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2023-06-23
Dear Jenny,
How are you doing these days? It’s almost two months since we met each other last time. I miss you a lot.
Thank you so much for your help with my English study. Now I am faced with some new learning problems./(I have difficulty in…) Firstly, I feel it difficult to remember English words. Besides, I often feel nervous when speaking English. I really hope that you can give me some good advice on how to memorize new words and practice speaking English. I believe I can make great progress in English with your help.
I would be grateful/thankful if you could give me some advice/help. By the way, please come to China for a visit whenever it is convenient to you. I am looking forward to seeing you again.
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li hua
评分标准
1、本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分
2、评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定是否达到及格线(15分)，然后确定其所属的具体档次，以该档次的要求来衡量，最后给分。其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。
3、词数少于80和多于120的，从总分中减去2分。
4、评分时应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性及上下文的连贯性。
5、若缺少要点，分数降一档处理。
6、拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。
7、书写较差以至于影响交际，将其分数降低一个档次。
1. Nothing is more important than …没有什么比。更重要
Eg。Nothing is more important than health./to be independent.
没有什么比健康独立更重要。
2. sb./sth. is the +最高级+(n.) that I have ever met/ seen/ known.......是我所遇到、见到、知道最......
Eg。 Mr zhang is the kindest teacher that I have ever met/ seen/ known.
张老师是我所遇到/见过/知道的最好的老师。
Freindship is the most valuable thing that I have ever had.
友谊是我所拥有的最宝贵的东西。
3. We can not/ never emphasize the importance of(doing)sth … too much.
We can never attach too much importance to(doing)sth ….
我们再怎么强调。的重要性也不过分。
Eg。 We can not/ never emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much.
我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的重要性也不过分。
We can never attach too much importance to reading books widely and wisely.
广泛而聪明地看书是非常重要的。
4. Only when we。can we….只有当我们。时候，我们才能......
Eg。Only when we devote ourselves to study can we achieve great success.
只有当我们投身于学习，我们才能获得成功。
Only when we have a healthy body can we do what we want.
只有身体健康我们才能做想做的事。
5. As the saying goes正如谚语所说
There is a saying that goes,
As a proverb says,
Eg。As the saying goes, where there is a will, there is a way.
正如谚语所说，“有志者事竟成”。
There is a saying that goes, “failure is the mother of success.”
有谚语说：“失败乃成功之母。”
As a proverb says, no pains, no gains.
正如谚语所说，“不劳则无获。”
6. Perhaps the most dangerous phenomenon gripping the nation today is…
也许当今困扰国家的最危险的现象是……
7. Never before in history has the issue of…been more evident than now。
历史上，……的问题从来没有比现在更加突出。
8. Perhaps it is time to reexamine the idea that…
也许现在是应该重新考虑……的时候了。
9. A growing number of people are beginning to realize that…is not the sole prerequisite for happiness。
越来越多的人开始意识到……并不是幸福的惟一条件。
10. Years of observing human behavior has enabled me to conclude that the major difference between…and…lies solely with…
对人们行为的多年观察使我能够得出这样的结论：……和……的主要区别仅仅在于……
假如你是李华，最近，你和好朋友Lisa的关系不好，让你比较迷茫。于是你写信向知音栏目主持人Tom求助。请你用100字左右的英文写这封求助信。内容要点如下：
1 .影响你们友谊的具体事件或者原因。
2.你的感受。
3.求助的具体内容。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours
Li Hua
【答案】范文
Dear Tom,
You are a celebrity in aiding those who are in trouble because of personal life and work. I'm writing to ask you of afavor and hope you will be kind enough to give me some instructions.
Recently,Lisa,my best friend from mychildhood,didn't treat me the way before. What made our relationship less close was an accidental argument on how to get on well with parents. We hold quite different opinions on that. Since then we have seldom spoken to each other,which really makes me sad and depressed. I am at such a loss over what I can do to make up and in need of your help. I will be extremely grateful if you could give me some advice.
Looking forward to your early reply. Bestwishes for you.
Yours
Li Hua
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于求助信，要求考生给知音栏目主持人Tom写信，就如何处理好与好朋友Lisa的关系向他寻求帮助。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
帮助：aid →help
最近、近期：recently→lately
争论、争吵：argument→quarrel
观点：opinion →view/idea
2.句式拓展
原句：Recently, Lisa, my bestfriend from my childhood, didn't treat me the way before.
拓展句：Recently, Lisa, who hasbeen my best friend from my childhood, didn't treat me the way before.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] You are a celebrityin aiding those who are in trouble because of personal life and work. (运用了who引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] What made ourrelationship less close was an accidental argument on how to get on well withparents. (运用了what引导的主语从句和how引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型3] I am at such a loss over what I can do tomake up and in need of your help. (运用了what引导的宾语从句)
Directions: Suppose you are a senior majored in physics and plan to study further abroad. Please write a letter of about 100 words to professor Li and ask him to write a reference for you to a U. S. do not need to write the address.
Dear professor Li,
I am a undergraduate from the Department of physics and I fortunately took a major course on which you lectured. Your lessons impressed me deeply.
As a senior, I face the choice between hunting for a job and continuing to study. I prefer to apply for a chance to pursue a Master’s degree abroad.
I have taken required English exams and got excellent scores. What’s more, I have finished my personal statement, which is attached to this letter. I’m now writing to ask if you can write a reference for me, which will greatly facilitate my admission into a . university.
Best wishes for your health.
Your Student,
×××
Directions: You want to study further for a Masters degree and you are preparing for the entrance exam. Since you have difficulty in English, you should write a letter around 100 words to ask for help from your good friend do not need to write the address.
Dear Fang,
I am sorry that I have to ask a favour of you, with the hope that you will be kind to help me.
I have been longing to apply for the entrance examination for MA candidates for a long time because I want to pursue advanced I find myself far from the required standard, especially my very poor English. At this moment, the personal friendship leads me to approach you with the request, whether you can manage to give me some constructive guidance. I promise to be a diligent student. If you agree, I will come to your house once a week at a time most convenient to you.
Thank you very much for your kind help on many occasions in the past.
Your friend,
×××
Dear teacher,
to introduce to us some good ways to learn new words so that we can remember them more easily? the students can easily follow you. Also,I would like you to introduce some rules and good ways to learn grammar. I’m sure that I can make great progress in my English study with your help.
Yours,
Li Hua
假定你是校学生会主席李华。最近我国许多城市发生新型肺炎疾病，医疗防护用品短缺。你代表校学生会向美国好
友peter求助，帮助购买一批口罩、消毒用品，供学校师生使用，具体内容如下：
1.写信目的
2.请求原因及内容
3.支付方式
4.表示感谢
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：肺炎pneumonia 口罩facemask 消毒剂disinfectant
dear peter，
yours
lihua
dear peter，
how are things going?i hope everything is fine with china‘s facing a medical emergency and i‘m writing on behalf of our school‘s student union to make a request for immediate help/urgent aid.(purpose of writing)
as you know， recently there has been a severe outbreak of the plague of pneumonia(肺炎传染病) in wuhan city， china,caused by a novel coronavirus(新型冠状病毒) ，resulting in many hundreds of deaths deadly disease has spread through the country so quickly that basic medical supplies are in great ，some protective articles(物品) such as face masks and disinfectants are running short/lowandcurrently you be so kind as to purchase from your country as many breathing masks and disinfectants as you can，andsend them to our school by express(快递) as quickly as possible? i‘d appreciate it if you could take my request into the goods are made available， i will pay you in advance by wechat or alipay.(what reason， help and payment)
your timely assistance will be of great importance to can‘t thank you enough for your kindness，which we would always forward to your early reply.(expressing thanks and expectations)
Dear Sir/Madam, 段落一
(1) 我是伯明翰大学业余爱好协会的主要成员。(2) 这封信的目的是诚挚地邀您前来（活动信息）。段落二
(3) 为了方便你制定计划，我会告诉你此次活动的安排。(4) 首先，活动将在周四晚上7点在教师楼举行。(5) 此外，本次活动将由一位著名嘉宾主持。(6) 最后，在活动结束后，我们为全体来宾准备了一场精彩的演出。
段落三
(7) 您能花时间阅读这封信，我感激不尽。(8) 如果有时间出席，我会非常高兴。
Yours sincerely, Li Ming
小作文4: 询问信、求助信
Dear Sir/Madam,
段落一
(1) I am the president of Student Union in Western University.(2) This letter is a proper chance to get a few answers from you about （主题词）.
段落二
(3) In the first place, (信息1), which weighs heavily on my mind and I attach great importance to it.(4) Moreover, (信息2), which will for sure cast significant impact on my follow-up actions.(5) If you can send me pamphlets, I will gain a deeper understanding by reading them.
段落三
(6) I appreciate that you could take the time to read this letter.(7) I truly expect to hear from you as soon as possible.
Yours sincerely, Li Ming
Were I three years younger than I am now, I would strongly recommend that I set more practical and specific goals. As an old saying goes, living without a clear and achievable aim is like sailing without a compass. Compared with many abstract objectives, practical ones can bring us more courage and confidence whenever we make one step forward. If only I could go back and reset my goals.
我现在比我小三岁,我会强烈建议我设定更实际和具体目标。俗话说得好,生活没有一个清晰的和可实现的目标就像航海没有罗盘。与许多抽象的目标相比,实际的能给我们带来更多的勇气和信心当我们使人进步。要是我能回去重置我的目标。
写出“出彩”的高考英语作文很难吗?
喜爱英语，英语成绩优秀的考生对其是如珠如宝、爱不释手、情有独钟;不喜欢英语，英语成绩一般或是较差的考生对其是恨之入骨、深恶痛绝、愁眉苦脸。
可是不管对英语是什么态度，高考也躲不开它。在高考中，能展现你英语水平的，除了英语成绩外，最主要的还有英语作文，要是在英语作文写作中，能摆脱平铺直叙，写出一些深受阅卷老师喜欢的句型，那更能展现你的英语水平。为此，零点高三认为，考生在平时必须多多积累一些英语作文句型，在英语考试中巧妙的将其运用到作文中，能够作文增色不少。
一.经典开头句型
far as ...is/am/are concerned 就而言
can be said with certainty that... 可以肯定地说......
the proverb says，... 正如谚语所说的，......
generally recognized that... 普遍认为......
hardly that... 这是很难的......
no denying the fact that... 毫无疑问，无可否认......
is more important than the fact that... 没有什么比......更重要。
far more important is that... 更重要的是...
二.经典结尾句型
will conclude by saying... 最后我要说...
, we have the reason to believe that... 因此，我们有理由相信...
may be safely said that... 它可以有把握地说......
what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that...通过以上讨论，我们可以得出结论...
data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that 通过数据我们得到的结论是，....
can be concluded from the discussion that... 从讨论中我们可以得出......的结论
my point of view, it would be better if... 在我看来，如果也许更好
三.衔接句型
case in point is ... 一个典型的例子是......
the problem is not so simple. Therefore，... 然而问题并非如此简单，所以
its a pity that... 但遗憾的是...
, we hold the opinion that... 此外，我们坚持认为，......
, the difficulty lies in... 然而，困难在于...
it has been mentioned above... 正如上面所提到的
this respect,... 从这个角度上,......
四.常用于引言段的句型
people think that 有些人认为...
be frank, I can not agree with their opinion for the reasons below. 坦率地说，我不能同意他们的意见，理由如下。
3. I believe the statement is valid because 我认为这个论点是正确的，因为...
4. Along with the development of, more and more... 随着的发展，越来越多的...
5. As far as I am concerned, I completely agree with the former/ the latter. 就我而言，我完全同意前者/后者的观点。
五.表示比较和对比的常用句型
1. A is completely different from B. A和B完全不同。
2. The difference between A and B is/lies in... A和B不同的地方是......
六.因果推理法常用句型
we read the book, we have learned a lot. 由于阅读这本书，我们已经学到了很多。
2. We read the book; as a result / therefore / thus / hence / consequently / for this reason / because of this, weve learned a lot. 由于阅读这本书，我们已经学到了很多。
3. As a result of /Because of/Due to/Owing to reading the book, weve learned a lot. 由于阅读这本书，我们已经学到了很多。
高考英语书面表达求助信点评
模板①
dear ______ ,
i am writing to formally request to ______（请求的内容）.the reason for _____________is that_____________（给出原因）. i___________ , so i _____________（给出细节）.i would also like to request ___________（提出进一步的要求）. i am sorry for any inconvenience i have caused. thank you for your attention to these requests. if you have any questions, do not hesitate to contact me at __________（电话号码）.
i look forward to a favorable reply.
yours sincerely,
li ming
模板②
dear________,
my name is _______________(自我介绍). i’m writing a letter to you to ask for some help. i have met difficulty in _______________(求助内容). first, i find ___________(困难1). besides, ________(困难2). what’s more, __________(困难3).
faced with so much difficulty, i have to ask you for some help. would you like to ____________(委婉提出请求)？in the meanwhile, i beg you to (请求内容) so that ___________(请求目的). also, i would like you to (请求内容).
i’m sure that i can make great progress in _____________(表达期待).
yours,
li hua
必备佳句
常用句型：
（做某事有困难）
have trouble in doing sth.
find it extremely hard for me to do sth. sth is another terrible headache for me. l
常见困难：
【生活方面】
与人相处
get along well with my classmates/ the new teacher / my parents.
和我的同学/新老师/父母相处
把握时间
arrange and make good use of my everyday time for valuable things.
安排和利用每天的时间去做有意义的事情
明确目标
know the purpose of my life and the destination of my future in order to passionately live a purpose-driven life everyday.
知道我生命的目的和未来的目标，以便每天充满激情地过着“目标驱动”的生活
【学习方面】
不懂语法
have trouble in mastering the advanced grammar rules and put them into use in my speaking and writing.
进步太慢
find myself making progress not as fast as before, which has been annoying me for a long time.
精力有限
can’t be passionate and energetic all day long so as to make every moment meaningful and splendid.
真题练习
高考真题01
假设你是李华，是一名高三学生。你的同班同学王强因患白血病(leukemia)而住院，目前已经花光了家里的所有积蓄，现在需要骨髓移植(bone marrow transplant)，需要20万元。请你帮他写一封求助信。要点如下：
1.对病人的简单介绍；
2.目前的困难；
3.希望得到捐助。
尊敬的市长：
您好！
今天我冒犯给您写了这么一封信，或许您正在休息，这封信打扰了您的休息，不过您还是要看看，这是我辛苦写的，希望您采纳我的意见，更好地建设我们这个和谐美好的苏州。
市长叔叔，您知道吗？现在的苏州再也不是文明的了，人们随地乱丢垃圾，吐痰，弄的清洁工整天徘徊于街道上，随时清理垃圾，还有更可怕的，现在的人嘴里全是不干不净的话，严重^v^污染了我们苏州在外地人心中的印象，苏州真的无法再次文明了吗？人们的灵魂就一定要那么败坏？市长，请您立下规定，如有不文明者，罚，我就不相信了，现在这个钱的世界会有人会那么傻来干不文明的事。
市长叔叔，为了苏州，为了人民，请您行动吧！
第一要认真审题。根据题目类别，弄清文体的要求，并判明文章的种类(议论文、说明文、记叙文)，同时确定文章要阐明的主题或要表达的中心思想，若题目已经提供了提纲，还要注意弄清各提纲要点之间的逻辑关系。考生在拿到作文题后，切勿惟恐时间不够，提笔就写。一旦跑题，发现了再改就来不及了，常言道：磨刀不误砍柴工。
第二要注意设计安排段落。根据文章的中心思想，确定各个段落的主题内容和主题句。如果是议论文，一般要从论点的正反两个方面来考虑，首先是某观点的合理成分或某物的长处，然后是该观点的不合理成分或该物的短处，最后阐明自己的观点。如果题目提供了提纲，只要把提纲扩展成主题句即可。
第三要避免将记忆里较熟悉的句子生拉硬扯地搬进作文，使作文结构松散，意思不明确，甚至会偏离主题。
写好英语作文的方法
书写要漂亮，卷面整洁。和语文作文一样，卷面是最重要的，不要出现污痕、错字，保持卷面的干净整洁，给阅卷老师留下好的印象。字体不做要求，清楚，便于辨认，工整就足够了。平时可以多练书写，字体就会越来越漂亮。
背诵范文，尽量做到完整默写。不会写作文怎么办？背范文。背范文可以教你如何写作文，如何使用句型，对提高语感也有帮助。遇到类似的作文就可以往范文上靠，久而久之就找到感觉了。
平时多练。平时一定要多写，有范文的可以和范文比较，看看自己的差距。写完后记得找老师批改，找出自己的错误和不足。
尝试用高级词汇和句型。使用高级句型和词汇，可以让阅卷老师眼前一亮，分数也会相应提高。前提是你必须保证自己所写的符合语法，正确无误，否则就老老实实写自己学过的，保证正确率是最重要的，不要因使用错误的高级句型而丢分。
A letter for help a letter for help dear uncle, how are you next week? One of my classmates and I will take part in an English speech contest on behalf of my school. I am very excited but also very happy, because it is a good opportunity to improve my English level, but I have no experience. Although I have been preparing for this competition, as an English expert, I still have no confidence.
What do you suggest I do for the contest? I plan this Saturday morning I'd like to know if you are free if not. Can you tell me when it is convenient for you? I'd love to hear from you. I'll appreciate any help you can give me, niece.
Bayberry, help me, honey.
中文翻译：
一封求助信一封求助信亲爱的叔叔，下周你怎么样？我的一位同学和我将代表我的学校参加一场英语演讲比赛我很兴奋但也很高兴，因为这是一个提高我英语水平的好机会，但是我没有经验，虽然我一直在准备对于这次比赛，作为一个英语专家，我仍然没有信心，你建议我为比赛做些什么准备我计划这个星期六早上去拜访你我想知道如果没有的话你是否有空，你能告诉我什么时候对你方便吗？我很想得到你的指示我会很感激你的任何帮助侄女，杨梅帮我亲爱的。
假如你叫李华，在光明中学读书，在高中学习英语的过程中遇到一些问题，想得到老师的帮助，并想给班级的英语老师提一些建议，以帮助自己学好英语。下面表格中只给了简单的提示，请你结合自己的实际情况给英语老师写一封求助信，内容如下：
字数：100左右。
Dear teacher,
to introduce to us some good ways to learn new words so that we can remember them more easily? the students can easily follow you.
Also,I would like you to introduce some rules and good ways to learn grammar. I’m sure that I can make great progress in my English study with your help.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear teacher, my name is Zhou mingim. I am writing to you. Please help me.
I have encountered a lot of difficulties in English learning. First of all, I found that our text is full of new words, these words are very difficult for me to remember. The text is too long, I can't recite more things, grammar is also difficult to learn, in the face of so many difficulties, I would like to ask you for help, you can introduce us some good ways to learn new words, so that we can remember them more easily.
At the same time, I ask you to teach the text slowly so that ordinary students can easily follow you. I would like to ask you to introduce some rules and good methods of learning grammar. I believe that with your help, my English study will make great progress.
中文翻译：
亲爱的老师，我叫周明im，写信给您，请您帮忙我在英语学习中遇到了很多困难。首先，我发现我们的课文中充满了新单词，这些单词对我来说是很难记住的，课文太长了，我无法背诵更多的东西，语法也很难学，面对如此多的困难，我想请你帮忙，你能给我们介绍一些学习新单词的好方法，以便我们更容易地记住它们。同时，我请求你把课文教得慢一点，这样普通学生就可以很容易地跟着你了，我想请你介绍一些学习语法的规则和好方法。
我相信在你的帮助下，我的英语学习会取得很大的进步。
Dear Jenny,
How are you doing these days? It’s almost two months since we met each other last time. I miss you a lot.
Thank you so much for your help with my English study. Now I am faced with some new learning problems./(I have difficulty in…) Firstly, I feel it difficult to remember English words. Besides, I often feel nervous when speaking English. I really hope that you can give me some good advice on how to memorize new words and practice speaking English. I believe I can make great progress in English with your help.
I would be grateful/thankful if you could give me some advice/help. By the way, please come to China for a visit whenever it is convenient to you. I am looking forward to seeing you again.
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li hua
英语求助信写作
1、上海英语作文题目
假如你是明启中学的高三学生李华，你邀请王磊参加露天音乐会，但是王磊拒绝了邀请，因为路途遥远，交通不方便的原因，不想去郊外公园参加露天音乐会；
1、针对李华的犹豫不决给出解决的答案；
2、给他来参加露天音乐会的理由。
2、上海英语作文点评
写作部分要求考生写邮件说服好友，任务真实，考查了考生的语言交际能力。试题全面考核了考生的语言知识和语言能力，既体现了课程标准的基本要求，又凸显了对考生在不同语境中灵活运用语言能力的考查，对高中英语教学起到了积极的引导作用。
上海英语试卷命题依据英语学科考试说明，难易度适切，区分度合理，测量目标明确，与以往考试保持一致。试卷内容围绕人与自然、人与社会、人与自我三大主题，综合考查英语语言运用能力，突出学科核心素养，凸显思辨能力的考查，彰显人文学科的本质。
Mrs Wilson ,
Im going out shopping , and wont be back until about 5:00 pm. I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the city library . At about 1 oclock this afternoon , Tracy called ,saying that she couldnt meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to . She felt very sorry about that , but said that you could set some other time for the meeting . She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home . She has already told Susan about this change.
LI Hua
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua, a Chinese student taking summer courses in your university. I’m writing to ask for help.
I came here last month and I find my courses interesting. But I have some difficulties with note-making and I have no idea of how to use the library. I was told the Learning Center provides help for students and I’m anxious to get help from you. I have no class on Tuesday mornings and Friday afternoons. Please let me know which day is ok with you. You may email or phone me. Here are my email address and phone number:lihua@; 12345678. Thanks for your kindness in advance.
Look forward to your reply.
yours, Lihua
一封求助信A Letter for Help英语作文带翻译
Dear Uncle,
亲爱的叔叔，
How are you?
您好!
Next week an English speaking contest will be held in the city. A classmate of mine and I will take part in it on behalf of my school. I am excited but also mervous, because it is a good chance to improve my English. But I have no experience. Although I have been preparing for the contest, I am still not confident. As an expert in English, what would you advise me to prepare for the contest?
下周市里举办英语演讲比赛，我和一位同学将代表学校参加比赛。我感到既兴奋又紧张，因为这是一个提高英语的好机会。但我没有经验。我一直在为比赛做准备，可仍然没有把握。作为一个英语专家，您建议我为比赛准备些什么呢?
I plan to pay a visit to you this Saturday morning. I wonder whether you will be free then. If not, could you tell me the time that is convenient for you? I am eager to get your instruction. I will appreciate any of your help.
我打算这周六上午去您家，我想知道到时您是否有空。如果没空，能告诉我?如果没有空可以告诉我你什么时候方便吗?我渴望得到您的指导，我会非常感激您的'帮助。
Your niece,
xxx
您的侄女xx
每个星期二和星期五晚上看到李小姐，一天的辛苦工作之后，我的邻居，在一个公司赶回家，一个秘书，吞下她吃饭然后赶紧去车上她的英语课。李小姐的.情况并非独特，现在越来越多的城市成年人度过他们的业余时间，试图提高自己在学校或学院。
有很多理由可以为他们的教育。有些人，如李小姐，都在做这件事来获得另一个学位或文凭来给社会留下深刻印象。对他们更多的知识，或者说，更多的证书意味着更多的机会，更好的工作和更快的晋升。
其他人，特别是下岗或失业的人去职业学校，准备回到就业市场。他们渴望新的技能，使他们能够胜任在零售行业，管理，教育和其他服务类的工作，他们是奇怪的，因为他们大多是蓝领工人在工厂。
也有人前来参加中国传统医学、绘画、书法、摄影等课程。当他们工作周的时候，人们开始有时间来满足他们对他们内心的渴望的梦想。
出于必要或出于兴趣，人们为了共同的目标去上学，为了提高自己，而这一热潮在成人教育，反过来，有助于提高整个国家的智力水平。
i/we...?
we/i...?
you like to...?
you mind doing...?
you be so kind as to give me some more information about...?
be kindenough to give...？
‘d be grateful if you could let me knowi n advance.
‘d appreciate it if you could provide some more detals about...
wonder if you could give me some advice.
permit me to thank you for you rkind offer of help.
(do)hope that...
it possible that you could come a little earlier?
would be nice/wonderful if you could let us know in advance
(help letter) Note: you want to continue to study for master's degree, and you are preparing for the entrance examination. Because you have difficulties in English, you should write a letter to your good friend for help. You don't need to write an address.
I'm sorry I have to ask you for help. I hope you can help me. I've always been eager to apply for the entrance examination for master's degree, because I want to continue my further study What's more, I find myself far from meeting the required standard, especially at present my English is very poor.
My personal friendship makes me put forward such a request to you. Can you give me some constructive guidance? I promise to be a diligent student. If you agree, I will come to your home once a week at your most convenient time.
Thank you for your kindness and help for many times in the past Dear friend, ×××× thank you very much for your help under the guidance of the past. Suppose you are a senior majoring in physics and intend to go abroad for further study, please ask Professor Li to write a letter about words and a letter of recommendation from an American University. You don't have to write an address.
中文翻译：
（求助信）说明：你想继续攻读硕士学位，而且你正在准备入学考试，因为你的英语有困难，你应该写一封信来向你的好朋友方求助你不需要写地址亲爱的方，很抱歉我不得不请你帮忙，希望您能帮助我，我一直渴望申请硕士生入学考试，因为我想继续深造，不幸的是，我发现自己远远达不到要求的标准，尤其是目前我的英语非常差，个人的友谊使我向你提出了这样的要求，你能否给我一些建设性的指导，我保证做一个勤奋的学生如果你同意，我会在你最方便的时间每周来你家一次非常感谢你过去多次对你的友好帮助你的朋友，××××非常感谢您在过去的指导下，多次给予您的帮助：假设您是物理专业的大四学生，打算出国深造，请李教授写一封关于文字的信，请他为您写一封美国大学的推荐信，您不必写地址。
尊敬的市长：
您好！
本人是卢湾区，打浦街道，徐一居委的一名残疾病人。由于是是低保家庭，生活上举步为艰。不得以，来信求助你们有关部门。虽然我在这次生病期间，同样得到居委的帮助与关心，但是我非常的感谢徐一居委里的所有工作人员。
我是一个多病的人，由于在20xx年，没有经济来源，看病的医药费又非常昂贵，导致我的右眼因并发症而失明。经上海市劳动局的检查，得出的结果是——完全丧失劳动能力，后又经卢湾区残疾检查，结果是一样的——二级残废。
没有办法，人要活，只能劳动，我在外打工过日子，丈夫也是没有工作，生活来源也没有。由于我病情的加重，20xx年3月25日，被抢救到九人民医院，经三天的化验，检查，3月28日，我的右脚被截肢，生活一下子一落千丈。这一下给一个已经很贫困的家庭带来了更大的打击，作为行动不能自行的人，生活不能自理的人，而且家庭为我背上了几万元的债务。我现在还能拿什么偿还别人的债务。以后我的生活是否有保障，也不知道。由于身体有多种疾病，每天要服用大量的药物，低保的两百多元，吃药都不够，还谈什么生活，丈夫身体也有病，他为了家，为了我，不得不出去打工，我现在又成了残疾人，xxx不可能看着我们见死不救吧？我相信，有困难，找组织是没有错的。
今天我写给市长这封信，也同时发给了其他各个部门，有关我生活的问题，相信在这世界上好人还是有的。一个人要生存，是要依靠稳定的经济来支撑的，没有经济来源，还谈什么生存，我也不希望这样。但是受生活所迫，不得已才这样。
以前我可以做保姆工作来维持生活，现在不行了，职能靠党的救助了，我的希望我的未来只有靠党，党是我的衣食父母。作为一个残疾人，这是我内心的呼唤。
作为市长您，万元的债务不算什么，你的钞票和房子有的是，但对于我们底层老百姓而言，是天文数字。我们家欢迎您来我家住几天，感受一下我们居住的环境。我儿子26岁，连睡觉的床铺都放不下，想必你的女儿睡觉的地方比我家的面积还大，求得你市长帮助解决，我们等着你最好的回音。
感谢党的帮助，也同样感谢所有帮助过我们家庭的好人。
书信作文模板
Dear X X X， 亲爱的X X X
I am extremely pleased to hear from you.(我很高兴收到你的来
信) And I would like to write a letter to tell you that_____. (我很高兴写封信告诉
你。。。) I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience/I am looking f0rward to your replies at your earliest convenience. (我希望你可以在空闲的时候尽快给我回信)
Best regards for your health and success. 祝你身体健康万事如意
Sincerely yours，你最真诚的X X X
X X X
评分细则
优秀(22--25)：紧扣主题，覆盖所有要点，内容充实;语法结构多样，词汇丰富，行文流畅，显示出较强的语言运用能力，允许有个别语言错误，但不影响意思表达。
良好(18--21)：紧扣主题，覆盖所有要点，内容较充实，行文较流畅，语言有少量错误，但基本不影响意思表达。
一般(15--17)：紧扣主题，基本覆盖所有要点，语言错误已影响了部分意思的表达，但多数句子基本正确;基本达到预期写作目的。
较差(11--14)：要点不全，内容不完整，行文不够连贯;语言错误较多，半数句子基本正确。
差(6--10)：内容混乱，或主要内容偏离主题，尚能够写出少数与内容相关的可读句。
极差(0--5)：只能写出与内容相关的词语，没有有效信息;抄写其他文章，或只是写出与作文无关的内容。
英语作文：三点关键定档因素(不跑题是前提)
词汇多样性
语法复杂性
文章连贯性
审题的概念
拿到试卷后，首先浏览书面表达的题目，研究题目要求。正确的审题内容包括A、审标题B、审体裁C、审要点。审标题：看文章是否要求有题目(title)或者主题(topic)能够确保你不跑题;审体裁：确能够定文章的文体，为你写作提供方向。审要点：如果英语作文中，有要求要点的，一般打分时是踩点给分的，准确把握住要点，是高分的一个诀窍。
如何审要点?要做到以下两个方面：
总结归纳要点：不是所有内容都要写出来，而是抓住其中的关键要点、衔接要点!
理顺要点：将提炼的要点按逻辑关系(如时间关系、因果关系、转折关系等)重新安排，这样整篇文章看起来就整体有序，流畅自然，更加容易打动评分老师，从而作文分数提升一档。
构思文章提纲：根据题目的要点，安排好段落和主次关系。要形成良好的分段意识，写作分段是必须要进行的(2至4段为佳)，这样显得文章不会拥挤并且层次分明。在行文意识上，要注意突出要点。
Dear Mr Margaret，
I'm glad to know that ten waitresses are needed in your hotel. I'd like to be one of them. I'm a Chinese girl of twenty. I'm single and healthy. I started school when I was six. I studied in No. 1 Primary School. At the age of eleven，I went Shenzhen Middle school for learning. After graduation in I began to work on a construction site as an ordinary worker，I became a postwoman when I was twenty.
I had learned English for 6 years at school，and have kept on learning it since I left school. Now I can speak good English and type well. I enjoy singing and dancing. Last year I won the first prize in the competition for the spare time singers in the city.
Could you let me have a position in your hotel?
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours faithfully，
Li Hua
一封求助信A Letter for Help英语作文
Dear Uncle,
亲爱的叔叔：
How are you?
您好!
Next week an English speaking contest will be held in the city. A classmate of mine and I will take part in it on behalf of my school. I am excited but also mervous, because it is a good chance to improve my English. But I have no experience. Although I have been preparing for the contest, I am still not confident. As an expert in English, what would you advise me to prepare for the contest?
下周市里举办英语演讲比赛，我和一位同学将代表学校参加比赛。我感到既兴奋又紧张，因为这是一个提高英语的好机会。但我没有经验。我一直在为比赛做准备，可仍然没有把握。作为一个英语专家，您建议我为比赛准备些什么呢?
I plan to pay a visit to you this Saturday morning. I wonder whether you will be free then. If not, could you tell me the time that is convenient for you? I am eager to get your instruction. I will appreciate any of your help.
我打算这周六上午去您家，我想知道到时您是否有空。如果没空，能告诉我?如果没有空可以告诉我你什么时候方便吗?我渴望得到您的指导，我会非常感激您的帮助。
Your niece,
Yang Mei
您的侄女 杨梅
Dear Kate teacher,
I am a student,named Li asked for your I order to exams are nevours reading I misses some problems don't serious to fell very broad and homwork is so many,I don't to do homework and don't frees times to play spirts,don't to play with my friends. At the everning,I fell study is very I was sleeping go to be ,At first I think must exams so I don't a sleepy.
Miss these problems I don't what to do,I hope teacher can help me,or can give me some can study and thank you for you! Your srudent
Li Hua
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假如你是李华，你对太空旅行感兴趣；经常到图书馆阅读资料，但得不到父母理解，于是你给英国朋友stephen发电子邮件进行交流并请求帮助。要点如下：
1）你的观点。（至少写2点）
2）父母的意见。
要求：1）词数100词左右，开头和结尾已给出的内容不计入总词数
2）内容要包括上述要点，可适当增加细节。
3）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
dear stephen,
i am writing to tell you about my problem with my parents. i don‘t know how to deal with it and would like your help.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
what shall i do? can you offer me some suggestion? i am looking forward to your early reply.
yours,
li hua
【写作指导】
本书面表达属于应用文要求写一封信。
第1步：根据提示可知本片为一封电子邮件，就个人爱好带来的困惑，给英国朋友斯蒂文发电子邮件，进行交流并请求帮助。要点如下：对太空旅游感兴趣，经常到图书馆阅读资料，个人爱好有助于学习，但得不到父母理解，父母认为时间应花在功课上，成绩（good marks）就是一切。人称使用第一人称，时态应为一般现在时。
第2步： 根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），be crazy about（ 对……痴迷），space travel（ 太空旅行），spare time（空闲时间），make my parents very angry（使得我的父母很生气）， be helpful for（ 对……有帮助）。
第3步：根据其实及关键词组进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的名词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【范文】
dear stephen,
i‘m writing to tell you about my problem with my parents. i don‘t know how to deal with it and would like your help.
you know i‘m crazy about space travel. in my spare time, i often go to the library to find something about space travel to read. this makes my parents very angry. to them, good marks are everything and i should spend more time on my lessons, even at weekends.
i think healthy hobbies are helpful for our development. but i don‘t think my parents understand me. i feel bad about that.
what shall i do? can you offer me some suggestions? i‘m looking forward to your early reply.
yours,
li hua
Dear Mr. Johnson,
How are you doing these days? It’s almost two months since we met each other last time. I miss you a lot.
Thank you so much for your help with my English study. Now I am faced with some new learning problems. I ha
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