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一篇好的高中英语作文,应该语言正确,内容连贯,词句优美。语言正确和内容连贯可以通过“多写”达到,但是词句优美却不是写得多就能达到的。
这里说的“词句优美”指的是真正优美的词句,而不是流传甚广的很多所谓的写作模板、作文金句,那些东西绝大多数都是陈词滥调,不是优美表达,千万别拿那些东西当宝贝。那些东西用的多了,作文就被判为垃圾作文了,除非完全不会自己写作文,否则尽可能不要用。
因为要“优美”,就得“创造”,但是大多数高中学生没有创造优美表达方式的可靠的能力,所以那些“创造”往往就成了Chinglish,即“中式英语”。
Chinglish是英语作文的大毛病,也是高考作文失分的主要原因之一。很多学生在学会了基本写作之后开始出现大量的Chinglish,就是因为他开始自己“创造”了。其实创造不是不可以,没有创造哪来那些脍炙人口的优美表达?但现实是,在高中阶段,大多数学生还心有余而力不足。
做不到,但需要,怎么办?只有借鉴了。
从哪里借鉴?语言优美的文章当然都可借鉴,但是往往远水解不了近渴,所以,范文就成了很现实的选择。
范文之所以称为“范”文,它在内容上、逻辑上,尤其是语言上,必然有可资借鉴之处。当然,没有可借鉴之处的不叫范文。
写作练习中,借鉴是很正常的,这和抄袭是两码事。荀子《劝学》中说,君子生非异也,善假于物也。借鉴范文,就是“假于物”。
格式和题目一样,都是最基本的要素。同理,没有太大操作空间,注意不出错就好。
1.书信:最常见的作文体裁。开头 Dear,结尾 yours,不再赘述。
注意写给谁——别笑,血的教训。题目中给出 Peter 或 editor 还好处理,但收信人身份姓名均不明确时,一定要谨慎。最常见的是 Dear sir or madam,严防死守,毫无破绽(不要假定性别!中国不讲政治正确,但英语文化讲!这不是玩笑!)。Attention!我们小班高二第一次月考时 2/3 的同学因为不会写 madam 吃过亏,这种错误是致命的。如果放在高考,自求多福吧。
Dear 套完近乎再如何操作才能抓人眼球?后面得体和句式板块会有例子详谈。
书信体最后一段一定要简短有力,收束全文(事实上大多数文章都应该如此)。最后秀一把,让打分者再奶一口。这点我也会在后面得体和句式板块再谈到,这里不多说。
yours 后面我习惯加 faithfully,反正不放过一切上分机会。
最后署上事儿精 Li Hua。
2.演讲稿
常见开头:ladies and gents, may I have your attention please?
我喜欢的:What a nice day, ladies and gents? Today I'd like to talk about……
中间靠后部分最好有表达主题的总结句,比如 Hence, I appeal to all of us to……
结尾 thank u for ur time,礼貌得体。
3.通知
没有称呼,直接进入文章。注意通知发布者一般不是个人,所以不要开头 I'm Li Hua, president of SU.
第一人称处尽量用 we。
结尾署上通知单位和通知时间。通知时间要早于文中提起过的 deadline 时间。
In my volunteer group, we divided our tasks into three groups, cleaning a group of trees near the park, and then we divided their work into three groups of children's playground equipment. Each of us worked hard at about 11:30. Although we were very tired, we finished our work.
We are very happy that today is a meaningful day for us Did a good thing for us.
中文翻译:
在我的志愿者小组里,我们把自己的任务分成了三组,分别在公园附近的一组树上打扫,然后我们把他们的工作分成了三组儿童游乐场的设备我们每个人都在11点半左右努力工作,虽然我们很累,但我们完成了工作,我们很高兴今天对我们来说是有意义的一天,因为我们做了一件好事。
In today's global economy, effective communication in English is essential, but clearly expressing your ideas is a skill that needs to be learned frequently. People simply imitate the style of their colleagues, especially their superiors, because they think that this kind of ^v^good English^v^ you will see some hard to understand examples in their inboxes every day. In order to avoid writing, you don't have to In the case of ^v^use * to * start with *^v^, in the case of ^v^use * if * not^v^ in the event ^v^use * about * use * latest * latest Don't replace the word ^v^now^v^ with a short sentence about the present.
Like to read email paragraphs for a long time, use simple words and easy to understand phrases. You can improve the clarity of your message.
中文翻译:
在当今的全球经济中,有效地用英语交流是必不可少的,但是清楚地表达你的想法是一项需要经常学习的技能,人们只是简单地模仿他们同事的风格,尤其是他们的上司,因为他们认为这种“好英语”你每天都会在收件箱中看到一些难以理解的例子为了避免写不必要的句子,你可以用简短的词来代替你写的信息这里有一些示例:而不是“在”之前使用*在*之前*之前在*之前在“之后”之前使用*之后*在*之后*在*之后使用*为了“使用*到*以*开始”的情况下,在“使用*如果*如果*在事件中不是”参考“使用*大约*使用*最新*最新状态”现在不要用“关于现在”的短句来代替“现在”这个词喜欢长时间阅读电子邮件段落使用简单的词和容易理解的短语你可以提高你的信息的清晰度。
语法这个问题太大了。时态语态主被动,主谓一致非谓动,宾前状后非限定,虚拟倒装逻辑性……这都是高压线。还有——句子不要罗列!很多人犯这个大忌!一个句号或叹号或问号内只能容忍一套主谓(and but 这种另说)!引爆一处,18 分以下,两处,15 不保。这时候,你玩不玩手法秀不秀操作,已经不重要了。因为没有人会再去看。
也就是我们老师说的,硬伤,致命伤。
这个问题其实没什么好说的。语^v^夫在平时,不要有赌徒心理。
高三时会有人发生高原反应——连最基本的语法项都产生动摇(其实说到底还是基础不扎实)。高三上半年期末,同桌陈某英语滑铁卢,其中作文仅得十二分。
我看的第一眼:I'm Li Hua, who am interested in……(统一回复:am 的搭配主语只有 I,这里 who 代值 Li Hua,且 who am 不奇怪吗……)
我:……
他瞪着一双呆萌的眼睛,说,Li Hua 就是我,用 am 怎么了……
他的字还很潦草。老师看了,说,你这作文要是落我手里,还想要 12?8 分都没有。
后来此君得一雅号:陈十二郎。
此次惨案有史为证,就是韩愈那篇著名的《祭十二郎文》。
考研英语二作文常考的类型分别为正面现象歌颂型、反面现象批评型、对立观点、利弊分析型等。下面为大家提供考研英语二作文模板--对立观点型模板。
AAA earlier day care BBB late day care
AAA and BBB are nothing strange for us,because increasingly more argumentations about them can be found in TV programs,newspapers,university classes and many aspects of our everyday rendering my opinion,I think it is necessary to take a glance at the arguments on both is undeniable that BBB has its own most extreme manifestation of this idea is the fact that例子.Even so,we have no complete evidence to suggest that BBB is always better than are numerous reasons for my preference for AAA,and I shall here explore only a few of the most important is also worth noticing fact is that原因一.The above is only part of the important aspects,and another one with equal significance with respect to choosing between the two lies in the development of the proposition that原因二.All in all,taking into account all these merits that AAA boasts of,we may safely arrive at the conclusion that the advantages of AAA outweigh any benefit we can get from BBB and choosing AAA is a rather wise decision.
一、问题类作文
第一段
(1)As is vividly portrayed in the drawing above, 总体描述一句, which seems to be interesting and ridiculous(形容词的选择可以换用其他).However,(2)The most striking feature that impresses me deeply is that unbelievably, 具体描述.(3)Recent few years has witnessed a phenomenon of 主题.(5)Obviously, its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.第二段
(1)To account for the above-mentioned phenomenon,(several reasons can contribute to it.)serious effects have been put forward.(2)To begin with,主题 not only does harm to our 可指人,社会,家庭,集体都可以 but also results in a frustrating life among addition, it would be no exaggeration to say that, in any period or in any conditions that can now be foreseen, 不好的现象 is utmost significance to us but not least, here is no denying that due attention should be attached to this we turn a blind eye to the problem, our community will go from bad to worse.第三段
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In today's global economy, effective communication in English is essential, but clearly expressing your ideas is a skill that needs to be learned. People just copy the style of their colleagues, especially their superiors, because they think that this kind of ^v^good English^v^ you will see some hard to understand examples in your inboxes every day. You need to read them repeatedly to get information One big mistake is to fill your writing with unnecessary words and phrases.
Remember that the purpose of your writing is to express your ideas clearly. Try to reduce the number of words in sentences and avoid using shorter words instead of long phrases. Here are some examples: * if you use * if * instead of 'reference' in an event, use * before * before * before * to * instead of 'follow up'.
Use * if * instead of 'about * about * reference * instead of' state 'in an event Of art ^v^use * the latest * latest technology * instead^v^ is because ^v^use * because * before 2pm * before 2pm * use * not before 2pm * use * now * now * remember to organize and use topic sentences to indicate what each paragraph is about. In addition, keep your email short - no one likes to read long e-mails Use simple words and easy to understand phrases - you can improve the clarity of your message without ending Becker.
中文翻译:
在当今的全球经济中,有效地用英语交流是必不可少的,但是清楚地表达你的想法是一项需要学习的技能,人们只是照搬同事的风格,尤其是他们的上司,因为他们认为这种“好英语”你每天都会在收件箱里看到一些难以理解的例子你需要反复阅读才能得到信息一个很大的错误是用不必要的单词和短语来填充你的写作。记住你写作的目的是清晰地表达你的想法。尽量减少句子中的单词数量,避免用较短的词代替冗长的短语下面是一些例子:*如果在事件中使用*if*而不是“reference”,则使用*before*before*before*to*而不是“后续”,在事件中使用*if*代替“about*about*引用*而不是”state of艺术“使用*最新*最新技术*代替”是因为“使用*因为*因为*在下午2点*之前*在2点之前*使用*而不是在下午2点*之前*而不是“在现在”使用*现在*现在*现在记住组织以及使用主题句来指示每个段落是关于什么的此外,保持你的电子邮件简短-没有人喜欢读长的电子邮件段落使用简单的词和容易理解的短语-你可以提高你的信息的清晰度没有结束贝贝克。
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