充实;语法结构多样,词汇丰富,行文流畅,显示出较强的语言运用能力,允许有个别语言错误,但不影响意思表达。
良好(18--21):紧扣主题,覆盖所有要点,内容较充实,行文较流畅,语言有少量错误,但基本不影响意思表达。
一般(15--17):紧扣主题,基本覆盖所有要点,语言错误已影响了部分意思的表达,但多数句子基本正确;基本达到预期写作目的。
较差(11--14):要点不全,内容不完整,行文不够连贯;语言错误较多,半数句子基本正确。
差(6--10):内容混乱,或主要内容偏离主题,尚能够写出少数与内容相关的可读句。
极差(0--5):只能写出与内容相关的词语,没有有效信息;抄写其他文章,或只是写出与作文无关的内容。
英语作文:三点关键定档因素(不跑题是前提)
词汇多样性
语法复杂性
文章连贯性
Dear teacher,
to introduce to us some good ways to learn new words so that we can remember them more easily? the students can easily follow you. Also,I would like you to introduce some rules and good ways to learn grammar. I’m sure that I can make great progress in my English study with your help.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Mr. Johnson,
How are you doing these days? It’s almost two months since we met each other last time. I miss you a lot.
Thank you so much for your help with my English study. Now I am faced with some new learning problems. I have some difficulty in comprehensive reading. My English teacher often says that only if we expand the reading quantity can we be admitted into a better university. But, I feel it difficult to understand English passages with the increase of vocabulary / for lack of vocabulary. Besides, I often feel nervous while reading English. All of the problems bring me great pressure. I am unable to remember words well and feel tired of learning English.
I really hope that you can give me some good advice on how to memorize new words and practice reading English. I believe I can make great progress in English with your help.
I would be grateful/thankful if you could give me some advice/help. (By the way, please come to China for a visit whenever it is convenient to you. I am looking forward to seeing you again.)
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
高一求助信英语作文
书信作文模板
Dear X X X, 亲爱的X X X
I am extremely pleased to hear from you.(我很高兴收到你的来
信) And I would like to write a letter to tell you that_____. (我很高兴写封信告诉
你。。。) I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience/I am looking f0rward to your replies at your earliest convenience. (我希望你可以在空闲的时候尽快给我回信)
Best regards for your health and success. 祝你身体健康万事如意
Sincerely yours,你最真诚的X X X
X X X
Dear Mr Margaret,
I'm glad to know that ten waitresses are needed in your hotel. I'd like to be one of them. I'm a Chinese girl of twenty. I'm single and healthy. I started school when I was six. I studied in No. 1 Primary School. At the age of eleven,I went Shenzhen Middle school for learning. After graduation in I began to work on a construction site as an ordinary worker,I became a postwoman when I was twenty.
I had learned English for 6 years at school,and have kept on learning it since I left school. Now I can speak good English and type well. I enjoy singing and dancing. Last year I won the first prize in the competition for the spare time singers in the city.
Could you let me have a position in your hotel?
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
求助信小学四年级作文
现在我才开始醒悟,原来我一直都在做肮脏的事,身体上的伤痛已使我明白了很多,为什么我那么瘦,为什么我那么失败!
高中那年,我在班上的学习绝对是顶呱呱,大家对我都抱有很高的期望,希望我能够考上重点大学,可是我没有履行诺言,一步一步的走向堕落。我爱上了班上的一个女同学,而且一发不可收拾,我渐渐的.在上课走神,而且不自主的往她那里看,如痴如醉,就在她生日那天,我邀她去party,聚会上大家都很尽兴,而且酒也喝了很多,我不知觉中好象有人拉我的衣角,我翻身去看,是她,我积蓄许久的情绪突然爆发了,我一把搂住她的 腰,狂吻她的唇,也不知道发生什么事,第二天一醒来就发现她衣冠不整,而且在哭,我这才意识到问题的严重性,急忙叫她别哭,可木已成舟,还有什么办法呢?我只好接受这一事实,而后她向班主任告密,希望处置我,就这样我被开除了,回家后又遭到毒打,我后悔莫及,还欠了别人几百快钱,不知该怎么办?希望有人能帮助我,现在胸口好痛,有没有人能帮助我,借我点钱,我的银行卡号为62xxxxxxx346610,谢谢大家
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Dear Kate teacher,
I am a student,named Li asked for your I order to exams are nevours reading I misses some problems don't serious to fell very broad and homwork is so many,I don't to do homework and don't frees times to play spirts,don't to play with my friends. At the everning,I fell study is very I was sleeping go to be ,At first I think must exams so I don't a sleepy.
Miss these problems I don't what to do,I hope teacher can help me,or can give me some can study and thank you for you! Your srudent
Li Hua
Dear uncle, one of my classmates will hold an English speech contest in the city next week. I will represent my school. I am very excited, but also very happy, because this is a good opportunity to improve my English level, but I have no experience.
Although I have been preparing for the competition, as an English expert, I still have no confidence. What can you suggest I do for the competition? I plan to visit you this Saturday morning. I wonder if you are free.
If not, can you tell me when it is convenient for you? I'd love to have your guidance and I'll thank you for any helpyour niece, bayberry.
中文翻译:
亲爱的叔叔,下星期我的一位同学将在城里举行一场英语演讲比赛,我将代表我的学校参加。我很兴奋,但也很高兴,因为这是一个提高我英语水平的好机会,但我没有经验,虽然我一直在准备比赛,作为一名英语专家,我仍然没有信心,你能建议我为比赛做些什么准备?我计划这个星期六早上去拜访你我想知道你是否有空如果没有,你能告诉我你方便的时间吗?我很想得到你的指导我将感谢你的任何帮助你的侄女,杨梅。
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