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There have been more than six major accidents within the last six months, and the most recent one involving a Far Eastern Air Transport jetliner is the most disastrous. One hundred and ten innocent passengers were dashed to death from midair and burned into charcoal. No one knows how it happened and no one knows who is responsible for the accident. But at least Fat should have the decency of making proper funeral arrangements for the unfortunate victims. The attitude of the FAT general manager, however, is very disappointing. Money cannot solve every problem, least of all when one is suddenly deprived of his dear ones. What the relatives of the victims need most is concern and sympathy. A manager must have a strong sense of responsibility. By trying to shirk even the moral responsibility of the accident, the FAT manager has shown himself to be unsympathetic to the crash victims and their relatives. I feel dee* disappointed.
正反对比就是要巧妙地运用对称的英文句式来表达互为补充的意思，因此恰当地运用反义词语往往是必不可少的。如果一旦所要表达的内容具有这种情况，就应尽力选用这种对称的句式并选用适当的反义词语来加强语句，实现语句的亮点。
1)如“很多人很快就会发现，他们在物质上是富裕了，精神上却很贫乏”，可以这样达：
Many people will soon find themselves rich in goods, but ragged in spirit.
(注：句中rich in 与 ragged in, goods 与 spirit 具有正反对比的关系和效果。)
2)如“利远远大于弊”，可以这样表达：
The advantages for outweigh the disadvantages.
(注：句中 the advantages 与 the disadvantages 具有正反对比的关系和效果。)
On August 22, 1981, a Far Eastern Air Transport jetliner (a Boeing 737) bound for Kaohsiung took off from Sungshan Airport. Ten minutes later, at about 10:10 ., it exploded in midair over Miaoli. All 110 passingers aboard, among them some Japanese and Americans, were killed. Everybody who heard about the accident was shocked. This was the worst air disaster in Taiwan. What shall we do in face of this misfortune? We must first offer sympathy to relatives of the victims, and then we must urge the airline company to be really careful with its maintenance work. It is only through proper maintenance that we can hope to prevent another major air disaster from happening.
Good Sportsmanship Is of Vital Importance
Sportsmanship is a great tradition in sports and competitions that means playing clean and handling both victory and defeat with grace, style, and dignity. Today, quite a few athletes lack sportsmanship. I personally hold that good sportsmanship is of vital importance for both the athletes themselves and their offspring.
Firstly, practicing good sportsmanship wins respect. When you win, the trick is to be a gracious and generous winner. Good sportsmanship means acknowledging victories without humiliating opponents, being quietly proud of success, and letting victories speak for themselves. Even if you win by a landslide, good sportsmanship means still finding ways to compliment your opponents. By demonstrating your respect to your opponents, you win respect from them too. Secondly, good sportsmanship teaches children how they should behave. Kids learn the basics of sportsmanship from the adults in their lives, especially their parents and their coaches. Kids who see adults behavin in a sportsmanlike way gradually come to understand that the real winners in sports are those who know how to persevere and to behave with dignity-whether they win or lose a game. A child who practices good sportsmanship is likely to carry the respect and appreciation of other people into every other aspect of life.
In conclusion, sportsmanship is a manifestation of our own ethics in real life. For the sake of sportsmen themselves and the generation to come, good sportsmanship should be highly advocated. (235 words)
The images above are both meaningful and instructive: this man's hard work is not only The pictures serve to remind us that the existence of our current happiness and valuable national heritage is due to the struggles of our predecessors.
We, in turn, should also work hard in order to guarantee the comfort and safety of generations to come. Sustainable development has become a topic of heated debate in recent years. While it is justifiable to satisfy current demands, we cannot neglect the needs of
our descendants in the process. Our children also depend on Earth's natural resources and terest of making a profit, without a single tree planted in its place. This inconsiderate attitude towards the welfare of our descendants, as well the indifference to the outcome of such reckless actions, can only turn Earth into a cold and lifeless planet. People must be taught to appreciate Earth as not only their home, but also the home of our children and grandchildren, as well as all While making great efforts to increase our current quality of life, we must simultaneously consider how our actions will affect future lives.
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上面的漫画意味深长而发人深省，栽树人的艰辛劳作不只是为了他自己，也是为了后人。 这幅漫画是为了提醒我们今天的幸福生活和宝贵的民族遗产归功于我们祖先的奋斗，而我们，
反过来，也要努力劳动来确保我们后代的幸福和*安。
可持续发展是近几年的热点话题，虽然我们要满足自己当前的需要，但不能将子孙后代的需求抛置脑后。我们的孩子同样需要自然资源，我们不能剥夺他们的这份必需品。不幸的是很多人只考虑他们短视的、自私的利益。为了获得利润，整片的森林被砍光，一棵树都不留下。这种不顾及子孙福利的态度，和对这种轻率行为的后果的无动于衷，只会让我们的地球变成一个冷冰冰而无生气的行星。必须告诫人们的是：地球不仅是他们的'家园，也是他们的孩子和所有后代的家园，还是其他所有的植物和动物的家园。
在努力提高今天的生活质量的同时，我们必须考虑到我们的行为会对未来的生命产生什么样的影响。
在大学英语六级写作过程中，一个好的开头犹如画龙点睛，点亮了整篇文章得到好的印象分。
(1) 主题句法：The appeal of advertising to buying motives can have both negative and positive effects.
The biggest safety threat facing airlines today may not be a terrorist with a gun, but the man with the portable com*r in business class.
Believe it or not, optical illusion (错觉) can cut highway crashes.
(2) 问题法：Do you know how many people die from traffic accidents every 23 minutes?
Why does cream go bad faster than butter?
(3) 对比法：Some pessimistic experts feel that the automobile is bound to fall into disuse. They see a day in the not-too-distant future when all autos will be abandoned and allowed to rust. Other authorities, however, think the auto is here to stay. They hold that the car will remain a leading means of urban travel in the foreseeable future.
(4) 数据法：According to a recent survey, about of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation.
Honesty:根据最近的一项统计调查显示，大学生向老师请假的理由当中78%都是假的。
Living off Campus:根据最近的一项统计调查显示，35%的学生不住宿舍，而是在学校外面租房子住。
Youth:根据最近的一项统计调查显示，在某个大学，学生的课余时间的70%都是在休闲娱乐。
The latest statistics show that …
(5) 故事法：Six o'clock yesterday (June 20th, Friday) afternoon when I was walking along the riverbank of our school, an unbelievable scene caught my eyes.
(6) 引语法：A proverb says, _You are only young once._（适用于记住的名言）
It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever.（自编名言）
——英语写作心得体会 (菁选3篇)
In the early spring between February and March, Nanjing International Plum Festival opens as the first ceremonial tourist event of the year. The meeting place is chosen on Plum Hill. Reputed as the First Plum Hill under Heaven, it is one of the eight plum appreciation sights having the most variety, longest history and being the largest in the country. Because the traditional Chinese Lunar New Year always falls in this period, spectacular celebrations of blossom appreciation, show performances, cultural exhibitions and bazaar shopping are be held.
梅花作为南京市的市花，一直受到南京市民的喜爱，每年春季到梅花山赏梅更是南京人传统的踏青项目。南京的梅花山是中国四大梅区之一，占地面积四百多亩，拥有众多的梅中极品洁白素雅的江梅、粉红淡妆的宫粉、色如丹霞的朱砂竞相争妍，美不胜收。
南京山的梅花已经进入全面的盛花期。提醒的是，梅花山中有300多株百年以上的古梅，千万别错过。 据介绍，整个梅花节期间，将有十几项内容形式多样、群众参与性强的文化旅游活动陆续亮相中山陵博爱广场和梅花谷广场。
——空难引起的思考作文 (菁选2篇)
Artificial Intelligence
Future trend in computer science is one of the artificial intelligence. Artificial Intelligence is a new science of researching theories, methods and technologies in simulating or developing thinking process of human beings. It including the research in the field of robotics, speech recognition, image recognition, Natural language processing and expert systems.
AI is an embranchment of Computer Science, and it is foreland of research field of computer science. The field of AI research was founded at a conference on the campus of Dartmouth College in the summer of intelligence has the impact in natural science. The need of using mathematic computer to solve the problem, AI brings many benefits. Artificial intelligence has the impact in economy, the expert system more depth in all, to bring the great benefit. AI also promoted the development of the computer industry, but at the same time, also brought the problem of employment services.
With the development of artificial intelligence and intelligent robot, we have to say, artificial intelligence is advanced research, so it may touch the bottom lines of ethics. I believe that the science of artificial intelligence is waiting for humanity to explore the real connotation.
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When the Boeing 737 jetliner of Far Eastern Air Transport took off from Sungshan Airport on the morning of August 22, 1981, there was no sign that the worst air disaster was only ten minutes away. But at 10:10 ., people who lived in Miaoli heard an explosion-like noise and looked up to see the airplane disintegrate in midair. The newspapers reported next day that all 110 passengers aboard, including some Americans and Japanese, were killed; there was no survivor. The number of death is the largest of all air mishaps in Taiwan. This disaster should prompt us to reexamine our air travel safety measures. I think we have the right to ask the airline company to adhere strictly to standard aircraft maintenance. Unless an aircraft is properly maintained, there will be no safety to speak of. And I am sure we all hope that such a disastrous accident as this one will not be repeated again.
The last several decades have seen a decline in parental influence on their children. In fact, it seems that the more children watch movies and television and get influenced by people outside the home, the more their parents lose control over them. Nowadays, children and teens are often searching for role models other than their parents to imitate. They naturally look to celebrities like singers, movie stars, and athletes to be their guides. For example, many high school students like to dress in the latest fashions that have been made popular by various celebrities. They even cut their hair like famous people or say the same things as them. Parents sim* cannot complete with these stars when it comes to influencing their children. Many television shows, movies, and video games have high levels of violent content and bad language, which greatly influence young people watching them. Children have begun acting badly based upon what they have seen on various media.
英文一般讲求简洁，因此为表达强调偶尔使用重复可以使语句的.强调内容得到突出。英文的重复又根据被重复词语在语句中的位置分为句首重复、句尾重复、首尾重复、尾首重复等。
1)如“现在是忘掉过去一切的时候了。现在是言归正传的时候了。现在是为未来而奋斗的时候了”，可以这样表达：
Now is the time to forget everything in the past. Now is the time to get down to the business. Now is the time to work hard for the future.
(注：此句为句首重复，重复部分为句首的now it the time to )
2)如“我们渴望成功，而且正在为成功而努力工作”，可以这样表达：
We long for success and we are working hard for success .
(注：此句为句尾重复，重复的部分为句尾的for success .)
——英语写作优秀参考 (菁选2篇)
We all know that vehicles are the major source of air pollution in cities. To solve the headache, people have taken a variety of steps, but the result is not satisfying. Here, one way to solve the problem is to set gas thrifter in vehicle.
Setting gas thrifter in vehicle not only decreases the consumption of gas which is a major source of air pollution but also slows down the cost of possessing a vehicle which makes millaye price lower. Thereby, all vehicles set gas thrifter will make air have a lower carbon dioxide content deriving from burning gas and coal. The less carbon dioxide, the less air pollution. Therefore, through setting gas thrifter, vehicles will bum lower gases, and the problem will partly be solved.
Despite other ways to solve the problem, I think the best way is to set gas thrifter in vehicle for both effect and practice.
——英语作文的写作开头 (菁选3篇)
1、活动开展情况
（1）原定目标
为了提高教师的英语水*，使其能够熟练、灵活地运用英文撰写高水*科技论文，软件学院工会于20_年4月申请了青年成长工程项目_英文科技论文写作培训班_，拟借助国际班外教资源和外语教学部的帮助下，开展一系列讲座，达到提升教师英文科技论文的写作能力。
（2）遇到的问题
在本项目的实施过程中，遇到了一个最大的困难是如何找到适合的讲师。国际班外教大部分是侧重教学的教师，能够做科技论文撰写相关指导的可能性非常小。外语教学部反馈的信息是学院的英语外教或者熟悉的外语学院外教也基本无法做此方面的辅导。因此，不得不在项目开始后进行了调整，将_提升科技论文写作能力_的目标转换为了_培养教师英文授课能力_。
（3）实际执行情况
在10月至12月期间，组织了专业课教师观摩外教授课的活动。先后有10余名教师参加了本项活动，收集听课记录21份。在12月初，组织教师参加了美籍教师Michael的net work meeting活动，按照Michael的课程安排与国际班的同学进行了英语交流。
2、活动的效果
通过观摩外教课并与外教和学生针对英语教学的方式方法进行讨论，学院教师英语表达能力得到了不断提升。学院工会也通过与外教的交流发现了提升教师英语授课能力的专项训练，并向学院相关部门提出了需求，积极为教师们争取学习和提升的机会。
3、改进的思路
本次立项活动前期调研不够充分，导致在项目进行过程中必须调整思路。在未来的立项工作中，我们将加强调研，认真论证项目的可行性，以保证立项内容的顺利进行。
当地时间10日，一架从埃塞俄比亚首都斯亚贝巴飞往肯尼亚首都内罗毕的航班ET-320在起飞后坠毁，机上148名乘客和9名机组人员全部遇难，其中包括八名*公民。
该飞机是在起飞6分钟后坠毁的，事后很多人认为这是意外，但细心的人们马上意识到，这不是简单的“意外”——五个月前，也有一架同类型的飞机在起飞十分钟后坠落，机上人员全部遇难，这两架飞机均是波音的最新机型，交付使用才3、4个月，而且机长都是资深有为的。
究竟是什么原因导致这两架飞机起飞后短短十分钟内就坠落呢?
是人工智能。
波音公司在设计737时，为了增强功能，节约能源，在机翼上安装了一个智能系统(MCAS)：当飞机在手动飞行情况下遇到仰角过高时，MCAS会将飞机机头自动下压来调整*衡，这个系统在表面上看起来是有利安全的，实际上却暗藏杀机。当飞机起飞时，如果仰角过高，MCAS这项人工智能就会强制飞机一直往下俯冲，若此时飞行员手动强拉上升，系统就会在每15-20秒重复俯冲，飞机控制权并不在飞行员手里，最终造成坠机灾难。
这两次空难悲剧，不禁令所有人对“人工智能”都产生质疑。现如今，全球的科学家、大型企业都对“人工智能”十分感兴趣，使用也是越来越频繁。它可以潜入海底，帮人类探索未知领域;它可以用于机械制造，分分钟完成高难度制作;它可以进入微观世界，帮人类解决医疗难题……无人机，无人汽车，无人餐厅也相继推出——人工智能的.确给人类很多想象空间，也曾帮助过人类做过很多力不能及的事情，但是，人工智能毕竟还是“机械”，目前还达不到绝对“智能”，甚至有时还会变成“智障”，两个空难就是如此，我们也可以设想一下：在*坦的道路上挖掘一个深坑，在上面铺一张纸，然后让一辆无人驾驶的汽车开过来，你看它就不会开过去?
曾有人预言过，一旦迷恋人工智能，那么人类终有一天会被人工智能所统治。当时有很多人以为说这种话的人是弱智，现在来看这种预言者是大智慧，就两次空难来看，人工智能对人类的危害已不仅仅是“统治”那么简单了，甚至人类可能会沦为人工智能手下的冤魂。
对此，你怎么看?
——专四英语写作 (菁选5篇)
Located in southwest Shanghai---Songjiang, Sheshan National Holiday Resort has unique natural views and cultural interest. Sheshan National Forest Park is rated as one of the first AAAA tourism sites. It has four tourism sites: East Sheshan Park, West Sheshan Park, Tianmashan (Heaven Horse Mountain) Park, and Xiaokunshan Park.
Animals and plants abound on the East Sheshan Mountain. There are wild sika deer, pangolin scales and about 100 kinds of birds. Besides, there are about 2,000 types of plants such as cinnamomum camphoras and moso bamboos. The main attractions in East Sheshan are the Bird Center, the Butterfly Garden, the Plant Fossil Forest and the Wonder Stone Cave. Sheshan is also famous for its bamboo shoots, honey peaches and Lan Tea. The Sheshan bamboo shoot was named 'Lan Sun (Orchid Shoot)' by Kang Xi (an emperor in the Qing Dynasty), because it smells like an orchid. Lan Tea is known as 'Shanghai Longjing Tea.'
There are also many attractions on the West Sheshan Mountain. The Church of Our Lady of Sheshan is the biggest church in Southeast Asia as well as the landmark architecture of Sheshan Mountain. The Sheshan Observatory is one of the earliest and largest observatories in China. The Astronomy Museum is a National Science Education Base. The Seismographic Station is one of the earliest institutes for earthquake research.
佘山位于中国上海市松江区，分东佘山跟西佘山，是大上海的后花园。上海佘山国家森林公园位于中国上海西郊松江区境内，距市中心30公里，是上海唯一的自然山林胜地。园内十二座山峰犹如十二颗大小不等的翡翠从西南趋向东北，蜿蜒连绵13公里，使一马*川的上海*原呈现出灵秀多姿的山林景观。
东佘山园海拨74米，山地面积800余亩，山地钟秀、林木葱郁、景冠九峰。山上动植物资源丰富。这里尤以山间所产竹笋有兰花幽香而著名，当年清康熙帝南巡至此，品赏后即御书“兰笋山”三字，并赐名此笋为“兰花笋”。
西佘山园景区是云间九峰中环境最好、面积最大的景区。园内灿烂的人文景观和秀丽的自然风光吸引着众多的中外游客。山顶浓荫深处一幢气势非凡的赭红色建筑，就是名闻遐迩的`“远东第一大教堂”。与之毗邻的那个穹庐形建筑，是中国最古老的天文观测台。
Chongming Island, China's third largest island, is situated at the mouth of the Yangtze River. With an area of nearly 1,200 square kilometers, it is a perfect place for a back-to-nature weekend because of its pleasant climate, loamy land, green forest and crossing rivers.
You can take cruise from Bao Yang Port or Shi Dong Kou Port and it departs at about every 30 minutes. Also, the cruises arrive at different ports on Chongming Island (Nan Men Port, Xin He Port and Bao Village Port). You can take a taxi or a bus to travel around the island. The good thing here is, whatever you need, transfer, food or accommodation, they can be bargained. For your convenience, you may need to charter a taxi to drop or pick you up at the scenic spots. And it is easy to find a restaurant or a guesthouse to stay.
Chongming Island is shaped long and narrow. Dongping Forest Park is at the central area of the island, which is a real recreational area for riding horse or bicycle, hiking, camping, barbecuing, paintball shooting, racing, rock climbing, etc. Chongming County is where Nan Men Port is located. It is said that strolling around the small county is like back to the old Shanghai. The local food is quite different from what you have in the city, much more delicate and tasty. Believe it or not, you may find out by yourself. One more thing, when you go back to Shanghai, please make sure you have time to catch the last bus.
崇明岛，为我国第三大岛。崇明岛位于西太*洋沿岸中国海岸线的中点地区，地处中国最大河流长江入海口。东*国家森林公园坐落于——崇明岛中北部，面积358公顷，是华东地区最大的*原人造森林，这里也是上海地区著名的旅游胜地，上海十佳休闲旅游新景点之一。
公园内林竹茂盛，百鸟鸣唱，曲径通幽，碧波荡漾，野趣盎然，徜徉其间，令人尘虑尽消，流连忘返。目前园内拥有建筑风格独特的钟馗苑、游客中心，气势不凡的游船码头，国际标准的攀岩场，极休闲的阳光浴场。此外，园内还设置了帐篷、垂钓、 烧烤、骑马、射箭、沙滩排球、沙滩泳场、根雕馆、卡丁车、森林童话园等名目繁多的游乐项目和配套设施。每年春、夏、秋三季，成千上万的候鸟迁徙而来繁衍后代，翔集噪鸣于林，成为公园一大奇观。此外，去崇明踏青，交通和住宿都很方便，只是大家不要太过贪玩而赶不上最后一班车。
英语写作历来是英语教学的难点和重点，其费时费力却又收效甚微的特点造成了 _听到写作学生心烦，见到习作教师头痛_ 的现象。一方面，学生话题幼稚、句式单一、内容枯燥； 而另一方面，中考书面表达的要求却越来越高。新课程标准对写的要求为：1. 能写出连贯且结构完整的短文，叙述事情或表达观点和态度；2. 能在写作中做到文体规范、语句通顺；3. 能根据文字及图表提供的信息写短文或报告。该要求体现了以下几个特点：第一，写作要遵循英语国家的文化习俗和交际准则；第二，学会表达自己的观点和态度；第三，表达内容生动、有趣；第四，表达形式多样，能用不同的词汇、句子、语体及文体表述。
反观我们以往的英语教学，往往把写作看作是一种应试手段，到了中考复习阶段才针对性地对英语写作进行强化训练，让学生按照中考书面表达的形式和要求，一篇又一篇地写。这种做法的弊端是显而易见的：既没有体现由易到难循序渐进的过程，也不符合语言的_先有大量的语言输入，再有有限的语言输出 _原则。要扭转这种局面，笔者认为我们首先应从日常的课堂教学入手，把写作植根、贯穿于整个课堂教学之中，通过各种途径，使学生的写作能力和其他的听、说、读能力均衡发展，相互促进，从而提高学生综合运用英语的能力。为此，笔者在*常的写作训练中，特别注意遵循_循序渐进、先输入，再输出_的写作原则。具体有以下几个步骤（以saving the earth为例）：
一、理一理
在学习了一个单元或一篇文章之后，先让学生整理本课或本单元出现的新的知识点，然后让学生去理解记忆并掌握这些知识点的用法。我们列出的重要知识点有：How was sth going,be fit for, agree with sb, be getting worse, there is no fish left, pay attention to在学生记牢这些语言点之后，我向学生提供了更多的有关这些知识点的句子（如下所列），让学生去体会在什么样的情景下使用这些语言点，以及该如何使用。把书本知识转化为学生自己的语言能力。
1. The water in the lake is no longer fit for swimming.
2. With the living condition is getting worse, people begin to fight against pollution.
3. As a result of the water pollution, there is no fish left in the river.
二、读一读
There is a small river next to my home. It is said that it used to be a clean river and my villagers have lived on the river for hundreds of years. When I was a boy I often went to swim in the river. However, in the past ten years, it has been seriously polluted. People throw rubbish into it. There are few fish left in the river and even the few fish are dying out. The water is no longer fit for drinking and swimming. It will get worse and worse if we go on polluting it. To our joy, my villagers begin to understand the problem. As a result, they are now trying their best to stop polluting it. I am sure the river will become clean and beautiful again.
三、练一练
在学生掌握了本文中出现的语言点并懂得了此类文体的写作方法和技巧之后，学生就可以临摹着写一篇体裁相仿的文章了。这时候教师的任务就是寻找类似的写作素材让学生检查自己的所学，收获自己辛勤劳动的成果。
四、改一改
学生写完作文并不是万事大吉，事到功成了。当然在所有的批改方法当中，面批是效果最好的，但是，教师的时间和精力有限，而且很多学生所犯的错误是相同的。因此教师只要每次挑选上一些各种层次的习作进行批改，从中发现学生在写作中暴露出来的问题并就典型问题在课堂上给同学们指出来就行了。其余大部分的作文要学生自己去改。这里所谈到的自己批改并不是每个人自己改自己的，因为思维定势的原因，一个人是很难发现自己的问题的。我要求学生之间相互批改，其实这也是一种相互学习，互相帮助的过程。因为学生在批改别人习作的过程中，通常是带着一种质疑的心态去进行的，而质疑并寻求确认正是一种非常有效和积极的学习方法。
五、 评一评
学生之间相互批改完作文之后，教师要适当地对学生的习作以及他们的批改进行点评，对于好的方面进行表扬，对于不足的地方予以指正。特别是学生的文章结构，行文逻辑以及语法错误。对于大多数同学犯的错误，教师应当在课堂上着重讲解；对于个别同学的错误，可以把同学叫来，当面予以指正。只有通过教师的点评，学生才会真正了解自己在写作方面存在的问题，也会在以后的写作中给予重视和纠正。
采取这种以教材为素材，日常教学为载体，先输入，后输出、循序渐进的写作训练方式有以下几个优点：1.利用教材，使学生有话可说，有内容可写。2.在写作的同时，巩固了书本知识，加深了对文章的理解。3.培养了学生的想象力和创造性。4.体现了知识的连贯性和系统性。5.有助于消除学生对英文写作的恐惧心理。
——高考英语作文写作指导：英语写作的修辞方法技巧 (菁选3篇)
Many people prefer to travel by air. This is because air travel has some advantages. In the first place, airplane, the miracle created by man, is the fastest means of transport. It takes the least time for one to travel by air from one place to another. Secondly, traveling by air is convenient and comfortable. Friendly air hostesses are affectionate and considerate. They look after passengers all the way to their destinations. Moreover, on long distance flights there are films and music for people to entertain themselves.
As a popular saying goes, “Everything has two sides.” The same is true of air travel. It has some disadvantages, too. For one thing, air travel costs a great deal. The average Chinese are not rich enough to afford expensive air fares. So they prefer to take trains, which save a lot of money. For another, although passengers are assured of their safety, they are still worried about it during the journey because flying always involves more or less risk.
As far as I am concerned, the advantages mentioned above exceed the disadvantages. If I were given choice between traveling by air and traveling by train, I would certainly prefer the former. For me, time is money and it is the most important thing I have to take into consideration whatever I do.
英语作文的开头一般来说应尽量做到开门见山，用简单明白的叙述引出文章的话题，使读者了解文章要谈论什么，一下于引起读者的兴趣。
英语作文常见的开头形式大致有以下几种：
1．开门见山，揭示主题
文章一开头，，就交待清楚文章的主题是什么。如“How I Spent My Vacation”(我怎样度假)的开头是：
I Spent my last vacation happily．
下面是题为_Honesty_(谈诚实)一文中的开头：
Honesty is one of the best virtues．An honest man is always trusted and respected．On the contrary, one who tells lies is regarded as a _liar_，and is looked upon by honest people．
2．交代人物、事情、时间或环境开头
在文章的开头，先把人物、事件和环境交待清楚。例如_A Trip to Jinshan_ (去金山旅游)的开头：
The day before yesterday my class went on a bus trip to Jinshan. The bus ride there took three hours. The long trip made us very tired, but the sight of the beautiful sea refreshed us.
3. 回忆性的.开头
用回忆的方法来开头。例如_A Trip to the Taishan Mountain_(泰山游)的开头是：
I remember my first trip to the Taishan Mountain as if it were yesterday.
4．概括性的开头
即对要在文章中叙述的人或事先作一个概括性的介绍。如“The Happiness of Reading Books”(读书的快乐)的开头：
People often say that gold and silver are the most valuable things in the world. But I say that to read books is more valuable than anything else, because books give us knowledge and knowledge gives us power.
5．介绍环境式的开头
即开头利用自然景物或自然环境引出要介绍的事物。如“An Accident”(一场事故)的开头是:
It was a rainy and windy morning. The sky was gloomy, the temperature was low, and the street was nearly empty. I was on my way back to school. Suddenly, a speeding car came round the corner.
6．交待写作目的的开头。
在文章的一开头就交待写作目的，如通过文章要表扬谁，批评谁，或说明一个什么问题等。如 _Pollution Control_ (控制污染)的开头：
In this article I shall draw your attention to the subject of pollution control.
My birthday is on Sunday. My parents are going to have a birthday party at home. I invite my friends to come to the party.
At the party. They give me many small presents. Such as cards, picture books, pens.
They sing Happy Birthday to me. My mother makes a big cake for me. I cut the cake into small pieces and give them out. we sing and dance.
We have a good time at the party.
——春游踏青英语写作 (菁选3篇)
My new teacher is science teacher. He’s very strong. He has a big mouth, two big ears, two big eyes and a not too big and not too small nose. He often wears a black new shirt and brown pants, with two big shoes。
My science teacher is very kind. And he is very smart, isn’t he? Today, we have science class. We are very happy. Because he is so funny. Who is he? He’s a Mr. Zhou .
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