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星期天，妈妈说要带着我和我的小伙伴丁丁沿着护城河边走一走，我高兴得一蹦老高，赶紧去找丁丁。妈妈和阿姨骑着车来到了莒州路，路边就是护城河。妈妈还没说“下车”，我们就迫不及待地跳下车，沿着人行道边走边想：这儿的水真清呀，清得能够看到河底下的黄色的土，路旁还有几棵刚刚发出新芽的小树，几只不知名的小鸟在欢乐地歌唱。那里景色真美呀，简直能够得100分，一向走到小路的尽头，我们仍不舍得离开。
我们沿着护城河往下游走去，来到了北坛路。这一部分河面虽然比较干净，但河水却很浑很浑，还有一股臭气。这是怎样回事？我往桥下一看，哎呀，桥底下全是垃圾，真是的，我越想越生气。哼，那里的人以为这样倒垃圾就不影响河吗？他们用这种自作聪明的办法把河水弄得多脏啊。我们准备来评一评这个地方，“这个地方这么脏，就只得10分。”我思考了一下，说：“不行不行，再加上那里的人这种错误的思想，还要再减去9分，我要把那里评为1分”。
我们继续往前走，护城河穿过一片生活小区，突然，一阵浓浓的臭味扑鼻而来。我和丁丁捂着鼻子喊“快走快走！”想想看，在景色优美的地方，我们怎样也不想上车，此刻我们就像被钉子钉在车上似的，谁也不想下来。越往前走，景色就越差，看看这条河，哪还叫河？简直就是一个满是淤泥的臭水沟。
我们逃也似的离开了那里，接下来的景色让我们忘记了一切烦恼。我们来到了文心广场，那里的水碧绿碧绿的，没有一点垃圾，河水映出了河边柳树的倒影，真是美丽极了。
同是一条护城河，为什么会有这么大的变化呢？都是垃圾闯的祸！是谁把它们扔到河里的呢？是生活小区里的人们！
我们要好好地保护环境，让我们共同的家园天更蓝，水更清，景色更美！
Environmental protection in recent years, there are still many problems in environmental protection. One of the most serious problems is the serious pollution of air, water and soil. The polluted air causes great harm to people's health, and the polluted water will lead to disease and death.
With the rapid development of modern cities, in order to protect the environment, vegetation has been greatly reduced, and many governments have taken many measures The government plays the most important role in environmental protection. Today's society is a highly developed science and technology society. However, the shortcomings in the development process are obvious, such as carbon dioxide, environmental pollution, but the most serious problem should be the global carbon dioxide problem Due to the excessive emission of greenhouse gases and the excessive emission of carbon dioxide, the problem of climate warming has resulted in economic diversification and lagged behind La Nina phenomenon.
The two levels of glaciers melt. While polar animals lose their survival opportunities, they will also lead to sea level rise. The water inflow of many coastal cities has not caused serious consequences.
Therefore, in a few years, we must take necessary measures In order to reduce the impact of carbon dioxide on the environment, such as afforestation activities and reducing the use of fossil fuels, we can promote low-carbon life from our own perspective.
中文翻译：
环境保护近年来环境保护问题仍然很多，其中最严重的问题之一就是空气、水和土壤的严重污染，污染的空气对人们的健康造成极大的危害，污染的水会导致疾病和死亡，随着现代城市的迅速发展，为了保护环境，植被已经大大减少，许多国家的采取了许多立法措施来控制空气污染，保护森林和海洋资源，制止任何环境污染，在环境保护中扮演着最重要的角色今天的社会是一个高度发达的科技社会然而，在发展过程中的缺点是显而易见的，比如：二氧化碳，环境污染，但是最严重的应该是现在全球二氧化碳问题的问题气候变暖由于温室气体的过量排放，二氧化碳的排放量过大，造成了经济多元化和拉尼娜现象滞后无序两个层次的冰川融化，极地动物失去生存机会的同时，也会导致海平面上升，许多沿海城市的入水并没有造成严重后果因此，几年后，我们必须采取必要的措施来减少二氧化碳对环境的影响，例如：植树造林活动，减少化石燃料的使用，我们可以从自己的角度出发，促进低碳生活。
题目：
Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
个体在环保中的作为
范文：
Nowadays, environmental protection has become one of the most important issues the public are concerned about. While some people deem that it is the responsibility of the government and big companies to protect the environment because they hold the power and pool the resources necessary while individuals are too feeble to make much effort, I think that every individual can make a difference.
如今，环境保护已经成为公众关注的最重要的问题之一。虽然有些人认为保护环境是政府和大公司的责任，因为他们拥有权力，汇集必要的资源，而个人太虚弱，不能做太多努力，但我认为每个人都可以发挥作用。
There is an old saying goes as: Constant efforts bring success. This means that individuals did have the capacity to save our motherland if they band together and move towards the same direction. For example, if everyone in China saves one piece of paper every day, nearly a million trees can be saved in one day. Therefore, we must realize the power of each person and shoulder our own responsibility.
常言道:不断的努力会带来成功。这意味着，如果个人团结起来，朝着同一个方向前进，他们确实有能力拯救我们的祖国。例如，如果每个中国人每天都存一张纸，一天就可以拯救将近一百万棵树。因此，我们必须意识到每个人的力量，并承担我们自己的责任。
Moreover, the most important thing must be the effect on big companies and factories caused by public awareness and habits. Specifically, environmental-friendly behaviors of the public can largely influence the business strategies of big companies. For example, when disposable plastic bags are not popular anymore in the market, the manufacturers will stop their production and find eco-friendly replacements such as fabric bags. Thus, the power of individuals is maximized and makes a big difference.
此外，最重要的是公众意识和习惯对大公司和工厂的影响。具体来说，公众的环保行为在很大程度上影响着大公司的经营策略。例如，当一次性塑料袋在市场上不再流行时，制造商就会停止生产，寻找环保替代品，比如布袋。因此，个人的力量得到了最大化，并产生了巨大的影响。
However, that is not to say we should ignore the responsibility of the government and big companies. Admittedly, in solving some large-scale problems like deforestation and greenhouse effect, the government and big companies should fully harness their technology and power to come up with strategic plans.
然而，这并不是说我们应该忽视政府和大公司的责任。无可否认，在解决森林砍伐和温室效应等一些大规模问题时，政府和大公司应该充分利用他们的技术和力量来制定战略计划。
In summary, everyone is responsible in protecting our planet. Meanwhile, the government and big companies should shoulder their responsibilities and make full use of their power and resources. Only in this way can we assure that we can hand over the planet to our next generation.
总之，每个人都有责任保护我们的地球。与此同时，政府和大公司应该承担责任，充分利用他们的权力和资源。只有这样，我们才能保证我们能把地球交给我们的下一代。
【干货】总结雅思写作环保类话题常用词组
1、对健康构成潜在威胁 pose a threat to health
2、供应不足 be in short supply
3、垃圾分类 garbage classification
4、破坏环境 ruin the environment
5、提高大众的环保意识
promote the public awareness of environmental protection;
arouse people’s awareness of environmental protection
6、采取强有力的措施 take stronger and harsher measures
7、有限资源 finite resource
8、电脑监控系统 computer monitoring system
9、缓解交通阻塞的压力 relieve the traffic congestion
10、有益健康的 conductive to good health
11、致命的疾病 fatal disease
12、广泛的采用 be used intensively
【高分语料库】雅思写作环保类——废物利用
In many countries, there is no enough recycling of waste materials (eg. paper, glass, cans).What are the reasons and how to solve it ? 很多国家，废料的循环利用不尽如人意，原因何在，如何解决?
【头脑风暴】
废料处置以及再循环利用，比较日本和中国，日本做的更好：分类处理生活垃圾，人们有环保意识，节能意识，废料对于环境的污染很少，废料得到充分的循环利用。相反，中国做得不尽如人意。有些人缺乏环保意识，媒体的宣传力度不足，政府对于乱丢生活的垃圾的现象也没有明确的规范。同时，废料处理基地和废料处理技术也有待改善。
【范文赏析】
{首段}：背景介绍 + 争议焦点 + 写作目的
Recycling the waste and developing regenerated materials is a link that is essential for the national economic construction. Alarmingly, it is not rare to see that litterbugs almost appear in every corner of individual city. Even worse, the failure to properly recycling wastes will pose a threat to the sustainable development of natural resources. This essay aims to ascertain the reasons and solutions.
【解析】
1. Recycling the waste and developing regenerated materials is a link that is essential for the national economic construction.收旧利废，发展再生资源是国民经济建设中一个不可缺少的环节。
2. Alarmingly, it is not rare to see that litterbugs almost appear in every corner of individual city. 令人担忧的是，每个城市的每个地区几乎都有乱扔垃圾的人。
3. The failure to properly recycling wastes will pose a threat to the sustainable development of natural resources. 不能有效地循环垃圾会对于自然资源的可发展造成严重的威胁。
【亮点】
1. is essential for 对于……是重要的
2. it is not rare to see that …… 很常见的是……
3. pose a threat to …… 对……造成威胁
{二段}：人们为何未能废料循环利用
Indeed, what some people are doing is wasting precious natural resources and disposing of garbage randomly. The reasons why recycling waste materials leaves much to be desired are not far to seek. First, some cities fail to establish enough recycling sites to collect and tackle waste materials. Meanwhile, some countries lack efficient techniques in terms of waste treatment. Another major reason is that some people have little knowledge about how to deal with life waste or they simply lack eco-friendly consciousness.
【解析】
1. Some cities fail to establish enough recycling sites to collect and arrange waste materials. 一些城市未能够建立足够的回收站去收集和处理废料。
2. Some people have little knowledge about how to deal with life waste or they simply lack eco-friendly consciousness. 人们缺乏怎样处理生活垃圾的知识或者他们仅仅是缺乏一种环保的意识。
【亮点】
1. …… leave much to be desired ……远非令人满意
2. in terms of 在……方面，就……而言
{三段}：如果有效地展开废料循环利用
Considering the severity of this issue, some effective measures should be adopted. First，relevant departments of an urban government are expected to make an overall plan and rational arrangement for establishing a collecting and purchasing network to promote the recycling of waste materials. Likewise，attempts should be made to by scientist to explore and popularize efficient and eco-friendly techniques of recycling wastes. Further, strengthening the publicity to raise the consciousness of cherishing the natural resources also , the responsibility should be given to every individual. The public should be urged to use recycled products, install energy-efficient and water-saving appliances, separate solid wastes.
【解析】
1. Attempts should be made by scientists to explore and popularize efficient and eco-friendly techniques of recycling wastes. 科学家们应该努力去研发和普及高效环保的废料循环技术。
2. The public should be urged to use recycled products, install energy-efficient and water-saving appliances, carry out separate collection of wastes. 我们应该督促民众去使用再生物品，安装节水、节能设备，实行垃圾分类收集。
【亮点】
1. attempts should be made to do sth 我们应该努力做……
2. …… also works ……同样是起作用的
{尾段}：亮明观点 + 总结理由
Overall, it is no easy task to effectively handle and recycle wastes. Only when concerted endeavors are made by the government, the scientists，the mass media and every individual can this thorny social issue be resolved perfectly.
【名师语料库】
1. Some city-dwellers lack the awareness of recycling wastes effectively. 一些城市居民，缺乏有效地循环废料的意识。
2. The government should be urged to impose tougher penalties on environmentally damaging behaviors. 政府应该给督促去处罚破坏环境的行为。
3. The public should be educated to foster the awareness of valuing the natural resource 人们应该被教育去培养珍惜自然资源的意识。
4. Proper measures should be timely adopted to turn those litterbugs into environmentally conscious people. 应该采取适当的措施将那些乱扔垃圾的人变成自觉的环境保护者。
5. The public should be educated to raise their awareness of environmental protection. 我们应该教育人们提高他们的环保意识。
【分析问题解决问题话题句型拓展】
1. it is an universal phenomenon that …… 是一个很普遍的现象
2. it is no easy task to do sth，however，something must be done. 做……不是容易的事情, 但是，我们必须要采取一些措施。
3. efforts should be made by sb to do sth v某人努力去做……
4. it is imperative for the government to do sth v政府做……是势在必行的
5. it is unshakable obligation of every individual to do sth v去做……人人有责
6. the reasons why …… are manifold ……的原因是多样的
7. first，…… can be owed to do sth 首先，……的原因可被给归结为……
8. another reason to be considered is that …… 另一个人原因是……
9. last, …… is the root cause of …… 最后，…… 是……的根源
10. concerted efforts should be made by ……，……，…… to do sth ……，……，和…… 应该共同努力去做……
雅思大作文语料库：环境保护个人是否可以作为
环保类：
The environmental problem in the world can not be solved by ordinary people, and governments and large companies should be responsible for this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 环境问题个人是无法解决的，只有企业和国家才能解决，是否同意?
作家立场：个人在环保中可以发挥不可替代的作用。
老师思路拓展：
国家企业环保的方式：
1. 国家可以采取环保政策，加强环保合作，分享环保经验。对于破坏环境的企业和个人加大处罚力度。
2. 企业，尤其是高度污染的企业(例如汽车厂，造纸厂，化工厂)，应该依赖高科技，减少对于环境的污染。例如，汽车生产企业可以研发和推广新型环保汽车，这些汽车具有小排量，低消耗，电瓶驱动等特征。
个人环保的方式：
1. 个人可以减少对于高科技产品的使用，具体来说，减少家用电器使用的频率。(例证：空调，热水器)
2. 个人可以培养环保的意识， 珍惜自然资源，过简单生活。具体而言，可以购买小排量汽车或者乘坐公共交通工具;周边游不是长途游等。(细节展开)
3. 个人可以参加环保组织，做环保志愿者，宣传环保，反对有害环境的政策的出台和推广。
老师原创语料库：
1. environmental pollution = environmental contamination n 环境污染
2. environmental issues = environmental problems n环境问题
3. various environment-related issues n 各种与环境相关的问题
4. live a simple life = choose a simpler lifestyle v 过简单生活
5. embark on simple lifestyle = opt for a simple lifestyle v选择简单生活
6. environmental conservation = environmental protection = environmental preservation n 环境保护
7. raise the environmental protection awareness amongst the general public v提高公众的环保意识
点评：raise = enhance = improve v 提高……
点评：awareness = consciousness n 意识
8. take public transit = take public transport v 乘坐公共交通工具
9. foster water-wise lifestyle v 培养节水的生活方式
点评：foster = cultivate = nurture v 培养……
10. reduce the use of paper v减少纸张的使用
点评：reduce = minimize = diminish v减少……
11. People should be encouraged to purchase compact cars with low emissions. 我们应该鼓励人们购买小排量的汽车。
12. treasure other natural resources v珍惜自然资源
13. There is a heated debate as to whether or not personal efforts could effectively address environmental problems. 关于是否个人努力可以解决环境污染，人们争议不断。
点评： address = resolve = tackle v解决……
14. My stand is that individual participation in greenism is definitely a worthwhile endeavor helping to protect the natural environment. 我认为， 个人在环保方面的积极参与是保护环境的一种有价值的努力。(作家立场)
点评：in greenism 在环境保护方面
拓展：To contrive and popularize cleaner cars or compact cars is definitely a worthwhile endeavor helping to protect the natural environment. 研发和普及环保汽车以及小排量汽车是保护环境的有效努力。
15. It works to encourage people to undertake their journey by taking public transport in terms of protecting our environment 鼓励公众乘坐公共交通工具是有效的环保方式(重点背诵)
点评： public transport = public transit = public transportation n公共交通工具
16. Meanwhile, every individual should be encouraged to partake of local organizations to oppose environmentally damaging policies or to work as the environmental protection volunteers. 同时，我们应该鼓励个人参加地方环保组织，反对有害环境的政策的出台，或者，鼓励个人做环保志愿者。
点评：partake of = take part in = participate in v 亲自参加……
17. It is highly recommended to spend more money on public transport such as buses, trams and subways. 政府应该投资公共交通工具，例如，汽车， 有轨电车，地铁等。
点评：环境保护政府如何作为
18. I re-affirm my conviction that the environmental issue is certainly relevant to each individual citizen. 我重申我的立场，环境问题和每个公民息息相关。
19. Co-operation and participation deriving from individual citizens have indispensable roles to play in safeguarding the natural environment. 每个公民的参与和努力在保护自然环境方面可以发挥不可缺少的作用。
20. Individual citizens could and should play active roles provided that we really aspire to optimize our living environment. 如果我们真的要改善我们的生存环境，个人应该也能够发挥积极的作用
点评：optimize our living environment v 改善我们的生存环境
点评：provided that = if 假如
“哎呀！好臭呀！”“这垃圾太多了！”“蚊子苍蝇真厌恶呀！”走过垃圾桶时，经常能听到人们这样抱怨，为了清理垃圾，清洁工们每一天总是忙忙碌碌，十分辛苦。
看在眼里，记在心上，我就产生了一个梦想，我必须要发明一种环保垃圾桶，让世界变得更美丽。
这种环保垃圾桶就像橡皮泥一样，你想把它捏成什么形状，它就是什么形状。每一天它的颜色都会不断变化着，当旭日初升时，它会变成红色，让人看一眼就觉得精神抖擞，一天都会有好情绪；当正午时分，阳光刺眼时，它会变成浅浅的蓝色，让人感觉神清气爽，把所有的烦恼一扫而光；此时当夜幕降临时，它又会变成金黄色，发出明亮的灯光，此时让走夜路的人们不再感觉害怕。
环保垃圾桶上有三个按钮，分别是红色、黄色、绿色。可别小瞧这些按钮哦，它们的用处可大着呢！
当清洁工按一下红色按钮，垃圾桶立即从身体里伸出一个大大的吸尘器，能够把街道上的灰尘都吸进它的肚子里，经过处理和加工，变成一个个形状可爱的玩具，还散发着淡淡的清香。
当清洁工按一下黄色的按钮，垃圾桶就会张开大嘴，吸进二氧化碳，吐出氧气或一个个净化球，这个净化球能够发到污水里，污水就会立即变得清醇可口，可供人引用。
当清洁工按一下绿色的按钮，垃圾桶立即会把各种果皮纸屑等垃圾，分成可回收和不可回收两大类。把可回收的垃圾加工变成花草，美化环境，把不可回收的垃圾变成建筑材料，此时这样人们就不会再去破坏环境了。
自从我发明了这种垃圾桶以后，清洁工们不再那么忙碌了，我们的家园变得干净而美丽，人们的生活更加完美而幸福。
地球，是一个美丽的家园。我们每个人都应当要去爱惜它、呵护它。
可是你明白吗？当你不细心地往地上扔下易拉罐时，你注意到地球的衣裳脏了吗？当你不经意将白色饭盒扔进河水中时，你难道没看见河浑浊了吗？这些对你可能并不重要，但小动物和人类赖以生存的土地和生命河却被你给毁了。
在街上，总会看见有人为了少走几步路，将自我手中的垃圾随意扔在地上，这种行为既破坏环境，又不美观。虽然有惩罚，但一向以来并没有什么成效。到最终，仅有清洁工来收拾残局。那假如是在自我的家里，到处都是垃圾、苍蝇还满天飞，你自我好过吗？那假如世界上没有清洁工，要是这样下去你敢想象吗？看着人们这样的行为，地球妈妈哭泣了。让我们管好自我的手，不管是在什么地方，什么时间，请将自我手中的垃圾送回家。
还有一种不好的行为，那就是践踏草坪。每当放学，有些孩子为了开心，总喜欢在草地上踢足球。当你的脚踏在上头蹦蹦跳跳的时候，享受大地关怀的时候，你可明白它在埋怨上天。小草也会疼，它只可是没有表达出来而已。每一天早上小草脸上会有一些露珠，而这些露珠就像是它们的眼泪。小草也有感情，当它欢乐的时候，它会挺直腰，享受阳光的温暖，微风的沐浴；当它哭泣的时候，它会弯下自我的腰；当它埋怨自我是颗不起眼的小草时，它已死去。让我们管好自我的脚，别再践踏草坪。用行动安抚已死去的灵魂，再度点燃生命的奇迹。
你看见过吗？几十个人的手里拿着电锯斧头，他们是要去砍伐树木。当森林出现电锯声时，将伴随着一棵棵树的倒下。当出现龙卷风和沙尘暴时，再也没有树木来挡风遮雨。到时再也没有后悔药可吃。没有了树，空气也变得不再清新。当你冷的时候，你去捡树木生火，可你的温暖却是牺牲一棵树换来的。有些树木生长了几百年甚至几千年，可就一把不起眼的斧头结束了它漫长的生命。多么坚强的树，不知当它倒下的那一瞬间，它想到了什么？多么顽强的树，可最终还是逃可是厄运的毒手。
环保从我做起
每一丝期望，都在绿色中萌芽，每一颗种子，都渴望绿色。环境，有多么重要，期望的种子，就此播下。
绿色是生机，是活蹦乱跳的精灵，而此刻，绿色早已不复存在，白色垃圾布满了以往绿色的土地。
东营仙河镇的硫化氢泄露，许多人的健康受到了严重的威胁，每一天，去医院的人络绎不绝，这样下去早晚有一天，我们创造的完美家园，又将被我们毁去。我经常听妈妈讲她小时候的春天，打开门窗就是鸟语花香，深深的吸气就会浑身舒畅。可是，此刻我打开窗户，妈妈就会说外面空气太脏了，让我快关上。我和妈妈每一天养成看天气预报的习惯，仅有PM2。5小于10才是安全的，我们中国华北、华中、华东全部高于50接近80，所以每一天上学之前妈妈总是叮嘱我出门必须戴口罩，为此，我的口袋里书包里都放着口罩，随时能够戴上，所以，口罩变得和红领巾一样重要。街上，越来越多的汽车，道路也变得越来越拥堵，每一辆汽车的排气管都在突突冒着白烟。看到这一幕幕我想，再下去几年、几十年我们的地球会变成什么样貌，难道要呼吸新鲜的空气，将会变成奢侈吗？
我提议，环保为先。期望在街上，看见的是新能源型汽车，又方便又环保，何乐而不为呢？不要等到3月12，只要愿意，每一天都能够种树，树不仅仅能够释放氧气，还能够吸收二氧化碳。想一想，每一天眼睛里满是绿色，该多好！绿色是护眼专家，在蓝天白云的衬托下，绿会越来越茂盛，人们也会越来越健康。注意了，扔垃圾时，不要乱扔，比如电池，在土里无数年都无法化为泥土。总之一句话，这个世界都是大家的，地球需要人人来保护。这样地球妈妈才会开心，才会有更美的未来！
所以，为了蓝天，为了白云，为了每一丝期望在绿色中萌芽，环保，从我做起，从小事做起。人类，环保吧，等到那一天真正到来时，你会后悔，认错已经无用了，因为后悔本身就是一种错误！
雅思大作文环保类考题解析
Some people think that a huge amount of time and money is spent on the protection of wild animals, and that this money could be better spent on the human population. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion ?
上了我们写作课的同学，在考场上看到这道熟悉度五颗星的题目就使劲地得瑟吧。熟悉度来自于考前环保话题的梳理+相关素材的背诵。话不多说，我们一起来分析一下。
第一步：确定这是一篇观点类作文，确定写作框架
第二步：环保类→动物保护的话题，脑中光速浮现积累过的观点和词伙
第三步：注意题目里有一个对比，保护动物VS 投钱到人类，需要恰当的对比论证
若要站队动物保护的话，可以抛出哪些观点：
1.投入时间和精力到动物保护→拯救濒危灭绝的动物→保护生物多样性
背景铺垫：当今社会，动物的各种悲惨遭遇 (家园被毁、过度捕杀、食物污染等)
因果论证：因此，人类需要花费时间和精力来认识和减轻对动物的伤害，帮助他们繁衍生息，从而保护生物多样性
对比论证：人类目前已基本脱离了基本生存的苦海，人类人口呈现稳定增长趋势(此时此刻，请你们放开老龄化人口负增长好吗?答应我)
2.投入时间和精力到动物保护→有助于维持稳定的生态系统建→最终人类受益
背景铺垫：动物是生态系统中的重要成员
举例论证：麻雀少了，导致农作物收成受到影响，人类遭殃
因果论证：因此，就保护动物而言，宜风物长放眼量
对比论证：如忽略动物的保护，一味地去开展人类活动发展经济，人类最终也没好果子吃
3.#喝喝，灵感枯竭了，那就让步吧#
当然，在某些deprived areas, 我们还是需要去关心人类的福祉，提高生活水平
雅思写作范文：旧建筑与新建筑
Do you think old buildings should be broken down, and give place for modern buildings. How are the old buildings important in our society?
With the rapid development of urbanization, many people advocate the demolition of old houses for the benefit of economic and social development. But others argue that we can’t ruin the traditional cultural heritage. Personally, I side with the former opinion.
In the first place, the existence of old houses is an obstacle to modern urbanization by damaging the image of the city. If they are replaced with modern skyscrapers, the city will take on a new look. Take the Summer Palace in Beijing for example, Being government has demolished a large number of run-down the Summer Palace and constructed many new housing buildings instead.
In the second place, there is a potential danger to people living in old houses or even passers-by. If the houses are old enough to collapse in the end, where does the value of culture or tourism exist? The tourists surely will not travel a long distance to see these so-called “culture heritage” at the risk of their lives. [More:]
In the third place, replacing old houses with buildings can help to solve housing problems. It is well-known that China is a densely-populated country and people in urban areas only have little housing space. Undoubtedly, replacing old houses with new buildings is a good way to solve the problem.
As mentioned above, I can draw a conclusion safely: It is irresistible to replace old houses with modern buildings. At the same time, it is necessary for us to restore a limited number of old houses for the sake of conserving traditional culture and attracting tourists.
雅思写作范文修改：游客是否该入乡随俗
原文：HLH0220 修改：William(美国华裔)，雅思公主(shirleyzrb)
TOPIC:Some people believe that visitors to other countries shoud follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
原文：
As to whether local customs and behaviour should assimilation with the other cultures , these arises a contentious discussion . Before presenting my view ,I intend to discuss both sides of the argument.
Advocates of the other cultures hold the belief that it is benefits of host country to interacted to the other cultures. To begin with ,tourism helps to introduce the country to foreigners and showcase the brilliant history and culture to the outside world. Moreover ,tourists from different countries also bring their own cultures , it can enhance mutual understanding between nations and maintain world peace .Worst of all ,as we know cross-cultural communication is becoming increasingly frequent and cultural assimilation and penetration is inevitable.
Some other people ,however ,are strongly against the host country to have access to the diverses cultures for several sound reasons .Primarily ,it may exert some adverse effects on the aboriginal culture and minority languages to some extent .Furthermore ,cultural globalization will result in one homogenous global culture where everyone speaks the same and thinks the same .Last of all ,globalization poses potential risks to the preservation of aboriginal culture and languages .
From the above discussion ,we can see that both sides have sound reasonable . Personally ,I am in favor of assimilating with different cultures .On the other hand , we can not lose the sight of risks of globalization . And it is of great significance for a government to make efforts to conserve endangered culture and language.
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TOPIC:Some people believe that visitors to other countries shoud follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences.
As to whether local customs and behavior should assimilation(assimilate) with the other cultures , these arises a contentious discussion . Before presenting my view, I intend to discuss both sides of the argument.(first of all, for argumentative essay, you have to state your thesis statement first, not to introduce your essay by restating the question again, present your side and assert it , then discuss both sides and conclude it at the end.)
Advocates who believe that foreign cultures are beneficial to host country because the extent to which they interact. Tourism helps to introduce the country to foreigners and it also acts as a showcase to disclose the brilliant history and culture to the outside world. Moreover, tourists from different countries also bring their own culture into the host country, it can enhance mutual understanding between nations and maintain world peace .As we all know cross-cultural communication is becoming increasingly frequent and cultural assimilation and penetration is inevitable.
Some other people, however ,are strongly against the host country to have access to the diversity of culturesfor several reasons .Primarily ,it may exert some adverse effects on the aboriginal culture and minority languages. Furthermore ,cultural globalization will result in one homogenous global culture where everyone speaks the same and thinks the same .Last of all ,globalization poses potential risks to the preservation of aboriginal culture and languages .
From the above discussion, we can see that both sides have their points. Personally, I am in favor of assimilating with different cultures .On the other hand, we cannot lose the sight of risks of globalization. And it is of great significance for a government to make efforts to conserve endangered culture and language.
我们全人类有一个共同的“母亲”地球。她哺育着人类，是我们生命的摇篮。但是，近年来，我们的“母亲”却变得伤痕累累，这完全是由于大多数人缺乏环保意识、随意破坏环境，让地球母亲哭泣。
在生活中，破坏环境的人随时、随地、随处可见：大街上，人们随地吐痰、乱扔垃圾、让宠物随地大小便，而且还装出一副旁若无人的样貌，没有一点愧疚之情。旁边的人也都不闻不问，好像什么事也没有发生；森林里，人们不断的砍伐树木，使一座座茂盛的森林变成了一片片荒凉的平地；工厂的烟囱里，不断地排放处黑黑的浓烟，把整个天空染成漆黑的一片，对城市环境造成了极大的污染……人类的一些行为，使清清的河水变成垃圾河、使湛蓝的天空变成灰蒙蒙的`天空、使可再生资源变成变成不可再生资源……如果再这样下去，人类就会灭亡。
对此，国家也采取了一些环保的措施，如：建立自然保护区、加强天然林保护和因公林建设、设定《环境保护法》、《海洋环境保护法》、《水污染防治法》等法律法规、加强国际间的合作等等，并且取得了很大的成就。
而此刻，人们也已经意识到了这一点，同学们也都在用心行动，为环保事业贡献自我的一份力量。
在刚过去的一年中，学校就开展了许多有关环保的活动，鼓励同学们多植树，发出“少用塑料袋，远离白色污染”的倡议，还透过黑板报、手抄报、宣传栏等方式教我们一些环保知识和生活中的环保小常识。作为“环保小卫士”的我还在世界环境日那天以“保护环境，低碳生活”为主题制作了幻灯片，加强了同学们的环保意识。同学们还成立了一个“环保小组”向。
古往今来，地球妈妈用甘甜的乳汁哺育了无数代子孙。原先的她被小辈们装饰得楚楚动人。可是，此刻人类为了自身的利益，将她折磨得天昏地暗。人类仅有一个地球;而地球正面临着严峻的环境危机。“救救地球”已成为世界各国人民最强烈的呼声。
人类是自然界的一部分，是生命世界的一员。众多生命构成了一个共存共荣息息相关的声名大系统。人类必须善待大自然，爱护环境，保护动植物，否则，将会危及自身的生存。
曾几何时，人们乱砍乱伐，使大自然的生态平衡遭到了破坏。沙丘吞噬了万顷良田，洪水冲毁了可爱的家园，大自然的报复让人类尴尬哑然。梅水溪以往说过，没有自然，便没有人类，这是世界一大朴素的真理。一味地掠夺自然，征服自然，只会破坏生态系统，咎由自取，使人类濒于困境。这句话说得一点也不错，人不给自然留面子，自然当然也不会给人留后路，洪水、沙尘暴、地震，其实，这就是大自然向人类发出的警示。
环境保护对我们来说并不是一个新问题，我国政府也早就提出了明确的治理目标。作为现实生活中的每一个普通人，虽然不可能都直接从事环保工作，但我们完全能够从小事做起，从我做起。我们应树立环保意识，以实际行动落实环保行动。看到洗手间的水龙头在滴水时，应能够举手关上。当电池用完后应分类收藏处理而不是随手扔掉。当购物时应自觉不使用超薄塑料袋……一件件小事虽然都很不起眼，但却体现我们究竟具备了多少环保意识。
珍惜资源、保护环境。让我们把这个城市变得更美丽吧!
请记住，保护地球就是保护自我!
Nowadays, more and more people pay attention to environmental protection and regard it as one of the most important challenges. It is a controversial issue whether only governments and large companies have the resources and power to protect our environment. My view is that every citizen can have a huge impact from the beginning.
Obviously, in the whole history, human activities have the greatest impact on environmental pollution and environmental protection. This is a long-term process, and no government or large company can deal with this challenge alone. Therefore, whoever created this problem should be responsible for solving the problem of environmental protection, and it also requires the continuous participation of each of us.
The public's will and behavior will have an impact on environmental protection For example, if everyone refuses plastic shopping bags and cups, then the companies that produce these products will turn to environmentally friendly alternatives in order to survive in the market. This does not mean that the government and large companies can not make positive contributions. The government can make laws and launch projects to improve public awareness Low carbon awareness low carbon enterprises can promote green products to change public consumption habits, but at the same time, it also needs the appreciation and support of every citizen to achieve good results.
While protecting the environment, local governments and organizations must undertake the responsibility of developing low-carbon economy at a macro level. Only in this way can we ensure that we can deliver this beautiful planet To our next generation and the next generation.
中文翻译：
如今，越来越多的人关注环境保护，并将其视为最重要的挑战之一，是否只有和大公司才有资源和权力来保护我们的环境，这是一个有争议的问题。我的观点是，每一个公民都可以从一开始就产生巨大的影响。很明显，在整个历史上，人类活动对环境污染和环境保护的影响最大这是一个长期的过程，没有任何一个或大公司能够独自应对这一挑战，因此，无论是谁制造了这个问题，都应该负责解决环境保护问题，而且还需要我们每个人不断参与，公众的意志和行为对的政策和公司的战略有着至关重要的影响，例如，如果每个人都拒绝塑料购物袋和纸杯，那么生产这些产品的公司为了在市场上生存，就会转而使用环境友好的替代品，这并不是说和大公司不能做出积极的贡献，可以制定法律，推出项目来提高公众对低碳的认识低碳企业可以推广绿色产品来改变公众的消费习惯，但同时也需要每个公民的赞赏和支持，才能取得良好的效果，我们在保护环境的同时，地方和组织必须在宏观上承担起发展低碳经济的责任，只有这样，我们才能确保我们能够把这个美丽的星球交给我们的下一代和下一代。
星期天，天气晴朗，阳光明媚，万里无云。我缠着爸爸妈妈要到工地杭州湾大桥连接线去玩。爸爸就答应了我。
在路上，我看见宽阔的公路旁种着树木，树木像草原上的哨兵挺立在那儿。两旁种着花草树木，空气非常新鲜。汽车欢快地向前跑。两边的树木快速地向后移。到了工地，我兴高采烈地来到爸爸的办公室。突然，我对爸爸说：“爸爸，能不能陪我去工地现场去看一看？”“孩子，那边环境不好，空气不新鲜。”我缠着爸爸要去，爸爸只好答应了我。于是，我们手拉手来到那里，走进一看，啊！环境真不好，到处都是泥土绿绿的山被削成一半边，一边还是绿色的而另一边则变成了黄色的石头，像一个秃顶的老爷爷。我说：“爸爸，公路造好，但是山也变得光秃秃的，环境也破坏了。”这时，爸爸笑咪咪地对我说：“孩子，这是计划不能改的。”我又看了看光秃秃的小山。我想：等桥造好后，这山的一边应该洒上一些泥土，然后，种上一些花花草草之类。等花草长大后，山也变绿了，这样环境就好多了。我把这个想法告诉了爸爸，爸爸摸摸我的头说：“女儿，你的想法真好啊！做设计的叔叔阿姨已经想到了这个问题，等公路完成时工人们会把花草等种子洒在山坡上。到春天时，山又变绿了。”“真好啊！就和我的想法一样了！这样环境就会很好。”“我的女儿真懂事啊！”爸爸笑着对我说。我高兴得跳了起来，叫了声“yè――。”()
说着说着时间就过去了，该回家了，我牵着爸爸的手一蹦一跳地回家了。坐着回家的车上，看见公路两边的绿化，我想：我们人人都应该保护环境，爱护花草树木，维护生态平衡，为子孙后代造福。
你看！现在我们宁波的环境，多优美啊！街道两旁树木成林，弯弯的小河围绕着我们的家，大街上干干净净，想找到一片落叶和废纸都很难等等，这些除了环卫叔叔阿姨辛勤劳动，付出汗水换来的，还有和我们热爱环境，从我做起分不开的！记得在我还没上学时，我们的社区才刚刚落成。我们一家就高高兴兴地搬到新家。刚来时，花坛里只有光秃秃的几个小树，经过几年来的精心培育和维护，你看，绿荫荫的草地上颗颗大树随风摇摆，茂盛的枝叶上，有小鸟儿在“吱，吱”地欢唱。但是，小区里的住户越来越多了，家家户户都有小汽车了。一辆辆的汽车在路边整齐进排队，但是有那么几辆小汽车就喜欢冲进绿化带，在嫩绿的草丛上留下了一道道伤痕。没过多久，草丛枯黄了……
如果，我们都从自我做起，爱护环境。
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