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1.内容完整，语句流畅，无语法错误，书写规范，给9-10分;
2.内容较完整，语句较流畅，基本无语法错误，书写较规范，给6-8分;
3.内容不完整，语句欠流畅，语法错误较多，书写较规范，给3-5分;
4.只写出个别要点，语法错误较多，书写欠规范，只有个别句子可读或不知所云，给0-2分。
对考生的作文要求有四点：1、内容要完整。2、语句流畅。3、没有语法错误。4、书写规范。能达到上述要求的作文，都会得到相应的高分。所以，在写作文的时候，大家要牢记这些要求。
要做到内容完整，我们首先要认清看好题目的要求，抓住要点，注意文体。我们可以在写作之前好好构思一下，自己将从几个方面来写。是否能将所有内容都包含在内。在写完之后，再检查一遍。看看有没有内容的缺失。
要做到语句的流畅，这就要求有扎实的英语基本功。在*时的积累上，注意一些语义的.表达方法。要尽量使用自己能够正确运用的语句和表达方式。注意句子之间的连贯性。这不仅仅指从语法上，也指句意上的连贯。
在初中阶段，考生应注意语法点有：动词单三形式，时态(包括：现在进行时，一般过去时，将来时)，定语从句(此项语法建议考生尽量不要使用)，语态，单复数，主谓一致，冠词等还有一些表达方式。比如，我非常喜欢足球。考生经常会写成Iverylikefootball.这样的错误一定要避免。
书写一定要规范。要了解英语作文的书写规则。同时，要知道应用文的写作方法。
除了以上的四个方面，还建议考生们要检查：单词的拼写、大小写和标点符号。
考试的时候，要尽量留出充足的时间给作文。这样，我们才能有足够的时间去构思，去打草稿。在评卷的时候，第一印象很重要，所以考生们一定要让自己的作文看起来舒服，干净，整齐。
中考英语中，很多学生自感基础很差，主动放弃了作文的15分。即便学生表达能力很差，但只要所写文章中包括题目要点中的部分信息，依然能得1-3分的最低档分数;如能完整表达题目给出的要点和要求，同时文章通顺，无严重语法和拼写错误，一般能得到4-11分的中档分。
We are middle school students and we are busy with our lessons If we volunteer to help others, it’s a waste of time I not only feel good about helping others but also get to spend time doing what I love to do So if I have an oppoutunity, I’d like to visit old people’s home to clean up for them I love kids and I plan to put my love to good use by working in hospital If everyone helps out a bit, the world will be more colorfulSmall kinds
Human beings are advanced animals in the world For example , if you are kind to a dog , it will shake So if you are kind to others, they will also be kind to you You can help him to cross the street If he or she asks you questions, you should be kind to answer them Maybe it seems to you a piece of cake, but it is very important to people in need
Be kind to others, and they will be kind to youMy opinion on Internet
Hello, everyone! As you know, many students like to work on the Internet We can learn more knowledge outside our books, practice our spoken English with someone else and look up some useful information Some students have made too many friends, seen some bad information that is not good for us and spent too much time on it
That’s my ideaInternet shopping
Internet shopping is a new way of shopping The most important one is convenience And you don’t have to queue with others
There are some disadvantages, too Besides you can not enjoy walking around the shops and talking with your friends.
Dear Lily,
How are you getting on recently? Maybe you have known the good news, but I still want to tell you that Beijing has been the host city of the 20_ Olympic Games. We were so excited that we jumped up. We laughed and laughed. We talked with everyone,even with strangers. We all want to do something for the 20_ Olympic Games.
In order to make Beijing more beautiful, we are going to plant some trees in the West Lake this Saturday. We are happy to have a chance to show our hearts.
By the way, would you like to see a film with me tomorrow?A new film is on at the Capital Cinema. If you will, please call me between 6:00 and 9:00 in the evening. OK?
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Xia
Be friendly to a lot of people That way you’ll have a bigger group to choose from and have more chances to make friendsMy view on television
Television has come into our life for many years Jt can give us the latest information and news We can get happiness from the plays on television Television programs are attractive How wonderful it is!
Television is also bad for people’s health
It is true that watching TV can influence our behaviorwwwcom
Hello, boys and girls!
Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students can’t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams.
I’m always under pressure, too. My parents want me to be the top student in class. So they send me to all kinds of after-classes at weekends. Last Monday evening, I had a talk with my mother. I told her I was not lazy. I really felt tired. I needed time to relax. My mother agreed with me at last. So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem.
That’s all. Thank you!
Dear Tommy,
Im glad to know you will come to Beijing.
Beijing, the capital of China, is one of the largest cities in the world. There are many places of interest, such as the Summer Palace, the Forbidden City and the Great Wall. All of them are beautiful and well-known to the world. Great changes have taken place in Beijing since we successfully held the 20xx 0lympic Games.
Now, people pay more attention to the environment. More trees and flowers have been planted. For the traffic, it is very convenient for people to travel around Beijing, because several new subway lines have been built. If you come to Beijing, you will find people here are very friendly and helpful. Whats more, a lot of people can speak English. Beijing is really an attractive city with a long history.
Im looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Li Lei
Dear Xiaowei,
Weight problem is quite common among teenagers everywhere. So I dont think you have much to worry about. Here are my suggestions. Eating late at night is OK, but you should to eat more fruit and vegetables, which are good for you. Also, when you are free, youd better do more exercise. Running is great. You dont like running alone, but what about running with your friends? Or you can do some team sports like basketball. Im sure your friends will be willing to help you lose weight. I hope you have as much success in losing weight as you have had in your studies. Believe myself, and I will win. Its really important for us when we meet difficulties. Dont lose heart; Im sure you will succeed one day.
Good luck.
Editor
20xx年中考的脚步逐渐迈进，有的`同学开始焦虑：20xx年春节的脚步临近，紧接着就是模考，那么如何才可以在短时间内提高自己的写作水平呢？的中考英语名师说，中考英语写作是很容易提高的。写作文时需要注意的四个方面，希望对大家有所启发。
第一、词汇量要充足
词汇量多少很大程度上决定作文是否能写得下去，很多时候想到一个很好的句子或文字，但一下子词汇不记得了，没法写。词汇量不足的学生，建议重视提高词汇量。这点关键是在于平时的积累，长期的过程，短期效果只适合于记忆力超强的同学。要遵循记忆曲线的规律。
第二、审题要充分
写英语作文时，普遍存在这样一个情况：看完作文题，就开始写，想到哪写到哪，只要把字数凑够了就停笔了。这样写出来的文章，看起来就像在记流水帐，没有任何逻辑，杂乱无章，毫无条理，同时容易出现用错时态、用错格式等的情况。试想，如果你是试卷的命题人，你出作文题的时候，肯定有出这道题的独特的道理。所以仔细审题和构思就成了写作的第一步。审题的重点放在写作体裁、格式、字数方面，确保第一遍审题就能保证得到基本分。同时还要文体和时态，因为不同的文体要求的写作格式也是不同的，时态的要求也非常重要。
这个问题是我们在考试的时候可以有效避免的，如果还是犯这样的错误，那就是对我们自己的残忍了。希望同学们在这点上要多加注意。
第三、提纲要详细
审完题后一定要列提纲。很多学生认为，中考英语作文译成中文，最多是小学二年级的语文作文水平，所以根本没有必要列提纲。其实，这种想法是非常错误的，因为提纲不仅能使文章的结构清晰，还有很重要的一点：防止漏掉作文内容。因为中考英语作文有一个很重要的要求：要点要全。如果你漏掉了需要写的内容，即使文章写得再优美，用词再准确，也拿不了高分。最后要注意打草稿，然后修改。这样可以保证错误降低至最少或者没有错误，同时也能保持卷面整洁。
第四、文化差异要注意
我们要时刻牢记一点，中英文表达方式有很大的差异，所以体现在作文表达上也常常会出现生硬的中国式作文表达，降低了我们的作文质量。所以注重中英语言差异，并努力找到两者之间的表达方式上的共通点，并且有意识的运用就能避免类似的问题。
这个问题，我们平时要多揣摩西方的思维方式和语言习惯，这样就能很好的发挥语言特色了，不至于我们写的是中国式英语。
第五、细节错误要摒弃
很多孩子在写作文时常常感觉写得非常好，用上了几个高级句型或者不错的词汇短语，以为可以得高分，但最终结果出来后却与预想差距很大。主要的原因是很多细节没有注意。比如第三人称单数，名词的单复数，大小写，甚至标点、书写、段落安排等，这些细节问题也很重要。
一、充分准备，打好基础。
为了提高书面表达水*，*时应加强阅读，多背诵一些句形、段落甚至短文。俗话说：读书破万卷，下笔如有神，只有多读，多记，多背诵，才能出口成章，下笔成文。此外，还要掌握一些应用文体的写作方法，如书信、日记、通知等，它们大多有固定的格式。
二、认真审题，明确要求
仔细看清写作要求和提示，分清材料的主次，接着确定体裁、格式和人物、地点等要素；最后确定时态，同时考虑相关的语态搭配用法。
三、遣词造句、表达规范
用词要恰当，不可逐句把提示翻译成英语。写作时，应尽量选用你最熟悉、最有把握的词和句型来表达思想。如果有些单词不会些，有些句型不会表达，可以设法绕开，用熟悉的同义词、同义短语或同义句来代替。要学会善于运用适当的关联词，如and,or,but,so，because,since等，以使行文逻辑紧密，自然流畅。
四、认真撰写，卷面整洁
如果考试时间允许，书面表达一定要先写草稿。在抄写入答题卷前，要先进行检查修改。首先检查所写内容是否切题；之后检查主题是否明确，表达方式是否恰当；最后检查所用时态、语态、人称是否符合要求，前后是否一致。
英语作文卷面要求：
1.标题应写在第一行的中央。标题中的每一个实词的第一个字母均应大写。
2.段与段之间，一般不空行，但每段第一行应缩进3–4个字母所占的位置。
3.书写要工整，字体稍大，词间距离要一致，行间距离要一致，尽量避免一个单词隔行书写。
Dear Linda,
I am glad to give you advice on the customs of giving gifts in my country.
Firstly, I think you need to find out what your Chinese teacher likes. Choosing the gift that your teacher is interested in is a good idea. Secondly, don’t pack the gift with black or white wrapping paper, because black and white aren’t considered to be lucky colors. Thirdly, don’t buy your teacher a clock, a pair of shoes, or some pears because these have bad meanings in Chinese when giving a gift.
I hope my advice can help you.
Yours,
Guo Jia
中考的脚步越来越近，有的同学开始焦虑：时间越来越短，那么如何才可以在短时间内提高自己的写作水*呢?其实，中考英语写作是很容易提高的。以下写作文时需要注意的四个方面，希望对大家有所启发。
第一，词汇量要充足。
词汇量多少很大程度上决定作文是否能写得下去，很多时候想到一个很好的句子或文字，但一下子词汇不记得了，没法写。词汇量不足的学生，建议使用英语背单词的软件，在较短时间内迅速提高词汇量。
第二，审题要充分。
仔细审题和构思就成了写作的第一步。审题的重点放在写作体裁、格式、字数方面，确保第一遍审题就能保证得到基本分。同时还要文体和时态，因为不同的文体要求的写作格式也是不同的，时态的要求也非常重要。
第三，提纲要详细。
审完题后一定要列提纲。很多学生认为，中考英语作文译成中文，最多是小学二年级的语文作文水*，所以根本没有必要列提纲。其实，这种想法是非常错误的，因为提纲不仅能使文章的结构清晰，还有很重要的一点：防止漏掉作文内容。因为中考英语作文有一个很重要的要求：要点要全。如果你漏掉了需要写的内容，即使文章写得再优美，用词再准确，也拿不了高分。最后要注意打草稿，然后修改。这样可以保证错误降低至最少或者没有错误，同时也能保持卷面整洁。
第四，文化差异要注意
我们要时刻牢记一点，中英文表达方式有很大的差异，所以体现在作文表达上也常常会出现生硬的*式作文表达，降低了我们的作文质量。所以注重中英语言差异，并努力找到两者之间的表达方式上的共通点，并且有意识的运用就能避免类似的问题。
最后，细节错误要摒弃。
很多孩子在写作文时常常感觉写得非常好，用上了几个高级句型或者不错的词汇短语，以为可以得高分，但最终结果出来后却与预想差距很大。主要的原因是很多细节没有注意。比如第三人称单数，名词的单复数，大小写，甚至标点、书写、段落安排等，这些细节问题也很重要。
做好以上几个方面，中考英语写作是很容易提高的!祝愿大家在中考中能取得理想的成绩!
The thermometer had dropped to 18 deGREes below zero, but still chose to sleep in the porch as usual Though they were a mere sprinkle of twinkling dots, yet I had become so accustomed to them that their occasional absence would bring me loneliness and ennui My roommate and I, each wrapped in a quilt, were seated far apart in a different corner of the porch, facing each other and chatting away I beamed and said pointing to a tiny lamplight on the opposite mountain, “It’s Jupiter over there!”
More and more lights came into sight as we kept pointing here and there With the distinction between sky and forest obscured by snowflakes, the numerous lamp-lights now easily passed for as many stars With the illusory stars hanging still overhead, I was spared the effort of tracing their positions when I woke up from my dreams in the dead of night.
Thus I found consolation even on a lonely snowy night !
I know that you will visit your Chinese teacher’s home. If you do the following, I don’t think you will feel uncomfortable.
First, you should arrive a little earlier. Being late is impolite. Second, it’s also good to bring a gift such as some flowers or fruit. Third, you will probably use chopsticks to have dinner. Remember not to stick your chopsticks into your food. You’d better say that the food is delicious while you are eating. Finally, after dinner, showing thanks is also necessary. And you are not supposed to stay long after dinner.
Dear students,
As we know, safety is the most important thing in our lives. So, we should try our best to make sure we are safe. We mustn’t bring restricted knives or things to our school because these things may cause serious problems. Do not have a bath in rivers or ponds by ourselves without our parents’ permission. And, we should be friendly to others so fighting is strongly banned. Make sure that we should always pay attention to the traffic on our way to school or home. Furthermore, if we meet some emergency, we must call for help from the police or our teachers. In a word, following these safeties rules above can make us live in peace.
Yours,
Li Hua
We had an exam yesterday and now the papers are being handed out. There’s a paper without a name on it and that student got full marks.
Whom can it belong to? It can’t be a boy’s, because none of them in class can be so good and tidy. The paper must belong to a girl because its handwriting is very tidy. There are only three girls who are good at handwriting — Rose, Mary and Lucy. It might belong to Rose, but I’m not sure because she is not so good at English.
It can’t be Mary’s. Although she is a top student in English, she has already had hers in hand. So it must belong to Lucy. Today she is ill at home and she does well in English, too. Well, it must belong to her.
中考英语作文评分细则
满分档（20分）：长度符合要求（100—110字），书写规范，涵盖所有要点，结构规范，条理清楚，逻辑严密，词汇丰富，没有任何语法错误。
第五档（15—19分）：文本长度符合要求，书写规范，涵盖所有要点，结构规范，条理清楚，逻辑严密，词汇比较丰富有少量语法错误。
第四档（9—14分）：文本长度符合要求，书写规范，基本涵盖要点（有2要点得给9—10分），行文比较连贯，词汇不够丰富，有一些语法错误。
第三档（6—8分）：文本长度与要求有明显距离，书写不规范，要点不完整（只有1个要点），行文不连贯，词汇量不足，错误较多，勉强能看出作文意图。
第二档（3—5分）：能用句子表达，错误百出，只能勉强猜测出作文意图。
第一档（0—2分）：有一些英语单词，但与话题毫不相干。（白卷0分）
拓展阅读：中考英语复习注意事项
1、每天要坚持听录音、跟读初三的英语课文，在听读过程中留意单词拼写、重点词汇与句型以及需要掌握的语言点，从而进一步落实基础知识。
2、花一些时间整理中考模拟卷和纠错本，帮助自己查漏补缺、温故知新，从而达到有效复习的目的。同时尽可能利用你的周围资源，如请同学和老师来帮你答疑解惑。
3、适当地给自己增加一些中考模拟题的练习，但在做题的过程中应避免偏题和怪题。完型填空和阅读理解每天坚持做1—2篇，在规定时间内完成。良好的语感的养成对英语解题是很有用的。
4、在最后的复习阶段要提醒自己注重解题技巧。比如选择题应采用排除法等进行解答，以便确保准确率。
5、*时应多看一些范文。
比如：报纸中的作文题，都会有范文提供，这些范文都应看一下，尤其要注意文中承前启后的句子，把这些句子正确的用在自己的作文中，得分就会高很多。*时作文的得分在10分以下的，自己应该多练，并请老师给你面批，这样进步会很快。
6、临近中考时，家长和学生都会越来越担心到时候能否考好，所以也往往容易急躁和焦虑。作为家长很有必要帮助自己和孩子调整好心态。只有这样，学生在中考的考场上才能无所畏惧，信心百倍，最大限度地发挥自己的能力。
中考英语作文范文扩展阅读
中考英语作文范文（扩展1）
——中考英语作文
中考英语作文
I am an American and stayed there all the time. But when I am a middle school student, I come to China as an exchange student. In China, I meet many difficulties. The biggest challenge for me is to learn Chinese. Oh, god, it is so hard. There are so many Chinese and every word has many meanings. What’s worse, the same pinyin may have various meanings and intonation also makes great difference. I don’t know how to open my mouth. Although there are many people help me, I still find it difficult to learn Chinese well.
我是一个美国人并且一直呆了那里。但当我是一个中学生的时候，我作为交换生来到*。在*，我遇到了很多困难。对我来说最大的.挑战就是学习中文。哦，上帝，太难了。汉字实在太多了，而且每个字又有很多意思。更严重的是，同一个拼音还可以有不同的意思而且音调不一样，差别也很大。我都不知道如何开口了。虽然有很多人帮我，但我还是觉得很难把中文学好。
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What a gd teacher she is!
An Autumn Trip to Qianshan-千山秋游
An Autumn Trip to Qianshan
Last autumn we took a trip to Qianshan by bus. It is about thirty miles from the city. We planned to put up in a hotel there in order to watch the sun rise the next morning.
As soon as we got there, we began to climb up the mountains. How GREat the sight is! We felt as if we had entered amother world full of beauty, peaeefulness and loveliness. There are hundreds of mountains, one after another. there are magnificent cliffs, one above another. We climbed up vigorously and breathed the fresh air greedily. As the sun was going down, we descended to a little hotel at the foot of the hill, where we had a big dinner, and then went to bed early so as to regain the energy ior the expedition next morning.
Before daybreak, we reached the peak of the highest mountain after a hard groping and climbing in the dark. Unaware of the cold wind, we stood motionlessly, with our eyes fixing at the hr end of the east. Suddenly thin ravs of red hue spread across the sky. As the redness deepened, some mysterious clouds moved across thc sky, dividing heaven from the earth. Just at this moment, up from the brightening far east rose the sun. It was so red and yet so tender that we could gaze at it with naked eyes. and a slight applause from us. the amazed spectators, rang through the peak. Up, up it rose, adding to itself strength and glory at every step. It dazzled with vigour, driving away darkness, cold, and misery from the earth, and bring light, warmth, and happiness to men.
We were completely amazed at the wonder and the GREatness of nature. We jumped and shouted like innocent children and we bathed in the first rays of the sun with the peak till it was time for our return.
千山秋游
去年秋天我们乘公共汽车去千山游玩了一次。它距城市大约三十英里。为了第二天早晨看日出，我们计划住在那儿的旅馆里。
我们一到那里就开始爬山。那里的景色太美了!我们感到好像进入了另一个世界，一个充满美丽、和平和可爱的世界。那里有数百座山峰鳞次栉比：有壮观的悬崖层出不穷。我们精力充沛地向上攀登，贪婪地呼吸着新鲜空气。当太阳下落时，我们来到山下的一家小旅店，在那里美美地吃了一顿晚饭，然后早早地上床睡觉，以便恢复精力第二天早晨远征。
天亮前，我们经过在黑暗中艰难地摸索和爬行到达了最高的山峰。我们一动不动地站在那里，双眼凝视着远处的东方，连寒风也没觉察到。突然间，薄薄的红光在天空中散开，随着红色加深，一些神奇的云朵在天空四散，把天地分开。正在这时，太阳从远处东方的光亮处升起。它是那样红，然而又那么娇嫩以致我们可以用肉眼来观察它。从我们吃惊的观赏者中发出的一阵轻微的欢呼划过山峰，太阳升得越来越高了，每升一步都给它本身增加了力量和光辉。它炫耀着威力，驱走了黑暗、寒冷和大地的苦难，并给人们带来光明、温暖和幸福。
这一奇观和大自然的伟大使我们完全惊愕了。我们像天真的孩子一样跳着、喊着，和山峰一起沐浴在太阳的晨曦中，流连忘返。
How to Keep Healthy Firstly, build normal daily routine and eat regularly. You should go to bed and get up early. Make sure you can have a good rest. Pay attention to your diets. Don't eat too much meat and sugar. Eat more vegetables.
首先，建立正常的作息，饮食规律。你应该早睡早起，确保你能够有良好的睡眠。注意你的饮食，不要吃太多肉和糖，多吃蔬菜。
Secondly, have a good mood towards life. A good mood will bring you a healthy body, too.
其次，对生活抱有好心境。一个好的心情也会给你带来一个健康的身体。
Last, do some exercises. Exercises help you build a strong and healthy body.
最后，要多锻炼。锻炼能够帮助你建立强壮健康的身体。
Mr. Griffin,
Recently I have had a discussion about The Ways for Students to Relax with Terry, a student from Class One Grade Two . (As we study too long every day, every student should choose ways to relax.) In his opinion, the best ways are watching TV and playing computer games. He also believes that sometimes hanging out with friends isn't a bad way.
However, I'm not quite agree with him. In my opinion, watching TV or playing computer games is not a good way to help us relax. I think listening to music and playing sports are good ways because they can help us keep healthy. I often play Pingpong after class and I find it really helpful to both my health and my study. Besides, I think chatting with our friends isn't a bad way. I think it can help me get on better with my friends.
Terry
[范文一自己角度]
Some people stand out because of their adorable appearance, while others impress people with their amazing talents. However, without any shining spots, I used to believe that I was too ordinary to be noticed.
xxxDon't be silly, you have no idea how unique you are.xxx Lily, my best friend said firmly to me. My individual tag, according to her, is my sense of humor. The truth is, I'm always a good listener when people around me have something to complain about, and when they finish their stories, I could always make them laugh with my ownperception of their experience.
xxxYour laughter is contagious enough to heal people.xxx Lily added.
Not until then did I realize how good I am to get along with people, and now I believe that I'm a special one to all of my friends.
Everyone is born to be one of a kind. as long as we take a closer look at ourselves.
[范文二他人角度]
The world around us is full of colourful surprises as long as you are good at discovering them.
Due to the outbreak of COVID- 19, all students and teachers were forced to stay home. Although we could no longer see each other face to face, our vitality and creativity didn't stop because of the trrible virus. During this period, I was surprised by the lively online teaching performance of my teachers, the excellent calligraphy works ofmy classmates and an amusing cheering video made by all the cleaning workers in our school.
I'm glad to discover and realize that everyone has something that is special and inspiring.
给大家推荐一个暑假小学数学的线上课，0元24节课，师资力量不错，学生的提分反馈也很好，有些孩子学了1个月，差不多能提10分。
不过最关键的是，课程是免费的，而且有24节课，如果你正在犹豫，或者暑假还没给孩子安排好学习规划，都可以报一下，孩子能提分当然最好不过，就算孩子最后跟不上，家长完全可以随时停课，毕竟没花钱不心疼，把省下来的钱给自己买个包它背起来不香吗哈哈哈
面对英语作文，很多学生都表示头疼，自己觉得写的还比较理想，成绩却不理想，有些同学不顾得分要点，一味追求难的语法及高级的词汇，结果导致错误不 断，本末倒置，不但没有拿到得分亮点，反而扣分，这是由于大部分同学对英语作文打分规则不太清楚导致。今天特级教师帮大家理一下英语作文的得分要 点，以助于大家能够拿到一个好的分数。
同学们首先要知道，英语作文分为四等。一等文：13-15分;二等文：9-12分;三等文：5-8分;四等文：0-4分。以下教大家四点如何拿到英语高分作文：
1.把握要点：
实际上中考英语写作就等于两个字，翻译!因为中考英语写作一般会给出几个要点，要求必须在文章中有所体现。文章写的再好，只要缺少要点就会扣分。所以要点，也就是文章的第二段内容，要做到全，围绕中心。
2.理清结构
中考最流行的结构就是三段式，深受各地区中考英语写作阅卷老师的喜爱。为什么尼?因为这种结构十分清 晰。“观点——要点——总结”让人一目了然。三段式的第一段：简单明了，开门见山，不超过2句话，如，我们想表达小强很强壮，第一段直接说 XQ is extremely strong. 观点明确，这一句足矣。
第二段：分2-3点说为什么他强壮。1. 每天吃10顿饭，He has ten meals everyday! 详举吃的是什么。2. 每天运动2小时，He does exercise 2 hours a day! 详举做了什么运动。
第三段：经过第二段的论证，可以得出结论。但请注意，不能完全照抄第一段，要有升华。也可以提出希望和建议等。如，How strong and robust XQ is! I hope to be him one day!
The Internet is being more and more important in our daily life. On the net, we can learn news both at home and abroad and all kinds of other information as well. We can also send messages by e-mail, make phone calls, go to net school, read different kinds of books and learn foreign languages by ourselves. Besides, we can enjoy music, watch sports matches and play chess or cards. On the net, we can even do shopping, have a chat with others and make friends with them. In a word, the Internet has made our life more colourful.
I Believe I Can Fly is a nice song by . This song tells us that confidence is very important. When a person has confidence,he believes in himself. He believes that he can and will succeed,and this gives him the courage to try new things. Dreams and confidence are what keep us going on in the face of difficulties. No one can achieve success without them. If you believe you can fly,then you can really fly someday.
I think I will never give up whenever I meet any difficulties. I’ll remember confidence is the promise for achieving success.
Yesterday, we had a discussion. The topic is. What is my dream? Every one has his dream. Some want to be teachers,others want to be scientists. My dream is to become a doctor.
My friends asked me why. I told them my story. When I was a small boy I was very weak. Once I was terribly iii. I had a high fever. My parents sent me to the hospital but the doctors could do nothing for me. Then my parents heard there was a very good doctor in another town. They took me there. I was saved.
A good doctor can save people s lives. From then on I decided to become a doctor. I know it is not easy to be a I am determined to study hard. I am sure my dream will come true.
中考英语作文范文（扩展4）
——中考的英语优秀作文3篇
在中考英语试卷中，最后一项“书面表达”题普遍失分较多，这一方面与学生的基础有关，另一方面与应试的方法和策略也有很大的关系。结合各省市近几年“书面表达”命题特点，我们归纳出如下答题对策。
一、给写作留有充分的时间
在中考英语题中，“书面表达”往往是最后一项，有的学生把最后几分钟用在写作上，匆匆了事，这是很不明智的。学生用在写作上的时间应不少于10分钟，力争不丢分，少丢分。
二、认真审题，先打草稿
写之前一定要认真阅读写作要求，切忌见题就写。中考作文主要有两种类型：“提示作文”和“看图作文”。“提示作文”一般已经给出要点，而“看图作文”则需根据图画及提示在很短的时间内将要点列出。把要点列出后，在草稿纸上写提纲，打草稿，就可以看出大概有多少字。在正式往试卷上写之前，根据题目要求适当增减内容，保持卷面整洁。
三、正确使用标点
学生在初中学习阶段，对标点符号的用法极不重视，因此，考试中明显的标点错误屡有发生，在一定程度上影响学生的成绩。另外，大小写错误也常有发生。有的甚至一篇文章从头到尾没有一个大写字母，再加上标点不正确，让人看了不知所云，以致直接影响考试成绩。
1、要做到切口小，即选取一个小的角度、巧的角度，小中见大。如以《草赞》为题作文，无疑要写成一篇“托物言志”的抒情散文。照一般的写法，一些考生往往扣住小草“*凡”的特点来赞美在*凡岗位上工作的人们——教师、环卫工人等。而有个考生写此文巧取角度，抓住小草具有适应艰苦环境且有顽强生命力的特点，赞美一批下岗工人开办人们急需的“托老所”等服务性机构及其乐于奉献的精神。“赞小草”虽是老调，该考生却弹出了新意。
2、学会逆向思维，就是从话题的反面着手，确定写作的范围和内容。以“感动”这个话题为例，它的反面是不懂感动或者是不会感动。那我们就可以写一个说自己不懂“感动”的人，写他在母爱面前的心理和行动，写他的冷漠在母爱面前怎样一点一点被征服被融化，从而学会感动的过程。这样就能使自己的文章不落入俗套，不大众化，而给阅卷老师以“新颖”之感。
3、发挥联想和想像。学生发挥联想和想象，说别人所未说，讲别人所未讲，抒别人所未抒。比如以“歌声”为话题时，一位学生独辟蹊径，把自然界声音融成一曲美妙的乐曲，还有一位学生把寝室的打鼾写成了《夜半歌声》，这些都是让人耳目一新的感觉。
How to be a good learner？
As a good learner， we should have good habits and ways of learning。
We need to get ready for our lessons before class and always listen carefully in class。 It’s good to study in groups and help each other。 We should do more reading in our free time。 If we have some problems， we’d better ask others for help。 As a student， working hard is important， but don’t forget to do sports and keep healthy。
I think all these above will be helpful to us。
中考英语作文范文（扩展9）
——父亲节中考英语作文
Reading is very good to us. I like reading beacuse I can learn useful things from it. Normally I read books at the weekends and read news by my phone. Besides, I often go to the bood store or library to get some new books. One of my most favourite book is xxxWinningxxx for the managing knowledge in it. Through reading, I have broaden my vision and talk with others more smoothly. On the other hand, I can share with my friends and discussing together. Now my friends and me are keeping a good reading habit, are you ready?
中考英语作文范文（扩展6）
——中考英语作文好句3篇
My School
I study in the No It is not big but very beautiful The lab building and the library are to the east of the new building You can enioy them as many as you like On the playground, you can have sports such as football You'd better play basketball as there are four basketball grounds in our school, You can enjoy yourself very muchGrass is everywhere
We are studying hard in our school, Our life is happy and intcrcsting
上周五，你们班举行了《我们的梦想》的主题班会，在班会上同学们踊跃发言：有的想成为老师;有的想成为一名警察;有的想当医生……。请你根据下面表格的提示以“Our Dreams”为题，写一篇英语短文，报告这次班会的情况，并谈谈你自己的梦想。
注意：
1、文章中不要出现真实的姓名和校名;内容可适当发挥。
2、词数：70词左右;文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Our Dreams
Last Friday, our class held a class meeting about our dreams. Here is my report.
范文：
Our dreams
Last Friday, our class held a class meeting about our dreams. Here is my report. Liu Wei wants to be a teacher when she grows up. She is going to study education. Li Ming's dream is to be a policeman. He does sports every day. Su Juan wants to be a movie star. She is going to take acting lessons. I want to be… I'm sure our dreams will come true one day.
今年英语作文的考察形式和去年接近，都和阅读D篇进行联动，且要求结合自身经历阐述观点。这相比单独给出一个作文题目其实难度加大了，如果D篇没看懂，直接影响作文的写作。
1. 文体
根据作文要求，本篇为话题作文，结合自身经历，并阐述观点。
2. 结构
（1）作文一般分为三个部分
第一部分阐述观点；第二部分讲述自身经历；第三部分对主旨进行总结升华。
（2）本篇作文的结构
结合D篇的励志故事，同学们在行文时，建议主体结构：遇到挫折迷失自我→找到方向和自身价值→感悟
3. 时态
自身经历用一般过去时，阐述观点用一般现在时。
4. 人称
自身经历部分使用第一人称（I），可以辅之以第三人称；而阐述和总结部分则以第一人称为主。
中考的脚步越来越近，有的同学开始焦虑：时间越来越短，那么如何才可以在短时间内提高自己的写作水平呢?其实，中考英语写作是很容易提高的。以下写作文时需要注意的四个方面，希望对大家有所启发。
第一，词汇量要充足。
词汇量多少很大程度上决定作文是否能写得下去，很多时候想到一个很好的句子或文字，但一下子词汇不记得了，没法写。词汇量不足的学生，建议使用英语背单词的软件，在较短时间内迅速提高词汇量。
第二，审题要充分。
仔细审题和构思就成了写作的第一步。审题的重点放在写作体裁、格式、字数方面，确保第一遍审题就能保证得到基本分。同时还要文体和时态，因为不同的文体要求的写作格式也是不同的，时态的要求也非常重要。
第三，提纲要详细。
审完题后一定要列提纲。很多学生认为，中考英语作文译成中文，最多是小学二年级的语文作文水平，所以根本没有必要列提纲。其实，这种想法是非常错误的，因为提纲不仅能使文章的结构清晰，还有很重要的一点：防止漏掉作文内容。因为中考英语作文有一个很重要的要求：要点要全。如果你漏掉了需要写的内容，即使文章写得再优美，用词再准确，也拿不了高分。最后要注意打草稿，然后修改。这样可以保证错误降低至最少或者没有错误，同时也能保持卷面整洁。
第四，文化差异要注意
我们要时刻牢记一点，中英文表达方式有很大的差异，所以体现在作文表达上也常常会出现生硬的中国式作文表达，降低了我们的作文质量。所以注重中英语言差异，并努力找到两者之间的表达方式上的共通点，并且有意识的运用就能避免类似的问题。
最后，细节错误要摒弃。
很多孩子在写作文时常常感觉写得非常好，用上了几个高级句型或者不错的词汇短语，以为可以得高分，但最终结果出来后却与预想差距很大。主要的原因是很多细节没有注意。比如第三人称单数，名词的单复数，大小写，甚至标点、书写、段落安排等，这些细节问题也很重要。
做好以上几个方面，中考英语写作是很容易提高的!祝愿大家在中考中能取得理想的成绩!
Last Saturday evening, all my family had dinner in a resturant.
We enjoyed ourselves while we were at table. However, some teenagers sitting beside our table began to talk and laugh loudly. What’s worse, they began to smoke in the restaurant, which made us angry. After a while, I stood up and advised them to stop smoking and behave themselves. To my surprise, they didn’t follow my suggestions. Instead, they laughed at me, saying that I was too young and too naive.
In my opinion, it’s wrong to do that in public. The future of our courtry lies in teenagers, who should not only obey the rules in public but also make contributions to the society.
有效控制愤怒能帮助我们恢复理智，找回方向，解决问题。你校English Corner将进行“Control Your Anger and Solve Your Problem”的成长分享。请你写一篇发言稿，讲述你通过有效控制愤怒，成功解决某一问题的小故事，并分享你的感悟。
要求：
1. 80—120词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考词汇：anger n. [U] 愤怒
1. 有效控制愤怒，成功解决问题的小故事（起因、经过、结果）
2. 你的感悟（保持冷静、学会反思、有效沟通……）
3. ……
Control Your Anger and Solve Your Problem
Have you ever controlled your anger and solved a problem better?
...
Thanks for listening.
【参考范文】
Control Your Anger and Solve Your Problem
Have you ever controlled your anger and solved a problem better? Here is my experience.
Last term, I bought a magazine that I had always wanted. I liked it so much that I was careful every time I carried it. But one day, my best friend Tom took the magazine without telling me. When I found it, I was very angry. But I calmed down soon. I thought of how Tom helped me when I was in trouble and I didn't want to break the relationship between us. So I controlled my anger and decided to have a talk with him. I told him that he should tell me if he wanted to read the magazine. After the talk, our relationship became stronger.
From this experience, when we are angry, we should calm ourselves down and learn to reflect. The most important is to communicate with others on time so that we can solve the problems better.
Thanks for listening.
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