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第一步最好是先将个人简历制作出来,制作简历能让你对之前的学习工作有一个汇总,大小经历有一个初步分类,比如校内,校外,项目活动,还是志愿者活动。在制作简历是就要边做边想,哪些活动突出你哪方面的经历,比如一个项目活动,突出你的研究能力、沟通能力,领导力等等。在制作简历时想到这些,是为后面制作PS做好铺垫。
着手制作PS前,要再研究一下简历,挑出大概三到四个经历比较合适。在这些经历的描述中,着重描写你做了什么事情,突出细节。或者中间遇到了什么困难,如何解决。而不是一份更长更啰嗦的简历。细节的描写会让你显得更生动,也会让阅读你PS的人印象更深刻,通过你的描述,对你产生一个初步了解。
前面提到你要挑选三到四个经历,那哪些经历应该入选呢?挑选出一些独特的,能突出表现你能力的经历,而这也是最能契合你所申专业的经历。比如所申专业十分注重申请者的组织领导力,那么就着重描写能突出你组织领导力的活动,或者这个活动展现了你很多能力,着重描述组织领导能力。需要提到的是,有些学校会让你提供一篇PS,而有一些会让你提交两道三份essay(以商科为主),每篇essay又各有侧重点,那么也一样需要针对侧重点来进行上述写作的过程。比如说有的Essay 是要你描述你的Long Term Goal和 Short Term Goal,有的可能让你描述最大的成就,有的还可能是道德困境等等。
In capacity as Professor of Mathematics at Fudan UniversityI'm writing to recommend Mr. WangGesintosyour PhD program in Computer Science. I have known Mr. Wang since his sophomore year of collegeand have acted as his thesis advisormentor. In my experiencehe is a gifteddiligent studentand an admirably hard worker.
Wang is an impressive student because he has been forced to overcome the significant challenge of a serious illness during his freshman year. When I first met Wang in my Discrete Math classhe did not appear to be anything special to me. While his exam scores were goodthey were not as high as I would now expect of him.
What I didn't know then was that due to his illnessWang was attempting to take all of the difficult early mathematics courses at one timeincluding Discrete MathematicsAdvanced MathematicsLinear Algebraand Possibilities. While most students found preparing for just one set of these exams difficultWang was overwhelmed by four of them. But in the endhe achieved an impressive score on the final examwhich made me conscious of his unusual determination he demonstrates when confronting difficult challenges.
Mr. WangI have often talked about a variety of mathematicscomputer science conceptsproblems. During these discussionsI always found him to be delightfully intelligent. Not only does he quickly understand the conceptsproblems presented to himhe is able to analyze these problemspresent solutions. But perhaps most important is that Wang's thinking is intensely rigorous. When looking at any questionhe carefully scrutinizes itif he finds any uncertain issue
he clears them up immediately. I believe this kind of thought is essential to become an excellent computer programmer.
Serving as his thesis advisorI had a first-hand opportunity to observe the way in which Wang's mind works. In his senor thesisMr. Wang mainly discussed two challenging questions in regards to″ANN″。 In our books in Chinaknowledge of ANNits uses are very rare. Few people in China have studied this topicconsequentlythe materials that are available on ANN are limited. Working on this difficult projectnot only did Mr. Wang rise to the challengebut he went abovebeyond the call of duty to analyze his secondary sourcestest them for accuracy in practice. In this wayhe found mistakes in the book that we use. His diligencehard work made me extremely proud of him.
Study Abroad or in China?
There is no consensus of opinions among people as to whether students should study abroad or not. Some people are of the view that the youths should go overseas for further study if possible, while others take an opposite stand, firmly believing that it is unnecessary for students to study in a foreign country.
Those people who agree with studying abroad believe that diverse culture backgrounds can broaden students horizon. They also claim that overseas study can shape students personality because they are forced to deal with all kinds of difficulties by themselves. Nevertheless, the other people who agree with domestic education argue that our educational programs have been greatly improved during the past decades. They also point out that domestic education is convenient and economical.
As far as I am concerned, the former opinion holds more weight. For one thing, it can strengthen the learners abilities to understand and communicate with people from other cultures. For another, the developed countries still have a lot advanced knowledge we need to study. When all the factors are examined, we may reasonably come to the conclusion that studying abroad is advisable.
In capacity as Professor of Mathematics at Fudan University?I'm writing to recommend Mr. Wang?Gesintosyour PhD program in Computer Science.
I have known Mr. Wang since his sophomore year of college?and have acted as his thesis advisormentor. In my experience?he is a gifteddiligent student?and an admirably hard worker
7/ - 11/ summer team: expand job channels for students
got in touch with 10 companies, visited 4 companies and found their talent demands
made agreements with 4 companies that they would recruit graduates in lanzhou university
10/ – 1/ volunteer teacher for the hongshan school in lanzhou
taught the course of english for the rural workers ’ children in the school
Overseas studying
In recent year,overseas studying is very popular. More and more people go abroad in order to studying.
Different people have different idears on this people think that it is no neccersary,beacause they think that the knowledge in motherland is people approve of overseas think it is helpful to improve themselves in learning and working.
In my opinion,it is provides many chances for people who want to make progress;second,it is a mind-exparding experience,people who went abroad can obtain the culture,customs and so on;third,facing with the vocational pressure is very important chances to overseas studying .
So ,I think overseas studying is very important to everyone.
Due to the comprehensiveness of China’s “reform and open” policies, economics plays an increasingly important role in the development of its global position. Though more and more companies built, management of companies cannot catch up with the development of the companies. Management is a burgeoning field in China, so I hope I can acquire more modern knowledge on management in England.
The roots of my strong interest in business can be traced back to my childhood. My father was among the first of China’s new breed of modern entrepreneurs. As a young girl, it was inspirational hearing about his business ventures, and meeting the varied and interesting circle of entrepreneurs. My mother was also involved in business as an accountant, helping him with simple calculations. And so it was early in my life that I hoped I, also, would someday be able to enter the realm of business.
With the time of growing up, I preferred reading books to satisfy my curiosity. I never ceased to contemplate over the questions I encountered. Subjects on business and management became a special fascination to me and my knowledge of psychology as well as interest in this field was increasing rapidly.
As a high school student in China, I had to concentrate on the College Entrance Examination (CEE), even so, books not related to the exams were never excluded from my life. Unfortunately when sitting in the exam in June, 20_, I was so nervous that I didn’t score well in the CEE exam. I enrolled in the department of Computer Science in Zhejiang College of Traditional Chinese Medicine. Any attempt to persuade myself to focus on my major turned out to be a failure at the beginning of my college life. After several terms, I realized that I would never be interested in being a programmer or an engineer. At that moment, I lost my direction and objectives.
My persistence in reading saved me from the dark situation. As a matter of fact, I enjoyed reading the books included Encyclopedia American, and some books about management by Peter ker. I began to notice something interesting: Why some companies can produce more than others? Why some company can sell more than others? Why some companies can build up but others cannot when facing the same difficulties?
With the questions in my mind, I started to read many relevant books. I was lucky to read the book “Jack: Straight from the Gut”by Jack Welch, in Which John A. Byrne makes a clear illustration that the management is important for a company. When I was a junior, I ran a bookshop by myself near my school. I should manage not only the finance in the shop but also the employees in my shop even made some strategies to enlarge the business in my shop to hold on the run the shop. From this, my interpersonal skills and the capacity in business has been greatly developed, definitely I was increasingly interested in what I was doing. By December, 20_, I had finally determined to take business management as my career instead of IT. To accumulate more relevant knowledge, I strived to gain more practical work experience in some big companies.
Fortunately, as a senior, I began by conducting an internship in the Architecture Company in Zhejiang Province. Over six months, I worked as an assistant of the manager to harmonize the relationship between the different departments in this company and to draft some management system, which broadened my perspective of management conditions and business performance in different industries. The experience showed me that management is much more important than that of I thought in big companies. After graduation, I continued my work in this company. In May, 20_, the company offered me an opportunity to participate in an training program held by a famous management school. Through in-depth discussions with teachers and students in the classes, they all encouraged me to pursue my future career in management field because of my intellectual ability and the brand new ideas I mentioned.
During the short period of training, I realized that pursuing a higher degree in management is a wise choice for me now. Lancaster, with its excellence in management, represents the perfect fit for my needs. In your challenging environment, I can build the required foundation of knowledge related to management to achieve my goals. I am firmly convinced that your admission will be my first step of success. With this in mind, I hereby submit my application, and await your favorable reply.
这就是你整篇PS的思路。以什么样的思路来展开这篇PS非常重要,不仅仅是全文整体上的思路,就连句与句之间,段与段之间也一样重要。当然最终的完美之作肯定不是一蹴而就的,需要进行很多次的修改。
通篇思路可以按照时间顺序来写,这样的思路清晰明了,也容易让人理解。除了时间顺序外,也可以根据自己的心路历程安排,例如让你对所申专业产生重大兴趣的一件事也可以放在开篇,先声夺人,但是这就要求有一定的写作技巧,后面的思路要把握好,也不要给人一种虎头蛇尾的感觉。
句与句之间的前后逻辑就是要看前后是否连贯,意思是否冲突,不要给人感觉思维跳跃很大。而段落之间的衔接也是一样,几个经历如何有机联系在一起,给人感觉是一个人的经历,而不是几件事情堆砌在一起。这对于整篇PS的连贯性至关重要。所以PS从初稿到最终定稿一定是经历无数次修改,不仅仅是对文中用词、语法、句式的修改,更是对逻辑的修改。
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