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简洁就是用最精炼的语言来表达意思,在商务信函中言简意赅就是为了方便高效率沟通与工作。能用一个字表达的不用一个词组,能一个词组讲清的事就不用讲成一句话。商务信函不用因顾及礼貌而开头就说“I hope you are well”( 近日可好?) ,天气也从不在此中提及。我们用“now”不用“at the same time”; 用“though”而不用“in spite of the fact that”……。形容词虽然可以表达友好、满意、歉意等感情,但只是在十分必要的情况下才出现。中国人在写英文信函时经常会出现一些不必要的重复,比如: “true facts”、“next time in the future”这样的词语读者能懂,但是会对这种不地道的说法嗤之以鼻。
中文就简洁这一点在很多情况下具有优势,商务信函中最能体现这一优势的是一些客套而必要的敬语,比如: “we are looking forward to your early reply”,翻译成中文就五个字: “盼早日回复”; “with all kind regards,I remain”,中文为“祝好”。像“regards”、“wishes”这一类词,都不用按照原意翻译,祝好的英文句子大多用中文的俗语代替。
Dear Mr. / Ms,
I am at present in Hamburg visiting the harbour with a view to making known our new type of container for use in Europe.
I shall be in Antwerp on Wednesday, 4th June, and should like to call on you at . on that day.
If I do not hear from you to the contrary, I shall assume that it will be convenient for me to call at that time.
Yours faithfully
发送商务信函的目的在于建立商务往来关系,就某一细节进行商讨,努力达成共识,以便促进一项商务活动的开展。要达到这些目的,首先必须保证阅读者能够清楚了解写信人的意图,迂回或闪烁其辞的话语会让读信人产生不信任,甚至会怀疑对方的语言表达能力,对进一步开展商务活动很不利。模棱两可的话轻则阻碍读信人对信函意思的理解,重则会对发函方造成不必要的损失。例如: As to the steamers sailing from Hong Kong to San Francisco,we have bimonthly direct services. 此处bimonthly 有歧义,可以是twice a month 或者once two month.故读信人就迷惑了,可以改写为We have two direct sailings every month from Hong Kong to San Francisco.
翻译要保留原文的清晰度相当重要。由于在较为正式的场合中,为了将一概念定义完整和清楚,英文常常用关联词将几个短句并在一起形成一个长句,而中文无法照样只用一句话来翻译,即使这样译了也很难达到通顺和自然。这时,我们就采取将长句按特定的事情发展的顺序拆分成两个或两个以上的小句子的方式来翻译。必要时还要增加或省略一些词语,让整段文字结构更合理、内容更清楚。例如: The prices stated are based on current freight rates,any increase or decrease in freight rates at time of shipment is to be the benefit of the buyer,with the seller assuming the payment of all transportation charges to the point or place of delivery.例句中以一个介词with 来分界,译为“合同价格是以运费计算,装运时运费的增减均属买方。卖方则承担至交货地的全部运费”。在原文中with 分句是一个状语,翻译时采用中国人平铺直叙的思维方式,用分述的方式把这个句子拆成两句,清楚地表达了原文的语言信息。
是不是一封书信只要包含了全部关键信息就可以成为一封好的书信了呢? 拟信人还应注意语言组织的条理性,或按事情发展的先后顺序,或按各要素的重要性排序编写。东扯一句,西扯一句的写法必定会影响文章的清晰度。
To XXX:
I’m sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. I have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.
Shall we go on Saturday morning? We can set out early so that we’ll have more time to read and select books. If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best. I should be available any time after school next week.
Yours,
Li Hua
1. The purpose of this letter is to inform you that (of)
2. The purport of this line is to advise you that (of)
3. The object of the present is to report you that
4. The object of this letter is to tell you that
5. By this letter we Purpose to inform you that (of)
6. Through the present we wish to intimate to you that
7. The present serves to acquaint you that
Dear Sir or Madam
I am senior from the Department of BusinessAdministration of Beijing University. I am writing theletter in purpose of applying for admission into youresteemed institution/your recently advertised position for a staff member.
I am sure that I am qualified for it. First, enclosed with this letter is my resume, which furtherdetails my previous academic qualifications and work experience. Second, not only do myqualifications and experience make me a perfect candidate for it, my cheerful personality iswell suited to studying in your prestigious university/working as a staff member. Last, myhobbies include sports and music.
Words fail me when I try to express my heartfelt gratitude to the help you rendered me. Yourprompt and favorable attention to my inqquiry would be highly appreciated.
Yours sincerely,
Dear Mr. Sation
With reference to your letter dated 3rd May 20_, I am writing to apologies for the mistake we made.
The mistake was made because our computer broke down on 29 April. I can assure you we will send the cheque of $200 to you in two days. We will offer you 20% discount for you next stay.
Please accept our apologies for the inconvenience this error has caused you and we look forward to meeting you again.
Your sincerely
Dear Mr/Mrs,
We write to confirm our agreement reached during ourconversation on 9th June about special discountson M-S Acoustical Partitions as describedon page 8of our catalogue. These prices will prevail through30 Regular Price Special pricedimensionEachEach(12 or more)4X4’US$ Bern US$ FOB Bern4x5’132 ’ We will be happy to receive your order.
Yours sincerely
Dear Mr. Johnson
Thank you very much for your letter of 3 May 20XX.
We wish to offer our sincere apologies for the long delay in replying to your letter. We have recently moved our headquarters to a new location in the south of city and this has resulted in some considerable delay in replying to enquiries. The move has now been completed and I can assure you that there will be no more delays in the future.
The catalogue you require are enclosed and I hope that you will continue to use us as your main supplier.
Your sincerely
Dear Mr. / Ms,
Thank you for your letter informing us of Mr. Green’s visit during June 2-7. Unfortunately, Mr. Edwards, our manager, is now in Cairo and will not be back until the second half of June. He would, however, be pleased to see Mr. Green any time after his return.
We look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,xxx
尊敬的先生/小姐
谢谢来函告知我方六月2-7日格林先生的来访。不巧,我们的`总经理艾得华先生现正在巴黎,到六月中旬才能回来。但他回来后愿意在任何时间会见格林先生。
希望收到您的来信。
您诚挚的xxx
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